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Run: 2026-07-08-01KX1MADM76APX69AXKW95F0GR
Run Details
Model:
Grok 4.5 (Reasoning, High)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 58s
Cost:
$0.033528
Provider:
xAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
72.62%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
97.64%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
49.69%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
76.45%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
93.60%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
97.37%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
86.0456%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Rory wrenched the last deadbolt
free and yanked the door open hard enough to rattle the frame.
Lucien Moreau filled the landing
like he owned the building, platinum blond hair slicked back without a strand free, charcoal suit cut sharp enough to draw blood. One amber eye and one black latched onto her face.
The ivory handle of his
cane rested against the worn linoleum as if the scuffed entrance merely polished itself for him. "Aurora." "Don't."
She planted one trainer against
the bottom edge of the door. "Door stays open for the exit you're about to take." "Charming as the night we first met."
He moved before she could
shove it closed, slipping past her shoulder in one fluid step.
The scent of cedar and
something hotter—like a match struck too close—followed him into the flat.
Curry spices rose thick from
the restaurant below and mixed with the dry tang of old paper. He ignored both.
Ptolemy exploded off a tower
of research notes in a blur of tabby fur and yellow fur-bristled outrage.
The cat landed hard on
the tiny table, sending a scroll careening off the edge.
Lucien caught it mid-drop without
looking, cane still dangling from two fingers of his free hand. "Your housemate still prefers me dead, I see."
Rory slammed the door and
engaged all three locks in quick succession.
The metal clacks rang loud
in the cramped space. "State whatever bought you five minutes and clear out. Eva's research doesn't need your fingerprints on it."
He set the scroll down
with precise care atop a stack of Welsh bardic translations. "Eva rang twice. You hung up once and
shattered
the second handset. I grew bored of second-hand
silence
." "Then stick to first-hand brokers who enjoy your company."
Her shoulder-length black hair stuck
to the nape of her neck.
She jerked a thumb toward
the door. "Exit's behind you. Use it." Lucien turned fully.
The lamplight caught the heterochromatic
flash of his eyes and the clean line of his jaw. "Three months. You disappear from the bar flat into Eva's warren and act as if I orchestrated the apocalypse. I left a note." "One line of crap." Rory crossed the narrow floor, boot heels clipping paperback spines underfoot, and stopped half a metre short of him. "It's better this way. Brilliant. Sentimental even. Should frame it next to my restraining order from Cardiff." Something shifted behind his calm.
His free hand flexed once
against the cane. "I had contracts that would have put a target on the back of your lovely neck. You escaped one
predator
already. I refused to become the next." "How noble. You still reek of excuses."
She snatched a biro from
the table and uncapped it just to grip something. "You crawled out of my bed at four in the morning, wrote your masterpiece on a takeaway napkin, and vanished. Next I hear, you're cutting deals at Docklands and sending me polite distance. Spare me the martyr act, Moreau." He closed the gap. The starched cuff of his shirt brushed her forearm. Heat jumped between bare skin and tailored wool. "You kissed me first that night," he said. "Hard enough to bruise. You knew what I was—half the blood of Avaros still warms under this skin—and you reached anyway. Then you flinched the morning after when my eyes went full black for a second. I watched you yank the sheet higher. You morte. I left." "I didn't flinch." The biro snapped in her grip. Plastic fragments scattered across a charcoal rubbing of a sigil. "I
processed
. There's a difference." "Call the difference whatever soothes you." Lucien's voice dropped to that low Marseille register that had once made her forget every street name in London. "You pack your labour for Golden Empress and deliver noodles to financial firms that pay in pure silver under the table. You keep Eva’s wards vitalised with your own blood key. You hide above curry kitchens so your ex cannot scent you. None of it erases the night we spent—or the nights since I mapped every street between the bar and Brick Lane waiting for permission I no longer deserve." Rory's bright blue stare held his. The crescent scar on her left wrist burned under the knitted cuff as if the memory itself pressed a fingernail into the old mark. "Permission. Is that the word we're using? You stole nights and left ghosts. I don't grant clearance for ghosts." Ptolemy yowled from the windowsill and knocked over a ceramic mug of cold tea. The liquid soaked a pile of photostats. Neither of them moved to rescue the ink. Lucien’s amber iris
flicked
to the mess, then back to her mouth. "I came because the shadows under Whitechapel have started whispering your childhood name. Laila. That flavour of covenant magic only traces bloodlines rooted in old Cardiff soil. Someone sold the information. Your ex wears new teeth these days and paid for my
silence
first. He did not receive it."
She went cold to the
hipbones. "Evan’s human. Damaged, but human." "Was. Something microbial or demonic rode the veins he opened after you fled. He walks evenings now and collects favours. He asked for timings on your deliveries. I delayed him seventy-two hours. The clock expired at midnight. I required your door open sooner." "You could have texted." "You blocked every number linked to me." A ghost of that old smile tugged the corner of his mouth. "Old-fashioned I remain." Rory stepped sideways, putting the wobbly table between them, and gathered a handful of dry notes into a defensive stack. Paper edges cut her palm. "So you drop by to play white knight with a cane and fancy coat. Congratulations. Message received. Leave the name of the broker who sold me and walk." "No." The single syllable cracked the small room.
He rounded the table faster
than a man relying on a cane should manage. The ivory tip kissed the floor once, decisive. "I walk only when you walk with me. A safehouse in Knightsbridge has fresh wards and no curry ventilation. Pack a bag. The cat can come if he promises fewer claws." "I am not luggage you recover."
Her chin lifted
. "I left one controlling bastard. I refuse the sequel starring yourself." Lucien’s mismatched eyes flared.
He reached—not for her throat
like everyone dreaded from a half-demon—but for the cuff of her left sleeve. Two fingers peeled the fabric back with shocking gentleness and
traced
the pale crescent scar with the pad of his thumb. Sparks of heat chased the path. Rory’s breath snagged hard. "You earned this mark falling from a climbing frame at seven," he murmured. "Not from me. Never from me. I remember every detail you ever tossed out half-drunk on cheap red. Your mother’s maiden name. The exact shade of your father’s barrister robes. The way you still flinch at the smell of hospital antiseptic. I would burn half London before I added new scars."
Her free hand rose of
its own volition and flattened against the lapel of his suit. The fabric burned hot under her palm. "Then why disappear? Why not explain over breakfast that contracts pull you sideways? Why the napkin and the
silence
?" "Because if I stayed I would have marked you as mine in front of every creature who receives my prices. The court of Avaros still names me son. Binding protections cut both ways. You would have woken with my sigil on your skin and every rival hunting the pair of us. I chose the agony of absence over the risk of your death."
He leaned in until their
foreheads nearly touched. Breath mingled. "I choose wrong on many nights. That night felt worse." The flat shrank around the space between their mouths. Every scroll, every ink stain and curry ghost faded under the pull of the almost-contact. Rory’s fingers curled into the expensive wool, half-ready to shove him back, half-ready to drag him closer and reclaim every stolen hour. Lucien’s black eye swallowed more light. The amber one burned gold. Ptolemy’s low growl rose from the windowsill—a sound thicker than ordinary feline threat. The air pressure in the room dropped like a lift failing. Lucien’s cane hand snapped up. The ivory handle twisted with a soft metallic snick and a thin dagger blade slithered free.
He spun, one arm already
pushing Rory behind the barricade of his body. The three deadbolts on the front door glowed an ugly red, then warped as though the metal melted from inside. A wet, dragging breath sounded from the landing. Something that had once claimed the name Evan Carter massed its new shape against the wood and whispered her name through the keyhole.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
13
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
38
tagDensity
0.342
leniency
0.684
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1461
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
72.62%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1461
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"shattered"
count
1
1
word
"silence"
count
3
2
word
"predator"
count
1
3
word
"processed"
count
1
4
word
"flicked"
count
1
5
word
"traced"
count
1
highlights
0
"shattered"
1
"silence"
2
"predator"
3
"processed"
4
"flicked"
5
"traced"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
67
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
67
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
92
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
71
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1455
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
13
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
97.64%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
27
wordCount
764
uniqueNames
11
maxNameDensity
1.05
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau
1
Welsh
1
Plastic
1
Marseille
1
London
1
Rory
8
Lucien
8
Breath
1
Evan
1
Carter
1
Ptolemy
3
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Plastic"
2
"Rory"
3
"Lucien"
4
"Breath"
5
"Evan"
6
"Carter"
7
"Ptolemy"
places
0
"Marseille"
1
"London"
globalScore
0.976
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
54
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1455
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
92
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
36
mean
40.42
std
21.06
cv
0.521
sampleLengths
0
17
1
58
2
1
3
22
4
59
5
49
6
8
7
38
8
33
9
32
10
42
11
40
12
40
13
60
14
21
15
55
16
24
17
95
18
49
19
29
20
61
21
11
22
43
23
4
24
22
25
53
26
61
27
20
28
53
29
64
30
42
31
83
32
57
33
24
34
34
35
51
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
67
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
123
matches
(empty)
49.69%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
4
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
3
totalSentences
92
ratio
0.033
matches
0
"The scent of cedar and something hotter—like a match struck too close—followed him into the flat."
1
"He reached—not for her throat like everyone dreaded from a half-demon—but for the cuff of her left sleeve."
2
"Ptolemy’s low growl rose from the windowsill—a sound thicker than ordinary feline threat."
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
775
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"yellow fur-bristled outrage."
adverbCount
23
adverbRatio
0.02967741935483871
lyAdverbCount
5
lyAdverbRatio
0.0064516129032258064
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
92
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
92
mean
15.82
std
13.05
cv
0.825
sampleLengths
0
17
1
27
2
10
3
21
4
1
5
12
6
10
7
23
8
16
9
17
10
3
11
18
12
15
13
16
14
8
15
12
16
9
17
17
18
15
19
18
20
20
21
7
22
5
23
3
24
16
25
23
26
23
27
17
28
5
29
8
30
27
31
21
32
39
33
4
34
9
35
8
36
8
37
47
38
9
39
10
40
5
41
25
42
70
43
6
44
24
45
19
46
14
47
7
48
8
49
12
76.45%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.4782608695652174
totalSentences
92
uniqueOpeners
44
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
64
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
16
totalSentences
64
matches
0
"She planted one trainer against"
1
"He moved before she could"
2
"He ignored both."
3
"He set the scroll down"
4
"Her shoulder-length black hair stuck"
5
"She jerked a thumb toward"
6
"His free hand flexed once"
7
"She snatched a biro from"
8
"He closed the gap."
9
"She went cold to the"
10
"He rounded the table faster"
11
"Her chin lifted"
12
"He reached—not for her throat"
13
"Her free hand rose of"
14
"He leaned in until their"
15
"He spun, one arm already"
ratio
0.25
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
62
totalSentences
64
matches
0
"Rory wrenched the last deadbolt"
1
"Lucien Moreau filled the landing"
2
"The ivory handle of his"
3
"She planted one trainer against"
4
"He moved before she could"
5
"The scent of cedar and"
6
"Curry spices rose thick from"
7
"He ignored both."
8
"Ptolemy exploded off a tower"
9
"The cat landed hard on"
10
"Lucien caught it mid-drop without"
11
"Rory slammed the door and"
12
"The metal clacks rang loud"
13
"He set the scroll down"
14
"Her shoulder-length black hair stuck"
15
"She jerked a thumb toward"
16
"Lucien turned fully."
17
"The lamplight caught the heterochromatic"
18
"Rory crossed the narrow floor,"
19
"Something shifted behind his calm."
ratio
0.969
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
64
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
93.60%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
29
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"The three deadbolts on the front door glowed an ugly red, then warped as though the metal melted from inside."
1
"Something that had once claimed the name Evan Carter massed its new shape against the wood and whispered her name through the keyhole."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
13
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
97.37%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
3
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"The biro snapped (snap)"
1
"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences
38
tagDensity
0.079
leniency
0.158
rawRatio
0.667
effectiveRatio
0.105
86.0456%