| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.1 | |
| 87.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1600 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.88% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1600 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "resolving" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "fluttered" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "velvet" | | 10 | "mosaic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1588 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1439 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.76 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Isolde | 5 | | Hel | 2 | | February | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 2 | | Unease | 1 | | Hel-warning | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Varga | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Unease" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Earth" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 62.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like consent" | | 1 | "felt like the only honest direction lef" | | 2 | "felt like welcome and warning braided t" |
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| 74.06% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.259 | | wordCount | 1588 | | matches | | 0 | "neither full night nor" | | 1 | "not fear exactly, but the dizzy awareness of standing on thin ice over a black lak" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 52.93 | | std | 29.86 | | cv | 0.564 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 102 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 71 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 84 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 26 | | 13 | 67 | | 14 | 70 | | 15 | 109 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 86 | | 18 | 72 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 72 | | 22 | 75 | | 23 | 78 | | 24 | 59 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 70 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 77 | | 29 | 43 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 236 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.119 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment she breathed the damp green of Richmond Park at dusk, leaf mulch and distant traffic; the next it slid over her tongue sweet and heavy, like crushed sugarcane mixed with night-blooming jasmine." | | 1 | "The heartstone pendant at her throat gave off no special warmth—this was no Hel portal—but its crimson core held a soft internal light that matched the strange twilight of the grove." | | 2 | "Her boot left a print in the spongy moss; Nyx left none when they drifted beside her." | | 3 | "The light never quite settled—neither full night nor day, just a luminous pearl-grey that made every petal translucent." | | 4 | "Memory flickered—Cardiff rain, her mother’s kitchen, Evan’s raised voice—then dissolved before it could catch." | | 5 | "The thing—plant?" | | 6 | "insect?—lifted a few inches, regarded her with faceted dewdrop eyes, then resettled." | | 7 | "She catalogued what she could control: left wrist scar tingling under her cuff; the dagger’s constant chill; Nyx’s solid presence that still smelled faintly of candle-smoke and old books." | | 8 | "On both sides trees grew that she knew could not exist in London—trunks pale as bone, leaves of hammered copper that chimed when the non-wind stirred them." | | 9 | "Heat licked her skin without burning, followed by a rush of images that were not hers—silver banquets, antlered dancers, a woman of impossible beauty weeping molten gold tears." | | 10 | "Inside her chest something fluttered—not fear exactly, but the dizzy awareness of standing on thin ice over a black lake." | | 11 | "Once she thought she heard her own name spoken by a dozen gentle mouths; she did not answer." | | 12 | "The heartstone pulsed harder—not the Hel-warning heat, something else, something that felt like welcome and warning braided together." | | 13 | "Somewhere far above, or perhaps centuries away, London traffic still crawled; here the air tasted of every spring that had never finished." | | 14 | "She let herself look—really look—at the living mosaic of light and shadow, and for one unguarded breath she forgot caution entirely." |
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| 85.45% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1468 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "left chalky green dust." | | 1 | "above turned translucent, revealing" |
| | adverbCount | 63 | | adverbRatio | 0.042915531335149866 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008174386920980926 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 12.6 | | std | 8.58 | | cv | 0.681 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 77.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.47619047619047616 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 95.24% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Once she thought she heard" | | 1 | "Somewhere far above, or perhaps" | | 2 | "Then she squared her shoulders," |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Her ears popped." | | 1 | "they whispered, the sound riding" | | 2 | "She took three careful steps." | | 3 | "Her boot left a print" | | 4 | "she asked, because the question" | | 5 | "They moved deeper." | | 6 | "She tasted the last of" | | 7 | "Her fingers found the dagger’s" | | 8 | "She catalogued what she could" | | 9 | "She did not drink." | | 10 | "she said quietly" | | 11 | "She stood and kept walking," | | 12 | "She rounded a curve and" | | 13 | "She reached out before thinking" | | 14 | "Her voice stayed level" | | 15 | "She forced her breathing slow," | | 16 | "They pressed on." | | 17 | "She thought of Isolde’s riddling" | | 18 | "She set one boot on" | | 19 | "It struck a circle of" |
| | ratio | 0.229 | |
| 74.29% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped between the ancient" | | 1 | "The air changed first." | | 2 | "Her ears popped." | | 3 | "The faint city rumble vanished" | | 4 | "Nyx flowed after her, their" | | 5 | "Violet eyes kindled faintly in" | | 6 | "they whispered, the sound riding" | | 7 | "Rory kept her hand near" | | 8 | "The blade stayed always cold," | | 9 | "The heartstone pendant at her" | | 10 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 11 | "She took three careful steps." | | 12 | "Her boot left a print" | | 13 | "The light never quite settled—neither" | | 14 | "A low hum rode the" | | 15 | "Rory’s pulse answered it." | | 16 | "she asked, because the question" | | 17 | "Nyx’s head tilted, shadow-hair shifting" | | 18 | "They moved deeper." | | 19 | "The standing stones receded until" |
| | ratio | 0.771 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 16 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped between the ancient oak standing stones with the careful precision of someone who had learned not to trust thresholds." | | 1 | "Nyx flowed after her, their silhouette of living shadow resolving into a taller humanoid form that stood a head above her." | | 2 | "The heartstone pendant at her throat gave off no special warmth—this was no Hel portal—but its crimson core held a soft internal light that matched the strange …" | | 3 | "Petals crushed under Rory’s boots released scents that shifted: first honey, then copper, then something clean as snowmelt." | | 4 | "A path of pale gravel appeared without announcement, winding between mounds of living flowers that opened and closed like breathing lungs." | | 5 | "On both sides trees grew that she knew could not exist in London—trunks pale as bone, leaves of hammered copper that chimed when the non-wind stirred them." | | 6 | "Beneath one such tree a clear pool lay perfectly still, reflecting stars that did not match any sky she had known." | | 7 | "Shadow reflections moved across the surface where Nyx stood, their outline fraying into a thousand violet threads before knitting again." | | 8 | "She rounded a curve and found the first true ruin: a toppled column of white stone veined with living green, carved in spirals that hurt the eye if stared at to…" | | 9 | "Heat licked her skin without burning, followed by a rush of images that were not hers—silver banquets, antlered dancers, a woman of impossible beauty weeping mo…" | | 10 | "Twenty-five years of ordinariness had not prepared her for this, yet the same mind that had once interpreted property law under fluorescent lights now sorted se…" | | 11 | "The gravel gave way to bare earth that felt warm, almost body-warm." | | 12 | "The choir of tones grew clearer, resolving into almost-words that teased the edge of meaning." | | 13 | "The heartstone pulsed harder—not the Hel-warning heat, something else, something that felt like welcome and warning braided together." | | 14 | "In the center grew a single tree of pure white wood, leafless yet shimmering as if every branch held dew not yet fallen." | | 15 | "Somewhere far above, or perhaps centuries away, London traffic still crawled; here the air tasted of every spring that had never finished." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice layered with distant bells" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.35 | | leniency | 0.7 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |