Run: 2026-07-09-01KX3ZZ41NGVGM4PWRJFZWJSSC

Run Details

Duration:
1m 11s
Cost:
$0.107430
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain turned Wardour Street into a black mirror, smearing brake lights beneath Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots. Fifty metres ahead, Tomás Herrera shoved through a knot of late-night drinkers and sent a man’s umbrella spinning into the gutter. “Herrera!” He glanced back. That cost him ground. Quinn clipped a shoulder, caught herself against a parked taxi and kept moving. Water ran from her cropped salt-and-pepper hair into her eyes. Her coat dragged at her knees. Herrera wore no jacket, only a charcoal jumper darkened across the shoulders, and his left hand stayed clamped beneath his ribs. Blood marked every third paving stone. Not much. Enough. A bus hauled across the junction between them, its windows packed with pale faces and phone screens. Quinn heard a horn, then Herrera disappeared behind the red bulk. She slapped the bonnet of a cab as she crossed. “Police. Stay put.” The driver’s protest vanished beneath the rain. Quinn reached the opposite pavement as the bus pulled away. Empty street. A kebab shop burned white on the corner. Two delivery riders sheltered beneath its awning. One pointed north before she showed her warrant card. “Bloke in grey?” “Went that way. Fast.” “Was he alone?” The rider shook his helmet. “Looked like something chased him.” “Something did.” Quinn ran. Three minutes earlier, Herrera had stepped out of the Raven’s Nest through its rear door with blood on his hand and a brass tube tucked into his waistband. He had frozen when he saw her beneath the green neon sign, his warm brown eyes widening for half a second. Then he had bolted. The Raven’s Nest sat behind her now, its green raven buzzing over the entrance, the old maps and black-and-white photographs inside left under the care of two uniformed officers who would find nothing. Quinn had raided the place twice. Its walls swallowed evidence. Its patrons forgot names, faces and whole evenings with matching precision. This time she had seen Herrera carrying something. This time he had bled. A heel struck pavement ahead. Quinn turned into an alley choked with bins and wet cardboard. Herrera vaulted a low chain at the far end. His jumper had ridden up, exposing the brass tube at his belt. A silver medallion flashed at his throat. “Stop running.” “You’ll arrest me.” His Spanish accent sharpened the words without slowing them. “That’s the current plan.” “You need a better one.” He landed badly. His right leg buckled, but he caught the brickwork and lurched on. Quinn cleared the chain. Pain flickered through her left knee. She shut it out and followed him past a loading bay where rainwater poured from a broken gutter in a solid, glittering rope. “Herrera, you’re injured.” “I noticed.” “I can get you medical treatment.” A breathless laugh came back through the alley. “From the NHS?” “You used to trust them.” “I used to work for them.” He shouldered through a fire door. Quinn reached it before it swung closed and entered a narrow restaurant kitchen dense with steam, garlic and startled swearing. A cook lifted a cleaver. “Met Police.” The warrant card changed his grip but not his expression. Herrera knocked through strings of red beads at the dining-room entrance. Chairs scraped. A bottle broke. Quinn followed into a room full of half-eaten noodles and upturned faces. Herrera snatched a tablecloth from an empty table and flung it behind him. Cutlery struck the floor. Quinn kicked the cloth aside. “Tomás.” He looked back again. Sweat and rain shone on his olive skin. Hearing his first name hit him harder than the warning. His hand tightened over his wound. “You read my file.” “I read all of it. Seville. St Thomas’. Your disciplinary tribunal. The patients you treated without authorisation.” “They lived.” “Three vanished before they could give statements.” “They walked out.” “One had a spinal fracture.” Herrera hit the front door bar. Cold rain and traffic noise swallowed the answer. Quinn emerged onto Shaftesbury Avenue. He cut between cars stalled at the lights. A motorbike slewed, tyre spitting water. Its rider cursed and raised one gloved fist. Herrera reached the centre reservation. Quinn drew level with the first lane as the lights changed. Engines surged. She planted a palm on a white van, slipped past its bumper and felt the heat of a taxi grille against her calf. Horns cracked around her. Herrera crossed the last lane, struck the pavement and staggered into the mouth of another side street. His blood trail had thickened. A dark handprint marked the wet stone where he had caught himself. Quinn checked her worn leather watch. 00:17. Her radio hissed beneath her coat. “Quinn, report. Units are at the Raven. Where are you?” She pressed the transmit switch while moving. “Northbound from Shaftesbury. Suspect on foot, injured. Herrera, Tomás, twenty-nine. Grey jumper, black trousers.” “Armed?” Quinn pictured the brass tube. “Unknown.” “Wait for support.” “Send them towards Camden.” A pause followed. “Camden? He’s heading north on foot?” Quinn rounded the corner. A bicycle lay abandoned against a wall, rear wheel spinning. Beyond it, Herrera climbed into a black cab. She caught the registration as it pulled away. “Not any more.” She stepped into the road and levelled her warrant card at the next car. The driver, a young woman with blue braids, locked both doors. Quinn knocked on the windscreen. “Police. Follow that cab.” The woman lowered the window two centimetres. “Absolutely not.” Quinn opened her coat enough to show the warrant card and shoulder holster. The locks clicked. “Back seat. You’re soaked.” Quinn climbed in. “Keep it in sight. Don’t get close.” The woman pulled out with a vicious turn that pinned Quinn against the door. “I watch detective shows.” “Forget everything they taught you.” The cab’s yellow light bobbed through the traffic ahead. Rain flooded the windscreen faster than the wipers could clear it. Quinn wiped water from her face and called the registration through. The response came within seconds. “Cab reported stolen twelve minutes ago near Greek Street.” “He didn’t steal it. Check the driver.” “Driver’s phone is switched off.” Quinn watched the cab take a left without signalling. “Check him faster.” The driver glanced at Quinn in the mirror. “This bloke kill someone?” “He ran.” “That’s not what I asked.” “No.” Not yet sat behind Quinn’s teeth. She left it there. Herrera’s file contained no violence beyond the knife attack that had carved a scar along his left forearm. The victim had never been found. Neither had the knife. The hospital photographs showed black residue packed inside the wound and three paramedics holding Herrera down while he screamed that the blade had moved. The report blamed shock. DS Morris had written one line in the margin. Ask what was holding the knife. Three years dead, and Morris still asked better questions than the living. The cab jumped a light. “Stay back.” Blue Braids grinned at the mirror. “I’ve got him.” “He knows we’re following.” “How?” Herrera’s face appeared in the cab’s rear window. Even at a distance, Quinn felt his gaze settle on her. The brass tube rose in his hand. “Brake.” The driver stamped down. Something struck the road between the cars. A flare of blue-white light burst across the wet tarmac. The windscreen filled with crawling threads, each one bright as welding fire. The car’s speakers screamed with a dozen overlapping voices. Quinn caught fragments—names, pleas, a child counting backwards. The driver jerked the wheel. Quinn seized it with both hands. The car mounted the kerb, clipped a bollard and stopped with one tyre on the pavement. The voices cut out. Smoke rose from the dashboard. “What the hell was that?” Quinn stared through the crazed windscreen. The black cab had vanished around the corner. “Stay here.” “You can’t leave me here.” “Call emergency services. Don’t touch anything that came through the vents.” “What came through the vents?” Quinn was already out. She ran the next two streets, guided by the fading growl of the cab’s engine. Her radio produced only static now. She pulled it free and removed the battery. The casing felt hot enough to sting. At the end of the road, the stolen cab stood nose-first against a shuttered off-licence. Both front doors hung open. No driver. No Herrera. Quinn swept the interior with her torch. Blood streaked the back seat. A lump of pale wax sat in the footwell, stamped with the image of a closed eye. The air smelled of burned rosemary and hot copper. She left it untouched. A narrow lane ran beside the shop. Herrera’s bloody fingertips marked the wall at shoulder height. Quinn followed them through a service yard and over a gate into Camden High Street. The rain had thinned to a hard silver mist. Clubs emptied around her. Food stalls smoked beneath striped awnings. Drunken laughter bounced from the railway arches, too loud and too brittle. Herrera moved through the crowd ahead, one arm pressed against his side. Quinn drew her pistol and held it low against her thigh. “Herrera.” He reached the entrance of a closed station, its sign stripped away and its tiles stained brown with age. Steel shutters covered the main doors. He turned towards a maintenance passage beside them. Quinn gained on him. “Nowhere left.” He stopped beneath a broken lamp. Water ran down his face. His short curls lay plastered to his forehead. Blood had soaked the right side of his jumper and filled the grooves of his fingers. “You followed too far.” “You fired something at a civilian vehicle.” “A hush charge. It killed your radio.” “It nearly killed the driver.” “If I wanted you dead, Detective, you’d still be sitting at the Raven with your throat open.” Quinn raised the pistol to his chest. “Show me your hands.” Herrera lifted his right. His left remained pressed beneath his ribs. “Both.” “I need this pressure.” “Move it slowly.” He drew his hand away. Blood pulsed between torn threads. The wound looked narrow, no wider than a pencil, but its edges had turned grey. Black lines spread beneath his skin like cracks in ice. Quinn’s aim shifted by a fraction. “What did that?” “Not what. Who.” “Name.” “You wouldn’t believe it.” “People keep using that excuse.” A tremor caught his mouth. Pain, not fear. “Gabriel Sorn.” Quinn knew the name. Missing antiquities broker. Suspected trafficker. Officially last seen six months ago boarding a flight to Prague. Morris had visited Sorn’s flat two nights before his death. “What’s in the tube?” Herrera glanced towards the maintenance passage. “Proof.” “Give it to me.” “It won’t survive in your evidence lock-up.” “You don’t know much about evidence lock-ups.” “I treated a custody sergeant last winter after a jar in your evidence lock-up hatched.” Rain ticked against an overflowing bin. Quinn stepped closer. “Place the tube on the ground.” “No.” “I won’t ask again.” “I know where you found Morris.” The city narrowed to Herrera’s face. Quinn kept her weapon steady. Her left wrist had gone rigid beneath the leather watch Morris had given her after her promotion. “Careful.” “His report put him at a warehouse in Lambeth. He wasn’t there.” “You knew him?” “I worked on him.” The pistol sight rested over Herrera’s heart. “Morris died before the ambulance arrived.” “The ambulance you were told about arrived after midnight. I got there at eleven fourteen.” “How?” “Silas called me.” The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn heard the green sign buzzing in her memory. “What condition was he in?” Herrera swallowed. “Alive.” “Then why didn’t you save him?” “Because he wouldn’t let me.” Quinn crossed the distance and drove him against the tiled wall. Her forearm pinned his throat. Herrera grunted as the impact tore something inside him; fresh blood slid over his waistband. “Don’t build a story around a dead officer.” “He had something inside his chest. It spoke with his mouth after his heart stopped.” Quinn pressed harder. Herrera’s Saint Christopher medallion slipped from his collar. The silver had blackened on one side. “His last words were your name.” The pressure in Quinn’s arm faltered. Herrera twisted. His scarred left forearm knocked the pistol aside. He ducked into the maintenance passage before Quinn recovered her aim. “Stop.” He shoved through a rusted gate and stumbled down a concrete stairwell. Quinn followed to the top. The stairs plunged beneath the abandoned station, lit at intervals by red bulbs caged in wire. Old posters peeled from tiled walls: seaside holidays, West End shows, a smiling family gathered around a radio. Someone had scratched every face away. Herrera reached the first landing and pulled an object from his pocket. A small disc, yellow-white, uneven around the edge. Bone. He pressed it into a slot beside a steel door. Mechanisms shifted within the wall. Not the clean clunk of a modern lock. This sound resembled knuckles bending one after another. The door opened. Noise flooded the stairwell: bartering voices, bells, animal shrieks, the grind of metal. Warm air carried incense, blood and fruit left too long in summer heat. Beyond Herrera stretched an abandoned platform transformed into a market. Canvas stalls crowded the tracks. Lanterns floated without chains above tables piled with stoppered bottles, silver cages and folded skins that shivered in the stale underground wind. A woman in a mourning veil held out a tray of teeth to a customer with antlers hidden beneath his hood. Three children in identical red coats turned together and watched Quinn from across the platform. Herrera leaned against the doorframe. “This entrance closes once the token burns.” The bone disc had begun to smoke inside the slot. Quinn kept her pistol trained on him. “Come back up.” “I bring you the tube, Sorn owns it by morning. Your people will help him without knowing his name.” “You’re asking me to trust a fugitive.” “I’m asking you to choose where you point that gun.” Two figures approached behind Herrera. Both wore wax masks stitched at the lips. One carried a hooked pole; the other dragged a chain that disappeared beneath a stall. Herrera saw Quinn register them. “Street rules ended at the door.” “I don’t know the rules down there.” “That never stopped you before.” The disc cracked. Half of it collapsed into glowing ash. Quinn looked back up the stairs. Rainwater crept beneath the gate and trickled down each step, carrying London’s grit towards her boots. Her radio sat dead in her pocket. Support had no location. No witness could explain the door, the token or the rows of impossible merchandise beyond it. Procedure offered a clear answer. Secure the entrance. Withdraw. Return with armed officers. Morris had followed procedure into a false report and a sealed coffin. One of the masked figures raised the hooked pole. Herrera pushed away from the frame and entered the market. The bone token split again. Quinn holstered her pistol beneath her coat. A firearm might make her feel less exposed, but every face beyond the door had fixed upon it. She drew her warrant card instead, studied the crowned badge for one beat, then tucked it into her inside pocket. The steel door began to close. Quinn caught its edge with her hand and slipped through. Heat closed around her. The two masked figures blocked Herrera’s path. Quinn moved to his side, shoulder level with his despite the blood dripping from his fingers. He stared at her. “You’ve made a mistake.” Quinn watched the hooked pole lower towards them. “Keep moving.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
98.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2581
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2581
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"lurched"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"absolutely"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"lurched"
1"flickered"
2"absolutely"
3"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences242
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences242
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences353
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2580
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions128
wordCount2044
uniqueNames27
maxNameDensity2.54
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Wardour1
Street2
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn52
Tomás1
Herrera33
Raven3
Nest3
Spanish1
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Morris5
Braids1
Camden1
High1
Prague1
Sorn1
Saint1
Christopher1
West1
End1
London1
Rain3
Blood4
One3
Three3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Raven"
5"Nest"
6"Morris"
7"Braids"
8"Sorn"
9"Saint"
10"Christopher"
11"Rain"
12"Blood"
13"One"
places
0"Wardour"
1"Street"
2"Shaftesbury"
3"Avenue"
4"Camden"
5"High"
6"Prague"
7"West"
8"End"
9"London"
globalScore0.228
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences161
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2580
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences353
matches
0"screamed that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs231
mean11.17
std12.1
cv1.083
sampleLengths
037
11
23
34
450
56
63
728
810
93
1043
113
124
133
1410
152
162
1749
184
1954
208
215
225
2339
242
253
269
274
285
2915
3033
313
322
336
3411
355
366
3726
385
392
4038
4122
421
4312
4416
454
4617
472
487
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences242
matches
0"been found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs360
matches
0"was holding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences353
ratio0.008
matches
0"Quinn caught fragments—names, pleas, a child counting backwards."
1"Herrera grunted as the impact tore something inside him; fresh blood slid over his waistband."
2"One carried a hooked pole; the other dragged a chain that disappeared beneath a stall."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1577
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.015218769816106531
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0025364616360177552
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences353
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences353
mean7.31
std5.09
cv0.696
sampleLengths
016
121
21
33
44
513
610
76
821
96
102
111
1217
1311
1410
153
167
1710
182
198
207
219
223
234
243
255
265
272
282
2928
3021
314
3233
336
344
3511
368
375
385
3911
409
4112
427
432
443
459
464
475
483
4912
51.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.32386363636363635
totalSentences352
uniqueOpeners114
29.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences228
matches
0"Then he had bolted."
1"Officially last seen six months"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences228
matches
0"He glanced back."
1"Her coat dragged at her"
2"She slapped the bonnet of"
3"He had frozen when he"
4"Its walls swallowed evidence."
5"Its patrons forgot names, faces"
6"His jumper had ridden up,"
7"His Spanish accent sharpened the"
8"He landed badly."
9"His right leg buckled, but"
10"She shut it out and"
11"He shouldered through a fire"
12"He looked back again."
13"His hand tightened over his"
14"He cut between cars stalled"
15"Its rider cursed and raised"
16"She planted a palm on"
17"His blood trail had thickened."
18"Her radio hissed beneath her"
19"She pressed the transmit switch"
ratio0.184
27.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount197
totalSentences228
matches
0"He glanced back."
1"That cost him ground."
2"Quinn clipped a shoulder, caught"
3"Water ran from her cropped"
4"Her coat dragged at her"
5"Herrera wore no jacket, only"
6"Blood marked every third paving"
7"A bus hauled across the"
8"Quinn heard a horn, then"
9"She slapped the bonnet of"
10"The driver’s protest vanished beneath"
11"Quinn reached the opposite pavement"
12"A kebab shop burned white"
13"The rider shook his helmet."
14"He had frozen when he"
15"The Raven’s Nest sat behind"
16"Quinn had raided the place"
17"Its walls swallowed evidence."
18"Its patrons forgot names, faces"
19"This time she had seen"
ratio0.864
21.93% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences228
matches
0"Even at a distance, Quinn"
ratio0.004
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences79
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest sat behind her now, its green raven buzzing over the entrance, the old maps and black-and-white photographs inside left under the care of two u…"
1"Herrera’s file contained no violence beyond the knife attack that had carved a scar along his left forearm."
2"Lanterns floated without chains above tables piled with stoppered bottles, silver cages and folded skins that shivered in the stale underground wind."
3"One carried a hooked pole; the other dragged a chain that disappeared beneath a stall."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
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100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
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87.3629%