| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1751 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1751 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "fractured" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "crystalline" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "etched" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "measured" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "perfect" | | 16 | "shimmered" | | 17 | "silence" | | 18 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 156 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1746 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1401 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.64 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | England | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 23 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Fae | 5 | | Nyx | 11 | | Dymas | 1 | | Isolde | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "England" |
| | globalScore | 0.679 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if drinking the ambient magic" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.573 | | wordCount | 1746 | | matches | | 0 | "neither her heartbeat nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 156 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 70 | | mean | 24.94 | | std | 23.2 | | cv | 0.93 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 77 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 61 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 78 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 75 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 61 | | 41 | 39 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 48 | | 48 | 69 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 245 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.28% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 156 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colour—petals of sapphire and molten gold brushed against her boots, releasing a sharp, sweet scent closer to crushed citrus and honey than anything England offered." | | 1 | "A chorus of soft chimes rose from the canopy—high, crystalline tones that threaded through one another and never quite formed a melody." | | 2 | "Images flickered—vast vineyards under a sky of warm amber, tables groaning under golden dishes, figures with too many mouths tasting every course while their eyes stayed empty." | | 3 | "Time itself felt elastic—her breath continued at normal rate while the corridor made every step last too long or not long enough." | | 4 | "The aroma hit next—rich, layered with spice and roast and something greener that promised endless tables." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1416 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.03036723163841808 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00423728813559322 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 156 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 156 | | mean | 11.19 | | std | 6.2 | | cv | 0.554 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 72.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4358974358974359 | | totalSentences | 156 | | uniqueOpeners | 68 | |
| 79.37% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Instantly the chimes deepened, gaining" | | 1 | "More standing stones formed a" | | 2 | "Instantly the pull lessened and" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "She drew the silver chain" | | 1 | "They moved on." | | 2 | "She wiped her crescent scar" | | 3 | "Her boots sank into moss" | | 4 | "She checked the pendant again." | | 5 | "They crested the rise and" | | 6 | "She glanced down." | | 7 | "They obeyed, boots silent on" | | 8 | "Her pulse raced while the" | | 9 | "She reached a low arch" | | 10 | "She trailed fingertips along bark." | | 11 | "It answered with a soft" | | 12 | "She loosened the chain so" | | 13 | "She rose, wiped dirt down" | | 14 | "She used the tip to" | | 15 | "She sheathed the blade, breathing" |
| | ratio | 0.127 | |
| 59.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 101 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped past the first" | | 1 | "The late afternoon light of" | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 3 | "Nyx slipped through the shadow" | | 4 | "Violet eyes flared once." | | 5 | "Rory pressed a hand to" | | 6 | "Warmth pulsed against her palm" | | 7 | "She drew the silver chain" | | 8 | "The deep crimson gem cast" | | 9 | "Isolde glided between them without" | | 10 | "They moved on." | | 11 | "Trunks thickened, bark swirling with" | | 12 | "A chorus of soft chimes" | | 13 | "Rory's borrowed Fae-forged blade rested" | | 14 | "The moonsilver felt colder here," | | 15 | "Nyx drifted left, dipping a" | | 16 | "The silver surface remained blank" | | 17 | "She wiped her crescent scar" | | 18 | "Isolde's laugh arrived as layered" | | 19 | "Rory tracked it until the" |
| | ratio | 0.802 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 36.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The late afternoon light of Richmond Park fractured into amber shards that hung motionless among branches heavy with leaves that could not decide their season." | | 1 | "Nyx slipped through the shadow of the next stone, their form solidifying into a tall silhouette that drank the fractured light." | | 2 | "Warmth pulsed against her palm in steady rhythm, matching neither her heartbeat nor the breeze that carried no chill." | | 3 | "A chorus of soft chimes rose from the canopy—high, crystalline tones that threaded through one another and never quite formed a melody." | | 4 | "The moonsilver felt colder here, as if drinking the ambient magic." | | 5 | "Nyx drifted left, dipping a shadowy hand into a stream of liquid moonlight that ran between roots without wetting the earth." | | 6 | "Above them something translucent and long-limbed skittered between leaves, leaving trails of sparks that faded into purple afterimages." | | 7 | "Her boots sank into moss that breathed out cool vapour." | | 8 | "Beyond it the path narrowed into a corridor of silver-barked trees whose leaves whispered in a language layered with consonants that scraped the inner ear." | | 9 | "Isolde drifted to the centre, gown whispering over moss that refused her weight." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |