Run: 2026-07-09-01KX409H0QBXA4ZSTYZN3ZNX9M

Run Details

Duration:
26.9s
Cost:
$0.035545
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora left her bicycle chained to a rusted gate on the edge of Richmond Park and walked beneath the trees with both hands buried in the pockets of her coat. The park had shut hours ago. A council sign beside the gate listed closing times in peeling white letters, though someone had bent the bottom corner back and forth until it hung loose. Beyond it, the paths vanished into wet grass and black trunks. Her phone showed 01:17. No signal. No map. No helpful blue dot. “Brilliant,” she muttered. The Heartstone pendant rested against her sternum, hot enough to sting through her jumper. Its deep crimson centre held a coal-red glow. Each pulse travelled through the silver chain and into her skin: one beat, then another, slow and deliberate. The note had appeared under her flat door that afternoon, folded into a square no bigger than a stamp. COME ALONE. RICHMOND. THE OAKS THAT STAND. MIDNIGHT. BRING THE HEARTSTONE. No signature. No explanation. The paper smelled of rainwater and something sweet underneath, crushed leaves or old perfume. Aurora had spent three hours convincing herself she would not go. Then the pendant began warming against her chest. Now she walked deeper into the park, following its heat. The city had not vanished completely. London glimmered behind the trees in a low orange haze, a distant smear beneath the clouds. Traffic sighed somewhere beyond the park walls. A train clattered across tracks far off, then cut short as if someone had shut a door over the sound. Aurora stopped. The silence that followed had weight. She listened. Water dripped from branches. A leaf fell through the dark and landed near her left boot. Her own breath rasped inside the wool scarf wrapped across her mouth. Nothing else. She carried a torch in one pocket and a folding knife in the other. The knife had belonged to Silas, who had pressed it into her palm after reading the note. “You’re not going alone.” “I’m going alone.” “You’re taking the knife.” “I don’t know how to use it.” “You point the sharp bit at the thing you don’t like.” Silas had tried for a grin. It had not reached his eyes. Now, Aurora drew the torch from her pocket and clicked it on. A narrow white beam struck the path ahead. Mud shone in shallow ruts. Bare roots twisted over the ground like knuckles. The path should have led east, towards a service road and the outer fence, but the pendant pulled her left. She left the path. Brambles caught her coat. Wet grass soaked through the toes of her trainers. Every few steps, she glanced behind her. The torch showed trees. Ferns. A black ditch full of water. No one. “Get a grip, Rory.” Her voice died two feet from her face. She kept walking. The old stories called the place Isolde’s grove. Most people laughed when they mentioned it, then glanced over their shoulders before they finished the joke. A hidden clearing in Richmond Park. Stones older than the city. Flowers that bloomed through frost. A patch of ground where compasses spun and watches lost time. Eva had told her about it years ago after too much cheap wine in a Cardiff kitchen. “If some gorgeous stranger asks you to dance near standing stones, don’t,” Eva had declared, pointing a wine bottle at Aurora. “And don’t eat anything. Not a grape. Not a crisp. They’ll have you polishing goblin shoes for a hundred years.” “You’ve got a very specific fear of goblins.” “They know what they did.” Aurora had laughed then. She did not laugh now. The pendant throbbed. Heat spread across her collarbones. Ahead, wildflowers glimmered under the torch beam. Not a few stubborn winter blooms. Not a planted bed. Thousands of pale flowers filled the hollow between the trees, opening their faces towards a sky with no moon. White petals. Blue centres. Tiny red cups, bright as fresh cuts. A ring of oak stones stood around them. Aurora stopped at the edge of the clearing. The stones rose taller than she expected, each one broad and dark, their surfaces ridged with moss. Oak roots gripped them from below, although no oak grew close enough to explain it. The trunks around the clearing bowed inwards, their branches tangled overhead. The air smelled wrong. Summer soil. Rotting apples. Candle smoke. Her phone vibrated in her pocket. Aurora jerked, then pulled it out. The screen lit her hand blue. One new message. UNKNOWN NUMBER: YOU ARE LATE. She stared at it. Her thumb hovered over the keyboard. WHO IS THIS? The message appeared beneath hers at once. THE ONE WHO BROUGHT YOU HERE. Aurora’s gaze moved to the pendant. “You gave me this?” No answer. She stepped into the clearing. The flowers gave beneath her trainers with a soft, damp sigh. Their stems did not break. They bent, then lifted again after she passed. The torch flickered. Aurora slapped its side. The beam steadied, although the light had changed. It no longer looked white. A faint yellow stain bled across the grass, as though the torch shone through old teeth. Her phone buzzed. DO NOT STEP BETWEEN THE SECOND AND THIRD STONES. She looked up. The standing stones formed a rough circle. Someone had carved thin grooves into their surfaces. At first, Aurora took them for weather marks. Then her torch passed over one stone, and the grooves caught the light. Letters. Not any alphabet she knew. Hooks, spirals, lines like roots beneath pavement. She moved closer to the nearest stone. A child began humming. Aurora froze. The sound came from the trees beyond the circle. A thin, tuneless noise. The child held one note too long, dropped to another, then returned to the first. “Hello?” The humming stopped. Aurora waited. “Park’s closed,” she called. “If you’re lost, answer me.” A branch cracked. Not close. Somewhere to her right, beyond the fifth stone. She raised the torch. The beam travelled over flowers, trunks, low-hanging branches. It caught a strip of pale fabric between two trees. A small dress. No. Not a dress. A scrap of plastic snagged on a thorn. Aurora let out the breath caught in her throat. Her hand had found the folding knife without her noticing. “Fine. Great. Plastic bag. Terrifying.” The pendant flared against her skin. A soft knock came from inside the nearest standing stone. Aurora swung around. The stone stood where it had stood. Moss covered its base. Water gleamed in the carved grooves. Knock. This time, something answered from another stone across the circle. Knock. Then another. Knock. The sounds travelled around the ring, measured and polite. They never overlapped. Each stone waited for the last before it spoke. Aurora backed towards the clearing’s edge. Her heel came down on a patch of red flowers. They released a smell like pennies. The knocking stopped. Her phone vibrated again. STAY INSIDE THE RING. She looked at the screen, then at the trees behind her. The darkness between the trunks had thickened. It no longer resembled ordinary shadow. It lay in strips, layered one over another, and shifted when she did not look straight at it. Aurora’s mouth went dry. “What’s out there?” The question left her before she could stop it. For several seconds, nothing moved. Then, from the trees, her own voice answered. “What’s out there?” Same accent. Same low scrape at the end of the words. Same breathless edge. Aurora held the knife tighter. “That’s not funny.” Her voice came again, farther left. “That’s not funny.” The flowers around her ankles trembled. She did not. Not on the outside. She forced herself to look at the stones, not the trees. Eight standing stones. She counted them twice. Each sat at a different angle, as if some giant hand had shoved them into the earth and forgotten to straighten them. The note had mentioned the oaks that stand. Not the stones. Her torch beam climbed past the ring and found the trees beyond it. At first she saw only trunks. Then she noticed the roots. Every oak around the clearing had pushed up from the ground, roots braided around the stones, holding themselves upright on thick, twisted limbs. Their trunks had lifted clear of the earth. Beneath each one, darkness yawned where the soil should have been. The standing oaks had not rooted around the stones. They had stood on their roots like legs. A root shifted. Mud slid from it in slow clumps. Aurora’s torch slipped in her grip. The beam hit the ground, spun across the flowers, and landed on the gap between the second and third stones. Nothing stood there. Then the pendant burned. A red line appeared in the air. It hung between the stones, thin as a thread, beginning at the grass and stretching above Aurora’s head. The line brightened. Crimson light seeped from it, pulsing in time with the Heartstone. The gap widened without the stones moving. Cold air rushed through it, carrying a smell Aurora knew from no place on Earth: iron, smoke, deep water, and something old enough to have forgotten its name. Her phone screen went black. In its reflection, a face stood behind her. Aurora did not turn. The reflection showed only part of it: a white oval over her shoulder, too high off the ground, with a dark mouth stretched open beneath two pits where eyes belonged. The thing breathed against the back of her hair. The oak roots creaked. Aurora lifted the Heartstone in one shaking hand. Its crimson glow filled the clearing, painting the flowers and stones the colour of exposed muscle. Behind her, her own voice whispered into her ear. “Step through.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1620
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1620
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"dance"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count2
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"dance"
4"throbbed"
5"vibrated"
6"flickered"
7"measured"
8"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences206
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences224
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1620
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.84% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1510
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone3
Silas2
Aurora23
Isolde1
Cardiff1
Earth1
Knock3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Knock"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore0.738
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences115
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared under her flat door that afternoon, folded into a square no bigger than a stamp"
1"appeared beneath hers at once"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1620
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences224
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs147
mean11.02
std11.84
cv1.075
sampleLengths
030
144
24
38
43
540
619
711
818
911
108
1110
1249
132
146
152
1628
172
1831
194
203
214
227
2311
2412
2553
264
2720
2811
292
304
318
323
3352
3417
3541
368
375
384
395
408
417
4240
438
448
4543
464
476
486
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences206
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs244
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences224
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1512
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"sweet underneath, crushed leaves"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.027777777777777776
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.001984126984126984
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences224
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences224
mean7.23
std5.56
cv0.769
sampleLengths
030
16
227
311
44
52
62
74
83
914
108
1118
1219
132
141
154
161
173
182
192
2014
2111
228
2310
246
2516
267
2720
282
296
302
314
3212
3312
342
3514
3617
374
383
394
407
4111
426
436
4412
458
465
478
4820
494
52.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.34375
totalSentences224
uniqueOpeners77
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences175
matches
0"Then the pendant began warming"
1"Then her torch passed over"
2"Somewhere to her right, beyond"
3"Then, from the trees, her"
4"Then she noticed the roots."
5"Then the pendant burned."
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences175
matches
0"Her phone showed 01:17."
1"Its deep crimson centre held"
2"Her own breath rasped inside"
3"She carried a torch in"
4"It had not reached his"
5"She left the path."
6"Her voice died two feet"
7"She kept walking."
8"She did not laugh now."
9"Her phone vibrated in her"
10"YOU ARE LATE."
11"She stared at it."
12"Her thumb hovered over the"
13"She stepped into the clearing."
14"Their stems did not break."
15"They bent, then lifted again"
16"It no longer looked white."
17"Her phone buzzed."
18"She looked up."
19"She moved closer to the"
ratio0.229
68.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount137
totalSentences175
matches
0"Aurora left her bicycle chained"
1"The park had shut hours"
2"A council sign beside the"
3"Her phone showed 01:17."
4"The Heartstone pendant rested against"
5"Its deep crimson centre held"
6"Each pulse travelled through the"
7"The note had appeared under"
8"THE OAKS THAT STAND."
9"The paper smelled of rainwater"
10"Aurora had spent three hours"
11"The city had not vanished"
12"London glimmered behind the trees"
13"Traffic sighed somewhere beyond the"
14"A train clattered across tracks"
15"The silence that followed had"
16"Water dripped from branches."
17"A leaf fell through the"
18"Her own breath rasped inside"
19"She carried a torch in"
ratio0.783
57.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences175
matches
0"Now she walked deeper into"
1"Now, Aurora drew the torch"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A train clattered across tracks far off, then cut short as if someone had shut a door over the sound."
1"Each sat at a different angle, as if some giant hand had shoved them into the earth and forgotten to straighten them."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
54.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Eva had (have)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.19
92.1220%