Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40536Y6QKA6KQMWZAESN0E

Run Details

Duration:
27.0s
Cost:
$0.034432
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora slid the third deadbolt free and opened the door with the chain still on. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway beneath the stairwell light, one gloved hand resting over the ivory head of his cane. Rain darkened the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair had come loose from its usual sleek order, one pale strand falling across his brow. Ptolemy sprang from the arm of the sofa and stalked towards the door, tail raised like a question mark. Aurora kept the chain in place. “Wrong flat.” Lucien’s amber eye held hers. The black one gave nothing away. “Bonsoir, Rory.” The name hit harder than it had any right to. She gripped the edge of the door until the wood pressed a pale groove into her palm. “You lost the privilege.” “I had hoped you might greet me with a knife. This felt colder.” “Give it time.” His mouth shifted, almost a smile, then the expression vanished when a pair of footsteps thudded up the stairs below. Lucien turned his head. The hallway light flickered once. The smell of wet brick and old cooking oil drifted up from the curry house. Aurora watched his hand tighten on the cane. “You’re hurt.” “No.” “That answer had more holes than your last apology.” “Let me in.” “No.” The footsteps stopped on the landing beneath them. A man coughed. Another voice muttered in a language Aurora did not know. Lucien stepped closer to the frame, lowering his voice. “They found me at the club.” “Your club?” “The one I used to own.” “Used to?” Aurora’s fingers eased from the door. “What happened?” “Someone decided my continued breathing offended them.” “That narrowed it down to half of London.” “Tonight, it narrowed further.” His gaze dropped to the chain. Not demanding. Not pleading. That made it worse. Lucien had always worn charm like another layer of tailoring. This version of him looked stripped of something expensive. Ptolemy pushed his striped head through the gap and sniffed at Lucien’s trouser leg. “Traitor,” Aurora muttered. The cat purred. Lucien looked down. “At least one resident remembered me fondly.” “Ptolemy liked anybody who smelled of blood and foreign cigarettes.” “An ugly habit. Both of them.” A sharp crack sounded from the stairwell. Not thunder. Not a door. Lucien moved before Aurora did. He planted one polished shoe against the door and shoved it closed. The chain snapped taut. Aurora stumbled back as the wood slammed against its frame. “What the hell?” “Down.” His cane came apart beneath his hands. The ivory handle twisted, metal whispered, and a thin blade flashed free. The first shot punched through the door at shoulder height. Splinters sprayed across the hall. Ptolemy bolted beneath the kitchen table. Aurora dropped to the floor behind the sofa. Her heart kicked against her ribs. Lucien crouched beside the door, blade angled low, rainwater dripping from his jaw. “You brought a gunfight to Eva’s flat?” “I had no idea they possessed firearms.” “That comforted me beyond measure.” Another shot tore through the door. The chain groaned. Lucien glanced at her. “The window.” “Fire escape leads to the alley.” “Excellent.” “Excellent? They’re shooting at us.” “They are shooting at me.” “That distinction had never improved a situation.” Aurora crawled across the rug, dragging herself past towers of books and a stack of Eva’s research notes. Inked symbols ran across the top page in crimson marker. Something on the paper pulsed blue, then faded. Behind her, Lucien rose in one clean motion. The door bucked inward. The top deadbolt held. The middle lock burst free, scattering screws across the floorboards. A hand reached through the gap. Lucien drove the blade down. The man on the other side screamed. The hand vanished. Blood smeared the pale wood. Aurora reached the window and shoved aside the heavy curtain. Brick Lane glowed below in puddled strips of red and gold. Steam climbed from vents. A delivery scooter whined past the alley mouth. The sash refused to move. “Of course,” she breathed. “Of course Eva painted it shut.” Lucien crossed the room with a limp she had not noticed before. His left hand pressed against his ribs. Blood had soaked through his shirt beneath the open line of his jacket. Aurora stared at it. “You were going to mention that when?” “When you finished refusing me entrance.” “You got shot.” “Grazed.” “You bled on my doormat.” “A dreadful crime.” The door crashed again. A dark shape pushed through the widening gap. Aurora seized a brass candleholder from the windowsill and swung it with both hands. It caught the intruder across the knuckles. He swore and jerked back. Lucien looked at her, startled. “Don’t stand there looking pretty. Help me with the window.” His face sharpened into something familiar. “As you command.” They forced the sash together. Aurora wedged the candleholder beneath the frame while Lucien gripped the swollen wood. His shoulder strained under the wet suit jacket. His breath caught once, low and tight. “On three,” Aurora whispered. “You always did choose violence over patience.” “One.” A fist hit the door. “Two.” Lucien looked at her. Rain had left tiny silver beads in his lashes. The amber of one eye looked almost molten in the flat’s yellow light; the other held the deep, bottomless black she had spent months refusing to remember. “Three.” The window sprang up. Cold air swept through the room. Aurora climbed onto the sill. The fire escape rattled outside, its metal steps slick with rain. Lucien caught her wrist. His thumb landed over the crescent scar on her left wrist. He froze. Aurora did not pull away. Neither did he. “You still wore it,” he murmured. “It was a scar, Lucien. Not jewellery.” “I know.” His fingers remained around her wrist. Warm. Careful. A year ago, that touch had made her forget every sensible thought in her head. Then he had vanished without a word, leaving only a sealed envelope under Silas’s bar door and enough silence to rot every good memory between them. The door splintered. Aurora yanked her hand free and climbed out onto the fire escape. “Move.” Lucien followed. He pulled the window down behind them, though it could not have stopped anyone for long. The fire escape shuddered under their weight. Aurora gripped the rail and looked down three storeys at the black mouth of the alley. A man burst through the damaged flat door. His skin had the waxy grey cast of a corpse left too long in water. Thin red marks branched from his throat to his cheekbones. He lifted a pistol fitted with a dull brass cylinder. Lucien swore in French. “What?” “Not bullets.” The man fired. The shot struck the windowpane. Glass exploded outward in a glittering sheet. Where the projectile hit the wall, the plaster hissed and blackened, bubbling like meat in a pan. Aurora grabbed Lucien’s sleeve and hauled him down the steps. “You could have led with that.” “I felt the gunfire communicated urgency.” They descended fast. Lucien’s cane struck each metal tread with a clipped, uneven rhythm. At the second landing, his knee buckled. Aurora caught him under the arm. He looked at her hand, then at her face. “Rory.” “Don’t make it a thing.” “You were meant to hate me.” “I did. I had a whole schedule for it. Mondays, Wednesdays, whenever somebody ordered a martini with a stupid French name.” “I did not teach you that drink.” “You corrected me six times.” “Seven. You muddled the mint.” A laugh escaped her before she could stop it. It came out ragged, wrong for the alley and the blood and the thing with the pistol above them. Lucien stared at her. The laughter died. His voice lowered. “I thought about you every day.” Aurora shifted his arm more firmly across her shoulders and started down again. “You gave up the right to say pretty things when you left me alone in a burning warehouse.” “I left you with Silas.” “You left me with a note.” “It was not a note.” “It fit in an envelope.” “It contained details.” “It contained lies.” Lucien stopped on the landing. Above them, the flat door groaned open. The dead thing’s footsteps scraped across the room. Rain drummed against the iron rails. Lucien leaned close enough that Aurora could smell smoke beneath the rain, and the sharp clean scent of his cologne, unchanged and unfairly familiar. “I did lie,” he said. “I told you I left because the work became dangerous.” “It had become dangerous months before.” “Yes.” “Then why?” His jaw tightened. The black eye seemed to swallow the light around it. “Because I loved you badly.” Aurora went still. A scooter horn shrieked on Brick Lane. Somewhere below, a kitchen extractor fan rattled. Ptolemy yowled from the flat above, furious at the broken window and all the strangers. Lucien’s hand slipped from her shoulder to the rail. Blood darkened his side. Aurora looked at the wound, then up at him. “That was your grand explanation?” “No.” His mouth pulled tight. “It was the only true one.” The footsteps reached the fire escape above them.
created_at"2026-07-09T17:52:34.54Z" 7/9/2026, 5:52:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.088
leniency0.175
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"footsteps"
count4
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"charm"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"flickered"
2"charm"
3"pulsed"
4"familiar"
5"silence"
6"weight"
7"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences145
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences218
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1527
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
41.30% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1150
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.17
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Aurora25
Lucien25
Eva1
Lane2
Silas1
French1
Brick2
Rain3
Ptolemy4
Blood3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Silas"
5"Rain"
6"Ptolemy"
7"Blood"
places
0"Lane"
1"French"
2"Brick"
globalScore0.413
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1527
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences218
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs142
mean10.75
std10.7
cv0.995
sampleLengths
015
148
219
36
42
511
62
727
84
913
103
1144
128
132
141
159
163
171
1830
196
202
216
2210
237
248
254
2633
2714
283
293
3010
3110
326
3312
3431
353
361
3719
3815
396
4027
417
427
435
449
456
466
471
485
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs200
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences218
ratio0.005
matches
0"The amber of one eye looked almost molten in the flat’s yellow light; the other held the deep, bottomless black she had spent months refusing to remember."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1150
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"deep, bottomless black she"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.028695652173913042
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0026086956521739132
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences218
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences218
mean7
std4.85
cv0.693
sampleLengths
015
122
28
318
419
56
62
75
86
92
1010
1117
124
1313
143
1520
164
175
1815
198
202
211
229
233
241
258
263
2710
289
296
302
316
328
332
347
358
364
376
382
392
404
4110
429
4314
443
453
463
477
4810
496
42.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2981651376146789
totalSentences218
uniqueOpeners65
50.13% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences133
matches
0"Then he had vanished without"
1"Somewhere below, a kitchen extractor"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences133
matches
0"His platinum hair had come"
1"She gripped the edge of"
2"His mouth shifted, almost a"
3"His gaze dropped to the"
4"He planted one polished shoe"
5"His cane came apart beneath"
6"Her heart kicked against her"
7"His left hand pressed against"
8"It caught the intruder across"
9"He swore and jerked back."
10"His face sharpened into something"
11"They forced the sash together."
12"His shoulder strained under the"
13"His breath caught once, low"
14"His thumb landed over the"
15"His fingers remained around her"
16"He pulled the window down"
17"His skin had the waxy"
18"He lifted a pistol fitted"
19"They descended fast."
ratio0.188
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences133
matches
0"Aurora slid the third deadbolt"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
3"His platinum hair had come"
4"Ptolemy sprang from the arm"
5"Aurora kept the chain in"
6"Lucien’s amber eye held hers."
7"The black one gave nothing"
8"The name hit harder than"
9"She gripped the edge of"
10"His mouth shifted, almost a"
11"Lucien turned his head."
12"The hallway light flickered once."
13"The smell of wet brick"
14"Aurora watched his hand tighten"
15"The footsteps stopped on the"
16"A man coughed."
17"Another voice muttered in a"
18"Lucien stepped closer to the"
19"Aurora’s fingers eased from the"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences133
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences80
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.125
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.1
86.2932%