| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.235 | | leniency | 0.471 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.039 | |
| 96.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1477 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 69.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1477 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "unspoken" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "flicked" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "glint" | | 5 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 115 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 154 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1464 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 970 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.93 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | French | 1 | | Papers | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Lucien | 9 | | Avaros | 1 | | Three | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Silence | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | University | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | One | 3 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Books | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Papers" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Avaros" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Silence" | | 6 | "Rory" | | 7 | "One" | | 8 | "Ptolemy" | | 9 | "Books" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed warmer in the flat’s lamplight" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1464 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 154 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 26.62 | | std | 20.08 | | cv | 0.754 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 43 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 59 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 76 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 60 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 43 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 44 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 54 | | 42 | 37 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 56 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 23 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 154 | | ratio | 0.091 | | matches | | 0 | "Heterochromatic eyes locked on hers—amber and black, unblinking." | | 1 | "Scrolls covered the tiny table; maps of ley lines spilled from the armchair." | | 2 | "The air between them thickened with old static—the kind left after arguments that ended in slammed doors and unspoken words." | | 3 | "The locks stayed undone now; the flat felt smaller." | | 4 | "She laughed once—short, sharp." | | 5 | "He had intervened—too late for full truth, early enough that she lived." | | 6 | "His hand lifted—slow, deliberate—and hovered near her cheek without contact." | | 7 | "The touch stayed light—just the pads of his fingers and the cool impression of a ring she had never seen him wear before." | | 8 | "“I have spent sixty-three nights walking the perimeter of every place you sleep. Omission was not carelessness; it was armour. I thought if the debt stayed mine alone, the blade stayed pointed at me.”" | | 9 | "“Now the debt is settled. The armour cracks.” His other hand found her waist—gentle pressure over the thin cotton of her old Cardiff University shirt." | | 10 | "Mouth brushed the corner of hers—not a kiss, a testing refusal to finish what he started." | | 11 | "Rory’s free hand rose and traced the edge of his jaw—stubble since dawn, the exact abrasion she remembered against her throat on nights that no longer belonged to them." | | 12 | "His mouth finally claimed hers—careful, then less so." | | 13 | "She kissed him again—harder, a claim of her own—and walked him backward until his shoulders found the wall beside the hanging herbs." |
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| 96.92% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 988 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.043522267206477734 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00708502024291498 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 154 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 154 | | mean | 9.51 | | std | 8.11 | | cv | 0.854 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 62.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3961038961038961 | | totalSentences | 154 | | uniqueOpeners | 61 | |
| 98.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the silence." | | 1 | "Then her demand that he" | | 2 | "Instead her fingers curled into" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 90.59% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "She kept the door half-closed." | | 1 | "His French accent clipped the" | | 2 | "He did not step forward." | | 3 | "He lifted the cane and" | | 4 | "Her voice cracking as she" | | 5 | "His silence when he turned" | | 6 | "He shut it." | | 7 | "He scratched behind the tabby’s" | | 8 | "She cleared a space on" | | 9 | "He rose in one smooth" | | 10 | "She laughed once—short, sharp." | | 11 | "His knuckles whitened on the" | | 12 | "He had intervened—too late for" | | 13 | "He set the cane against" | | 14 | "She did not step back." | | 15 | "His hand lifted—slow, deliberate—and hovered" | | 16 | "His breath carried the faint" | | 17 | "She jabbed a finger toward" | | 18 | "He leaned in until his" | | 19 | "Her pulse hammered under his" |
| | ratio | 0.324 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt snicked back." | | 1 | "Rory twisted the handle and" | | 2 | "Lucien stood on the narrow" | | 3 | "The curry smells from the" | | 4 | "She kept the door half-closed." | | 5 | "His French accent clipped the" | | 6 | "A corner of his mouth" | | 7 | "He did not step forward." | | 8 | "Ptolemy padded across the books" | | 9 | "Rory’s free hand found the" | | 10 | "Lucien’s gaze dropped to the" | | 11 | "Rory shifted so the door" | | 12 | "Papers rustled under her slippered" | | 13 | "Scrolls covered the tiny table;" | | 14 | "He lifted the cane and" | | 15 | "The air between them thickened" | | 16 | "The alley behind Silas’s bar." | | 17 | "Her voice cracking as she" | | 18 | "His silence when he turned" | | 19 | "Rory stepped back." |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The air between them thickened with old static—the kind left after arguments that ended in slammed doors and unspoken words." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.18% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "he admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "He broke (break)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 51 | | tagDensity | 0.078 | | leniency | 0.157 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |