| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She shoved once [once]" | | 1 | "He stepped around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.277 | | leniency | 0.553 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.085 | |
| 97.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2309 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 67.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2309 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "silk" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "scanning" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 142 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 85 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2299 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.82% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 965 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 12 | | Moreau | 1 | | London | 2 | | Ptolemy | 5 | | Thames | 1 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Marseille | 1 | | Paper | 3 | | Dust | 1 | | Ink | 1 | | Careful | 1 | | Memory | 1 | | Rory | 9 | | Heat | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Paper" | | 4 | "Dust" | | 5 | "Careful" | | 6 | "Rory" | | 7 | "Heat" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Thames" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" | | 4 | "Marseille" | | 5 | "Ink" | | 6 | "Memory" |
| | globalScore | 0.878 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2299 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.89% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 58.95 | | std | 25.74 | | cv | 0.437 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 65 | | 1 | 61 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 63 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 65 | | 14 | 72 | | 15 | 90 | | 16 | 93 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 110 | | 19 | 84 | | 20 | 92 | | 21 | 71 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 110 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 74 | | 27 | 92 | | 28 | 59 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 46 | | 31 | 62 | | 32 | 77 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 51 | | 35 | 102 | | 36 | 71 | | 37 | 61 | | 38 | 32 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 22.13% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 142 | | ratio | 0.042 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue stare matched the mismatched pair facing her—one amber cock, one pure black." | | 1 | "Street noise from Brick Lane filtered up the stairwell—shop shutters rattling, a scooter engine coughing." | | 2 | "Rory watched those fingers—the pale knuckles, the faint callus where the cane usually rode—and remembered them tracing the crescent scar by low light once." | | 3 | "Downstairs someone dropped a metal tray; the clang rose through floorboards and died among the dangling dried roots." | | 4 | "Rory inhaled the layered scents—cumin from below, dust from books, the faint clean soap of his skin now that he sat this close." | | 5 | "Outside tools of the night ground on—delivery vans, late drinkers, the underground breathing through pavement grates." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1475 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.033220338983050844 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002033898305084746 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 142 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 142 | | mean | 16.19 | | std | 16.62 | | cv | 1.027 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 7 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 36 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 48 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 31 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 44 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 63.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3873239436619718 | | totalSentences | 142 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 32.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead he reached past her" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue stare matched" | | 1 | "She kept the door between" | | 2 | "He planted the cane tip" | | 3 | "She shoved once" | | 4 | "She glanced past him." | | 5 | "His voice carried the low" | | 6 | "He stepped across the threshold." | | 7 | "He set the cane against" | | 8 | "She crossed into the main" | | 9 | "Her hands found loose pages" | | 10 | "She flung the page stack" | | 11 | "His hand flexed once at" | | 12 | "She jabbed a finger toward" | | 13 | "Her pulse jumped hard enough" | | 14 | "He rolled the scroll open" | | 15 | "Her shoulder still carried the" | | 16 | "She wiped dust from her" | | 17 | "He stepped around the table" | | 18 | "She shoved a stack of" | | 19 | "Her voice flattened every vibration" |
| | ratio | 0.252 | |
| 52.23% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts clacked free" | | 1 | "Rory yanked the door toward" | | 2 | "Platinum blond hair slicked back" | | 3 | "Ivory handle of the cane" | | 4 | "The tabby Ptolemy lifted his" | | 5 | "Downstairs the curry house exhaled" | | 6 | "Her bright blue stare matched" | | 7 | "She kept the door between" | | 8 | "Lucien's mouth tilted." | | 9 | "He planted the cane tip" | | 10 | "She shoved once" | | 11 | "The cane held firm." | | 12 | "Street noise from Brick Lane" | | 13 | "She glanced past him." | | 14 | "His voice carried the low" | | 15 | "He stepped across the threshold." | | 16 | "The door latched behind him" | | 17 | "Rory backed into the narrow" | | 18 | "The crescent scar along her" | | 19 | "Ptolemy hopped down and wound" |
| | ratio | 0.816 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her the flat pressed close: stacks of open books on demonology leaned into teetering piles of ink-stained scrolls, loose research sheets carpeted every s…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.021 | | leniency | 0.043 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |