| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1607 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1607 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "flicked" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "racing" | | 8 | "footfall" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "resolved" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 174 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 177 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 1598 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "The Grove answers those who bring the Heartstone." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1569 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.96 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 5 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Voice | 1 | | Leaves | 1 | | Rory | 15 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Leaves" | | 3 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 75.74% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed thicker than it ought to be, as if the night resisted the light" | | 1 | "something between insect wings and a distant mo" | | 2 | "as if tasting the air" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1598 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 177 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.79% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 57.07 | | std | 23.5 | | cv | 0.412 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 86 | | 2 | 93 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 74 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 71 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 43 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 75 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 69 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 82 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 98 | | 24 | 78 | | 25 | 57 | | 26 | 79 | | 27 | 39 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 271 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 177 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "It had guided her here—throbbing harder with every mile she put between herself and the city lights until Richmond Park swallowed her whole." | | 1 | "Another sound drifted from behind—a whisper of stems parting under a careful step." | | 2 | "A low drone began under it all—something between insect wings and a distant moan of wind through hollow bone." | | 3 | "The air reached for her with each inhale—cool fingers inside her lungs." | | 4 | "At the very edge of the torchlight a silhouette peeled away from shadow—tall, limbed wrong, head swaying as if tasting the air." | | 5 | "Something shiny flashed low to the ground—teeth or wet stone or open eyes catching the beam and throwing it back wrong." | | 6 | "In that quiet she heard breathing that was not her own—slow, wet, full of patience." | | 7 | "A soft hiss rose from the undergrowth—the sound of many leaves sliding against one another in perfect unison, a dry applause for whatever watched." | | 8 | "In the absolute hush that followed she heard a second sound—low, almost conversational, shaped like words that never quite resolved into language she knew." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1582 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 63 | | adverbRatio | 0.03982300884955752 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008217446270543615 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 177 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 177 | | mean | 9.03 | | std | 6.59 | | cv | 0.73 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 56.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3672316384180791 | | totalSentences | 177 | | uniqueOpeners | 65 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in this pocket of" | | 1 | "Of course not." | | 2 | "Too deliberate for a fox." | | 3 | "Then a sound like gloves" | | 4 | "Somewhere ahead a branch creaked." | | 5 | "Only the cold again." | | 6 | "Then a fourth." | | 7 | "Then the shape flowed backward" |
| | ratio | 0.052 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the pendant free." | | 1 | "It had guided her here—throbbing" | | 2 | "Their scent clung heavy and" | | 3 | "She turned slowly, mapping the" | | 4 | "Their bark twisted into faces" | | 5 | "she said under her breath" | | 6 | "Its warmth increased, faint heat" | | 7 | "She waited, listening." | | 8 | "Her own heartbeat filled her" | | 9 | "She turned again." | | 10 | "She walked deeper." | | 11 | "Her footprints remained clear, dark" | | 12 | "She stopped beside a fallen" | | 13 | "Her free hand brushed a" | | 14 | "She wiped it on her" | | 15 | "She tracked the noise." | | 16 | "She checked the tear." | | 17 | "Their scent thickened until each" | | 18 | "It rose and fell without" | | 19 | "She snapped the torch toward" |
| | ratio | 0.245 | |
| 63.23% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 123 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose from" | | 1 | "Rory stepped between them, boots" | | 2 | "The air changed the instant" | | 3 | "London’s distant hum vanished." | | 4 | "She pulled the pendant free." | | 5 | "The crimson gemstones glowed with" | | 6 | "It had guided her here—throbbing" | | 7 | "That was what the anonymous" | | 8 | "That was why she had" | | 9 | "The wildflowers bloomed everywhere, carpeting" | | 10 | "Whites and blues and deep" | | 11 | "Their scent clung heavy and" | | 12 | "Rory flicked the torch on." | | 13 | "The beam cut a pale" | | 14 | "She turned slowly, mapping the" | | 15 | "Their bark twisted into faces" | | 16 | "she said under her breath" | | 17 | "The note had given coordinates" | | 18 | "Its warmth increased, faint heat" | | 19 | "The moon hung lower than" |
| | ratio | 0.794 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "At the very edge of the torchlight a silhouette peeled away from shadow—tall, limbed wrong, head swaying as if tasting the air." | | 1 | "The flowers around her feet bent as if something heavy settled among them." | | 2 | "In the absolute hush that followed she heard a second sound—low, almost conversational, shaped like words that never quite resolved into language she knew." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |