| 94.74% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s voice arrived like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.474 | | leniency | 0.947 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |
| 84.59% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1947 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "lightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1947 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "quickened" | | 6 | "lurch" | | 7 | "firmly" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "crystal" | | 10 | "resolve" | | 11 | "desire" | | 12 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 125 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1946 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1772 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.79 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | London | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Wonder | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Veil" | | 7 | "Wonder" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking through warm syrup" | | 1 | "looked like a person wearing a long coat" | | 2 | "something close to homesickness" | | 3 | "tone that seemed to come from the vines themselves whenever a grape grew fat enough to drip" | | 4 | "smelled like sea air and salted caramel" | | 5 | "seemed twined with its own soft inner light-but now it felt like the beauty at the edge of a sinkhole" | | 6 | "felt like the beauty at the edge of a s" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.514 | | wordCount | 1946 | | matches | | 0 | "not from fear exactly, but from the sheer density of sensation pressing against her ski" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 136 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 67.1 | | std | 41.47 | | cv | 0.618 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 112 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 117 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 143 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 101 | | 13 | 131 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 165 | | 17 | 48 | | 18 | 46 | | 19 | 68 | | 20 | 116 | | 21 | 99 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 74 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 87 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 100 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 125 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 280 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 136 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "Each step released a little puff of scent—vanilla, roasted marshmallow, something metallic and meaty underneath." | | 1 | "When she peered between the vines she saw pale translucent figures moving among the plants: a woman with chain-thin golden links around her wrists gently twisting a peach until it dropped into a silver basket; a man whose bare feet never quite touched the soil pruning a branch with scissors made of bone." |
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| 83.09% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1563 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "chain-thin golden links" |
| | adverbCount | 82 | | adverbRatio | 0.052463211772232884 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010876519513755598 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 136 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 136 | | mean | 14.31 | | std | 10.15 | | cv | 0.709 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 75.98% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.47794117647058826 | | totalSentences | 136 | | uniqueOpeners | 65 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the world unfolded around" | | 1 | "Instead the light seemed to" | | 2 | "Impossibly cold, like the Fae" | | 3 | "Somewhere to the right she" | | 4 | "Indeed the empty plates had" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 97.19% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "She had already counted the" | | 1 | "She stood on a rise" | | 2 | "It cast no true shadows." | | 3 | "She had eaten a greasy" | | 4 | "It no longer mattered." | | 5 | "She swallowed hard, cool-headed enough" | | 6 | "It throbbed in answer, faintly" | | 7 | "She turned a slow circle." | | 8 | "She thought she heard the" | | 9 | "she said, and started down" | | 10 | "Her mouth watered again." | | 11 | "She ignored it." | | 12 | "She crouched, cautious, and touched" | | 13 | "She set the pear down" | | 14 | "She wiped her fingers on" | | 15 | "She forced herself to notice" | | 16 | "She also noticed that her" | | 17 | "They walked on." | | 18 | "She imagined drinking, tasting sunshine" | | 19 | "She imagined not being able" |
| | ratio | 0.307 | |
| 74.04% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "The rift hung between two" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted beside her, a" | | 3 | "The shade had found the" | | 4 | "Shadows knew the thin places." | | 5 | "Nyx’s voice arrived like a" | | 6 | "Rory touched the moonsilver dagger" | | 7 | "She had already counted the" | | 8 | "The crossing felt like walking" | | 9 | "Pressure popped in her ears." | | 10 | "She stood on a rise" | | 11 | "The sky above was a" | | 12 | "It cast no true shadows." | | 13 | "Vines thicker than her wrist" | | 14 | "Some were purple-black and night-slick." | | 15 | "Others shone pale gold or" | | 16 | "Juice beaded on their skins" | | 17 | "Rory’s stomach clenched with sudden," | | 18 | "She had eaten a greasy" | | 19 | "It no longer mattered." |
| | ratio | 0.772 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Either way she decided to" | | 1 | "Now the shrewd part of" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 15 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted beside her, a tall darkness given rough human outline, violet eyes burning low in a face that was more suggestion than feature." | | 1 | "Instead the light seemed to sink into everything, making the leaves of the nearest orchard trees glow from within as if lit by trapped candle flames." | | 2 | "Vines thicker than her wrist spilled down ornate stone trellises, heavy with grapes that looked translucent, almost liquid." | | 3 | "Nyx solidified more fully beside her, edges sharpening into a silhouette that almost looked like a person wearing a long coat of living darkness." | | 4 | "She thought she heard the faint titanium chime of cutlery, a burst of laughter that rolled like warm wind and then died." | | 5 | "Figs split themselves open as she passed, revealing pink flesh that steamed in the amber air." | | 6 | "She forced herself to notice details that had nothing to do with hunger: the way the amber light never changed, the absolute absence of insects, the soft ringin…" | | 7 | "The shell path became soft black earth again, then a walkway of pale polished wood that felt warm and slightly springy underfoot-like walking on living skin." | | 8 | "Fat bunches of grapes brushed her shoulders as she passed, leaving cool wet trails that immediately soaked into her jacket and vanished, as if the fabric itself…" | | 9 | "At the center stood a long table of dark wood that looked grown rather than carved, its surface set already with empty dishes that somehow still exhaled steam a…" | | 10 | "Crystal carafes held liquids that shifted color while she watched-amber to rose to deep night-blue." | | 11 | "Beyond the table the land dropped again toward what she now recognized as the outer edges of a vast open pavilion, banners flickering, music beginning to resolv…" | | 12 | "Yet the same coolity that had once planned her escape from an upstairs flat in three hurried bags now made her catalogue exits, count visible soul-workers (elev…" | | 13 | "Indeed the empty plates had begun to fill-slow-motion cascades of roasted meats that still steamed, towers of glazed fruits, breads that tore themselves open to…" | | 14 | "She thought of Isolde’s riddling warnings, of the Veil thinning on solstices, of the ordinary city she still had to return to if she wanted a flat and a job and…" |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "they admitted, voice lower" |
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| 44.74% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "they admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 19 | | tagDensity | 0.263 | | leniency | 0.526 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.211 | |