| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 80 | | tagDensity | 0.113 | | leniency | 0.225 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2141 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 67.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2141 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "roaring" | | 3 | "quickened" | | 4 | "footfall" | | 5 | "trembled" | | 6 | "affection" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 202 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 202 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 274 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2139 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.95% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 85 | | wordCount | 1730 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.08 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 15 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 7 | | Rory | 36 | | Fae | 1 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 15 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Evan | 2 | | English | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Evan" | | 5 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Fae" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" | | 4 | "English" |
| | globalScore | 0.46 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 136 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like that before it became a tool" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 274 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 190 | | mean | 11.26 | | std | 12.06 | | cv | 1.071 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 58 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 202 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 308 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 274 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "Beneath the sweetness lurked another smell—iron left in rain." | | 1 | "Broad shapes sailed between the branches—ships with silk hulls and swollen golden sails, each tethered to baskets overflowing with fruit." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 965 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "beneath pale, fist-sized pods" |
| | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.015544041450777202 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0010362694300518134 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 274 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 274 | | mean | 7.81 | | std | 5.01 | | cv | 0.642 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 61.19% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.38686131386861317 | | totalSentences | 274 | | uniqueOpeners | 106 | |
| 53.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "Then heat struck." | | 1 | "Only an arch made from" | | 2 | "Then the ground beneath the" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "Their fingers lost shape at" | | 1 | "She stepped through." | | 2 | "Her boot landed between two" | | 3 | "They stretched away through vineyards" | | 4 | "They hit the road without" | | 5 | "Its pulse had quickened." | | 6 | "Their edges stirred, although the" | | 7 | "They moved along the shell" | | 8 | "It travelled ahead instead, skipping" | | 9 | "Its seam split." | | 10 | "it asked in her mother’s" | | 11 | "She reached for the dagger." | | 12 | "She backed towards the road." | | 13 | "Their body broadened until it" | | 14 | "Their branches recoiled with a" | | 15 | "They left the orchard behind." | | 16 | "Its stolen voices followed for" | | 17 | "Their transparent bodies revealed pinpricks" | | 18 | "She held still." | | 19 | "Its fins brushed the air" |
| | ratio | 0.151 | |
| 59.46% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 149 | | totalSentences | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "The opening in the Veil" | | 1 | "Aurora stood ankle-deep in the" | | 2 | "Richmond Park showed through its" | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant warmed against" | | 4 | "Each pulse carried a second" | | 5 | "Nyx gathered beside the left-hand" | | 6 | "Violet eyes hovered within the" | | 7 | "Rory closed one hand around" | | 8 | "Isolde walked around Rory without" | | 9 | "Rory glanced from the Fae" | | 10 | "The dagger’s moonsilver hilt had" | | 11 | "Isolde’s pale lavender gaze rested" | | 12 | "Nyx extended one hand into" | | 13 | "Their fingers lost shape at" | | 14 | "The tear shrank by the" | | 15 | "Rory released the pendant and" | | 16 | "She stepped through." | | 17 | "The grove vanished beneath a" | | 18 | "Rory stumbled onto the pale" | | 19 | "Her boot landed between two" |
| | ratio | 0.801 | |
| 26.88% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "Even Evan remained, unwanted and" |
| | ratio | 0.005 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "One low bough sagged beneath pale, fist-sized pods that opened and closed as they breathed." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "it announced (announce)" | | 3 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "the attendant declared (declare)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 80 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |