Run: 2026-07-09-01KX409FWZJJZGQ8RT31SPBT5Y

Run Details

Duration:
39.5s
Cost:
$0.049780
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon raven over the door bled colour across the wet pavement. Rory stood beneath it with a cardboard bag of cold noodles hooked over one wrist, fishing through her coat pocket for the flat keys. A man at the end of the bar laughed. The sound caught under her ribs. She stopped with her fingers around the keyring. Inside, The Raven’s Nest held its usual dim hush between bursts of talk. Old maps curled behind glass. Black-and-white faces stared down from the walls: soldiers, dockworkers, women in hats too severe for their smiles. Silas stood behind the bar polishing a tumbler with a cloth, his silver signet ring flashing each time he turned it. The man at the end of the bar had gone quiet. He wore a dark wool coat over a pale shirt, buttoned to the throat. His hair, once a loose blond mess that hung into his eyes, had been cut close around his ears. A narrow scar split one eyebrow. His hands rested around a pint of soda water. Rory let the noodle bag slip against her leg. “Huw?” The man looked up. For a moment, nothing moved in his face. Then his mouth opened on a breath. “Rory Carter.” Nobody had called her that in London except landlords, delivery customers, and Silas when he wanted her attention. She crossed the room before she had chosen to. Huw Price rose from his stool. He had always been broad and soft around the middle, built for rugby and pub lunches. Now his coat hung from sharp shoulders. He looked taller without the old slouch. “You look like you’ve seen a ghost,” Rory said. “You vanished.” “That was less dramatic.” “You left Cardiff in the night and changed your number.” His eyes had stayed blue-grey. That unsettled her more than the scar, the haircut, the sober glass sweating beneath his hand. Silas watched them from behind the bar. “You knew this stray?” He set another tumbler on the shelf. “Huw was at school with me.” “Sixth form,” Huw corrected. “Then university, for my sins.” Rory dragged out the stool beside his and sat. “What happened to you?” His mouth bent, though no smile arrived. “Straight in, then.” “You used to wear a leather jacket with ‘NO FUTURE’ painted on the back.” “It was a stupid jacket.” “You threw up inside a police car while wearing it.” “That was a stupid night.” “You called the arresting officer a fascist.” “He was.” Silas placed a glass of water in front of Rory without asking. “You’re upstairs?” “I’m not drinking.” “You had a spill on your sleeve.” Rory looked down. A stripe of chilli oil marked her cuff. “That was a customer with poor spatial awareness.” Silas glanced at Huw, then back at her. “Your friend wanted tonic. I refused to serve something that offended a decent glass.” “It’s soda water,” Huw told her. “I’ve become unbearable.” “You were unbearable before. You just had vodka to blame.” The old rhythm came too easily. It made her suspicious of it. Huw ran one thumb around the rim of his glass. The skin across his knuckles bore small white seams, neat and evenly spaced. “You work here?” he asked. “Above here. I deliver food for a Chinese restaurant in Chinatown. I’m living the dream.” “You were going to become a barrister.” “My father had that dream. I kept it warm for him a while.” “What happened?” Rory looked past him at one of the photographs on the wall. A man in a peaked cap held a cigarette between two fingers, staring into a camera as if it owed him money. “Life happened.” Huw’s jaw tightened. “Evan happened.” The name sat on the bar between them. It did not belong there. It had travelled from Cardiff in the boot of some unseen car and dragged rain across the floorboards. Silas stopped polishing the glass. Huw lowered his gaze. “I heard.” “No, you didn’t.” “I heard enough.” “You heard he shouted at me in the street.” “I heard he grabbed you.” “You heard the version that made it sound like he lost his temper once.” Huw rubbed at the scar in his eyebrow. “I heard the version he gave us.” “Of course you did.” “Rory.” “Don’t.” She pushed the water away. “Don’t put that soft voice on. You didn’t come down here from Cardiff for a reunion and end up in a bar under my flat by accident. You saw me through the window, recognised me, and walked in with a plan.” He looked towards the door. Rain stitched silver threads through the neon light. “I came to London for a meeting,” he said. “I’m staying near Euston. I walked until my feet hurt. Then I saw the sign.” “That wasn’t an answer.” “No.” He gripped the soda water. “It wasn’t.” Silas reached beneath the counter and brought out the cold noodle bag. “Your dinner is going limp, Aurora.” “I know.” “Eat it or put it in the fridge.” She took the bag. “You always this bossy with strangers?” “Only the ones who pay rent late.” “I paid yesterday.” “You paid at eleven fifty-eight.” Huw watched that exchange with a face Rory could not read. When Silas moved to serve a couple at the far end of the bar, Huw spoke again. “I saw you outside the library,” he said. Rory’s hand froze on the paper bag. “Which time?” “The last time.” She lifted her eyes. Huw had paled. The scar above his eyebrow stood out against his skin. “It was raining,” he went on. “You had that yellow scarf. Evan had hold of your arm. You kept telling him to let go.” The Nest seemed to narrow around her. Glasses clinked somewhere behind them. The couple at the far end laughed too loudly. “You watched?” “I stood across the road.” “For how long?” “Long enough.” Rory put the noodle bag on the bar with care. “Long enough for what?” “He saw me.” “And?” “He smiled at me.” The words scraped out of him. “He smiled,” Huw repeated, “like we had some private joke. Like I’d caught him doing something embarrassing and would give him a nod, because that’s what mates did.” “You were his mate.” “I was yours.” “Not that day.” “No.” She looked at his hands again. The white scars. The clean nails. No battered rings, no ink under his thumbs, no cheap lager smell rising from his coat. Huw had once arrived at her parents’ house at noon with a traffic cone under his arm and claimed it was a Welsh dragon. “What happened to your eyebrow?” she asked. He blinked. “A bottle.” “Whose?” “Mine, more or less.” “That sounds like a story someone told a doctor.” “It was a story I told everyone.” Rory said nothing. Huw swallowed. “I drank for years after you left.” “That wasn’t because of me.” “No. It was because I did plenty of ugly things before you left, and one morning I started remembering them in order.” His fingers stopped moving. “I worked at Dad’s garage. Turned up late. Lied to Mum. Stole money from the till. Drove home when I couldn’t see straight. Then I picked a fight outside a club with a man half my size. He put a bottle through my face.” “You deserved it?” “I deserved worse.” “That’s a lazy answer.” He gave a small, startled laugh. It broke before it settled. “You still did that,” he said. “Did what?” “Made people work for the cheap version of forgiveness.” “I wasn’t aware you came for forgiveness.” “I did.” The honesty in it landed harder than an excuse would have. Rory looked at the crescent scar on her left wrist, pale beneath the bar light. She pressed her thumb into it until the old mark disappeared under the pressure. “You should have called the police,” she said. “I know.” “You should have crossed the road.” “I know.” “You should have called me after.” “I dialled your number every week for six months. Then it stopped connecting.” “You could have called my parents.” “I couldn’t bear your father answering.” “He would have torn strips off you.” “He should have.” “He was busy tearing strips off me for leaving law.” Huw looked up. “Did he know?” “Not properly.” “Does he now?” “He knows Evan was bad news. Parents like tidy facts. They can put those in a drawer.” The bar door opened. Cold air swept in with two men arguing about football. Their voices filled the room, then thinned as they noticed Silas watching them. He pointed towards an empty table with the cloth in his hand. They obeyed. Huw shifted on his stool. “I found out something last year,” he said. Rory’s shoulders pulled tight. “What?” “He had another girlfriend before you.” She stared at him. “Not when you were together. Before. A girl from Pontcanna. Sian Morgan.” His eyes held hers. “He broke her wrist.” Rory’s mouth went dry. “He told people she fell down stairs,” Huw continued. “Same lines he used with you. Same bruises hidden under sleeves. Same jokes about her being clumsy.” “Why are you telling me this?” “Because I knew her brother. He told me after a meeting.” “A meeting?” “Alcoholics Anonymous.” The word hung there, plain and unadorned. Rory glanced at the soda water. “How long?” “Two years in March.” “You went to meetings for two years.” “I went because I woke up in hospital and a nurse asked whether anyone could collect me. I gave her six numbers. Nobody answered.” He looked down at the clear drink. “That was fair. I’d made myself difficult to collect.” The hard edge in Rory’s chest shifted, not enough to leave, only enough to make room for something else. “You could have told me about Sian in a message,” she said. “I wrote one.” “And?” “I deleted it.” “Why?” “Because I kept reading it and hearing myself make it about me. I didn’t want to hand you another thing to carry.” Rory traced the wet ring beneath her water glass. “You did carry it,” she said. “Yes.” “For years.” “Yes.” “Then you walked into a bar called The Raven’s Nest and found me serving noodles to half of Soho.” “You were carrying three bags. One had leaked through.” “Four bags.” “Four.” “That matters.” “It did.” For the first time, Huw smiled properly. It altered him. Not back into the boy she knew, not even close, but it gave his face a crease of recognition. Silas set a fresh bowl on the counter before Rory. Steam lifted from it, ginger and sesame and chilli warming the stale bar air. “You can settle the food account tomorrow,” he told her. “I didn’t order this.” “You needed something hot.” Huw reached for his wallet. Rory caught his wrist. “No.” “I can buy you dinner.” “You can’t buy me anything.” “I know.” He left the wallet on the bar. “Habit.” Her hand still rested against his sleeve. Beneath the wool, his wrist felt thin. She let go. “What were you doing in London?” she asked. “Job interview.” “For?” “A support worker at a recovery house in Hackney.” Rory studied him. “The man who put a traffic cone on my father’s roof.” “It was a porch roof.” “It was still vandalism.” “It was community art.” “You’re going to work with addicts?” “I already do, three nights a week. This would pay enough to stop working at the garage.” “And they want you?” “They asked awkward questions.” “Good.” “They checked references.” “Better.” He nodded once, accepting the verdict. Rory lifted her chopsticks. The noodles had swollen in the broth, soft and fragrant. She took a mouthful, chewed, swallowed. Huw waited without asking whether she forgave him. That restraint looked practised. It looked painful. Outside, a bus hissed through the rain. The green raven trembled in the reflected water. “You’re still in Cardiff tomorrow?” Rory asked. “My train leaves at six.” “You’ll miss it if you stay drinking soda in Soho.” “I’ve missed worse things.” “That wasn’t an invitation.” “I know.” She took another bite, watching him over the steam. “Have another soda,” she said. “Then tell me what happened to the traffic cone.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Huw had once [once]"
dialogueSentences170
tagDensity0.153
leniency0.306
rawRatio0.038
effectiveRatio0.012
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2038
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.83% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2038
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count4
1
word"unsettled"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"unsettled"
2"traced"
3"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences135
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences280
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2038
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions35
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"When Silas moved to serve a couple at the far end of the bar, Huw spoke again."
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1000
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.2
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
London1
Silas10
Price1
Huw20
Rory22
Cardiff1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Huw"
4"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.4
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.981
wordCount2038
matches
0"Not back into the boy she knew, not even close, but it gave his face a crease of recognition"
1"not even close, but it gave his face a crease of recognition"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences280
matches
0"watched that exchange"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs214
mean9.52
std10.15
cv1.066
sampleLengths
037
19
26
38
456
511
648
79
81
94
1015
112
1218
1345
149
152
164
1710
1821
197
2011
216
229
2313
247
253
2614
275
2810
295
307
312
3214
333
347
3519
3622
379
3810
3912
4023
415
4215
437
4413
452
4634
472
483
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences280
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1055
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.024644549763033177
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0037914691943127963
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences280
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences280
mean7.28
std6
cv0.825
sampleLengths
013
124
29
36
48
513
65
717
821
911
1014
1119
126
139
149
151
164
178
187
192
2018
219
226
2316
247
257
269
272
284
2910
305
3116
327
3311
346
354
365
379
384
397
403
4114
425
4310
445
457
462
4712
482
493
46.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.22857142857142856
totalSentences280
uniqueOpeners64
28.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"Then his mouth opened on"
ratio0.009
88.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences116
matches
0"She stopped with her fingers"
1"He wore a dark wool"
2"His hair, once a loose"
3"His hands rested around a"
4"She crossed the room before"
5"He had always been broad"
6"He looked taller without the"
7"His eyes had stayed blue-grey."
8"He set another tumbler on"
9"His mouth bent, though no"
10"It made her suspicious of"
11"It did not belong there."
12"It had travelled from Cardiff"
13"She pushed the water away"
14"He looked towards the door."
15"He gripped the soda water"
16"She took the bag."
17"She lifted her eyes."
18"he went on"
19"She looked at his hands"
ratio0.328
16.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences116
matches
0"The green neon raven over"
1"Rory stood beneath it with"
2"A man at the end"
3"The sound caught under her"
4"She stopped with her fingers"
5"Silas stood behind the bar"
6"The man at the end"
7"He wore a dark wool"
8"His hair, once a loose"
9"A narrow scar split one"
10"His hands rested around a"
11"Rory let the noodle bag"
12"The man looked up."
13"Nobody had called her that"
14"She crossed the room before"
15"Huw Price rose from his"
16"He had always been broad"
17"He looked taller without the"
18"His eyes had stayed blue-grey."
19"That unsettled her more than"
ratio0.888
43.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences116
matches
0"Now his coat hung from"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His hair, once a loose blond mess that hung into his eyes, had been cut close around his ears."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Huw corrected (correct)"
1"Huw repeated (repeat)"
2"Huw continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences170
tagDensity0.106
leniency0.212
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.035
87.4134%