| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "free hand flexed once [once]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.078 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2600 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 61.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2600 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "tension" | | 2 | "fluttered" | | 3 | "pristine" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "measured" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "aligned" | | 10 | "vibrated" | | 11 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 101 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2595 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 23 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.88% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 841 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.9 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | French | 1 | | Knuckles | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Eva | 1 | | Thumb | 1 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 16 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Thumb" | | 6 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.549 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2595 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.64% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 76.32 | | std | 29.78 | | cv | 0.39 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 76 | | 12 | 101 | | 13 | 67 | | 14 | 87 | | 15 | 70 | | 16 | 71 | | 17 | 100 | | 18 | 114 | | 19 | 138 | | 20 | 75 | | 21 | 85 | | 22 | 88 | | 23 | 61 | | 24 | 133 | | 25 | 89 | | 26 | 116 | | 27 | 89 | | 28 | 102 | | 29 | 101 | | 30 | 87 | | 31 | 111 | | 32 | 62 | | 33 | 95 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 37.82% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—found hers at once." | | 1 | "His black eye held shadows; the amber one burned." | | 2 | "Her black hair fell straight past her shoulders; she shoved it behind one ear with jerky precision." | | 3 | "Her own hand lifted and closed around his wrist—the same scarred left wrist she always forgot until moments like this pressured it." | | 4 | "She pushed against his chest—half resistance, half the need to feel the solid bulk of him again." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 846 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.03309692671394799 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0035460992907801418 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 19.08 | | std | 21.78 | | cv | 1.141 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 45 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 46 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 56.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.34558823529411764 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 68.98% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—found" | | 1 | "She kept one hand on" | | 2 | "He did not move closer." | | 3 | "She felt the crescent scar" | | 4 | "His black eye held shadows;" | | 5 | "She kicked the door wider" | | 6 | "He did not touch her." | | 7 | "His free hand flexed once," | | 8 | "She snatched a pile of" | | 9 | "He stopped near the arm" | | 10 | "Her black hair fell straight" | | 11 | "He set the cane against" | | 12 | "She closed the gap by" | | 13 | "She gestured at the chaos" | | 14 | "He stopped it centimetres from" | | 15 | "She did not." | | 16 | "His palm finally settled, light," | | 17 | "Her pulse hammered under his" | | 18 | "Her own hand lifted and" | | 19 | "He stepped full into her" |
| | ratio | 0.378 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 97 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts clicked back" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter yanked the door" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 3 | "His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—found" | | 4 | "Platinum hair slicked back without" | | 5 | "The smell of the curry" | | 6 | "Rory’s voice stayed low" | | 7 | "She kept one hand on" | | 8 | "Lucien’s mouth curved a fraction." | | 9 | "Rory stepped back half a" | | 10 | "The tabby cat Ptolemy wound" | | 11 | "Lucien’s French accent darkened the" | | 12 | "He did not move closer." | | 13 | "Rory’s blue eyes narrowed." | | 14 | "She felt the crescent scar" | | 15 | "Lucien’s grip tightened on the" | | 16 | "Knuckles white for a second." | | 17 | "Heat rolled through her chest," | | 18 | "Rory’s foot shifted." | | 19 | "The papers stacked along the" |
| | ratio | 0.99 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped back, enough to bar the threshold with her body" | | 1 | "free hand flexed once, empty" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |