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Run: 2026-07-09-01KX404M588E2JVKFDGQQ9HCXE
Run Details
Model:
GPT-5.6 Sol
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
46.6s
Cost:
$0.085145
Provider:
OpenAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
96.97%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
78.80%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
52.91%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
51.11%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
26.25%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
94.02%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
26.93%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
39.37%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
88.8786%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The third deadbolt slid back, and Aurora opened the door with a kitchen knife tucked against her forearm.
Lucien Moreau stood on Eva’s
landing, one gloved hand resting on his ivory-handled cane.
Blood soaked the left side
of his tailored charcoal suit. “You took your time.”
Aurora held the door at
the width of her shoulder. “You’re bleeding on the curry house’s carpet.” “Then invite me inside before the proprietor adds cleaning costs to my list of sins.” “You couldn’t afford it.” His amber eye warmed.
The black one swallowed the
landing light. “There you are.”
The words struck softer than
they had any right to.
Aurora tightened her grip on
the knife. Four months had passed since she had last seen him. Four months since a locked room beneath Soho, a bargain he had made without her consent, and a kiss that had tasted of blood and expensive whisky. He had ended it first, if a thing without a name could end.
She had made certain he
regretted the courtesy.
Now a dark stain crept
towards his waistband. “Who did that?” “Someone with poor manners and an excellent aim.” “You’re meant to dodge.” “I had a distraction.”
His gaze dropped to her
bare legs, then rose to the old university T-shirt hanging to mid-thigh.
Heat followed it, slow and
precise.
Lucien never stared like a
hungry man.
He looked like a collector
deciding where to display what already belonged to him.
Aurora angled the knife towards
the stairs. “Find a demon doctor.” “They ask intrusive questions.” “So do I.” “Yours are prettier.”
She started to shut the
door.
His cane jammed across the
threshold. The movement cost him.
His mouth tightened, and his
knuckles blanched beneath the glove.
A metallic scent cut through
the cardamom and hot oil rising from the curry house below. “Remove it, Lucien.” “I need Eva.” “She’s in Prague.” “Then I need her notes.” “No.” “Aurora.” “Still no.” Something struck the door at the bottom of the stairwell. Not a knock. A body. Lucien’s head turned. The silver wolf’s-head pin at his lapel caught the light as the outer door shuddered again. “How many?” “Three remained when I arrived.” “Arrived where?” “Here.” The frame downstairs splintered. Aurora seized his tie and hauled him inside. His shoulder clipped the jamb. He hissed through his teeth, but she gave him no apology. She kicked his cane clear, slammed the door, and drove all three deadbolts home. Ptolemy shot from beneath a tower of books and vanished into Eva’s bedroom. “Bathroom. Now.” “How commanding.” “Bleed on Eva’s grimoires and she’ll use your intestines as bookmarks.” “She has always lacked restraint.” Lucien retrieved his cane and crossed the cramped sitting room without leaning on it. Pride kept his spine straight, though each step left a red dot on the worn rug. Books covered the table, shelves, chairs and half the floor. Bundles of yellowed scrolls crowded the mantel. Eva’s research notes crawled across the walls in black ink, red thread linking names, sigils and photographs. Aurora reached the bathroom first and swept bottles from the sink. “Jacket off.”
He shut the door behind
them. The room shrank. It had never felt generous. With Lucien inside, it became a box lined with cracked white tiles, stale lavender soap and all the words Aurora had spent four months refusing to say.
He set the cane against
the bath. “Would you prefer dinner first?” “I’d prefer you unconscious.” “You used to object when I slept through the interesting parts.”
Her blade touched the knot
of his tie. “Another joke and I cut this off.” “The tie?” “Take your pick.”
His mouth curved, then flattened
when Aurora sliced through the
silk
.
She opened his shirt one
button at a time. Blood glued the fabric to his ribs. A black-fletched dart protruded below his left pectoral. Aurora stopped. The dart’s iron shaft carried tiny silver letters.
They crawled when she looked
straight at them. “That isn’t a bullet.” “Your legal education remains impeccable.” “That’s Avarosi.” His face gave her nothing. She lifted her eyes. “You brought demon hunters to Brick Lane.” “I brought them away from a school in Whitechapel.” “That doesn’t make this address less occupied.” “I did not intend to come here.” “But here you are.” “Indeed.” Below them, wood crashed. The stairwell door had surrendered. Aurora pulled open Eva’s medicine cabinet. Plasters, paracetamol, six glass vials marked in Latin, a silver scalpel, and a packet of chocolate buttons crowded the shelves. “You knew Eva was away.” “I know many things.” “You knew I was feeding Ptolemy.” “I knew one of her wards had transferred custodians.” Her hand paused over a vial. “You’ve watched the flat.” “I have watched every place you sleep.” The bathroom went still around them. Lucien removed his gloves finger by finger. Claws threatened beneath his neat human nails, dark crescents pressing against the skin. Whatever poisoned him had begun stripping away the disguise. Aurora took the silver scalpel. “That sounded romantic in your head, didn’t it?” “No. It sounded necessary.” “You lost the right.” “I lost several rights.” “You traded me to Belial.” “I traded his claim on your life for mine.” “You failed to mention that part.” “You had a knife at my throat.” “You said it was business.” “What would you have preferred? A declaration?” His voice stayed smooth, but a vein jumped beside his jaw. Aurora
remembered that room
beneath Soho. Lucien on his knees. Her blade under his chin. His hands loose at his sides while he told her she had mistaken appetite for
affection
. She pressed the scalpel beside the dart. His fingers closed around her wrist. The small crescent scar disappeared beneath his thumb. “No silver.” “You’ve got a better idea?” “Several. None suitable for this room.” “You’re half demon, not half comedian.” “I assure you, ma belle, there is nothing funny about what that blade will do once it touches my blood.” The old name landed between them. Aurora pulled her wrist free. “Don’t.” His gaze settled on her scar. “Very well, Miss Carter.” That felt worse. Footsteps climbed the stairs outside. Slow. Measured. More than one pair. Aurora opened the lowest cabinet and found a pair of brass tongs among Eva’s stranger medical supplies. “Hold still.” “I object to the premise.” “You came to me with a poisoned dart in your chest. That counts as consent to basic stupidity prevention.” “Your bedside manner has deteriorated.” “You haven’t seen my bedside manner.” “I remember it with painful clarity.” His shirt hung open. Blood
traced
the hard plane of his
stomach
and disappeared beneath his belt. Old scars crossed his skin, thin white lines and one broad burn that curled around his right side. Aurora had once mapped them with her fingertips in a room neither of them had mentioned again. She gripped the dart with the tongs. “On three.” “Your three or mine?” Aurora pulled. Lucien caught her waist as his knees buckled. The dart struck the sink with a sharp clink. Black blood flooded the wound, too thick and hot, carrying the scent of scorched oranges. His forehead dropped against her shoulder. For one dangerous breath, neither moved. His hand spanned the small of her back. Heat burned through the cotton of her shirt. His lips hovered beside the
pulse
in her neck, close enough to wake every memory she despised for surviving him. “You should sit.” “An excellent suggestion.” “You’re still standing.” “So are you.” “Lucien.” “Aurora.” Her name in his French accent had always felt less like a name than an offence committed with care. A floorboard creaked outside the flat. She pushed him onto the closed toilet lid and snatched a clean flannel. The black blood ate a brown hole through the cloth. “That seems bad.” “Your talent for understatement has matured.” The first deadbolt clicked. Aurora stared at the bathroom door. “No one touched it.” “Ward key.” “You said hunters.” “I said someone with excellent aim.” The second deadbolt turned. Lucien reached for his cane, but his hand missed. Aurora caught it first. The ivory handle felt warm. She twisted, exposing the slender blade hidden within the lacquered shaft. “You know how to use that?” “You taught me.” “I taught you to cheat.” “That’s why I learnt.” The third deadbolt groaned. Lucien stood. His skin had taken on a grey cast, and black veins threaded his chest. Still, he moved between Aurora and the door. She shoved his shoulder. “Don’t start.” “Start what?” “The noble sacrifice routine. It doesn’t suit the tailoring.” “Aurora, whoever enters that room cannot touch you.” “Excellent. You can explain that while I stab them.” “I mean they cannot touch you.” His fingers closed over the hand holding the blade. He lifted it until the point rested above his heart. “The bargain remains.” Cold slid beneath her ribs. “You said Belial’s claim had ended.” “I said he could not take you.” “What did you give him?” The front door opened. Lucien’s thumb stroked once across her knuckles. The small gesture stripped four months from the room. “My name.” A man’s voice drifted through the flat. “Lucien Moreau died in Soho.” Aurora recognised the accent. Educated Welsh, Cardiff softened by years in London. Impossible and intimate. Her grip failed. Lucien caught the blade before it hit the tiles. “No,” Aurora breathed. A book crashed in the sitting room. Ptolemy yowled from the bedroom. “Rory?” the man called. “Come out, love. I’ve travelled such a long way.” Evan. Lucien’s black eye widened until no white remained. “That is not your former lover.” The bathroom handle
began to
turn. Lucien drove Aurora behind him and drew the cane blade across his palm. Black blood sheeted over the silver. The door burst inward. Evan stood beyond it wearing the same smile he had worn before every apology, and something vast unfolded its wings inside his shadow.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
2
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
107
tagDensity
0.019
leniency
0.037
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
96.97%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1651
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
78.80%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1651
totalAiIsms
7
found
0
word
"silk"
count
1
1
word
"affection"
count
1
2
word
"footsteps"
count
1
3
word
"measured"
count
1
4
word
"traced"
count
1
5
word
"stomach"
count
1
6
word
"pulse"
count
1
highlights
0
"silk"
1
"affection"
2
"footsteps"
3
"measured"
4
"traced"
5
"stomach"
6
"pulse"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
135
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
135
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"started to"
1
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
240
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
27
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1651
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
12
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
52.91%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
54
wordCount
1133
uniqueNames
12
maxNameDensity
1.94
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora
22
Moreau
1
Eva
5
Soho
2
Lucien
14
Latin
1
French
1
Welsh
1
Cardiff
1
London
1
Evan
2
Blood
3
persons
0
"Aurora"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Eva"
3
"Lucien"
4
"Evan"
5
"Blood"
places
0
"Soho"
1
"Latin"
2
"Cardiff"
3
"London"
globalScore
0.529
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
93
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"looked like a collector deciding where to"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1651
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
240
matches
0
"remembered that room"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
185
mean
8.92
std
10.21
cv
1.144
sampleLengths
0
18
1
24
2
4
3
10
4
7
5
15
6
4
7
11
8
3
9
17
10
58
11
8
12
3
13
8
14
4
15
4
16
44
17
7
18
4
19
4
20
3
21
3
22
6
23
6
24
30
25
3
26
3
27
3
28
5
29
1
30
1
31
2
32
10
33
5
34
19
35
2
36
5
37
2
38
1
39
4
40
38
41
13
42
2
43
2
44
11
45
5
46
64
47
11
48
2
49
6
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
135
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
195
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
240
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1136
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
18
adverbRatio
0.01584507042253521
lyAdverbCount
0
lyAdverbRatio
0
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
240
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
240
mean
6.88
std
4.7
cv
0.684
sampleLengths
0
18
1
14
2
10
3
4
4
10
5
7
6
15
7
4
8
4
9
7
10
3
11
10
12
7
13
10
14
27
15
13
16
8
17
8
18
3
19
8
20
4
21
4
22
17
23
6
24
7
25
14
26
7
27
4
28
4
29
3
30
3
31
6
32
6
33
4
34
10
35
16
36
3
37
3
38
3
39
5
40
1
41
1
42
2
43
10
44
3
45
2
46
3
47
16
48
2
49
5
51.11%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.31666666666666665
totalSentences
240
uniqueOpeners
76
26.25%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
127
matches
0
"More than one pair."
ratio
0.008
94.02%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
40
totalSentences
127
matches
0
"His amber eye warmed."
1
"He had ended it first,"
2
"She had made certain he"
3
"His gaze dropped to her"
4
"He looked like a collector"
5
"She started to shut the"
6
"His cane jammed across the"
7
"His mouth tightened, and his"
8
"His shoulder clipped the jamb."
9
"He hissed through his teeth,"
10
"She kicked his cane clear,"
11
"He shut the door behind"
12
"It had never felt generous."
13
"He set the cane against"
14
"Her blade touched the knot"
15
"His mouth curved, then flattened"
16
"She opened his shirt one"
17
"They crawled when she looked"
18
"His face gave her nothing."
19
"She lifted her eyes."
ratio
0.315
26.93%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
110
totalSentences
127
matches
0
"The third deadbolt slid back,"
1
"Lucien Moreau stood on Eva’s"
2
"Blood soaked the left side"
3
"Aurora held the door at"
4
"His amber eye warmed."
5
"The black one swallowed the"
6
"The words struck softer than"
7
"Aurora tightened her grip on"
8
"He had ended it first,"
9
"She had made certain he"
10
"His gaze dropped to her"
11
"Heat followed it, slow and"
12
"Lucien never stared like a"
13
"He looked like a collector"
14
"Aurora angled the knife towards"
15
"She started to shut the"
16
"His cane jammed across the"
17
"The movement cost him."
18
"His mouth tightened, and his"
19
"A metallic scent cut through"
ratio
0.866
39.37%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
127
matches
0
"Now a dark stain crept"
ratio
0.008
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
42
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"Four months since a locked room beneath Soho, a bargain he had made without her consent, and a kiss that had tasted of blood and expensive whisky."
1
"Old scars crossed his skin, thin white lines and one broad burn that curled around his right side."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
2
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences
107
tagDensity
0.019
leniency
0.037
rawRatio
0.5
effectiveRatio
0.019
88.8786%