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Run: 2026-07-08-01KX1MCKYE8P8MCW220EZA0CE7
Run Details
Model:
Grok 4.5 (Reasoning, Low)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
56.7s
Cost:
$0.017490
Provider:
xAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
49.30%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
79.87%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
8.89%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
75.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
87.1020%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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The three deadbolts surrendered under
my fingers in a staccato of metal protests.
I yanked the door open
to the dim corridor and froze. Lucien Moreau filled the threshold, ivory-handled cane planted like a claim on the worn carpet.
His tailored charcoal suit drank
the weak bulb light, platinum blond hair slicked back without a strand out of place. One amber eye and one black fixed on me with that
familiar
,
unreadable
stillness. "You left London without a word," he said. "And you tracked me to Eva's without an invitation."
I kept my hand on
the frame. "Brilliant detective work. Now leave." He stepped forward.
I blocked him with my
shoulder.
Ptolemy's low growl rumbled from
the stack of scrolls on the armchair behind me. The tabby hated unannounced guests. "Rory."
His voice carried the soft
Marseille
lilt
that once made my knees weak in that warehouse off Brick Lane. "Three months of
silence
, and this is your greeting." "You sold the names of those refugees to the Morrigan covens and expected flowers?"
Heat climbed my neck
.
I refused to glance at
the crescent scar on my left wrist, the one he used to trace with his thumb after sex that left bruises I never wanted healed. "I packed. I left. Done."
His cane tip tapped once
against the doorjamb. "They were already dead. I merely... accelerated the discourse to extract better terms for the living." "Spare me the fixer poetry."
I shoved the door harder
.
He caught it with his
free hand, glove leather creaking.
The scent of him rolled
over me: sandalwood, expensive tobacco, and the faint brimstone undercurrent no cologne ever fully masked. Half-demon cologne.
My traitor lungs drank it
in. "Eva's research said you would be here."
He nodded past me at
the chaos of books and annotated scrolls claiming every surface of the cramped one-bedroom.
Curry steam seeped through the
floorboards from the restaurant below, spicing the air with cumin and something greasier. "Guarding her notes while she digs in the British Library stacks. Predictable." "Get out." He did not.
Instead he stepped full into
the flat, forcing me back two paces. The door clicked shut behind him with the soft finality of a trap. Ptolemy hissed and leapt to the top of a bookshelf, knocking loose a yellowed map of Avaros that floated to the floor like a surrender flag. "I need your talent for locked doors and bad decisions," Lucien said.
He propped the cane against
Eva's overloaded desk. The ivory handle gleamed.
I remembered the thin blade
it hid, the night he planted it in a rival's throat to keep me breathing. "There's a ledger. Demonic contracts rewritten in human blood. Your former employers at the Golden Empress delivered parcels that never reached their tables. One of them holds the names of every half-blood child marked for collection next moon." My
stomach
turned. "You think I still deliver takeaway for Yu-Fei?" "I think you hide above a bar that serves illegal nectar and deliver food by day to stay off the True Courts' radar."
His amber eye flicked to
my delivery jacket draped over a chair. "Old habits. Clever ones." I crossed my arms. The flat felt smaller with him in it. Scrolls threatened to topple if I breathed wrong. "And after what you did, why would I touch anything that comes from your mouth?" "Because you still dream about my mouth."
He advanced another step
. Heat radiated from his body, the half-demon excess that always left me restless. "About the wet brick alley behind Silas's place where I pinned you and made you choke my name until your voice broke. About how you bit my shoulder hard enough to draw ichor and licked it off while I fucked you against that dumpster." "Stop." "You left a claw mark on my back that still itches when it rains." His black eye stayed bottomless, but the amber one dilated. "I kept the shirt. Bloodied
silk
. Minx perfume." The memory hit without mercy: his teeth on my throat, the cane discarded, my legs locked around him as rats fled the alley. Attraction had always been the easy poison between us. The hurt came later, when loyalty to his networks outweighed the bodies receding in the rear-view. "You don't get to rewrite the ending because you got lonely," I said. "Or because some ledger threatens your bottom line." He reached into his jacket and drew a folded piece of parchment. I recognised the red sealing wax of the Avaros courts. "Not lonely. Compromised. The contracts include a name I never intended to see again." He held it out. My own name stared back in elegant script: Aurora Carter. Alias Malphora. Blood price already half-paid. My hand rose without permission. He pulled the parchment just out of reach. "Cooperation," he said. "Or I burn it and take the children myself. The Courts will collect either way. Difference is whether you walk free afterwards or join the harvest." "You bastard." "French, actually. And half." He almost smiled. Almost. "I need your eyes on the Golden Empress route maps. Yu-Fei’s eldest son has been skimming. The ledger lives in his office safe. You know the building. The alarms. The false night manager who turns a blind eye if enough cash lands in the right pocket." "I quit delivering months ago." "You still have the keycode memorised. And the soft spot for the kitchen boy who once smuggled you leftover dumplings when you were flat broke and running from that human ex whose name stinks like cheap gin." He edged closer. A single pale blond strand loosened from the slick-back and brushed his collar. "Help me unpack this. Burn the contracts. Walk away clean. Or order me out again and watch the Courts knock for real." My
pulse
hammered at my throat. The old pull tightened, equal parts want and fury. His cane waited within easy reach if I swung for it. Part of me wanted the fight. The larger, colder part wanted to know how my blood
got mixed
into demon contracts without my knowledge. "If I open that safe," I said, "and your people double-cross me again—" "We freeze them together." He finished the threat for me, soft. "However many limbs it takes." Silence stretched. Eva’s flat breathed around us, floorboards creaking under the
weight
of too many secrets. I tasted copper on the back of my tongue, old adrenaline. His hand lifted, slow, giving me every chance to step back. Fingers brushed the side of my neck, over the place his mouth once branded. My breath snagged. "Still
electric
," he murmured. I should have broken his wrist.
Instead my palm landed on
his chest, feeling the steady double-time of a half-demon heart. Too warm. Always too warm. "You walking back into my life like this," I said, "is the most stupid move you've made since Marseille." "Yet here we stand." His thumb stroked once along my jaw. "Say no. Mean it. I'll vanish before the next train leaves King's Cross. Or say yes and let me fix what I
shattered
." I opened my mouth to refuse him clean. The lights went out. In the pure dark the cane clattered to the floor. Ptolemy screeched. Lucien’s body slammed into mine as something heavy crashed through the corridor window outside the flat. Glass sprayed the landing. A low, wet snarl rolled under the door, the kind that belonged to nothing born on Earth. "Down,"
Lucien snapped, voice gone sharp, demonic undertone bleeding through
. His fingers locked around my arm and hauled me toward the back bedroom just as the three deadbolts began shrieking under supernatural pressure. The door bowed inward.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
20
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"His thumb stroked once [once]"
dialogueSentences
42
tagDensity
0.476
leniency
0.952
rawRatio
0.05
effectiveRatio
0.048
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1282
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
49.30%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1282
totalAiIsms
13
found
0
word
"familiar"
count
1
1
word
"unreadable"
count
1
2
word
"lilt"
count
1
3
word
"silence"
count
2
4
word
"predictable"
count
1
5
word
"stomach"
count
1
6
word
"flicked"
count
1
7
word
"silk"
count
1
8
word
"pulse"
count
1
9
word
"weight"
count
1
10
word
"electric"
count
1
11
word
"shattered"
count
1
highlights
0
"familiar"
1
"unreadable"
2
"lilt"
3
"silence"
4
"predictable"
5
"stomach"
6
"flicked"
7
"silk"
8
"pulse"
9
"weight"
10
"electric"
11
"shattered"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
85
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
85
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
106
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
47
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1282
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
14
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
23
wordCount
776
uniqueNames
15
maxNameDensity
0.52
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1
worstWindowName
"Avaros"
discoveredNames
Moreau
1
Marseille
1
Brick
1
Lane
1
Heat
2
Curry
1
Avaros
2
Eva
2
Aurora
1
Carter
1
Malphora
1
Silence
1
Earth
1
Lucien
4
Ptolemy
3
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Avaros"
2
"Eva"
3
"Aurora"
4
"Carter"
5
"Silence"
6
"Lucien"
7
"Ptolemy"
places
0
"Marseille"
1
"Brick"
2
"Lane"
3
"Heat"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
53
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1282
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
106
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
41
mean
31.27
std
21.65
cv
0.692
sampleLengths
0
24
1
49
2
8
3
21
4
28
5
29
6
53
7
24
8
48
9
56
10
2
11
54
12
82
13
11
14
39
15
35
16
68
17
1
18
32
19
48
20
21
21
56
22
13
23
29
24
2
25
54
26
5
27
75
28
50
29
13
30
16
31
55
32
4
33
26
34
19
35
34
36
8
37
4
38
49
39
33
40
4
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
85
matches
0
"got mixed"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
133
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
106
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
785
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
25
adverbRatio
0.03184713375796178
lyAdverbCount
1
lyAdverbRatio
0.0012738853503184713
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
106
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
106
mean
12.09
std
9.18
cv
0.759
sampleLengths
0
13
1
11
2
15
3
20
4
14
5
8
6
16
7
5
8
3
9
6
10
14
11
5
12
20
13
9
14
18
15
30
16
5
17
8
18
16
19
10
20
10
21
20
22
2
23
6
24
26
25
18
26
12
27
2
28
3
29
12
30
13
31
26
32
12
33
8
34
4
35
20
36
38
37
3
38
8
39
35
40
4
41
4
42
8
43
8
44
15
45
11
46
13
47
44
48
1
49
24
79.87%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.49056603773584906
totalSentences
106
uniqueOpeners
52
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
3
totalSentences
72
matches
0
"Instead he stepped full into"
1
"Instead my palm landed on"
2
"Always too warm."
ratio
0.042
8.89%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
38
totalSentences
72
matches
0
"I yanked the door open"
1
"His tailored charcoal suit drank"
2
"I kept my hand on"
3
"He stepped forward."
4
"I blocked him with my"
5
"His voice carried the soft"
6
"I refused to glance at"
7
"His cane tip tapped once"
8
"I shoved the door harder"
9
"He caught it with his"
10
"My traitor lungs drank it"
11
"He nodded past me at"
12
"He did not."
13
"He propped the cane against"
14
"I remembered the thin blade"
15
"My stomach turned."
16
"His amber eye flicked to"
17
"I crossed my arms."
18
"He advanced another step"
19
"His black eye stayed bottomless,"
ratio
0.528
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
67
totalSentences
72
matches
0
"The three deadbolts surrendered under"
1
"I yanked the door open"
2
"Lucien Moreau filled the threshold,"
3
"His tailored charcoal suit drank"
4
"I kept my hand on"
5
"He stepped forward."
6
"I blocked him with my"
7
"Ptolemy's low growl rumbled from"
8
"The tabby hated unannounced guests."
9
"His voice carried the soft"
10
"Heat climbed my neck"
11
"I refused to glance at"
12
"His cane tip tapped once"
13
"I shoved the door harder"
14
"He caught it with his"
15
"The scent of him rolled"
16
"My traitor lungs drank it"
17
"He nodded past me at"
18
"Curry steam seeped through the"
19
"He did not."
ratio
0.931
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
72
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
32
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"Ptolemy hissed and leapt to the top of a bookshelf, knocking loose a yellowed map of Avaros that floated to the floor like a surrender flag."
75.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
20
uselessAdditionCount
2
matches
0
"He finished, soft"
1
"Lucien snapped, voice gone sharp, demonic undertone bleeding through"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
8
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"he murmured (murmur)"
1
"Lucien snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences
42
tagDensity
0.19
leniency
0.381
rawRatio
0.25
effectiveRatio
0.095
87.1020%