Run: 2026-07-09-01KX4015TE4D14QNTMC19PW7W9

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Duration:
27.4s
Cost:
$0.043415
Provider:
OpenAI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone burned against Aurora’s breastbone as she shoved through a curtain of thorny bramble. “Fine,” she muttered, catching the silver chain before it sawed into her neck. “Subtle. That’s what we’re doing.” A branch hooked her coat sleeve. She tore free, leaving a strip of black fabric fluttering from the thorns, then stepped into the clearing beyond. The Fae Grove had no business being there. Richmond Park held deer, dog walkers, cyclists with too much expensive equipment, and broad open stretches where London seemed to loosen its grip for a while. It did not hold a ring of ancient oak standing stones half swallowed by roots. It did not hold grass that shone like wet silk beneath a sky with no moon. It certainly did not hold wildflowers blooming in the dark, their white faces tilted towards Aurora as if they recognised her. She stopped between two stones. The brambles behind her knitted shut. Aurora turned. The hedge had grown thick and high, branches intertwined so tightly not even a fox could have slipped between them. No gap. No path. No sign of the narrow deer track she had followed from the park fence. “Brilliant.” Her voice travelled farther than it should have. It bounced from the standing stones and returned in a faint, delayed echo. Brilliant. The second word had not come from her mouth. Aurora held still. The Heartstone throbbed once, a small fierce beat against her skin. Its crimson glow seeped through the opening of her coat, staining her scarf red. She had received the pendant in an unmarked parcel three weeks ago. No letter. No sender. Only a deep crimson stone on a silver chain and a card bearing six words in a neat, old-fashioned hand. WHEN IT WARMS, DO NOT BE ALONE. She had laughed when she read it. Then she had spent two sleepless nights with the pendant in a drawer, convinced she could feel its heat through the wood. Tonight it had begun to pulse while she carried a bag of crispy duck pancakes up a stairwell in Putney. By the time she got back to Golden Empress, it had grown hot enough to leave a red welt on her chest. Yu-Fei Cheung had taken one look at her face, one look at the glow beneath her shirt, and pressed a takeaway container of sesame balls into her hands. “Go where it wants,” he had told her. “But don’t go hungry. Spirits love an empty stomach.” “You say that about everything.” “Because everything gets worse when you’re hungry.” Then he had sent her away before she could ask why he knew the pendant mattered. Aurora touched the crescent scar on her left wrist, rubbing the pale mark with her thumb. A habit. A bad one. Her father used to notice it whenever she lied about being all right. The grass shifted near the closest standing stone. Not bent. Shifted. The blades leaned aside in a neat line, as though something invisible had crossed them. Aurora’s hand slipped into her coat pocket and closed around her keys. Her keyring held a small metal bottle opener shaped like a cat. Not a weapon, unless the attacker had a stubborn beer cap. “Hello?” Nothing answered. A bell chimed somewhere beyond the stones. One clear note. Aurora looked up. The sound came from above, yet no tower rose over the grove. Only black branches tangled against a dim violet sky. Stars pricked the gaps between leaves, too numerous and too close. One of them moved. It drifted from one branch gap to another, then vanished behind the oak canopy. Her stomach clenched. Not a star. She began to walk. The ring of stones enclosed a clearing no wider than a tennis court. She could see every landmark at a glance: the slab of slate near the centre, the white flowers at the edge, the crooked stone that resembled a kneeling person. She counted twelve standing stones as she passed. At thirteen, she stopped. The new stone stood beside the kneeling one. It was narrow, grey, and wet-looking. Moss crawled up one side. It had not been there when she entered. Aurora knew it. She had noticed the gap because a patch of blue flowers grew there, bright as her own eyes in the pendant’s glow. The flowers had vanished. “Right.” She forced air through her nose. “I’m not doing this.” Her phone lay in her other pocket. She pulled it out. No service. No emergency call icon. The screen flickered across a row of symbols she did not recognise, then went blank. Aurora tapped the side button. Nothing. A child laughed. It came from behind the thirteenth stone. Aurora spun around so sharply her heel skidded in the grass. “Who’s there?” The laugh came again. Not quite laughter, not on the second hearing. A high series of clicks, like teeth tapping together. She stared at the stone. The pendant’s heat swelled. It felt as if someone had pressed a lit cigarette to her sternum. Behind the stone, something small moved. Aurora saw a hand first. Pale fingers curled around the edge of the monolith. The skin looked soft, almost translucent. Each finger bent at one knuckle too many. She did not breathe. The hand withdrew. “Don’t,” a voice said. Aurora’s shoulders locked. The voice came from the bramble wall behind her. A woman’s voice, low and roughened by panic. “Don’t turn around.” Aurora did not turn. The clearing had gone silent. No bell. No clicking. No faint skitter of grass. She stared at the thirteenth stone. “Who are you?” “You came through the wrong way.” “That clears up loads.” “Keep your eyes on the stones.” Aurora’s jaw tightened. “You’re asking a stranger in a haunted shrubbery to follow instructions without explanation. You’ll need a stronger pitch.” A breath shuddered through the brambles. “I’m not a stranger.” The reply landed hard. Aurora searched her memory for the voice. She knew hundreds of voices, names attached to door buzzers and flat doors, tired office workers, drunk students, elderly regulars at Silas’ bar. This one scratched at something older. Something from before London. “Laila.” Aurora flinched. No one had called her that in years. The voice behind her made a broken sound. It might have been a sob. It might have been a laugh. “Don’t let it hear that name.” The grass began to whisper. Aurora looked down. The blades around her boots rubbed against one another though no wind touched them. They formed circles, each turning in the opposite direction. The white flowers at the clearing’s edge bowed low. Their stems stretched, thin and green, dragging petals across the earth. A whisper rose from them. Laila. Her name had always been Aurora, except for one feverish summer when she was eight and had insisted she belonged to some other family, somewhere beyond the hill behind her grandparents’ house. Jennifer Carter had called it a phase. Brendan had called it an overactive imagination. Only Eva had believed her. “You’re Eva?” Aurora asked. “Don’t look.” “Are you Eva?” The thirteenth stone cracked. A dark line split its face from top to bottom. Dust trickled into the grass. Within the split, an eye opened. It had no lid. A smooth black orb, glossy as oil, stared at Aurora. Her body screamed at her to run. Her mind counted exits. The bramble wall. The gaps between stones. The slate in the centre. The narrow dark opening in the thirteenth stone, now widening with a groan like old timber. A portal, she thought. The Heartstone answered with a savage pulse. The eye fixed on the pendant’s glow. Then every flower spoke at once. “She brought it back.” Aurora’s fingers closed around the pendant. Heat flared through her palm. The crimson stone lit the clearing from below, throwing the standing stones into long warped shadows. The shadow of the thirteenth stone did not point away from it. It stretched towards Aurora. She jumped aside as the darkness whipped across the grass. It struck where she had stood, leaving a black mark that smoked and curled. The scent reached her a second later, rotten apples and cold iron. “Run left!” Eva’s voice tore from the brambles. “Third stone, then the gap.” Aurora ran. The grass grabbed at her ankles. Not roots, grass, each blade coiling around her boots in wet green handfuls. She kicked free and hit the first stone with her shoulder. Pain flashed down her arm. Behind her, the thing within the thirteenth stone scraped its way through the split. Stone grated against something softer. Aurora did not look. First stone. Second. At the third, she saw no gap. Two monoliths stood shoulder to shoulder, their oak-grey faces pressed tight together. Ancient roots bulged beneath them like knotted veins. “There’s no gap!” “It lies!” “Useful bloody distinction!” The whispering flowers broke into shrieks. Aurora grabbed the nearest stone and shoved. It did not move. Of course it did not. It probably weighed several tonnes and had outlived most of Britain’s bad decisions. The Heartstone seared her hand. She pressed it against the stone. Crimson light flooded the crack between the monoliths. The stones groaned apart by inches. Roots snapped below, thick and pale. A gust poured through the opening, hard enough to sting her eyes. It smelled wrong, sweet and metallic, like honey left in a tin of nails. Aurora turned sideways and forced herself into the gap. Something caught her coat. She screamed and hauled forward. The fabric tightened across her throat. A pale hand clutched the hood, its extra joints folding and unfolding as it pulled. Aurora jammed the cat-shaped bottle opener between two of its fingers. The hand recoiled. She stumbled through the opening, crashed onto rough earth, and rolled downhill through dead leaves. The grove vanished behind her. Aurora came up on one knee beside a park path, lungs tearing, hair in her face. Her phone screen flashed alive in her hand. Three missed calls from Yu-Fei. A dozen messages from Eva, all sent within the past minute. WHERE ARE YOU? DON’T GO TO RICHMOND. RORY, ANSWER ME. The final message appeared as she watched. IT FOUND THE GROVE FIRST. A wet clicking sounded from the other side of the hedge. Then a pale hand pushed slowly through the brambles.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Her name had always [always]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.067
91.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"sharply"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count2
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
highlights
0"silk"
1"echo"
2"throbbed"
3"could feel"
4"pulse"
5"stomach"
6"flickered"
7"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences198
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences198
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences222
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1721
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1599
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.75
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Aurora28
Fae1
Grove1
Park1
London2
Putney1
Golden1
Empress1
Cheung1
Jennifer1
Carter1
Eva3
Britain1
Yu-Fei2
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Cheung"
3"Jennifer"
4"Carter"
5"Eva"
6"Britain"
7"Yu-Fei"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Park"
3"London"
4"Putney"
5"Golden"
globalScore0.624
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences117
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"Not quite laughter, not on the second hearing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1721
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences222
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs130
mean13.24
std14.78
cv1.116
sampleLengths
015
118
225
38
478
55
66
740
81
921
101
119
123
1325
1436
157
1629
1770
1817
195
207
2116
2234
238
243
2515
2635
271
282
297
303
3153
323
333
344
3550
364
378
3844
394
4011
4111
4221
436
443
457
4611
472
4821
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences198
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs257
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences222
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount942
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"neat, old-fashioned hand."
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03397027600849257
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0074309978768577496
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences222
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences222
mean7.75
std5.61
cv0.724
sampleLengths
015
113
25
36
419
58
626
715
816
921
105
116
122
1320
142
152
1614
171
188
1913
201
219
223
2311
2414
2512
262
272
2820
297
307
3122
3220
3322
3428
358
369
375
387
3916
4016
412
423
4313
448
452
461
4715
4812
4912
42.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.2972972972972973
totalSentences222
uniqueOpeners66
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences178
matches
0"Only a deep crimson stone"
1"Then she had spent two"
2"Then he had sent her"
3"Only black branches tangled against"
4"Only Eva had believed her."
5"Then every flower spoke at"
6"Of course it did not."
7"Then a pale hand pushed"
ratio0.045
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences178
matches
0"she muttered, catching the silver"
1"She tore free, leaving a"
2"It did not hold a"
3"It did not hold grass"
4"It certainly did not hold"
5"She stopped between two stones."
6"Her voice travelled farther than"
7"It bounced from the standing"
8"Its crimson glow seeped through"
9"She had received the pendant"
10"She had laughed when she"
11"he had told her"
12"Her father used to notice"
13"Her keyring held a small"
14"It drifted from one branch"
15"Her stomach clenched."
16"She began to walk."
17"She could see every landmark"
18"She counted twelve standing stones"
19"It was narrow, grey, and"
ratio0.287
47.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount147
totalSentences178
matches
0"The Heartstone burned against Aurora’s"
1"she muttered, catching the silver"
2"A branch hooked her coat"
3"She tore free, leaving a"
4"The Fae Grove had no"
5"Richmond Park held deer, dog"
6"It did not hold a"
7"It did not hold grass"
8"It certainly did not hold"
9"She stopped between two stones."
10"The brambles behind her knitted"
11"The hedge had grown thick"
12"Her voice travelled farther than"
13"It bounced from the standing"
14"The second word had not"
15"Aurora held still."
16"The Heartstone throbbed once, a"
17"Its crimson glow seeped through"
18"She had received the pendant"
19"She had laughed when she"
ratio0.826
28.09% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences178
matches
0"By the time she got"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"It certainly did not hold wildflowers blooming in the dark, their white faces tilted towards Aurora as if they recognised her."
1"The blades leaned aside in a neat line, as though something invisible had crossed them."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.067
90.6946%