| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.208 | | leniency | 0.417 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.48% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1533 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.03% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1533 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "resolving" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "quivered" | | 10 | "racing" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "crystal" | | 14 | "down her spine" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 134 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 153 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1526 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.23% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1333 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.58 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 12 | | Rory | 21 | | Nyx | 10 | | English | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.712 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to shift when Rory looked too long" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1526 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 153 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 32.47 | | std | 17.55 | | cv | 0.54 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 50 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 52 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 40 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 49 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 70 | | 41 | 56 | | 42 | 57 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 134 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.49% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 153 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers pushed through cracks in the bark-like granite—violet, gold, and moon-white blooms that had no place blooming in English chill." | | 1 | "“Then we watch our feet.” She touched the chill of the dagger Isolde had pressed into her hand minutes earlier—leaf-shaped moonsilver, still frosted despite the mild air." | | 2 | "It coiled once around her wrist—gentle, curious—before releasing." | | 3 | "Water—or whatever it was—ran cold then burned hot, leaving no wetness on skin." | | 4 | "Discovery after discovery stacked: a hollow in a root that held a nest of crystal eggs humming with trapped weather; a ring of mushrooms each bearing a gateway of fog in its centre; a single black rose that opened and closed like a lung." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1343 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.029039463886820552 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006701414743112435 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 153 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 153 | | mean | 9.97 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.695 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 71.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.45098039215686275 | | totalSentences | 153 | | uniqueOpeners | 69 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she faced the tree" | | 1 | "Simply aware in a way" | | 2 | "Only as real." | | 3 | "Instead the surface held moving" | | 4 | "Somewhere beyond the reflection she" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "They said nothing, only tilted" | | 1 | "Their scent hit first: honey" | | 2 | "She crouched, brushed fingers across" | | 3 | "She touched the chill of" | | 4 | "Its weight settled easy against" | | 5 | "They passed between two stones." | | 6 | "Her pendant pulsed once, heat" | | 7 | "She reached for a hanging" | | 8 | "It coiled once around her" | | 9 | "She wiped it on her" | | 10 | "She closed her mouth." | | 11 | "Its lowest branch dipped low" | | 12 | "She took a breath that" | | 13 | "She stepped toward it." | | 14 | "She wanted to press fingers" | | 15 | "She lifted her chin." | | 16 | "It did not splash." | | 17 | "She laughed once under her" | | 18 | "They circled the reverse waterfall." | | 19 | "Her fingers came away unmarked," |
| | ratio | 0.197 | |
| 88.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "The path wound between ancient" | | 1 | "Rory stepped over one, the" | | 2 | "Isolde’s voice hung soft as" | | 3 | "Rory glanced at Nyx." | | 4 | "The shade drifted half a" | | 5 | "They said nothing, only tilted" | | 6 | "The stones themselves rose black" | | 7 | "Wildflowers pushed through cracks in" | | 8 | "Their scent hit first: honey" | | 9 | "Rory’s boots sank into moss" | | 10 | "She crouched, brushed fingers across" | | 11 | "Isolde said without turning" | | 12 | "Nyx’s whisper threaded the air" | | 13 | "She touched the chill of" | | 14 | "Its weight settled easy against" | | 15 | "They passed between two stones." | | 16 | "The air thickened." | | 17 | "Light changed too." | | 18 | "Shafts of amber slid through" | | 19 | "The clearing opened wide, a" |
| | ratio | 0.744 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones themselves rose black and pitted, taller than any man, carved with spirals that seemed to shift when Rory looked too long." | | 1 | "Wildflowers pushed through cracks in the bark-like granite—violet, gold, and moon-white blooms that had no place blooming in English chill." | | 2 | "The clearing opened wide, a bowl of grass and flowering vines that climbed nothing yet hung in perfect arcs." | | 3 | "Simply aware in a way that made Rory’s scar on her wrist itch." | | 4 | "Discovery after discovery stacked: a hollow in a root that held a nest of crystal eggs humming with trapped weather; a ring of mushrooms each bearing a gateway …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |