| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He moved around [around]" | | 1 | "His fingers closed around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.306 | | leniency | 0.611 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1302 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1302 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "absolutely" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "sense of" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 71 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1298 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.28% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 21 | | wordCount | 596 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.17 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Lucien | 7 | | Steam | 1 | | Hot | 1 | | Heat | 1 | | Aurora | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Steam" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.913 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1298 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 40.56 | | std | 20.33 | | cv | 0.501 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 35 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 59 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 74 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 55 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 86 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 60 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 75 | | 28 | 62 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 62 | | 31 | 51 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.061 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber eye found her first; the black one followed a heartbeat later, drinking the light." | | 1 | "The scent of him—tobacco leaf and winter air—arrived first." | | 2 | "The amber eye held warmth; the black one held absolutely nothing." | | 3 | "The flat held its breath—the low hiss of the fridge, the far thump of music from the restaurant, Ptolemy's continuous motor." | | 4 | "Aurora raised her chin until their mouths hovered three inches apart—close enough to share breath, far enough for the old hurt to keep its teeth." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 602 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.03820598006644518 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0033222591362126247 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 15.83 | | std | 11.61 | | cv | 0.733 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 51 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 34 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 80.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4878048780487805 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 89.09% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "His mouth curved." | | 1 | "She blocked the threshold with" | | 2 | "He savoured the space between" | | 3 | "He shut the door himself," | | 4 | "He rested both hands on" | | 5 | "She filled the kettle purely" | | 6 | "She killed the heat." | | 7 | "Her fingers found the crescent" | | 8 | "He lifted the cold mug," | | 9 | "He moved around the counter" | | 10 | "She could smell the starch" | | 11 | "He scratched under the cat's" | | 12 | "She opened a cupboard, fetched" | | 13 | "His fingers closed around the" | | 14 | "She pushed one mug across" | | 15 | "Their knuckles brushed." | | 16 | "His free hand covered hers" | | 17 | "She left her hand trapped" |
| | ratio | 0.327 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora twisted the last deadbolt" | | 1 | "Cumin and frying garlic rose" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 3 | "Platinum hair slicked back, charcoal" | | 4 | "The amber eye found her" | | 5 | "His mouth curved." | | 6 | "She blocked the threshold with" | | 7 | "He savoured the space between" | | 8 | "Ptolemy the tabby wound between" | | 9 | "Aurora's heel shifted." | | 10 | "The movement cracked the door" | | 11 | "Lucien stepped through in one" | | 12 | "The scent of him—tobacco leaf" | | 13 | "He shut the door himself," | | 14 | "Books leaned in crooked towers" | | 15 | "Scrolls overflowed a cardboard crate" | | 16 | "Lucien's gaze swept the clutter," | | 17 | "He rested both hands on" | | 18 | "The movement brought him close" | | 19 | "Aurora crossed to the kitchenette," |
| | ratio | 0.945 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Cumin and frying garlic rose from the curry house downstairs and mixed with the faint dust of old paper that clung to Eva's landing." |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His fingers closed around, and the ivory creaked under the pressure" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.028 | | leniency | 0.056 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |