Run: 2026-07-08-01KX1M4B6B4S3VRCMBQR9MFT0F

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Duration:
49.1s
Cost:
$0.017180
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xAI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped over the line of ancient oak standing stones and the pendant against her collarbone flared with sudden heat. She froze mid-stride, fingers closing around the deep crimson gem. Its silver chain bit into her neck. The stone pulsed once, twice, a private Morse code only she could feel. She had come after it woke her for the third night running, drawing her west through the empty streets of London until Richmond Park swallowed the last of the city's glow. Now the heat faded almost as fast as it arrived, leaving only the ordinary weight of the thumbnail-sized stone. The clearing stretched ahead, ringed by the stones that had no right to stand so cleanly in a public park. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in colours that refused to dim even under the thick dark. She kept her boots light on the soft earth, breath measured, eyes already mapping exits. One way in. Same way out. She had counted the gaps between the stones earlier when she paced the perimeter: seven. Wide enough for a body if something needed to force itself sideways. A twig snapped off to her left. Rory turned her head only, not her shoulders. The sound came from beyond the nearest stone, somewhere in the denser trees that pressed close against the grove's edge. Too heavy for a fox. Too deliberate for wind. She waited. Silence answered. She waited longer. The pendant stayed cool. She moved again, boots finding the narrow track that spiral-curved toward the clearing's centre. Moss cushioned every step. The air carried the rich rot of leaves and something sweeter underneath, like crushed berries left too long. She had never seen this place in daylight. Eva's message had been short: Look for the stones in the south-west corner. Bring the pendant. Don't stay after midnight. Rory had deleted the text after reading it twice. Eva never wasted words. Another sound, closer this time. A soft, wet drag across earth. Rory stopped beside a cluster of pale night-blooming flowers. Their petals trembled though no breeze reached her. She crouched, fingertips brushing the soil. Fresh grooves marked the dirt: three parallel tracks, deep enough to swallow a finger to the second knuckle. Something heavy had pulled itself this way recently. She straightened, wiped her hand on her jeans, and kept walking. The spiral path tightened. Each turn brought her deeper into the pocket of air that smelled wrong for London. No traffic hum. No night birds. Only the faint creak of branches that did not move when she looked at them. She kept her phone dark in her pocket. Light would announce her location and she preferred the argument that lived behind her eyes. Cool-headed, Eva used to say. Out-of-the-box. Rory used to believe that. Halfway around the next curve a shape shifted at the edge of her vision: tall, thin, pale as dairy cream. She snapped her head left. Nothing. Only the upright bulk of a standing stone dark against darker trees. The after-image stayed on her retina, a smear that refused to fade. She rubbed her eyes with the heel of one hand. When she opened them again the smear had gone, but the certainty that she had seen something remained like grit under an eyelid. The pendant heated once more. Gentle at first, then sharp enough to make her flinch. She pulled the chain free and held the stone out. Its faint inner glow painted her palm the colour of old blood. The pulse came faster now, matching a second rhythm she could not place at first. Then she heard it under her own breathing: a slow, fluidatics drip somewhere ahead. Water on stone, but thicker. She closed her fist around the gem and the glow vanished. Rory walked on. The spiral opened into a perfect circle of ground bare of flowers. In its centre a low flat stone jutted from the earth like a table left behind by whatever built this place. Dark stains marred its surface. She circled it once, boots silent, counting the stains. Nine. Some looked recent. A few shone wet under the residual light that still leaked from the pendant when she risked another look. She reached out and pressed two fingers to the nearest mark. Sticky. Cool. When she lifted her hand the fingers came away smeared the same deep crimson as the gemstone. Not blood. Not at once. Blood smelled copper-sharp. This smelled of wet earth and crushed flowers and something mineral she could not name. She wiped her hand again, harder this time, and stepped back from the table. Behind her, soft footsteps copied the exact pattern of her retreat. Rory spun. Empty clearing. The stones stood where they had stood. But one of the tracks of moss she had left minutes earlier was already vanishing, pressed flat again as if something walked exactly where she had walked and erased the evidence. She watched the last footprint smooth itself out. Plants bent and then unbent with a silence that felt practised. She took three long strides toward the gap between stones she had marked as her exit. Halfway there the air itself thickened. Each breath dragged like smoke-heavy tar. The pendant burned hot enough to sear. She yanked the chain off and held the gem away from her skin. In that same instant a voice spoke her name. Not louder than a whisper. Clear enough to recognise. "Rory." Eva's voice. The exact cadence from every childhood summer, every late-night call after Evan. The sound came from the bare circle behind her, from the table stone itself. Rory's free hand closed around the empty air where a torch should have been. She had left it in the flat above Silas's bar on purpose. Light made you stupid. Light said look here, I am frightened, please take me. She turned slow. The stains on the table stone shifted. They crawled, liquid and deliberate, thinning into threads that knit themselves into letters across the rock. Rory. Help. The letters did not stop. They kept writing: Don't leave me here with her. A second presence pressed against the back of Rory's neck, closer than breath, colder than the stone in her hand. She refused to turn again. Turning twice made a person predictable. She took one step left, circling without facing the source. The cold followed, matching her pace. "You shouldn't have brought it," Eva's voice said, still mild, almost fond. "She likes shiny things." Rory did not answer. Speaking answered. She measured the distance to the standing stones again: twelve paces. The air thickened further. Roots she had not seen earlier writhed under the moss, binding her boot before she could lift it. She tore free. Moss and root alike left dark litres stains on the leather. The pendant flared so bright its light punched shadows outward, stretching every stone into a thin black tower. In that glare the presence behind her developed edges. Tall. Thin. Jointed wrong. Pale limbs that bent like wet branches. A head that held no face yet spoke in Eva's voice. "You always arrive late," it said. "But you bring such lovely gifts." Rory threw the pendant. The crimson stone arced once and landed hard on the table rock. The presence lunged after it, uncoiling too fast for anything born under ordinary moon. The roots that had gripped her boot earlier exploded upward, wrapping the thin limbs in sudden green cages. For one heartbeat the thing thrashed, Eva's voice cracking into wet static. Rory ran. She cleared the first stone gap at a full sprint, lungs scraping. Behind her the standing stones groaned. Wood old as memory cracked. Something heavy scraped free of the roots and came after under the dark canopy. Not on two legs. Not on four. A continuous sliding drag that bought ground without rhythm. The track toward the park proper twisted more than she remembered. Trees closed ranks. Leaves slapped her face. She did not look back. Looking back measured the distance and she needed the distance unknown, growing. Boots slammed soft earth that tried to give under every stride. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched as if remembering the childhood fall that put it there. A light bloomed ahead: the ordinary yellow of a street lamp beyond the park boundary. Hope punched copper-taste into her mouth. She put everything left into the final stretch. Branches clawed sleeves. Something cold brushed the back of her calf, missing by the width of a thought. The standing stones howled behind her, a long stone complaint that ended in a wet snap. Rory burst through the last line of trees and took the iron fence in one vault. She landed hard on pavement, rolled, came up running. Only then did she risk the glance. The Fae Grove had gone. Where the stones should have marked the pocket, only ordinary parkland remained: empty lawn, distant trees, a single park bench under the street lamp. No stones. No wildflowers. No table rock. The air tasted of London again, petrol and river damp. On the pavement at her feet the Heartstone Pendant lay pulsing once more, chain neatly coiled as if set down by a careful hand. Fresh dark stains marked the silver links. They still moved, slowly writing her own name across the metal in letters that crawled toward her boot. From the darkness under the nearest tree, Eva's voice laughed once, soft and delighted. Rory bent, snatched the pendant, and the laugh followed her into the orange wash of park street lights already failing one by one.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1597
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.17% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1597
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"could feel"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"measured"
count3
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"predictable"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"could feel"
2"weight"
3"measured"
4"silence"
5"trembled"
6"pulse"
7"perfect"
8"footsteps"
9"whisper"
10"predictable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences171
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences171
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences174
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1597
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1577
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Morse1
London3
Richmond1
Park1
Look1
Eva8
Evan1
Silas1
Don2
Rory15
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Light3
persons
0"Look"
1"Eva"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Pendant"
6"Light"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences107
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if remembering the childhood fall that put it there"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1597
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences174
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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mean45.63
std26.54
cv0.582
sampleLengths
020
180
283
37
448
577
611
760
874
983
1082
1173
1267
1311
1461
1557
169
171
1868
1942
2047
2116
2271
2331
2412
2560
262
2753
2864
2963
3032
3146
3249
3314
3423
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences171
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs249
matches
0"was already vanishing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences174
ratio0
matches(empty)
90.50% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1591
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"alike left dark litres"
adverbCount70
adverbRatio0.04399748585795098
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.00754242614707731
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences174
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences174
mean9.18
std6.25
cv0.681
sampleLengths
020
110
27
313
431
519
620
715
815
93
103
1115
1212
137
148
1520
165
174
182
192
203
214
2214
234
2418
258
2613
273
284
299
304
315
326
339
348
356
3618
378
3811
394
4015
413
423
4315
448
4515
465
471
485
4920
57.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3793103448275862
totalSentences174
uniqueOpeners66
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences150
matches
0"Too heavy for a fox."
1"Too deliberate for wind."
2"Only the faint creak of"
3"Only the upright bulk of"
4"Then she heard it under"
5"Only then did she risk"
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences150
matches
0"She froze mid-stride, fingers closing"
1"Its silver chain bit into"
2"She had come after it"
3"She kept her boots light"
4"She had counted the gaps"
5"She waited longer."
6"She moved again, boots finding"
7"She had never seen this"
8"Their petals trembled though no"
9"She crouched, fingertips brushing the"
10"She straightened, wiped her hand"
11"She kept her phone dark"
12"She snapped her head left."
13"She rubbed her eyes with"
14"She pulled the chain free"
15"Its faint inner glow painted"
16"She closed her fist around"
17"She circled it once, boots"
18"She reached out and pressed"
19"She wiped her hand again,"
ratio0.24
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences150
matches
0"Rory stepped over the line"
1"She froze mid-stride, fingers closing"
2"Its silver chain bit into"
3"The stone pulsed once, twice,"
4"She had come after it"
5"The clearing stretched ahead, ringed"
6"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
7"She kept her boots light"
8"She had counted the gaps"
9"A twig snapped off to"
10"Rory turned her head only,"
11"The sound came from beyond"
12"She waited longer."
13"The pendant stayed cool."
14"She moved again, boots finding"
15"Moss cushioned every step."
16"The air carried the rich"
17"She had never seen this"
18"Eva's message had been short:"
19"Rory had deleted the text"
ratio0.72
33.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"Now the heat faded almost"
ratio0.007
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences76
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Light would announce her location and she preferred the argument that lived behind her eyes."
1"But one of the tracks of moss she had left minutes earlier was already vanishing, pressed flat again as if something walked exactly where she had walked and era…"
2"Plants bent and then unbent with a silence that felt practised."
3"The roots that had gripped her boot earlier exploded upward, wrapping the thin limbs in sudden green cages."
4"The crescent scar on her left wrist itched as if remembering the childhood fall that put it there."
5"The standing stones howled behind her, a long stone complaint that ended in a wet snap."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.0270%