| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 92.99% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1426 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1426 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "measured" | | 4 | "velvet" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "resolved" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "echoes" | | 13 | "raced" | | 14 | "race" | | 15 | "unsettled" | | 16 | "pulse" | | 17 | "chilled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 97 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 111 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1417 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.69% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1289 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | London | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 11 | | Aurora | 14 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Latin | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Fae | 3 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "Welsh" |
| | globalScore | 0.957 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite wood and not quite stone" | | 1 | "not quite stone" | | 2 | "seemed played by distant hollow bones" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1417 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 31.49 | | std | 29.58 | | cv | 0.939 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 62 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 58 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 70 | | 24 | 40 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 89 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 66 | | 34 | 144 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 70 | | 38 | 82 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 38 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 111 | | ratio | 0.072 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colours—violet blooms oscillating between velvet purple and silver-white with every breeze." | | 1 | "A shallow pool opened at the corridor’s end, water black and glassy except where shards of moonlight—despite the buried sun—danced across its surface." | | 2 | "Their hand—if hand was the right word—passed through the water without a ripple, withdrawing a droplet that hung suspended between shadow fingers before evaporating." | | 3 | "At the crest the ancestors of all oaks waited—vast trees whose canopies brushed what passed for sky among soft gold haze." | | 4 | "One new glyph took shape—an eye inside a crescent that mirrored Aurora’s scar." | | 5 | "As she passed, the shells thinned and pale winged shapes pressed against the membrane—not butterflies, something longer of limb, faces almost human if one squinted." | | 6 | "Faint lights drifted through the air like unstable fireflies; when Aurora reached for one it slid through her fingers as cool mist that left the taste of blackcurrant on her lips." | | 7 | "Aurora stepped onto one of the glowing lines and felt a jolt race up her legs—not pain, pure information, a flood of impressions she could not translate." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1307 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.023718439173680182 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0038255547054322878 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 111 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 111 | | mean | 12.77 | | std | 7.3 | | cv | 0.572 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 65.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.3963963963963964 | | totalSentences | 111 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 70.18% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead a low, continuous murmur" | | 1 | "Further along the corridor the" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 1 | "Her silver hair trailed behind" | | 2 | "They moved deeper." | | 3 | "It recoiled then leaned closer," | | 4 | "She took another step." | | 5 | "They pressed forward." | | 6 | "She felt her childhood scar" | | 7 | "Their hand—if hand was the" | | 8 | "They left the pool and" | | 9 | "Their entire form flattened against" | | 10 | "She felt the air thicken," | | 11 | "She drew it halfway." | | 12 | "She froze, blade still half-drawn." | | 13 | "They watched her progress with" | | 14 | "She lifted a hand." | | 15 | "They emerged onto a broad" | | 16 | "Her phantom senses caught the" | | 17 | "They crossed the plateau toward" | | 18 | "She drew a slow breath" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 70.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped between two of" | | 2 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 3 | "The London chill of Richmond" | | 4 | "Nyx slid through the gap" | | 5 | "The shade paused, violet eyes" | | 6 | "Isolde glided past them both." | | 7 | "Her silver hair trailed behind" | | 8 | "The half-Fae’s pale lavender eyes" | | 9 | "They moved deeper." | | 10 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 11 | "Petals unfurled without sun or" | | 12 | "Aurora crouched and brushed one" | | 13 | "It recoiled then leaned closer," | | 14 | "Nyx's voice drifted like wind" | | 15 | "Aurora straightened and wiped her" | | 16 | "Branches interlaced overhead until the" | | 17 | "Roots arched above the soil" | | 18 | "Isolde halted at the first" | | 19 | "The air carried no bird" |
| | ratio | 0.779 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 33.90% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The London chill of Richmond Park fell away behind them, replaced by a damp sweetness that coated the tongue with the taste of crushed petals and old rain." | | 1 | "The half-Fae’s pale lavender eyes scanned the clearing ahead as if she measured every blade of grass." | | 2 | "Ahead the trees grew denser, trunks winding upward in corkscrews of bark that shimmered with faint gold veins." | | 3 | "Branches interlaced overhead until the sky vanished, replaced by a canopy that glowed with its own muted amber light." | | 4 | "Their hand—if hand was the right word—passed through the water without a ripple, withdrawing a droplet that hung suspended between shadow fingers before evapora…" | | 5 | "Small hollows dotted the soft earth, each housing a nest of translucent eggs that glowed from within." | | 6 | "Faint lights drifted through the air like unstable fireflies; when Aurora reached for one it slid through her fingers as cool mist that left the taste of blackc…" | | 7 | "Lines of light raced outward from her bare feet, sketching geometric patterns that folded into three-dimensional shapes before fading." | | 8 | "She drew a slow breath that smelled of every impossible flower they had passed and took the first careful step toward the waiting curtain." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |