| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2092 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "carefully" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.59% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2092 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "footfall" | | 2 | "marble" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "unreadable" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 139 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 149 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2081 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1949 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 0.82 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Earth | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Rory | 16 | | Isolde | 10 | | Dymas | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | One | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Earth" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Blade" | | 6 | "Veil" | | 7 | "One" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 86.44% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "blossom that seemed to eat sound" | | 1 | "felt like velvet under her boots" | | 2 | "looked like frozen honey, golden and tran" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.481 | | wordCount | 2081 | | matches | | 0 | "not the stone circle but a table heaped with food" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 56.24 | | std | 30.97 | | cv | 0.551 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 78 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 86 | | 5 | 66 | | 6 | 85 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 89 | | 11 | 69 | | 12 | 84 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 80 | | 16 | 99 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 66 | | 19 | 57 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 96 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 77 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 80 | | 26 | 106 | | 27 | 64 | | 28 | 55 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 98 | | 31 | 81 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 79 | | 36 | 79 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 326 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 149 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory wrapped her fingers around the Heartstone pendant at her throat; its crimson glow pulsed once, warm against her skin, then settled into a steady beat that matched her own." | | 1 | "Flavours rose on the air—spiced citrus, roasted nuts, something dark and sweet that made Rory’s mouth water against her will." | | 2 | "She listened until a new tone joined them—her own heartbeat given sound." | | 3 | "The surface gave like snow then firmed, and a new scent rose—cedar and rain and something sharp that made her think of Blade edges and winter courts." | | 4 | "Conversations of leaves replaced them—soft exchanges in a language that brushed the edges of understanding without settling." | | 5 | "Beneath the surface, creatures swam—slow, dragon-shaped things with the faces of children." | | 6 | "From within the translucent steps voices rose—distant feasting laughter, the clink of goblets, a toast raised in a language that burned the ears to hear." | | 7 | "The food looked perfect—roast that still dripped juice, fruit split open to reveal designs of impossible geometry, bread that bled honey when cut by no knife." | | 8 | "Across the pool from the table a new archway opened—woven of thorns whose tips bloomed as she watched, white roses opening to reveal eyes at their centres that blinked." | | 9 | "Nyx took her arm—solid enough for the grip to be firm—and together they started toward the table that offered everything except answers." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1969 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slow-moving light wound" | | 1 | "ice-cold against her" | | 2 | "slow, dragon-shaped things" |
| | adverbCount | 64 | | adverbRatio | 0.03250380904012189 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004062976130015236 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 149 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 149 | | mean | 13.97 | | std | 7.92 | | cv | 0.567 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 58.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.37583892617449666 | | totalSentences | 149 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 76.92% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it closed again and" | | 1 | "Instead a disk of pure" | | 2 | "Once she thought she heard" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced down and saw" | | 1 | "She reached out." | | 2 | "She rubbed the spot and" | | 3 | "It rose and fell with" | | 4 | "She recognised the scent of" | | 5 | "She unclasped the Fae-forged blade" | | 6 | "She lowered the dagger." | | 7 | "She listened until a new" | | 8 | "She saw it too now:" | | 9 | "She pointed with one slender" | | 10 | "She set one foot onto" | | 11 | "They moved into a tunnel" | | 12 | "She let the vine fall." | | 13 | "They entered a glade where" | | 14 | "She looked away." | | 15 | "She gripped the Fae blade" | | 16 | "She had not eaten since" | | 17 | "She looked back the way" |
| | ratio | 0.138 | |
| 83.08% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 98 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed aside the last" | | 1 | "The air beyond the standing" | | 2 | "Isolde walked ahead without a" | | 3 | "The path underfoot changed the" | | 4 | "Leaves overhead whispered in a" | | 5 | "Rory wrapped her fingers around" | | 6 | "Isolde murmured, silver hair stirring" | | 7 | "Nyx tilted their head, violet" | | 8 | "Rory stepped carefully." | | 9 | "Every footfall released a soft" | | 10 | "She glanced down and saw" | | 11 | "A cluster of translucent flowers" | | 12 | "She reached out." | | 13 | "The nearest bloom leaned into" | | 14 | "She rubbed the spot and" | | 15 | "The air carried music now," | | 16 | "It rose and fell with" | | 17 | "Rory stopped beneath an arch" | | 18 | "Another climbed toward a hill" | | 19 | "The third vanished into a" |
| | ratio | 0.754 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 22.56% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | technicalSentenceCount | 16 | | matches | | 0 | "Soft earth gave way to a carpet of petals that glowed faint violet under a sky the colour of spilled ink and lantern light." | | 1 | "Rory wrapped her fingers around the Heartstone pendant at her throat; its crimson glow pulsed once, warm against her skin, then settled into a steady beat that …" | | 2 | "She glanced down and saw the petals part around her boots, revealing pale roots that pulsed with slow light, as if the ground itself breathed." | | 3 | "A cluster of translucent flowers the size of her fist turned toward her, petals unfurling to show hearts that beat in time with the pendant." | | 4 | "The wood rippled under their touch, revealing a brief glimpse of some darker wood beneath, wood that looked as though it remembered fire." | | 5 | "The flowers here grew long and tall, white stalks ending in bells that rang when her sleeve brushed them." | | 6 | "The leaf curled around it and turned gold before dissolving into motes that drifted upward and joined the living stars." | | 7 | "When she turned it, the reflection on the leaf-shaped blade showed not the stone circle but a table heaped with food that had no place in humanity: fruit that b…" | | 8 | "Rory brushed one open and found a corridor of hanging rattan vines that shimmered with dew containing tiny reflected scenes: a city of brass, a god of rivers la…" | | 9 | "Conversations of leaves replaced them—soft exchanges in a language that brushed the edges of understanding without settling." | | 10 | "The left way disappeared into a stand of trees that burned with white fire without heat or smoke, leaves of white ash drifting up." | | 11 | "The right way opened onto a bridge of woven reed that crossed nothing, because the land simply ended in mid-air and began again a dozen strides later." | | 12 | "The pendant at her throat flared, casting a crimson wash that turned the golden honeycomb briefly bloody." | | 13 | "The food looked perfect—roast that still dripped juice, fruit split open to reveal designs of impossible geometry, bread that bled honey when cut by no knife." | | 14 | "Beyond it more light glowed, the amber of Dymas proper, warm gold that promised excess without limit." | | 15 | "Nyx took her arm—solid enough for the grip to be firm—and together they started toward the table that offered everything except answers." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |