Run: 2026-07-09-01KX402XJTZ16JZPZZNSV5DD2R

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Duration:
15.3s
Cost:
$0.018001
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back, and Aurora Carter opened the door with a kitchen knife hidden against her thigh. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing. He looked exactly as she remembered, which felt less like a reunion than an insult. Platinum hair slicked away from his face. Charcoal suit without a crease. One amber eye, one black, both fixed on her with the same infuriating patience. His ivory-handled cane rested beneath one gloved hand. Behind him, the curry house extractor fan groaned through the wall. Beneath that, somewhere in the flat, Ptolemy hissed. Lucien glanced at the knife. "Still hospitable, I see." "Still arriving without an invitation." "You opened the door." "I could close it." "That would be inconvenient." "To whom?" His mouth curved, though the smile never reached either eye. "To you." Aurora tightened her grip on the knife. The blade pressed coolly against her bare thigh. Lucien lifted his free hand. A thin line of blood ran from his palm to his cuff. "May I come inside?" "No." "Then I shall bleed on your doorstep." "Brick Lane has survived worse." "Not in a suit this expensive." She should have shut the door. Instead, she stared at the blood. He noticed. He always noticed everything. "Who did that?" "People with poor manners." "How many?" "Enough to make the evening tiresome." His gaze slid past her shoulder. Books covered the narrow hall table. Scrolls spilled from a cardboard box near the radiator. Eva's notes climbed the walls in overlapping layers, pinned with red thread and brass tacks. A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house had no business holding that much paper, but Eva had never respected the limits of architecture. Ptolemy stalked into view, tail puffed, and gave Lucien a low warning growl. "Even the cat remembers me," Lucien murmured. "Ptolemy remembers you stealing his salmon." "I borrowed it." "You ate it." "With gratitude." Aurora shifted the knife so the blade pointed at his throat. His eyes dropped to it, then rose again. "Are you going to let me in?" "Explain why you're here." "On the landing?" "Yes." "Your neighbours are listening." The door opposite opened a fraction. A painted eye appeared in the gap. Aurora did not look away from Lucien. "Mrs Patel can listen. She already thinks I work for the devil." Lucien's black eye sharpened. "Tonight, she may be correct." The words landed between them, stripped of his usual humour. Aurora felt the old instinct rise, swift and unwelcome. Assess the threat. Find the exit. Count the weapons. Never let Evan corner you again. Lucien had taught her those rules. He had also broken every one of them. She stepped back. "One minute." "How generous." "Bleed on my floor and I'll add it to the rent." Lucien entered without brushing against her. He smelled of rainless city streets, expensive soap, and the faint metallic tang of blood. The scent pulled an old memory from beneath her ribs, his mouth at her throat, his hand spread over her waist, his voice promising nothing he could not keep. She shut the door and threw the deadbolts home. When she turned, Lucien had crossed into the sitting room. He stood beside the armchair where she had once woken against his shoulder, his cane angled before him. Ptolemy crouched beneath the coffee table, eyes bright with suspicion. "Sit," she said. "I prefer standing." "That wasn't a request." "How familiar." The knife remained in her hand. Lucien looked at it, then at her face. "You cut your hair." "It grew." "Your sense of humour improved." "It had an excellent teacher." "That was not me." "No. You only taught me how to lie convincingly." The smile vanished. For three years, she had imagined this moment in dozens of variations. In most, she slapped him. In several, she kissed him. In one particularly satisfying version, she did both, then pushed him down the stairs. None had included his blood on her floor. Lucien removed his glove with his teeth and folded it into his pocket. The cut across his palm looked clean but deep. "Bandages are in the bathroom." "Still keeping them beneath the sink?" "You still remember?" "I remember everything about you." The flat seemed to contract around them. Aurora turned away first. She crossed to the tiny kitchen, opened the cupboard, and pulled out the first-aid box. The hinges squealed. She set it on the counter with a sharp snap. "Wash it." "Do you always issue commands to injured men?" "Only the ones who arrive at my home after midnight." "It's not midnight." "That is the detail you object to?" Lucien leaned his cane against the chair and followed her. He moved with a slight stiffness in his left leg, one he had never explained. The last time she had seen him, he had walked away from her in an underground station, leaving her with a broken promise and a charm burning black in her palm. She had thrown the charm into the Thames. She had watched it sink. "Your hand," she said. "Yes, my hand." "How did you get cut?" "Someone wanted to open me." "That sounds personal." "It was." Aurora opened the tap. Water struck porcelain. "Who?" "Malphora." The name stopped her. Lucien watched the change cross her face. She hated that he could still read her so easily. "Don't call me that." "I didn't." "You used the name." "I used the name they used." "Who are they?" He placed his palm beneath the stream. Blood diluted into pink ribbons, then vanished down the plughole. "People who found your address." Aurora turned off the tap. "Try again." "People who found your address and believe you possess something that belongs to them." "I don't possess anything." "That has never stopped anyone from believing otherwise." "Why come here?" He dried his hand with one of Eva's tea towels. Aurora snatched it from him before he could stain the embroidered lemons. "Because the people following me will arrive soon." "Then leave." "They're not following me any longer." A soft knock touched the flat door. Ptolemy bolted from beneath the table. Aurora froze. Lucien reached for his cane. Another knock. Three measured taps. Not Mrs Patel. Not the police. Not anyone who belonged outside a locked flat with three deadbolts. Aurora lifted the knife. "How many?" "Four." "You said they were following you." "They were." "You brought them here." "I brought myself here. They followed the scent." "The scent of your blood?" "The scent of what hunts you." The knock came again, harder. The wood shuddered in its frame. Aurora moved towards the door. Lucien caught her wrist. His fingers closed above the small crescent scar. Heat flashed through her, sharp enough to steal her breath. He had held her there before, in a different room, beneath a different set of lies. She looked down at his hand. He released her. "Don't open it." "That was the plan until you arrived." "You have a back window?" "Yes." "Where does it lead?" "An alley and a twelve-foot drop." "Excellent." "Your optimism remains offensive." "Your stubbornness remains attractive." The next impact rattled the deadbolts. Aurora stepped close enough to smell the iron on his skin. "Say one useful thing." Lucien's gaze dropped to her mouth. "The people outside aren't human." "That is useful." "They have orders to take you alive." "And you?" His face gave nothing away. "Are you here to save me?" "Do you require saving?" "Answer the question." The door groaned beneath another blow. Lucien reached inside his jacket and drew out a folded scrap of black paper. He held it between two fingers. Symbols glimmered across its surface, shifting like insects beneath glass. Aurora recognised the central mark. It matched the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. Her pulse stumbled. "What is that?" "The reason you were never Evan's first victim." She stared at him. Lucien stepped closer, his voice dropping to a murmur meant for her alone. "The reason he knew where to find you. The reason your parents kept secrets. The reason your childhood accident left a mark that never faded." The door split near the lock. A long, grey finger slid through the gap. Aurora grabbed Lucien's cane and pulled it free of his reach. The ivory handle twisted beneath her palm. A thin blade sprang from the shaft with a clean metallic whisper. Lucien's brows lifted. "You remember how to use it?" "You taught me." "I taught you to hold it." "Then watch closely." The finger hooked around the broken wood. Aurora drove the blade through it. Something shrieked on the other side, a raw sound that shook dust from the ceiling. Black fluid splattered the door. The finger withdrew, dragging the blade with it. A second hand punched through. Lucien seized Aurora around the waist and hauled her backwards. His body struck hers, hard and warm, his injured palm braced against her stomach. She felt the tremor in him, the effort he hid behind tailored clothes and elegant manners. "Kitchen window," he said. "You first." "I am not leaving you behind." "You did before." His grip tightened. The words reached him. She saw them in the slight flinch near his mouth. "I know." For one suspended second, the door held. The flat held. His body held hers against the edge of the counter, and the old hunger moved between them with teeth. Then the lock tore free. Lucien shoved her towards the kitchen. Aurora turned, caught his lapel, and kissed him. His surprise lasted one breath. Then his mouth opened beneath hers, and every unanswered question became heat. His hand rose to the back of her neck. The cane clattered across the floor. His kiss tasted of copper and expensive whisky, and he kissed her like a man who had spent three years starving beside a locked door. She bit his lower lip until he bled. He made a rough sound against her mouth. "That," she whispered, "was for leaving." The door burst inward. Ptolemy yowled. Aurora shoved Lucien towards the window and snatched up the cane. A shape unfolded through the ruined doorway, too tall for the hall, its limbs jointed in the wrong places. Four pale eyes fixed on her. Its mouth opened wider than any human jaw could manage. Lucien reached the window and tore the latch free. "Rory." She looked at him. He stood framed by the dark gap, one hand extended, blood dripping from the other. "Jump." The creature lunged. Aurora drove the concealed blade into its nearest eye, then ran for Lucien as its scream split the flat apart.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences112
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.089
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1767
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"coolly"
count1
highlights
0"coolly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1767
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"sense of"
count1
2
word"charm"
count2
3
word"porcelain"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"sense of"
2"charm"
3"porcelain"
4"measured"
5"pulse"
6"whisper"
7"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences156
matches
0"felt the tremor"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences156
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences263
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1767
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Beneath that, somewhere in the flat, Ptolemy hissed."
48.04% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1275
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.04
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora20
Carter1
Moreau1
Ptolemy5
Eva3
Lucien26
Evan1
Thames1
Mrs1
Patel1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Eva"
5"Lucien"
6"Evan"
7"Mrs"
8"Patel"
places
0"Thames"
globalScore0.48
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1767
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences263
matches
0"holding that much"
1"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs206
mean8.58
std10.19
cv1.188
sampleLengths
019
16
249
319
45
54
65
74
84
94
102
1110
122
1315
1417
154
161
177
185
196
2012
216
223
234
242
256
2660
2713
287
296
303
313
322
3311
348
357
364
373
381
394
4013
417
4212
434
445
4510
4624
476
488
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs226
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences263
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1279
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.029710711493354185
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003127443315089914
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences263
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences263
mean6.72
std4.77
cv0.71
sampleLengths
019
16
215
37
45
514
68
711
88
95
104
115
124
134
144
152
1610
172
187
198
205
2112
224
231
247
255
266
276
286
292
304
313
324
332
346
356
366
379
3815
3924
4013
417
426
433
443
452
4611
478
487
494
47.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3155893536121673
totalSentences263
uniqueOpeners83
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences147
matches
0"Instead, she stared at the"
1"Then the lock tore free."
2"Then his mouth opened beneath"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences147
matches
0"He looked exactly as she"
1"His ivory-handled cane rested beneath"
2"His mouth curved, though the"
3"She should have shut the"
4"He always noticed everything."
5"His gaze slid past her"
6"His eyes dropped to it,"
7"He had also broken every"
8"She stepped back."
9"He smelled of rainless city"
10"She shut the door and"
11"He stood beside the armchair"
12"She crossed to the tiny"
13"She set it on the"
14"He moved with a slight"
15"She had thrown the charm"
16"She had watched it sink."
17"She hated that he could"
18"He placed his palm beneath"
19"He dried his hand with"
ratio0.286
34.83% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount125
totalSentences147
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back,"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"He looked exactly as she"
3"Platinum hair slicked away from"
4"Charcoal suit without a crease."
5"His ivory-handled cane rested beneath"
6"Lucien glanced at the knife."
7"His mouth curved, though the"
8"Aurora tightened her grip on"
9"The blade pressed coolly against"
10"Lucien lifted his free hand."
11"A thin line of blood"
12"She should have shut the"
13"He always noticed everything."
14"His gaze slid past her"
15"Books covered the narrow hall"
16"Scrolls spilled from a cardboard"
17"Eva's notes climbed the walls"
18"A cramped one-bedroom flat above"
19"Ptolemy stalked into view, tail"
ratio0.85
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Not anyone who belonged outside a locked flat with three deadbolts."
1"His kiss tasted of copper and expensive whisky, and he kissed her like a man who had spent three years starving beside a locked door."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences112
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.089
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.036
88.3418%