| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She stepped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.367 | | leniency | 0.733 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 88.21% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2121 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 69.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2121 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "crystal" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "fractured" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "potential" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 4 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 144 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 52 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2121 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 1646 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | London | 2 | | Soho | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Isolde | 14 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Tube" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Grove" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Soho" | | 3 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.923 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 42.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking on piled velvet" | | 1 | "felt like the path might simply erase i" | | 2 | "looked like cherries but pulsed gently, e" | | 3 | "trees that seemed to breathe, trunks expanding and contracting slow as lungs" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 0.943 | | wordCount | 2121 | | matches | | 0 | "not the canopy above but a sky of endless amber dusk, slow-rolling clouds edged gold" | | 1 | "neither here nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 57.32 | | std | 31.23 | | cv | 0.545 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 107 | | 4 | 99 | | 5 | 96 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 103 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 121 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 67 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 91 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 65 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 32 | | 25 | 107 | | 26 | 91 | | 27 | 56 | | 28 | 74 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 68 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 61 | | 34 | 79 | | 35 | 93 | | 36 | 53 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 279 | | matches | | 0 | "were singing" | | 1 | "was already gliding" |
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| 83.33% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 144 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain was cool; the deep crimson stone the size of her thumbnail gave only its usual faint warmth, no pulse that warned of Hel." | | 1 | "When she stood, her knees complained less than they should have; the dull ache from twelve hours of delivery shifts had faded almost to nothing." | | 2 | "Her watch finally quit pretending; the display had frozen at 4:17 and the glass felt warm." |
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| 87.96% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1258 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.04689984101748808 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007154213036565978 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 144 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 144 | | mean | 14.73 | | std | 9.65 | | cv | 0.655 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 42 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 74.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4583333333333333 | | totalSentences | 144 | | uniqueOpeners | 66 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere far off, water chuckled" | | 1 | "Only flowers nodding though no" | | 2 | "Once she stepped near a" | | 3 | "Always cold, Isolde had said" |
| | ratio | 0.034 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "They had not been there" | | 1 | "She would have noticed." | | 2 | "She always noticed." | | 3 | "Their silhouette stretched taller than" | | 4 | "they whispered, voice no louder" | | 5 | "She glanced once over her" | | 6 | "She kept walking." | | 7 | "She crouched once to touch" | | 8 | "She checked her watch from" | | 9 | "She shook her wrist." | | 10 | "They took the left-hand path" | | 11 | "She was no taller than" | | 12 | "She wore a simple dress" | | 13 | "She crouched and hovered her" | | 14 | "Her pendant flared once, a" | | 15 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 16 | "Her mouth went dry." | | 17 | "They circled the pool the" | | 18 | "She did not touch them." | | 19 | "Her watch finally quit pretending;" |
| | ratio | 0.233 | |
| 63.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter hesitated at the" | | 1 | "Richmond Park smelled of cut" | | 2 | "They had not been there" | | 3 | "She would have noticed." | | 4 | "She always noticed." | | 5 | "Nyx waited half a step" | | 6 | "Their silhouette stretched taller than" | | 7 | "they whispered, voice no louder" | | 8 | "Rory touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 9 | "The silver chain was cool;" | | 10 | "She glanced once over her" | | 11 | "The air changed first." | | 12 | "Pressure popped in her ears" | | 13 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 14 | "Some glowed faintly from within," | | 15 | "She kept walking." | | 16 | "Nyx drifted at her shoulder," | | 17 | "Light filtered down in strange," | | 18 | "Rory’s boots sank into moss" | | 19 | "She crouched once to touch" |
| | ratio | 0.793 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 42.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter hesitated at the straight line of standing stones, their trunks so thick a grown man could not wrap his arms around them, bark black as wet slate …" | | 1 | "The silver chain was cool; the deep crimson stone the size of her thumbnail gave only its usual faint warmth, no pulse that warned of Hel." | | 2 | "Under it ran another sound, a low harmonic hum she felt in her breastbone rather than heard, as if the air itself were singing beneath language." | | 3 | "The flowers densened, some rising as high as her waist, nodding on stems that looked translucent, full of cloudy green sap." | | 4 | "Ethereal and ageless, skin luminous as if moonlight lived under it." | | 5 | "Rory felt the pull anyway, the same itch that made her open locked doors and take wrong turns just to see." | | 6 | "Beneath its skin shapes moved: a city nozzle fractured into hanging gardens, a banquet table that stretched forever, faces of people she almost recognized laugh…" | | 7 | "Here the oaks thinned into thinner silver-skinned trees that seemed to breathe, trunks expanding and contracting slow as lungs." | | 8 | "When her hand emerged it held a slender dagger the length of Rory’s forearm, leaf-shaped, moonsilver that drank the amber light and gave it back cooler, bluer." | | 9 | "The weapon glowed faintest white along the edge as if moonlight lived inside the metal." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |