Run: 2026-07-08-01KX1MTAG6CNV5007AAWNVTNRY

Run Details

Duration:
44.5s
Cost:
$0.014116
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven's Nest flickered against the Soho drizzle, casting fractured light onto the wet pavement. Aurora Carter pushed open the heavy door, the familiar creak of hinges greeting her like an old accusation. Inside, the air hung thick with the scent of aged wood and spilled stout. Old maps lined the walls between black-and-white photographs of men in long coats and shadowed alleys. She paused just past the threshold, rain dripping from her straight black hair onto the worn floorboards. Behind the bar, Silas Blackwood wiped a glass with a cloth, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the dim overhead bulbs. The silver signet ring on his right hand gleamed as he worked. He looked up, and the motion stilled. His hazel eyes fixed on her, and for a moment the limp in his left leg seemed to root him in place. "Rory." The name left him flat, stripped of the warmth she remembered from years before. She crossed to the brass rail, her bright blue eyes scanning the empty stools. No one else occupied the place at this hour, just after last orders had slipped into the quiet of late night. She slid onto a stool opposite him. "Si." He set the glass down and poured two measures of whiskey without asking. The bottle clinked against the wood. He pushed one tumbler toward her. "You look different." His voice carried the quiet authority she knew, but an edge cut under it now. She lifted the glass, the liquid catching the light. The small crescent scar on her left wrist caught her own eye as she did. "Time does that." He leaned on the bar, the weight on his good leg. "It's been five years since you walked out of here. Five years of silence, then you show up like the rain just blew you in." She took a sip, the burn settling in her chest. "I lived upstairs then. Above this place. You remember that?" "I remember everything. You were twenty. Fresh off the train from Cardiff, running from that bastard Evan. Eva called me, begged me to give you the flat. I did. You delivered noodles for Yu-Fei by day, and at night we talked about maps and mistakes." He tapped the signet ring against the counter. "Then one morning the flat was empty. No note. Nothing." Rory set the glass down harder than she meant to. "I had to leave. Pre-law at Cardiff was a cage my father built. Brendan Carter, the Irish barrister who thought his daughter would follow him into chambers. Jennifer let him. I left all of it. London was supposed to be free." Silas straightened, the limp pulling him sideways for a beat before he caught himself. "I gave you free. A place. A job of sorts. Contacts if you needed them. You took the free and vanished. What changed, Rory? Or should I say Malphora now? That name floated through a couple of my old channels last month. Whispers from people who shouldn't know it." Her fingers tightened around the tumbler. The cool-headed girl who once sat here hashing out escape routes had become someone who calculated every word before it left her mouth. "Names stick when you need them to. I came back because the upstairs light was on. I saw it from the street. Figured you still owned the place." "I never left. Knee made sure of that." He circled the bar and lowered himself onto the stool beside her, the old injury making the descent deliberate. "Prague finished me for the field. This bar became the nest for what was left of the network. You knew that. You used to ask about the bookshelf that wasn't just a bookshelf." She glanced toward the far wall where leather-bound volumes hid the secret room. "I remember the bookshelf. I remember you telling me never to open it unless the building burned." "And yet here you are, years later, looking like someone who opened every door they swore they wouldn't." His hazel eyes searched her face. "The black hair's the same length. The eyes still cut. But the way you hold that glass—fingers loose, ready to ditch it and run—that's new. The Rory I knew gripped things like they might vanish." She turned on the stool to face him fully. "The Rory you knew thought quick thinking solved everything. Out-of-the-box and done. Then London chewed that out of me. Delivery routes turned into something else. Favours for people who paid better than Yu-Fei. Then favours became necessities. I got smart in ways that keep you alive, Si. Not smart like university." Silas drained half his whiskey and set the glass down between them, a barrier of crystal. "I looked for you. First six months. Called every contact. Eva cried on the phone and said you'd gone quiet on her too. Your mother sent a letter once—addressed it to the Nest, hair blue like Jennifer's old handwriting. Said they thought you'd vanished into some city hole. I never answered it." "Good." The word snapped out of her. "They don't get to own the hurt. I left Evan in a flat with a smashed phone and a bag of clothes. I left Cardiff with empty pockets. Leaving you was the harder one. You biggest mistake was making this place feel safe. Safety ends." He shifted, the bar stool creaking. Rain chastled against the front windows. A black-and-white photo of a man in a trilby stared down from the wall above the optics. "I taught you that. Prague taught me. The op went sideways, knee tore like wet paper, two assets gone. I came home and built this front so I could still pull strings without limping into kill zones. You watched me build it. Then you used it as a launch pad and never looked back. What's the weight of that silence, Rory? Five years of nothing. No postcard. No dead drop. Just ghosts." She stood then, pacing the short length of the bar, her boots scuffing the boards. The maps of old Europe seemed to track her. "The silence kept you clean. Kept the Nest clean. I ran ops that would have burned every connection you had. Better you thought I was dead in a ditch than dreading the night someone kicked in your door looking for the girl who lived upstairs." "You're still protecting me." The quiet authority in his voice cracked into something raw. "That’s the old Rory. The new one wouldn't bother with regret. She'd take the whiskey and walk out again." She stopped near the bookshelf, fingers brushing the spine of a false volume. "Don't open it unless the building burns, right? I never did. Not once. Even when things got dark enough to warrant it." She turned back. "You still wear the ring. Still keep the place dim. Still pour without asking. Some things don't change." Silas rose with effort, joining her by the maps. "I limp. Hair's greyer. The net's thinner than it was. The Spymaster title sits heavier now. People come for information and leave less of themselves behind. You look at me and see the man who took in a runaway. I look at you and see all the years that rewrote the girl into someone I barely recognise. That scar on your wrist—same as when you fell off Jennifer's garden wall. Everything under the skin is different." Rory drew a breath that tasted of dust and old whiskey. "I came here tonight because the Nest still has the only light I trust. Not because of answers. Not yet. Because standing in the rain outside felt like admitting five years had eaten the last of who we were. And I wasn't ready." He reached past her and adjusted a faded photograph so it hung straighter. "Then say the rest. Write the pages between then and now. The development ops, the name Malphora, the nights you almost rang the upstairs bell and didn't. I can take the weight. This knee already holds enough."
created_at"2026-07-08T19:55:58.348Z" 7/8/2026, 7:55:58 PM
model"x-ai/grok-4.5-20260708"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency468
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time44441
tokens_prompt1094
tokens_completion2032
native_tokens_prompt1181
native_tokens_completion2247
native_tokens_completion_images(null)
native_tokens_reasoning570
native_tokens_cached1152
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
num_fetches(null)
web_search_engine(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"completed"
service_tier"default"
usage0.014116
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"78a73286-52c4-4d1d-9d13-c1870c25b143"
id"134515f6-c0a9-991c-97e7-21190286550f"
is_byokfalse
latency98
model_permaslug"x-ai/grok-4.5-20260708"
provider_name"xAI"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.18.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
request_id"req-1783540558-1cjG1mfDRUHolW7CC3uy"
session_id(null)
preset_id(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1783540558-m3eCZJUN133el7PZpXPK"
upstream_id"134515f6-c0a9-991c-97e7-21190286550f"
total_cost0.014116
cache_discount0.001728
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"xAI"
response_cache_source_id(null)
data_region"global"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.241
leniency0.483
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.069
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1345
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1345
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"fractured"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"calculated"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"fractured"
2"familiar"
3"warmth"
4"scanning"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"calculated"
8"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of that silence"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences43
matches(empty)
76.41% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences43
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen77
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1341
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount529
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Carter1
Silas4
Blackwood1
Rory2
Europe1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Blackwood"
5"Rory"
places
0"Soho"
1"Europe"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1341
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
94.44% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean49.67
std23.87
cv0.481
sampleLengths
085
161
21
356
41
525
618
727
836
920
1063
1151
1263
1357
1460
1530
1659
1760
1868
1952
20101
2169
2233
2356
2485
2554
2650
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs88
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount536
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.016791044776119403
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0018656716417910447
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean20.63
std16.14
cv0.782
sampleLengths
020
118
214
316
417
520
612
77
822
91
1014
1114
1221
137
141
1513
166
176
1818
199
2015
213
2211
2325
2410
2510
2653
2710
2810
2941
3014
3149
326
3323
3428
3527
3633
3713
3817
3924
4035
419
4251
4316
4452
457
4645
476
486
4917
66.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4153846153846154
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences43
matches
0"She paused just past the"
1"He looked up, and the"
2"His hazel eyes fixed on"
3"She crossed to the brass"
4"She slid onto a stool"
5"He set the glass down"
6"He pushed one tumbler toward"
7"His voice carried the quiet"
8"She lifted the glass, the"
9"He leaned on the bar,"
10"She took a sip, the"
11"He tapped the signet ring"
12"Her fingers tightened around the"
13"He circled the bar and"
14"She glanced toward the far"
15"His hazel eyes searched her"
16"She turned on the stool"
17"He shifted, the bar stool"
18"She stood then, pacing the"
19"She stopped near the bookshelf,"
ratio0.512
6.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences43
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Aurora Carter pushed open the"
2"She paused just past the"
3"The silver signet ring on"
4"He looked up, and the"
5"His hazel eyes fixed on"
6"The name left him flat,"
7"She crossed to the brass"
8"She slid onto a stool"
9"He set the glass down"
10"The bottle clinked against the"
11"He pushed one tumbler toward"
12"His voice carried the quiet"
13"She lifted the glass, the"
14"The small crescent scar on"
15"He leaned on the bar,"
16"She took a sip, the"
17"He tapped the signet ring"
18"Rory set the glass down"
19"Silas straightened, the limp pulling"
ratio0.907
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The cool-headed girl who once sat here hashing out escape routes had become someone who calculated every word before it left her mouth."
1"She stood then, pacing the short length of the bar, her boots scuffing the boards."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He circled, the old injury making the descent deliberate"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"The word snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.069
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.069
81.6608%