| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1980 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 72.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1980 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "mosaic" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "fractured" | | 8 | "cascading" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "silk" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.14% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 140 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1974 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 69 | | wordCount | 1653 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.21 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | London | 3 | | Rory | 20 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Shade | 3 | | Eva | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Further | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Veil" | | 7 | "Evan" | | 8 | "Varga" | | 9 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Soho" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.895 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "gold that seemed to rise from the ground itself" | | 1 | "felt like information" | | 2 | "knots that seemed to shift when she blinked" | | 3 | "looked like frozen dew" | | 4 | "felt like a stone in her pocket, heavy" | | 5 | "felt like the flesh of a giant sleeping" | | 6 | "appeared sooner than they should have, the grey ordinary light of Richmond Park washing in like a tide" |
| |
| 98.68% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.013 | | wordCount | 1974 | | matches | | 0 | "not reflection but vision: herself older, hair longer, the Heartstone blazing a" | | 1 | "neither confirming nor" |
| |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 51.95 | | std | 28.39 | | cv | 0.547 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 86 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 91 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 70 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 66 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 91 | | 16 | 97 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 87 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 30 | | 22 | 69 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 101 | | 25 | 65 | | 26 | 51 | | 27 | 69 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 56 | | 30 | 80 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 54 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 82 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 61 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 278 | | matches | | 0 | "were negotiating" | | 1 | "was coming" |
| |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 140 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "The scrape came again—not threatening, only present, as if the water itself wore scales." | | 1 | "Nyx had spent centuries between shadows; if anything here hungered for them, the Shade would feel the pull first." | | 2 | "The water showed her bright blue eyes and shoulder-length black hair, but the background was wrong—night sky where daylight should hang, twin moons, a tower of black glass." | | 3 | "Soft chimes hung from invisible branches—glass and bone and something that looked like frozen dew." | | 4 | "Rory and Nyx exchanged a glance—her blue eyes to their violet glow—and followed." | | 5 | "Another time the ground underfoot softened into what felt like the flesh of a giant sleeping beast; it rose and fell in a slow respiration she did her best to ignore." | | 6 | "The moment Rory stepped between the oaks and onto wet city earth, the dagger’s cold sank deeper into her bones—a promise and a warning both." |
| |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1681 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "pale star-shaped blossoms" |
| | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.03271861986912552 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005353955978584176 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 140 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 140 | | mean | 14.1 | | std | 9.41 | | cv | 0.667 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 14 |
| |
| 74.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.45714285714285713 | | totalSentences | 140 | | uniqueOpeners | 64 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere to the left a" | | 1 | "Once she caught her own" | | 2 | "Further in, the light softened" | | 3 | "Once, something large and feathered" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "It was no longer the" | | 1 | "they whispered, the words little" | | 2 | "It lay cool and quiet" | | 3 | "She kept walking." | | 4 | "She paused, listening, and Nyx" | | 5 | "Their form thinned, becoming translucent" | | 6 | "She chose to trust that" | | 7 | "It was cool, almost wet," | | 8 | "She had read about pocket" | | 9 | "She jerked back." | | 10 | "she muttered, and kept moving" | | 11 | "She nodded, throat dry." | | 12 | "Her own given name already" | | 13 | "She was still flesh and" | | 14 | "They found the second pool" | | 15 | "Her stomach clenched with both" | | 16 | "She wore a simple shift" | | 17 | "She simply occupied space as" | | 18 | "Her voice carried the soft" | | 19 | "she observed, neither confirming nor" |
| | ratio | 0.232 | |
| 80.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped across the" | | 1 | "The air thickened the moment" | | 2 | "It was no longer the" | | 3 | "Honey and crushed mint rode" | | 4 | "Nyx glided at her side," | | 5 | "they whispered, the words little" | | 6 | "Rory’s free hand settled over" | | 7 | "It lay cool and quiet" | | 8 | "That absence itself felt like" | | 9 | "She kept walking." | | 10 | "Wildflowers carpeted every inch of" | | 11 | "Petals brushed her calves." | | 12 | "An hour might stretch into" | | 13 | "Isolde’s grove answered to different" | | 14 | "She paused, listening, and Nyx" | | 15 | "The scrape came again—not threatening," | | 16 | "Their form thinned, becoming translucent" | | 17 | "She chose to trust that" | | 18 | "Nyx had spent centuries between" | | 19 | "The clearing widened without warning." |
| | ratio | 0.759 | |
| 44.64% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Even from three paces she" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "Honey and crushed mint rode the breeze now, warm and impossible, and the light shifted from the grey wash of late afternoon to a pure, directionless gold that s…" | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted every inch of open ground, violets and bluebells and pale star-shaped blossoms she could not name, all blooming together as if spring and m…" | | 2 | "Deeper in, the oaks grew denser, their trunks spiraled with silver lichen that glimmered when she turned her head." | | 3 | "At its heart stood a low circle of moon-pale stones no higher than her knee, each carved with looping knots that seemed to shift when she blinked." | | 4 | "It was cool, almost wet, and left a faint silver sheen on her skin that tingled before it faded." | | 5 | "Here the world felt layered, as if she could peel the air like old wallpaper and find another scene painted beneath." | | 6 | "Once she caught her own reflection in a shallow pool that had not been there a moment earlier." | | 7 | "Soft chimes hung from invisible branches—glass and bone and something that looked like frozen dew." | | 8 | "They found the second pool by following the climb of the wildflowers, which grew denser and deeper in hue until the path became a living mosaic of sapphire and …" | | 9 | "Behind her loomed a hearth-fire the color of warm amber, and tables piled with food that dripped nectar." | | 10 | "The Half-Fae was exactly as the old stories sketched her: silver hair cascading to her waist, pale lavender eyes that looked through rather than at, an ageless …" | | 11 | "Nyx sank into a half-kneel of soft shadow that might have been respect or calculation." | | 12 | "Vines heavy with fruit the color of bruises arched overhead, forming tunnels that breathed cool air across Rory’s cheeks." | | 13 | "The dagger fit her hand as if it had been waiting for the crescent scar on her wrist to claim it." | | 14 | "She looked around once more, committing the wonder and the wrongness to memory: the perpetual flowers, the pools that lied and told truth in equal measure, the …" |
| |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx agreed (agree)" | | 2 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "the Shade murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "she observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.429 | |