| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1573 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "utterly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1573 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "wavered" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "resolved" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "fractured" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1556 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.98% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1470 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 15 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | London | 2 | | Nyx | 8 | | Fae | 2 | | Wonder | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Earth" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Wonder" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Hel" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.99 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 56.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "carvings that seemed to shift when looked at sidelong" | | 1 | "as if tracking warmth" | | 2 | "seemed gathered here, pooled rather than cast" |
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| 71.47% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.285 | | wordCount | 1556 | | matches | | 0 | "not physically but in the way a dream realigns furniture while you sleep" | | 1 | "no larger than candle flames but" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.12% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 74.1 | | std | 32.67 | | cv | 0.441 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 97 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 60 | | 3 | 94 | | 4 | 113 | | 5 | 92 | | 6 | 110 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 105 | | 10 | 62 | | 11 | 121 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 79 | | 14 | 109 | | 15 | 100 | | 16 | 77 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 87 | | 19 | 54 | | 20 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.156 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory tasted it first—cleaner somehow, thinner, as if the city smog had simply given up at the circle of standing stones." | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant lay warm against her collarbone—not the fever heat of a portal to Hel, only a steady pulse, as if the little crimson gem approved." | | 2 | "Wildflowers—bluebells, foxgloves, blossoms she had no names for—burst open in a quiet rush of scent, violet and citrus and something sweeter, like a fruit that had never grown on Earth." | | 3 | "Ahead, the path—if it could be called a path—wound deeper into a grove that should not have fitted inside a city." | | 4 | "It hummed—a low vibration felt in the teeth and the hollow of the chest, like standing too close to a massive church organ." | | 5 | "Her own face looked back—bright blue eyes, black hair cut at the shoulder, the small crescent scar pale on her left wrist where her sleeve rode up." | | 6 | "Rory chose the left branch because it smelled more strongly of jasmine and wet earth; she could not have explained further." | | 7 | "Some of the trunks had grown into cupped hollows where small lights—no larger than candle flames but the colour of foxfire—danced in lazy spirals." | | 8 | "Some resembled letters, others pure geometry—spirals nested inside spirals, constellations that matched no map she knew." | | 9 | "For a moment Rory saw the ghost of an older man beneath the darkness—high cheekbones, eyes that had once been human—but the impression vanished before she could hold it." | | 10 | "A cluster of blue flowers the size of teacups bobbed beside the path; when she leaned close the blooms slowly turned toward her face as if tracking warmth." | | 11 | "In the exact centre stood a low stone table half-swallowed by living wood—roots had climbed its legs until timber and granite seemed one continuous growth." | | 12 | "She turned slowly, taking it all in—the impossible blossoms, the carved birch just visible between distant trunks, the absolute absence of city sound." | | 13 | "Wonder flooded her chest so pure it almost hurt; right beside it brushed a cold sabre of unease that reminded her she was still a barista-runaway from Cardiff playing courier for supernatural debts." | | 14 | "A soft chime of laughter—round pebbles dropped into deep water—rolled through the glade." |
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| 92.25% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1500 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 63 | | adverbRatio | 0.042 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011333333333333334 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 16.21 | | std | 9.63 | | cv | 0.594 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 36 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 62.15% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3854166666666667 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 37.45% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "Further on the undergrowth opened" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused with one boot" | | 1 | "they said, the voice a" | | 2 | "She nodded once, fingers brushing" | | 3 | "She stepped fully between two" | | 4 | "It hummed—a low vibration felt" | | 5 | "She stopped beside a pool" | | 6 | "Her own face looked back—bright" | | 7 | "They moved on." | | 8 | "She checked her wristwatch once" | | 9 | "Her skin prickled." | | 10 | "she said, quiet" | | 11 | "Her ears popped once with" | | 12 | "Their outline frayed at the" | | 13 | "They pressed deeper still." | | 14 | "She jerked back." | | 15 | "It became a low chord" | | 16 | "She unsheathed the moonsilver blade" | | 17 | "She stepped into the clearing," | | 18 | "Their voice dropped to the" | | 19 | "She turned slowly, taking it" |
| | ratio | 0.258 | |
| 44.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "The air beyond the last" | | 1 | "Rory tasted it first—cleaner somehow," | | 2 | "She paused with one boot" | | 3 | "The stones themselves were weather-pitted" | | 4 | "Nyx slipped up beside her" | | 5 | "Violet eyes glimmered in the" | | 6 | "they said, the voice a" | | 7 | "She nodded once, fingers brushing" | | 8 | "The Heartstone pendant lay warm" | | 9 | "The Fae-forged blade rode low" | | 10 | "She stepped fully between two" | | 11 | "The world tilted, not physically" | | 12 | "Grass that had been winter-brittle" | | 13 | "Wildflowers—bluebells, foxgloves, blossoms she had" | | 14 | "The sky above thinned to" | | 15 | "Rory felt the weight of" | | 16 | "Trees rose in layered tiers" | | 17 | "The light came from nowhere" | | 18 | "Rory walked slowly, tracking the" | | 19 | "Nyx flowed rather than walked," |
| | ratio | 0.831 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 20 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused with one boot still on ordinary earth and the other hovering above the moss that edged the ancient oaks." | | 1 | "The stones themselves were weather-pitted and taller than she remembered from any public map, their surfaces pocked with cup-marks that caught the late afternoo…" | | 2 | "Between them the air wavered, a faint heat-shimmer that had nothing to do with temperature." | | 3 | "Nyx slipped up beside her without sound, their outline breaking and reforming like smoke that half-remembered the shape of a person." | | 4 | "The Heartstone pendant lay warm against her collarbone—not the fever heat of a portal to Hel, only a steady pulse, as if the little crimson gem approved." | | 5 | "Grass that had been winter-brittle greened underfoot in a single heartbeat." | | 6 | "Wildflowers—bluebells, foxgloves, blossoms she had no names for—burst open in a quiet rush of scent, violet and citrus and something sweeter, like a fruit that …" | | 7 | "The sky above thinned to a pale, high silver that discarded the London grey." | | 8 | "Trees rose in layered tiers of age: some slender and silver-barked, others thick-trunked and gnarled, their roots knuckling up through carpets of moss that glow…" | | 9 | "Nyx flowed rather than walked, sometimes solid enough that their boots left impressions, sometimes only a streak of deeper dark that ghosted across the trunks." | | 10 | "Every so often a clear high tone rang out from somewhere deep among the trees: a single note, pure as glass, that faded into nothing before she could locate the…" | | 11 | "Beside her reflected image Nyx’s silhouette wavered, as if the water could not decide whether they belonged to this place or the spaces between places." | | 12 | "In the centre of the glade a single monochrome birch stood alone, its bark nearly white and scored with old carvings that seemed to shift when looked at sidelon…" | | 13 | "Some resembled letters, others pure geometry—spirals nested inside spirals, constellations that matched no map she knew." | | 14 | "For a moment Rory saw the ghost of an older man beneath the darkness—high cheekbones, eyes that had once been human—but the impression vanished before she could…" | | 15 | "Discovery came layered: a ring of toadstools that chimed faintly underfoot, branches that rearranged themselves when her back was turned, a sudden clearing wher…" | | 16 | "Flowers ringed the space: every colour and none, shifting hues that made Rory’s eyes water if she stared too long." | | 17 | "Wonder flooded her chest so pure it almost hurt; right beside it brushed a cold sabre of unease that reminded her she was still a barista-runaway from Cardiff p…" | | 18 | "The wildflowers leaned toward one point at the far edge of the circle as if a breeze she could not feel had chosen a single direction." | | 19 | "She waited, pulse loud in her ears, and the Grove continued its slow breath around them, beautiful and utterly indifferent to the small lives that had stepped a…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |