| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1949 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.60% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1949 | | totalAiIsms | 29 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "cascading" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "raced" | | 10 | "crystalline" | | 11 | "resolved" | | 12 | "solitary" | | 13 | "intricate" | | 14 | "shattered" | | 15 | "trembled" | | 16 | "crystal" | | 17 | "mosaic" | | 18 | "dancing" | | 19 | "traced" | | 20 | "silence" | | 21 | "footfall" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 146 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 164 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1941 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1747 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.43 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Rory | 25 | | Nyx | 14 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.784 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like glass orbs" | | 1 | "something close to longing" |
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| 96.96% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.03 | | wordCount | 1941 | | matches | | 0 | "neither trees nor" | | 1 | "neither night nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 35.29 | | std | 26.76 | | cv | 0.758 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 78 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 67 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 39 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 73 | | 26 | 75 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 70 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 56 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 65 | | 36 | 65 | | 37 | 57 | | 38 | 52 | | 39 | 48 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 106 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 86 | | 48 | 85 | | 49 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 302 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 3.48% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 164 | | ratio | 0.049 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in carpets no season allowed—petals of bruised plum, electric turquoise, veins of molten gold that opened and shut like lungs." | | 1 | "Nyx solidified enough to leave depression marks in the moss—footprints of pure absence." | | 2 | "Beneath the foliage another layer of sound waited—thin, parallel voices that spoke no language she knew, syllables like ice cracking on a spring lake." | | 3 | "Tiny silver figures darted just under the surface—minnows with human faces, mouths open in silent songs." | | 4 | "Inside each floated a miniature landscape—rolling dunes the colour of rust, a forest of black feathers." | | 5 | "Her watch—reliable digital—spun digits backward, then locked its display on blankness." | | 6 | "Cool starlight expanded behind her ribs; she exhaled a breath that glittered." | | 7 | "The air here thrummed—a sub-bass note she felt in fillings and bones alike." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1762 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.03064699205448354 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0011350737797956867 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 164 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 164 | | mean | 11.84 | | std | 6.81 | | cv | 0.575 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 71.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4329268292682927 | | totalSentences | 164 | | uniqueOpeners | 71 | |
| 46.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere deeper a brook chuckled" | | 1 | "Even the underside voices of" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "She rubbed the crescent scar" | | 1 | "Their edges flickered, violet eyes" | | 2 | "She drew a breath that" | | 3 | "She spun a slow circle." | | 4 | "Their canopies wove a vault" | | 5 | "Their whisper-voice rode the breeze." | | 6 | "She brushed one petal." | | 7 | "She slid the Fae-forged blade" | | 8 | "They reappeared beside a pool" | | 9 | "She jerked back." | | 10 | "They pressed deeper." | | 11 | "Her fingertips hovered centimetres from" | | 12 | "She pulled the hand away." | | 13 | "Their silhouette lengthened until they" | | 14 | "She kept her voice level." | | 15 | "They climbed the gentle slope." | | 16 | "She circled the stone." | | 17 | "She tucked a loose strand" | | 18 | "Her watch—reliable digital—spun digits backward," | | 19 | "She pocketed the useless thing." |
| | ratio | 0.245 | |
| 64.90% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 113 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks rose from" | | 1 | "Rory ducked beneath a low" | | 2 | "She rubbed the crescent scar" | | 3 | "Moss blanketed them in green" | | 4 | "Nyx drifted at her shoulder," | | 5 | "Their edges flickered, violet eyes" | | 6 | "Rory touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 7 | "Warmth leaked into her palm," | | 8 | "She drew a breath that" | | 9 | "The world folded." | | 10 | "Pressure cracked across her eardrums." | | 11 | "Colour bled from grey bark" | | 12 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 13 | "The air thickened into syrup" | | 14 | "Rory’s boots sank half an" | | 15 | "She spun a slow circle." | | 16 | "Oaks towered hundreds of feet," | | 17 | "Their canopies wove a vault" | | 18 | "Nyx solidified enough to leave" | | 19 | "Their whisper-voice rode the breeze." |
| | ratio | 0.79 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 52.55% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Moss blanketed them in green velvet, yet each surface threw back light that bent wrong, a faint shimmer that made her eyes water." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in carpets no season allowed—petals of bruised plum, electric turquoise, veins of molten gold that opened and shut like lungs." | | 2 | "They reappeared beside a pool that shouldn’t have been there, water clear as polished quartz yet bottomless." | | 3 | "The water mirrored her face and then discarded the reflection for fragments of other scenes: a banquet table heaped with fruit that bled juice the colour of sun…" | | 4 | "Cool starlight expanded behind her ribs; she exhaled a breath that glittered." | | 5 | "Inside the flame she glimpsed practice cathedrals and ruined banquet rooms and rivers of wine that ran between." | | 6 | "Diaphanous skeins of mist licked her shoulders, left dew that glittered pewter along her jacket sleeve." | | 7 | "Carvings crawled across their trunks: stories of courts that argued in song, bargains sealed by bloodless cut." | | 8 | "The path underfoot changed from glass leaf mosaic into packed luminescent sand that left afterimages of their steps glowing twenty heartbeats before fading." | | 9 | "Overhead the canopy thinned in places to reveal a sky neither night nor day, a permanent twilight that held both constellations and drifting suns the size of co…" | | 10 | "She lowered the blade tip until it just grazed glowing sand, and the sand flowered open into tiny white blossoms that lived a single pulse then faded." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |