Run: 2026-07-08-01KX1M9D4A3BCV26ZKTAYJJKYM

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Duration:
2m 14s
Cost:
$0.046950
Provider:
xAI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The final deadbolt released under my thumb with a solid clunk. I yanked the door open and Lucien Moreau stood in the frame as if the shadowed landing had birthed him complete. "Still three locks, Carter. Paranoia suits you." I planted myself square in the doorway, bare feet cold on the scuffed floorboards. His platinum hair sat slicked back without a strand free. The charcoal suit hugged his shoulders like it had been cut that morning. One amber eye burned. The black one swallowed light whole. The ivory handle of his cane rested easy in his palm. "How did you find this place?" "Brick Lane smells of cumin and secrets. You fit right in." He stepped forward. I refused to give ground until the cane tip kissed the threshold and forced the choice: retreat or let him knock me flat. I backed up. He crossed inside. Sandalwood and scorched metal rolled off him, dense enough to taste. Ptolemy shot from the sofa primped with textbooks and hissed at the Frenchman's polished shoes. Scrolls teetered in towers. Loose notes carpeted the coffee table and most of the kitchen counter. Eva's flat had always belonged more to dead languages than living tenants. I kicked the door shut and snapped each bolt home again. "You left. In the middle of a job. No note, no burners, just silence. That was your exit. Use it again." Lucien laid the cane across a stack of grimoire photocopies and unbuttoned his jacket with unhurried fingers. A darker patch spread low on his left side, the fabric sheen wrong for silk. "The job finished me before I finished it. Satariel’s hired blades caught my trail two bridges too late. I lost them at Aldgate. Barely." "Bleed somewhere else." "Nowhere left stays clean." He sank onto the sofa arm. Leather and demon heat pressed into the worn fabric. Ptolemy retreated under the bed with a growl. "You still stock bandages above the hob. Eva never did." My pulse hammered at the sight of that stain growing. I crossed to the hob cupboard, hauled out the battered biscuit tin of gauze and antiseptic, and set it hard on the cluttered table. "Shirt off. If you pass out on Eva's sofa she will never let either of us forget it." He worked the buttons free. Charcoal silk peeled away to bare pale skin sheened with sweat and blood. A neat puncture sat just above the hip, edges already bruising black around the red. Half-demon clotting kept him upright when a human would have folded. I knelt and pressed a pad to the wound harder than needed. He hissed through his teeth. The muscle under my palm jumped, warm and solid. My free hand braced on his thigh without permission. The cut wool of his trousers rasped my knuckles. "You disappeared after Thames wharf." I kept my eyes on the clean white turning scarlet. "I waited three hours in that freezing hold. Evan's men swept the streets. I barely made the night bus." "They would have smelled me on you. My blood calls things that scribble your name in the dirt afterward." "Spare me the noble sacrifice routine." I taped the pad down in rough strips. "You could have called. One encrypted line. Instead I got quiet. Perfect Lucien quiet." His fingers found the crescent scar on my left wrist and traced the silvered edge. The touch cracked something raw open under my ribs. I jerked back. The second squirt of antiseptic burned my eyes more than his free skin. "That night before the landing went wrong, you tasted of citrus soap and reckoning." His voice dropped, Marseille consonants curling soft. "I still wake tasting it." I stood so fast the tin lid clattered. Breathing felt like wrestling rope. "You do not walk in after six months of nothing and start quoting old skin." "Then tell mе to leave cleanly. Lock those pretty locks. Watch me bleed out on the stairs for local colour." I said nothing. Silence stretched until the vegetarian curry house below kicked up a bass thud of ghazal music. Lucían watched the blood seep slower through gauze, then settled deeper into the cushions. His bare torso caught the lamplight, lean muscle and the fine white scar I remembered under his collarbone from a different night of knives. "I came for more than bandages." He nodded at the allemandes and binding diagrams staining every surface. "Someone is reverse-engineering the Avaros tether rites. Drawing half the lesser courts into the open. I intercepted a courier two hours ago. The sigils match your handwriting tricks. Care to explain why Malphora's cipher habits are decorating assassination contracts?" The alias hit like cold steel. I crossed my arms over the thin jumper I wore for nights alone. "I peddle takeaway pallets for Yu-Fei. No more occult side gigs." "Liar." The black eye glittered. "Your research piles scream otherwise. You dig into the old bindings because something still pulls when midnight leans heavy. Tell me I am wrong and I walk. With the wound or without." I circled the table, putting chaos between us like a fort. Paper edges sliced my thigh. "Months ago you said half-demons do not keep soft spots. That attachment gets haunting. Then you vanished into the dark like you'd never pressed me against warehouse brick and ruined me for quiet boys ever again. Now you land here calling me soft enough to save and still expect honesty?" He rose. Slow. Controlled. The cane found his palm again though. the blade stayed hidden for now. Two easy strides erased the books between us until the heat of him brushed my jumper. His scent thickened: metal, expensive tobacco, clean sweat. My back met the fridge door with a dull thud. Magnet charms rattled. "You were never soft. Cicatrices and blue fire and that never-stop mind. You saw gaps I did not. After the wharf I stayed gone so the courts forgot your scent. Tonight Satariel's talons are longer. I bled so you’d have one night of alert. You deserve that much from the mess I dragged you into." His free hand lifted. Two fingertips sketched the air near my cheek without contact. The almost-touch burned hotter than contact would have. I hated how my chin tipped up, how my lungs forgot rhythm. Attraction never left. It just buried itself under the anger and grew teeth. "Touch me and I break your cane over your pretty French head." "Do it. I have wrought worse." The room narrowed to the space between mouths. Candle stubs Eva had thrust into old bottles flickered. A scroll with rust-coloured ink unrolled one corner in a draft. My palms flattened on cool fridge metal. His next exhale ghosted my lips. Months of silence roared louder than any apology. I wanted the taste of lies and brandy again. I wanted him ruined right back. Ptolemy shot from under the bed in a ginger blur and leapt the windowsill, fur spiked full, eyes yellow coins fixed on the front door. Lucien went statue-still. Slowly, every socio-linguistic polish dropped from his bearing. The ivory handle twisted. Steel whispered free of the cane shaft, thin and cold and etched with runes that smoked faint black. Floorboards on the landing creaked once. Twice. Something heavy dragged steel points along the outer wood. Splinters peeled under pressure no human fist could manage. "They now." His voice flattened to gravel and gutter French. "Kitchen window. Fire escape. Do not look back when you drop." The door handle turned of its own accord, metal squealing. Bolts held for two heartbeats. Then the wood around the middle lock cracked open like ripe fruit, black claws raking daylight streaks through solid oak.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1286
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1286
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"silk"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"silk"
2"pulse"
3"perfect"
4"traced"
5"flickered"
6"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1286
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount840
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.36
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien3
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Leather1
Marseille1
Eva2
French1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Frenchman"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1286
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
94.44% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean34.76
std16.7
cv0.481
sampleLengths
032
17
258
36
454
543
632
732
824
93
1037
1152
1244
1344
1434
1519
1628
1740
1826
1928
2020
2157
2256
2330
2437
2566
2654
2755
2847
2912
306
3164
3225
3333
3425
3521
3635
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences110
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount845
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.02603550295857988
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001183431952662722
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean11.69
std8.61
cv0.736
sampleLengths
011
121
27
314
410
513
64
76
811
96
1014
1123
123
133
1411
1515
164
1712
1812
1911
2021
2117
2215
2324
243
2510
269
278
2810
2910
3024
3118
325
3313
3415
3511
3612
375
389
399
409
4115
4219
4319
4414
4514
4615
479
483
4913
73.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4727272727272727
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners52
78.43% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences85
matches
0"Slowly, every socio-linguistic polish dropped"
1"Then the wood around the"
ratio0.024
50.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences85
matches
0"I yanked the door open"
1"I planted myself square in"
2"His platinum hair sat slicked"
3"He stepped forward"
4"I refused to give ground"
5"I backed up."
6"He crossed inside."
7"I kicked the door shut"
8"He sank onto the sofa"
9"My pulse hammered at the"
10"I crossed to the hob"
11"He worked the buttons free."
12"I knelt and pressed a"
13"He hissed through his teeth."
14"My free hand braced on"
15"I kept my eyes on"
16"I taped the pad down"
17"His fingers found the crescent"
18"I jerked back."
19"His voice dropped, Marseille consonants"
ratio0.424
1.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences85
matches
0"The final deadbolt released under"
1"I yanked the door open"
2"I planted myself square in"
3"His platinum hair sat slicked"
4"The charcoal suit hugged his"
5"The black one swallowed light"
6"The ivory handle of his"
7"He stepped forward"
8"I refused to give ground"
9"I backed up."
10"He crossed inside."
11"Sandalwood and scorched metal rolled"
12"Ptolemy shot from the sofa"
13"Scrolls teetered in towers."
14"Eva's flat had always belonged"
15"I kicked the door shut"
16"Lucien laid the cane across"
17"A darker patch spread low"
18"He sank onto the sofa"
19"Leather and demon heat pressed"
ratio0.918
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.5066%