| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Their form solidified again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.478 | | leniency | 0.957 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 92.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1917 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 58.27% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1917 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "resolved" | | 4 | "raced" | | 5 | "echoes" | | 6 | "footfall" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "crystalline" | | 9 | "chill" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "complex" | | 12 | "restrained" | | 13 | "flicked" | | 14 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 79 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1902 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1601 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.19 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Heartstone | 2 | | London | 2 | | Nyx | 10 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.907 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 69.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as though remembering its own small history against a more ancient one" | | 1 | "felt like a heartbeat underfoot settled" | | 2 | "not quite know yet whether it was gift or warning" |
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| 94.85% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.052 | | wordCount | 1902 | | matches | | 0 | "not the sparse winter notes of the park, but a layered chorus of unmarked seasons: thrush" | | 1 | "neither promise nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 55.94 | | std | 31.29 | | cv | 0.559 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 110 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 94 | | 7 | 58 | | 8 | 95 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 82 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 108 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 50 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 105 | | 19 | 75 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 86 | | 22 | 68 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 47 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 122 | | 28 | 64 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 51 | | 31 | 78 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 54 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 277 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 7 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.16 | | matches | | 0 | "The air beyond the stones smelled different already—sweeter, wetter, threaded with the green copper bite of crushed fern and something warmer, like sun on apple skins in late summer." | | 1 | "December clung pairwise to the park behind them; inside the circle, it had surrendered." | | 2 | "Birdsong returned—not the sparse winter notes of the park, but a layered chorus of unmarked seasons: thrush and goldcrest and something with a liquid whistling cry she had never heard." | | 3 | "Rory blinked and saw dew catch on a spider thread strung between two brambles; the droplet held a tiny inverted world that shivered when she breathed." | | 4 | "Dust motes—or perhaps motes of something else—drifted in shafts of light that fell at impossible angles, vertical then slanting as if the sun itself walked with them." | | 5 | "Standing stones ringed it again—smaller ones this time, smoothed and sigil-carved—but within them the wildflowers densed into a living carpet that somehow made space for a single weathered stone bench and a firepit whose coals still glowed faint amber, as though someone had only just stepped away." | | 6 | "Trees bowed inward; trunks twisted into half-formed faces that resolved only at the edge of vision and dissolved when looked at full." | | 7 | "Rory counted eight stones, then nine—she had miscounted, or one had simply decided to appear." | | 8 | "Rory thought of bioluminescent fungi and then discarded the thought; this light was cleaner, like moonlight that had learned to pool." | | 9 | "Sound behaved strangely here too—echoes arrived late and left early, and twice she heard her own footfall return from ahead of her, as if a second Rory walked just out of sight." | | 10 | "Pools of still water mirrored a sky that was not the winter sky above London—sapphire deepening toward indigo, shot through with slow-moving ribbons of gold that might have been clouds or might have been the trail of something bigger and more purposeful." | | 11 | "Beneath the surface of the water, shapes moved that refused definition—glimpses of scaled flippers or long, jointed fingers that never quite broke the mirror." | | 12 | "One of the floating blooms drifted near; she raised a cautious palm and the thing settled against her skin, cool and weightless, then melted into dew that left no wetness." | | 13 | "Perfume lingered—honeysuckle and night-blooming jasmine and something salt-sweet that summoned the word “home” and then took it away again." | | 14 | "A soft chime answered him—then another, louder." | | 15 | "Rory’s hand went instinctively to the place where the Fae-forged blade would one day rest against her hip; for now she had only a city kitchen knife and the thumping Heartstone." | | 16 | "She left no ripples, no footprints; the moss simply accepted her bare feet without mark." | | 17 | "Isolde Varga smiled the way twilight smiles—neither promise nor threat, only the certainty of change." | | 18 | "Every nerve sang with the strangeness of it—the blade’s cold, the Grove’s watching hush, Isolde’s riddled mercy." |
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| 92.51% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1627 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 79 | | adverbRatio | 0.04855562384757222 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013521819299323909 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 15.98 | | std | 10.75 | | cv | 0.673 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 47 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 79.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.48739495798319327 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 58 | |
| 64.10% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere higher, a crow laughed" | | 1 | "Instead she looked once more" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Their violet eyes caught what" | | 1 | "they whispered, voice the scrape" | | 2 | "She drew her hand away" | | 3 | "Her phone screen had already" | | 4 | "She tucked it away and" | | 5 | "She knelt once and pressed" | | 6 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 7 | "They moved deeper by common" | | 8 | "She laid two fingers on" | | 9 | "She flexed her fingers" | | 10 | "She glanced at Nyx." | | 11 | "Their whisper carried farther than" | | 12 | "Their form solidified again, deliberate" | | 13 | "She stepped closer to the" | | 14 | "Their gaze tracked the gold" | | 15 | "She staggered half a step" | | 16 | "She left no ripples, no" | | 17 | "she said, voice low and" | | 18 | "She lifted one graceful hand" | | 19 | "Its chill sank through her" |
| | ratio | 0.212 | |
| 51.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose without" | | 1 | "Rory stopped three paces short" | | 2 | "The air beyond the stones" | | 3 | "December clung pairwise to the" | | 4 | "Nyx drifted at her shoulder," | | 5 | "Their violet eyes caught what" | | 6 | "they whispered, voice the scrape" | | 7 | "Rory’s fingers found the Heartstone" | | 8 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed" | | 9 | "She drew her hand away" | | 10 | "The change arrived all at" | | 11 | "Sound flattened, then bloomed." | | 12 | "Birdsong returned—not the sparse winter" | | 13 | "Wildflowers carpeted the only path" | | 14 | "Colors ran richer here, edges" | | 15 | "Rory blinked and saw dew" | | 16 | "Nyx solidified enough to walk" | | 17 | "Her phone screen had already" | | 18 | "She tucked it away and" | | 19 | "The path dipped, then rose." |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 48.08% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Whenever two brushed, a faint" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose without warning from the frost-stiffened undergrowth of Richmond Park, oak trunks blackened by age and knotted into rough pillars that …" | | 1 | "Nyx drifted at her shoulder, a tall smear of humanoid shadow that refused the noon light." | | 2 | "The deep crimson gem pulsed once against her sternum, a faint answering heat that had nothing to do with the weak winter sun." | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the only path that made sense, white campion and bluebells and starry wood anemones blooming past any calendar." | | 4 | "Colors ran richer here, edges sharpened as though the air itself had lenses." | | 5 | "Dust motes—or perhaps motes of something else—drifted in shafts of light that fell at impossible angles, vertical then slanting as if the sun itself walked with…" | | 6 | "Standing stones ringed it again—smaller ones this time, smoothed and sigil-carved—but within them the wildflowers densed into a living carpet that somehow made …" | | 7 | "Trees bowed inward; trunks twisted into half-formed faces that resolved only at the edge of vision and dissolved when looked at full." | | 8 | "The crescent scar on her left wrist tingled as though remembering its own small history against a more ancient one." | | 9 | "Sound behaved strangely here too—echoes arrived late and left early, and twice she heard her own footfall return from ahead of her, as if a second Rory walked j…" | | 10 | "The shade’s outlines had gone ragged, edges fraying into genuine shadow that reached seeking fingers into the moss’s glow." | | 11 | "Pools of still water mirrored a sky that was not the winter sky above London—sapphire deepening toward indigo, shot through with slow-moving ribbons of gold tha…" | | 12 | "Floating above the pools, no thicker than a finger, were fantasy flowers: orbs of translucent petal that drifted like jellyfish, pulsing pale pink and violet li…" | | 13 | "Instead she looked once more at the gold-ribboned sky, memorizing the impossible color, then turned toward the living tunnel that would take them back to the or…" |
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| 34.09% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form solidified again, deliberate" | | 1 | "she said, voice low and carrying the sound of hives and rivers" |
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| 63.04% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.174 | | leniency | 0.348 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.174 | |