Run: 2026-07-09-01KX400KNQHGYSSVR1JYRJES13

Run Details

Duration:
1m 35s
Cost:
$0.148160
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest had emptied itself in layers. First went the theatre crowd, bright with gin and borrowed opinions. Then the office drinkers peeled away in loose clusters, ties in pockets, voices scraping the ceiling. By half eleven, only three regulars remained beneath the old maps and black-and-white photographs: a cabbie asleep over a tonic, two women sharing chips at the back, and Mr Price, who had spent forty minutes arranging six coins into a perfect row. Aurora collected his empty glass. “Last one, Mr Price.” “You said that about the previous one.” “And look how much younger we both were.” He covered the coins with one hand. “You’ve inherited his cruelty.” Behind the bar, Silas polished a tumbler. His silver signet ring clicked against its base. “She arrived fully equipped.” Aurora carried the glass to him. The green neon outside cast a sickly stripe across the window, splitting her reflection from mouth to hip. Rain slicked the Soho pavement beyond it. A bus dragged red light across the glass and vanished. Silas set the tumbler on the shelf. “You can go upstairs. I’ll finish.” “You’ll let Price order another.” “I’m a publican. Exploiting weak character pays the electricity.” Mr Price raised two fingers without lifting his head. Aurora reached for the tea towel. “Give me that.” The front door opened before Silas released it. Rain blew over the threshold. A man stepped in with one hand on the door, pausing beneath the green sign as if he had expected somewhere else to appear when he pushed. His coat fitted too well for the weather. Water jewelled the shoulders. He had cropped his once-long hair close to the scalp, and a pale seam ran from the hinge of his jaw into the collar of his shirt. Aurora gripped the towel. The man shut the door. His gaze travelled across the photographs, the maps, the sleeping cabbie. It reached the bar and stopped. His face changed by degrees: recognition first, then the smile he had trained to cover it. “Rory.” No one had called her that in his voice for seven years. Her fingers found the crescent scar on her left wrist and rubbed until the skin warmed. “Daniel.” Silas looked from her to the stranger. He folded the towel once and placed it on the counter. “Kitchen’s closed.” “I wasn’t after food.” Daniel approached, each step bringing another fact into focus. The broken nose. The expensive watch. The missing silver hoop from his left ear. “I saw the sign. Thought I’d get out of the rain.” “You found a bar. Good instincts.” His smile caught at one corner. “Still sharp, then.” Aurora slid the empty glass into the rack. It struck another with a hard note. “I used to be funny. Sharp was what you called me when I’d upset you.” “You upset everyone.” “Only the deserving.” “Then it was public service.” For a moment, Cardiff returned in fragments: wet trainers on a radiator, chips wrapped in paper, Daniel singing through a split lip on the steps outside Clwb Ifor Bach. At nineteen they had believed bruises made a life visible. They photographed every one. Silas took a bottle from the shelf. “What are you drinking?” Daniel glanced at Aurora. “What am I drinking?” “How would I know?” “You always did.” “That was when your entire range ran from cheapest lager to whatever someone else had left unattended.” “Whisky. Neat.” Silas poured without asking which. Daniel took the glass, then examined the amber as though it held a message. “You work here?” Aurora leaned against the back counter. “Sometimes.” “And live upstairs?” Her eyes lifted to his. “You always did count windows.” “I saw your light.” “You saw a light.” Daniel drank. The old Daniel would have coughed and sworn the whisky had stripped his throat. This one swallowed without a blink. “Eva told me you’d moved to London.” “Eva tells everybody everything. It’s how she stops facts from developing mould.” “She didn’t give me the address.” “So you asked?” “I didn’t.” The lie landed between them without force. Its familiarity did the damage. Aurora turned to Silas. “You can finish without me?” Silas’s hazel eyes stayed on Daniel. His right hand rested beside the till, the signet ring facing out. “I imagine I’ll survive.” Daniel set cash on the counter. Silas pushed one note back. “You haven’t bought the premises.” “London prices.” “Not in my London.” Aurora came around the end of the bar. Daniel moved to embrace her, then halted when she did. His arms shifted into a clumsy adjustment of his coat. “Right.” He tucked one hand into his pocket. “Not there yet.” “There isn’t a timetable.” She chose the small table beneath a framed map of Prague. One leg rocked. She folded a beer mat and wedged it beneath the foot while Daniel removed his coat. The suit underneath surprised her more than the scar. Navy, narrow through the waist, no lint on the lapels. Daniel had once attended a court hearing in a borrowed jacket with a cigarette burn in the pocket, then argued with the usher about whether trainers counted as a political statement. He draped the coat over the chair rather than dropping it on the floor. Aurora sat. Daniel touched the table. “You still fix things before anyone else notices.” “You noticed.” “After you’d fixed it.” “There you are, then.” He looked past her towards the bar. Silas had begun counting the till, though his attention never sank as far as the notes. Daniel rotated his glass. “How long have you been here?” “London?” “This place.” “Three years.” “And before that?” “Another place.” “That bad?” “That private.” His thumb moved over the rim. A clean thumbnail, buffed to a low shine. Aurora remembered black grease beneath it, a half-moon that never vanished because he spent Saturdays keeping his mother’s Vauxhall alive. “You went,” he began, “and then your number changed.” “I sent you the new one.” “You sent everyone the new one.” “I didn’t know I had to engrave yours.” “You never answered.” Aurora stared at him. “You rang twice.” “More than twice.” “Two voicemails. One asked if I still had your blue jumper. The other consisted of four minutes of traffic.” “I was outside your flat.” “In Cardiff?” He nodded. “I’d been gone six months.” “I knew.” The women at the back rose, carrying their paper tray between them. One waved to Silas. He lifted his chin. Their departure let in a burst of wet street noise, a taxi horn and laughter, before the door closed again. Aurora’s voice dropped into the new quiet. “Why were you there?” “I thought you might come back.” “For what?” Daniel looked at the whisky. “That was the trouble, wasn’t it?” She waited. Rain tapped the window in handfuls. He pulled a phone from inside his jacket when it vibrated, glanced at the screen and rejected the call. The face of the phone flashed a photograph before it went dark: a little girl on a beach, both fists full of sand. Aurora nodded towards it. “Yours?” His hand closed around the device. “Mae. She’s five.” “You have a daughter.” “I do.” The answer held pride, but it sat under strain, like good china boxed for a move. “Who with?” “Her mother’s called Naomi.” “That wasn’t my question.” “We’re separated.” Aurora looked towards the window. Green light caught in her bright blue eyes, turning them strange in the glass. “Of course.” “What does that mean?” “It means you’ve given me three pieces of information and arranged them to resemble a confession.” His jaw tightened along the scar. “You haven’t changed.” “No. You announced that when you came in.” “You know what I meant.” “I don’t. You haven’t asked anything you couldn’t have got from Eva.” Daniel leaned back. The table tilted despite the beer mat, and whisky climbed the side of his glass. “I asked if you worked here.” “A thrilling intimacy.” “I’m not entitled to more.” “Now you’ve caught up.” Mr Price scraped back his stool. “Night, Blackwood. Aurora.” Silas came from behind the bar, favouring his left leg, and helped the sleeping cabbie into his coat. “Home, gentlemen. Before either of you mistakes my hospitality for affection.” Mr Price pointed at Daniel as he passed their table. “Never trust a man whose shoes shine after midnight.” Daniel looked down. “Useful.” “He was at the Foreign Office for thirty years,” Aurora told him. “He can smell policy failure through leather.” Mr Price gave a grave nod and left with the cabbie balanced against his shoulder. Silas turned the lock behind them. He flipped the sign to CLOSED but left the green neon burning. Daniel watched him return to the till. “Your landlord?” “My friend.” “Protective.” “Observant.” “He keeps looking at my hands.” “He dislikes watches.” Silas counted a stack of notes. “I dislike people who check the exits before ordering.” Daniel’s gaze moved to the mirror behind the bottles. In it, the front door stood over his left shoulder, the corridor to the toilets over his right. “Occupational habit.” Aurora studied him. “What occupation?” He pressed his lips together. “Security.” “Nightclubs?” “Corporate.” “Meaning?” “People pay me to notice trouble.” “And yet here you are.” A laugh escaped him, brief and raw. For that instant his suit became costume. His face loosened, and she saw the boy who had stolen daffodils from the civic gardens because she had failed her first tort exam. He rubbed the scar at his jaw. “You’d hate the story.” “I don’t care enough to hate it.” “That one was sharp.” “That one was accurate.” He drank, but this time his mouth pinched. “After you left, I got worse.” Aurora’s shoulders went still. Daniel kept his eyes on the glass. “I thought I was angry with you. Then I thought I was angry with Evan. Turned out I had enough to go round.” “Don’t put him in this.” “I should’ve done more.” “You did nothing.” “I came to the hospital.” “After.” “You told me not to—” “I had twelve stitches in my head, Daniel. I told the nurse I didn’t want pudding. She still knew I needed feeding.” His hand flattened on the table. A white line circled his ring finger, brighter than the skin around it. “I went to his house.” “One week later.” “I broke his jaw.” “You broke your hand.” “That too.” “And then you rang me from a police station as if I owed you bail money.” “I didn’t ask for money.” “You asked me to tell them what he’d done. You wanted my bruises to make your violence respectable.” Daniel recoiled. The chair creaked beneath him. “I thought I was helping.” “You wanted to become the hero after missing the whole bloody event.” “I was afraid.” “So was I.” “You were always braver.” “No. I was bleeding.” Silas stopped counting. He did not turn around. Daniel stared at the whisky. His eyes had reddened along the lower rims. “I knew about him before that night.” Aurora’s fingers loosened from the edge of the table. “What did you know?” “I saw him outside the Students’ Union. He’d got hold of your arm. You pulled away, and he grabbed you again.” “When?” “March. Before Easter.” She counted without intending to. March. Easter. The May bank holiday. The kitchen door. The blue mug broken beneath her bare foot. Evan’s apology pressed into frozen peas. Two more months in which Daniel had sat across from her in pubs and stolen chips from her plate. “You saw.” “I asked you about it.” “You asked why I was wearing sleeves.” “You said you were cold.” “It was snowing.” “I wanted you to tell me.” Aurora pushed her chair back. The beer mat slipped loose, and the table resumed its small, persistent rock. “You wanted me to do the difficult bit so you could have clean hands.” “No.” “You saw him hurt me.” “I saw him grab you.” “Choose your verbs with somebody else.” She stood and crossed to the window. Outside, rain softened the street into streaks of green and red. Her reflection faced her: black hair skimming her shoulders, mouth drained of colour, left hand clamped around her right wrist. Daniel remained at the table. “I told myself you’d cut me off if I pushed. You’d defended him before.” “To you?” “To everyone.” “You thought I’d choose him.” “I thought you already had.” Aurora turned. “You don’t get to make that my betrayal.” “I know.” “No. You came in here wearing a suit worth more than my rent, ordered whisky you hate, and waited for me to recognise whatever grand tragedy turned you into this.” His gaze dropped to his clothes. “This isn’t a tragedy.” “What is it?” “A uniform.” “For what?” He glanced at Silas, then back at her. “For going into rooms where nobody believes I grew up above a betting shop.” The confession altered his posture. His shoulders bowed inside the tailored cloth. The old body had not gone; it had learned how to occupy less space. Aurora returned to the table but did not sit. “What happened to your face?” Daniel traced the scar. “A bottle.” “Work?” “Naomi’s brother.” “Charming family.” “I deserved half of it.” “Which half?” “The first swing.” Despite herself, Aurora’s mouth moved. Not a smile. Its memory. Daniel saw it and looked away before hope could spoil the moment. “She said I made every room feel like an emergency. Naomi. Said Mae listened for my key in the door and went quiet.” Aurora pulled out the chair. “So you left.” “She asked me to.” “And you listened to her.” “Yes.” “Eventually.” His eyes met hers. “Eventually.” She sat. The table rocked between them. Neither reached for the beer mat. “Do you see your daughter?” “Wednesdays. Alternate weekends. School holidays if Naomi’s working.” He unlocked his phone and set it down, the beach photograph glowing between them. Mae wore yellow wellingtons with a swimming costume. Sand clung to her knees. “She hates the sea.” “She looks committed to fighting it.” “She threw most of that at a wave.” “Did she win?” “She declared terms.” Aurora looked at the child’s fierce, open face. “What does she call you?” “Dad.” “I meant when she’s angry.” His smile bent with pain. “Daniel.” “That must sting.” “It does.” The phone vibrated again. NAOMI filled the screen. Daniel answered at once. “Hi. Is she all right?” A woman’s voice crackled, too faint for words. “No, I’m still in London. I’ll be back by one.” He listened, pinching the bridge of his nose. “I didn’t forget. It’s in the front pocket of her school bag, not the main one. The front—yes. Purple zip.” Another pause. “Tell her I’m sorry I missed the call. I’ll ring at breakfast.” The woman spoke. Daniel’s eyes closed. “I know. I know.” He ended the call and left the phone face down. Aurora watched his hand remain on it. “You’re going back tonight?” “To Bristol.” “In this weather?” “I promised I’d be there when she wakes.” “Then why are you in London?” Daniel took his hand off the phone. “Job interview.” “You have a job.” “I’m leaving.” “The rooms full of people who mistrust your vowels?” “The hours. The fights. Watching men become their fathers after four drinks.” He looked at the scar on his knuckle, then curled his fingers. “Mae asked why I always smell like hospitals.” “What’s the new job?” “Health and safety for a chain of hotels.” Aurora blinked. “Don’t.” “I didn’t say anything.” “You’ve got your university face.” “My university face?” “The one you made when I said I’d start a band.” “You couldn’t play an instrument.” “I had presence.” “You had a tambourine.” His laugh came again. This time it stayed for a breath. Aurora lowered her gaze to the damp rings on the table. Daniel’s voice roughened. “I’m sorry.” “For the band?” “For waiting seven years to say anything that wasn’t about a jumper.” “Did you want it back?” “It was yours.” “It smelled of petrol.” “So did everything I owned.” “I gave it to a charity shop.” “Some poor bastard in Porthcawl is probably wearing it to court.” The silence that followed did not soften. It opened, exposing all the things humour had been laid across. Aurora rubbed her scar. Daniel nodded towards her wrist. “You still do that.” “You still notice too late.” He accepted the blow without shifting. “I wrote to you.” “You never sent it.” “How did you know?” “You’d have mentioned the postage.” “I carried it for two years.” “That must’ve been exhausting.” “It got washed with my jeans.” “Good.” “I could still read your name.” Aurora folded her arms. “What did it say?” “Mostly that I hated London.” “You’d visited once.” “It rained.” “You lived in Cardiff.” “The rain there knew me.” She looked through the window at the wet street. A cyclist passed under the neon, face briefly green. “When I left,” she murmured, “I waited at Victoria for three hours because I thought you’d come.” Daniel’s throat worked. “You told me not to.” “I told you the coach left at six.” “You said not to make a scene.” “You never listened before.” “I thought listening was what you needed.” “I needed my friend.” He looked down at his hands, the polished nails, the pale ring mark, the knuckles rearranged by old fractures. “I know.” “You know now.” “Yes.” “That’s not the same thing.” “No.” Silas closed the till drawer. The lock snapped into place. “Coffee,” he offered. Aurora looked at Daniel’s untouched half-glass, then at the rain. “He’s driving.” “I had gathered.” Silas took two cups from beneath the machine. Daniel reached for his wallet. “Don’t insult him twice,” Aurora warned. “I’m learning.” “You’re collecting evidence.” Daniel put the wallet away. Silas worked the machine. Steam hissed across the room, and the smell of ground beans displaced the whisky. He carried one cup to Daniel, his limp marking the last step, then placed a glass of water beside it. “Drink both.” Daniel wrapped his hands around the coffee. “Thank you.” Silas returned behind the bar. Aurora watched Daniel drink the water. He obeyed without performance, finishing half before he paused. “Does Eva know you’re here?” she asked. “She knows I had the interview.” “Not what I asked.” “No.” “Does anyone?” “Naomi has the hotel address. My boss knows where I am.” “You gave your boss the truth?” “An edited edition.” “And me?” Daniel set the glass down. “I saw the green sign from the cab. Asked the driver to stop. I didn’t know this was where you lived until I saw you.” “That part I believe.” “The rest?” “I haven’t decided.” He nodded. “How long will that take?” “Seven years seems fashionable.” His face tightened, though he did not protest. Aurora lifted his phone and turned it face up. Mae grinned from the beach, one yellow boot planted in a moat of her own construction. “She has your ears.” “Poor kid.” “Your mother must be delighted.” “She hasn’t met her.” Aurora looked up. Daniel’s expression closed, but not before she caught the wound beneath it. “Why?” “She died four years ago.” The bar seemed to contract around the sentence. Aurora set the phone down with care. “I didn’t know.” “No.” “What happened?” “Stroke. She was at work. One minute she was arguing about a scratch card payout, next minute she couldn’t lift her left arm.” Aurora saw Mrs Rees behind the betting-shop counter, silver hoops brushing her neck, slipping chocolate bars into school bags while pretending to check receipts. “You should’ve told me.” Daniel’s eyes held hers. “I thought you’d chosen not to know.” She flinched. He saw it and shook his head. “That wasn’t revenge. I didn’t mean—” “Yes, you did.” “I didn’t want to.” “That’s different.” Silas placed a coffee in front of Aurora. She had not heard him approach. “Milk’s on the bar.” She caught his wrist before he moved away. The gesture lasted a second. His signet ring pressed cold against her palm. He inclined his head and left them to it. Daniel stared into his cup. “Mam kept your graduation photo on the mantel. The one in the red dress.” “I hated that dress.” “She said it made you look expensive.” “She bought it.” “I know.” Aurora’s thumb circled the handle of her cup. “Was she alone?” “No. I got there before the ambulance left.” “Did she know you were there?” “I think so.” “Daniel.” “She squeezed my hand.” Aurora bowed her head. Straight black hair fell across her cheek, shelter and curtain. “I’m sorry.” “So am I.” “No. Not like that.” She tucked the hair behind one ear. “I’m sorry she died.” He pressed his fist to his mouth. The polished man, the security professional, the father who knew which purple zip held the forgotten item—all of him narrowed around that fist. “She liked you more than me.” “She had taste.” “She did.” His eyes shone. He blinked once and looked towards the ceiling, where the flat’s pipes ticked. Aurora pushed a paper napkin across the table. Daniel glanced at it. “I’m not crying.” “Your face is leaking.” He took it. She drank her coffee. It had no milk and too much bitterness, but she kept the cup at her mouth until the heat made her eyes water. Daniel folded the napkin into quarters. “I can go.” “You have to. Bristol, remember?” “I meant now.” Aurora watched rain bead the window, each drop catching green before sliding out of sight. Daniel waited without reaching for his coat. “Finish the coffee,” she told him. His shoulders lowered by a fraction. He lifted the cup. The table rocked under his elbow. Aurora bent, retrieved the fallen beer mat and wedged it back beneath the short leg. Daniel steadied the cups while she worked. When she sat upright, his hand still rested beside hers. Neither moved it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences325
tagDensity0.037
leniency0.074
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3660
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3660
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"perfect"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count2
2
word"affection"
count1
3
word"grave"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"perfect"
1"vibrated"
2"affection"
3"grave"
4"traced"
5"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences250
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences250
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences563
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3658
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions50
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"For a moment, Cardiff returned in fragments: wet trainers on a radiator, chips wrapped in paper, Daniel singing through …"
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions138
wordCount2034
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity2.26
worstName"Daniel"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Daniel"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Mr5
Price5
Silas21
Soho1
Cardiff1
Daniel46
Clwb1
Ifor1
Bach1
Aurora43
Prague1
Saturdays1
Vauxhall1
May1
Mae2
Mrs1
Rees1
Rain3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Mr"
3"Price"
4"Silas"
5"Daniel"
6"Ifor"
7"Bach"
8"Aurora"
9"Saturdays"
10"Mae"
11"Mrs"
12"Rees"
13"Rain"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"Clwb"
3"Prague"
4"Vauxhall"
globalScore0.369
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences154
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount3658
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences563
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs452
mean8.09
std9.11
cv1.125
sampleLengths
077
15
24
37
48
511
615
74
841
97
106
115
129
139
149
158
1671
174
1822
1916
201
2112
2216
231
2418
252
2638
276
289
2915
3015
313
323
335
3443
357
364
378
384
393
4017
412
4219
433
447
453
465
475
484
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences250
matches
0"been laid"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs370
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences563
ratio0.004
matches
0"The old body had not gone; it had learned how to occupy less space."
1"The polished man, the security professional, the father who knew which purple zip held the forgotten item—all of him narrowed around that fist."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2041
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.01910828025477707
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0014698677119059284
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences563
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences563
mean6.5
std5.38
cv0.828
sampleLengths
08
111
216
342
45
54
67
78
87
94
107
118
124
136
1418
157
1610
177
186
195
209
219
226
233
248
255
2627
278
284
2927
304
315
3211
336
3416
351
3612
3716
381
397
4011
412
4213
433
443
458
4611
476
486
493
45.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.20603907637655416
totalSentences563
uniqueOpeners116
14.43% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences231
matches
0"Then the office drinkers peeled"
ratio0.004
98.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount70
totalSentences231
matches
0"He covered the coins with"
1"His silver signet ring clicked"
2"His coat fitted too well"
3"He had cropped his once-long"
4"His gaze travelled across the"
5"It reached the bar and"
6"His face changed by degrees:"
7"Her fingers found the crescent"
8"He folded the towel once"
9"His smile caught at one"
10"It struck another with a"
11"They photographed every one."
12"Her eyes lifted to his."
13"Its familiarity did the damage."
14"His right hand rested beside"
15"His arms shifted into a"
16"He tucked one hand into"
17"She chose the small table"
18"She folded a beer mat"
19"He draped the coat over"
ratio0.303
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount213
totalSentences231
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest had emptied"
1"Aurora collected his empty glass."
2"He covered the coins with"
3"His silver signet ring clicked"
4"Aurora carried the glass to"
5"The green neon outside cast"
6"Rain slicked the Soho pavement"
7"A bus dragged red light"
8"Silas set the tumbler on"
9"Mr Price raised two fingers"
10"Aurora reached for the tea"
11"The front door opened before"
12"Rain blew over the threshold."
13"A man stepped in with"
14"His coat fitted too well"
15"Water jewelled the shoulders."
16"He had cropped his once-long"
17"Aurora gripped the towel."
18"The man shut the door."
19"His gaze travelled across the"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences231
matches(empty)
ratio0
97.51% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"By half eleven, only three regulars remained beneath the old maps and black-and-white photographs: a cabbie asleep over a tonic, two women sharing chips at the …"
1"A man stepped in with one hand on the door, pausing beneath the green sign as if he had expected somewhere else to appear when he pushed."
2"Aurora saw Mrs Rees behind the betting-shop counter, silver hoops brushing her neck, slipping chocolate bars into school bags while pretending to check receipts…"
3"The polished man, the security professional, the father who knew which purple zip held the forgotten item—all of him narrowed around that fist."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Daniel approached, each step bringing another fact into focus"
1"He unlocked, the beach photograph glowing between them"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences325
tagDensity0.015
leniency0.031
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.012
82.9462%