Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40237W0VP6TFQN9G89S1ZK

Run Details

Duration:
31.0s
Cost:
$0.040340
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone woke against Aurora’s sternum before the stones appeared. It thudded beneath her shirt, not like a pulse but like a fist knocking from the other side of a locked door. Warmth soaked through the fabric. She stopped beside the last of Richmond Park’s oaks and caught the silver chain in one hand. Nyx flowed out of the shadow beneath a bent root. Their tall outline gathered itself beside her, violet eyes hovering in a face that kept refusing shape. “Your little red stone had poor manners,” they whispered. “It announced us.” “Better than it announcing a demon after it’s bitten my head off.” Isolde stood between two standing stones ahead, her silver hair trailing down the back of her dark coat. The ancient oak blocks rose taller than any of the park’s trees, their surfaces furred with pale lichen and threads of ivy. No path led through them. Beyond, only bracken and moonlit grass waited. Yet the air inside their gap rippled. Aurora watched the space bend. Colours leaked from it: amber, gold, wine-red. The scent followed, rich enough to taste—roasted pears, burnt sugar, crushed herbs, meat glazed with something sharp and sweet. Her stomach clenched despite the fear tightening every muscle in her body. Isolde did not look back. “Dymas had opened its mouth,” she said. “Stand where it cannot swallow you alone.” Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade. The moonsilver dagger chilled her palm so fast her fingers ached. Its leaf-shaped edge caught the moonlight, then drank it. A thin blue gleam ran along the metal. “I thought this was a portal,” Aurora muttered. “Doors belonged to sensible worlds.” Nyx tilted their head towards the trembling gap. “The Veil had worn thin here. It bore the taste of Hel.” “Comforting.” “You had asked for honesty.” “I’d asked where the missing deliveries went.” “The answers often came dressed differently from the questions.” Aurora checked the strap of her leather satchel. Inside lay a torch, a first-aid kit, two bottles of water, a folding knife, a bag of salt, and the restaurant invoice that had brought them here. Three orders from the Golden Empress had vanished over six weeks: impossible quantities of saffron, venison, black garlic, and jars of pickled plum. Yu-Fei had cursed the thieves, then gone quiet when Aurora found the scorch-marked tracks behind the restaurant. The tracks had ended at the standing stones. Isolde raised one pale hand. Her fingers passed through the shimmer. The air stretched around her wrist like heated wax, then snapped back. “The road held,” she murmured. “For the moment.” Aurora swallowed. “Do we know what’s on the other side?” “Dymas.” “That wasn’t what I meant.” Isolde’s lavender eyes rested on her. “Hungry people. Hungry things. Gardens that grew teeth when neglected. Kitchens where cooks served princes and princes served appetites.” Nyx’s shadow rippled across the grass. “Belphegor ruled there.” Aurora looked at the portal again. The warm light painted the oak stones in colours of old blood. “And we’re walking into his realm because somebody stole deliveries from a Chinese restaurant in Soho.” “Your world connected itself to this one,” Nyx whispered. “We followed the stitch.” Isolde stepped through. Her body bent with the opening, silver hair becoming a bright thread in amber water. Then she vanished. Aurora’s grip tightened on the dagger. “Right,” she said. “No pressure.” Nyx extended one long, shadow-dark hand. “I had no hand to hold when I crossed between worlds.” Aurora stared at it. “That was almost sentimental.” “It had been a warning.” She ignored the hand and stepped into the gap. Cold hit first. Not winter cold. This cold carried weight. It pressed against her teeth, slipped beneath her eyelids, curled around the small scar on her left wrist. For one breath she had no body, only a memory of one. Cardiff rain. Her mother’s hands combing knots from her hair. Evan’s voice through a locked door. The smell of frying oil from Golden Empress. All of it flew apart in strips. Then her boots struck stone. Aurora lurched forward. Gravel shifted beneath her soles. She braced one hand on the ground and stared at her fingers. The earth was black glass. It lay cracked in uneven plates, reflecting a sky the colour of honey held to a flame. Thick clouds moved above it, low and dense, their undersides glowing amber. Something enormous passed behind them. Its outline had wings, though the wingbeats made no sound. Aurora rose slowly. The standing stones waited behind her, but they had changed. Their oaken faces had become pillars of smooth, dark basalt, carved with open mouths. Each mouth held rows of tiny ivory teeth. Between the pillars stretched the same rippling doorway, now no wider than a wardrobe. Nyx emerged through it in a spill of darkness. The blackness at their feet recoiled from the glassy ground, as if even shadow had found the place hostile. Isolde stood several yards away beside a shallow stream. The water ran uphill across a slope of gleaming black stone, carrying floating blossoms shaped like tiny human hands. Each blossom opened and closed as it passed. Aurora stared. “Those are flowers?” “Nothing demanded you eat one,” Isolde replied. “I hadn’t planned on it.” A bell rang somewhere far off. The note rolled through the landscape, deep and metallic. Hills answered it. Not with echoes, but with bells of their own. One after another, dozens sounded across the distance, until the ground trembled beneath Aurora’s boots. She turned. A valley spread below them. Vineyards covered its slopes in neat, impossible rows. The vines bore grapes in every shade she had seen—purple, green, black, red—and colours she had no name for. Some clusters shone like wet opals. Others held small lights beneath their skins. Between the vineyards, orchards climbed terraces cut into the earth. Pears the size of kettles hung from silver-leafed trees. Plums bled dark juice before any hand touched them. A grove of pale trees bore fruit that looked like sleeping hearts. Beyond the fields, a city rose around a massive palace of yellow stone. Steam billowed from a thousand chimneys. Copper domes glinted in the amber light. Bridges crossed canals filled with wine-coloured water. Towers leaned over the streets, their balconies crowded with hanging herbs and cages of singing birds. The palace sat at the city’s centre like a feast laid out for a giant. Its roof spread in layered terraces, and each terrace held long tables crowded with candles. Aurora forgot to breathe. “That’s Dymas,” Nyx whispered. A gust crossed the ridge. It carried laughter from the city below. Knives striking plates. Music played on strings that twanged too low to be human instruments. Then another sound rode beneath it: a wet chewing, steady as rain. Aurora looked down at the Heartstone. The crimson gem glowed through her shirt. “Who gave me this?” Isolde’s mouth tightened. “Someone who wanted your road to stay lit.” “That was not an answer.” “It was the answer I possessed.” Nyx drifted closer to the uphill stream. One of the hand-flowers brushed their ankle. The pale petals curled around the edge of their shadow, then shrivelled into brown scraps. “Do not drink the water,” Nyx said. Aurora crouched near it without touching. The current carried more than flowers. A silver spoon floated by, followed by a child’s blue shoe, a gold ring, and what appeared to be a polished human tooth. “Was that on your list of things not to do?” “Now it was.” They followed a narrow road down from the ridge. The path had been paved with flat bones, each one broad as a paving slab and polished white by countless feet. Aurora kept her gaze ahead after she noticed shapes beneath the smooth surfaces: knuckles, ribs, the curve of a skull. The vines crowded both sides of the road. Leaves brushed her shoulders. Their undersides had fine dark veins that flexed when she passed. A grape burst beside her ear. Juice splattered across her cheek, warm and thick. The smell flooded her nose—red wine, cinnamon, and something rotting in a closed cupboard. Aurora wiped it away with the back of her hand. “Not grapes,” she said. “No,” Isolde replied. The cluster above them had split open. Inside each translucent fruit, a tiny eye blinked. Aurora quickened her pace. Nyx glided beside her, their edges breaking into thin tendrils whenever the road crossed patches of bright amber light. “This place wanted us to feed,” they whispered. “It would offer itself until it learned what we lacked.” “Brilliant. I lacked about eight hours of sleep and a normal job.” A low chuckle drifted from the vines. Aurora stopped. The laughter came again, this time in her own voice. “I lacked about eight hours of sleep,” it mimicked from somewhere among the leaves. “And a normal job.” She lifted the Fae blade. The vines drew back. Hundreds of leaves turned at once, exposing their veined undersides. The eyes in the grapes shut. “Good,” Aurora breathed. “We understood each other.” At the next bend, they found a cart overturned in a ditch. One wheel still spun. It creaked with a sound like a mouse caught in a trap. Crates had broken open across the road, spilling jars stamped with red wax seals. Aurora recognised the labels at once: GOLDEN EMPRESS, SOHO, LONDON. Her stomach sank. She picked up one jar. Its glass had cracked, and strips of black garlic lay scattered across the bone road. Ants the size of walnuts swarmed over them, their bodies glossy gold. “Yu-Fei’s stock,” Aurora said. “Not all of it,” Nyx replied. A shape moved beneath the cart. Aurora raised the dagger, but Isolde caught her wrist. Her touch felt cool and dry. “Look before you cut.” A young man crawled from the ditch. He wore a chef’s jacket stained with grease and wine. One sleeve had been torn away. His forearm bore a brand: a silver platter ringed by flames. He looked human until he lifted his face. His pupils had narrowed into black slits, and his teeth had sharpened to small points. He saw Aurora’s blade and flinched. “Don’t send me back,” he rasped. “I brought the salt. I brought every damned jar. Tell him I did.” Aurora lowered the knife by an inch. “Who?” The man’s gaze slid past her towards the distant palace. His lips peeled back from his teeth. “The prince ate the last cook who asked that.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.315
leniency0.63
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1746
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1746
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count2
3
word"chilled"
count1
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"lurched"
count1
7
word"gleaming"
count1
8
word"echoes"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
10
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"stomach"
3"chilled"
4"comforting"
5"weight"
6"lurched"
7"gleaming"
8"echoes"
9"trembled"
10"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach sank"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences168
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences205
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1742
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1431
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Aurora27
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde10
Fae-forged1
Nyx11
Golden2
Empress2
Fae2
One4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Empress"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"One"
globalScore0.557
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences116
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like sleeping hearts"
85.19% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.148
wordCount1742
matches
0"not like a pulse but like a fist knocking from the other side of a locked door"
1"Not with echoes, but with bells of their own"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences205
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs116
mean15.02
std16.03
cv1.067
sampleLengths
010
144
227
312
412
552
67
743
85
914
1033
118
125
138
1412
151
165
177
189
1975
208
2123
228
232
248
251
265
276
2819
296
303
3118
3216
3313
343
3518
366
375
386
3911
404
414
425
439
443
4568
465
4720
485
4944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences168
matches
0"been paved"
1"been torn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs245
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences205
ratio0.015
matches
0"The scent followed, rich enough to taste—roasted pears, burnt sugar, crushed herbs, meat glazed with something sharp and sweet."
1"The vines bore grapes in every shade she had seen—purple, green, black, red—and colours she had no name for."
2"The smell flooded her nose—red wine, cinnamon, and something rotting in a closed cupboard."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1445
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.023529411764705882
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0020761245674740486
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences205
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences205
mean8.5
std5
cv0.588
sampleLengths
010
122
25
317
410
517
69
73
812
918
1022
115
127
137
145
157
1619
1712
185
197
207
215
2211
239
248
258
265
278
2812
291
305
317
329
338
3427
3523
3617
378
385
396
4012
415
423
432
448
451
465
476
4819
496
62.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3804878048780488
totalSentences205
uniqueOpeners78
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences147
matches
0"Then she vanished."
1"Then her boots struck stone."
2"Then another sound rode beneath"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences147
matches
0"It thudded beneath her shirt,"
1"She stopped beside the last"
2"Their tall outline gathered itself"
3"Her stomach clenched despite the"
4"Its leaf-shaped edge caught the"
5"Her fingers passed through the"
6"Her body bent with the"
7"She ignored the hand and"
8"It pressed against her teeth,"
9"Her mother’s hands combing knots"
10"She braced one hand on"
11"It lay cracked in uneven"
12"Its outline had wings, though"
13"Their oaken faces had become"
14"Its roof spread in layered"
15"It carried laughter from the"
16"They followed a narrow road"
17"Their undersides had fine dark"
18"it mimicked from somewhere among"
19"She lifted the Fae blade."
ratio0.211
41.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences147
matches
0"The Heartstone woke against Aurora’s"
1"It thudded beneath her shirt,"
2"Warmth soaked through the fabric."
3"She stopped beside the last"
4"Nyx flowed out of the"
5"Their tall outline gathered itself"
6"Isolde stood between two standing"
7"The ancient oak blocks rose"
8"Aurora watched the space bend."
9"Colours leaked from it: amber,"
10"The scent followed, rich enough"
11"Her stomach clenched despite the"
12"Isolde did not look back."
13"Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade."
14"The moonsilver dagger chilled her"
15"Its leaf-shaped edge caught the"
16"A thin blue gleam ran"
17"Nyx tilted their head towards"
18"Aurora checked the strap of"
19"Yu-Fei had cursed the thieves,"
ratio0.837
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Their tall outline gathered itself beside her, violet eyes hovering in a face that kept refusing shape."
1"Inside lay a torch, a first-aid kit, two bottles of water, a folding knife, a bag of salt, and the restaurant invoice that had brought them here."
2"Their undersides had fine dark veins that flexed when she passed."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
20.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
5"they whispered (whisper)"
6"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0.467
effectiveRatio0.259
86.3640%