Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40BEMP7GB5TVSFAZTWTT04

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Duration:
16.2s
Cost:
$0.014569
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OpenAI

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter stumbled between the standing stones and caught herself against the nearest oak. The bark shifted beneath her palm. She snatched her hand back. A thin line of sap clung to her skin, warm as blood. It stretched between her fingers, trembled, then drew itself into the tree. Rory stared at the place where it vanished. “Absolutely not.” Her voice fell flat among the trees. That unsettled her more than the moving bark. The grove should have carried sound. Richmond Park always did. Traffic hissed beyond the railings, planes crossed overhead, distant dogs barked at nothing. But the moment she stepped through the ring of ancient stones, every noise outside had folded away. No road. No aircraft. No foxes rustling through the undergrowth. Only the faint tick of the Heartstone against her chest. She pulled the pendant from beneath her coat. The deep crimson gem gave off a weak inner glow, each pulse warming her fingertips. It had led her here, though she had no idea how. For three nights, the pendant had tugged towards Richmond whenever she held it. Tonight, it had burned hot enough to wake her. A compass made for something that did not exist. She had followed it because the alternative involved ignoring an artefact that had appeared in her flat without explanation, beside a note written in a hand she did not recognise. Find the grove before they do. No name. No signature. No clue who they were. Rory had folded the note into her pocket anyway. Now the pendant pointed towards the centre of the clearing. The path ahead looked wrong. Wildflowers covered the ground, blue and white and bruised purple, blooming through the cracks between roots. They had no business flowering in the cold. Their heads turned as she passed. Not towards the pendant. Towards her. Rory tightened her grip around the chain and moved on. The clearing opened beyond the trees, though the distance made no sense. She could see the whole grove from the boundary, a small circle no wider than a tennis court. Three steps later, the trees stood farther apart. Five steps after that, the ring behind her had disappeared. She stopped. The silence pressed against her ears. “Fine,” she whispered. “Pocket between realms. Time distortion. Creepy plants. That tracks.” She had spent the past week collecting scraps of information from Eva, from old books in the university library, and from conversations overheard at Silas’ bar after midnight. Fae-touched places existed. Doorways appeared where no doorway stood. Certain stones marked boundaries. Certain names drew attention. The Fae Grove, Isolde’s grove, sat in a pocket between Earth and somewhere else. Rory had come to find Isolde. Or, more accurately, to find out why Isolde had sent a message through the pendant three nights ago. The pendant pulsed again. A sound answered from the trees. Tap. Rory turned. Nothing moved between the trunks. Tap. This time, the sound came from behind her. She looked over her shoulder. The path remained empty. The flowers had stopped turning. Tap. A third sound came from above. Rory lifted her gaze. The branches formed a dense black lattice overhead. Something pale rested among them, long and narrow, its shape broken by leaves. She blinked. A branch dipped. The pale shape vanished. Rory lowered her eyes and kept walking. She counted her steps. Twenty-two to the centre of the grove. Thirty-seven before the flowers thinned. Forty-eight before she found the stone. It stood half-buried in the earth, smaller than the boundary stones and carved with lines that twisted into themselves. The markings resembled writing, but no alphabet she knew moved like that. They seemed to crawl whenever she looked away. The Heartstone pulled towards it. Rory crouched and brushed soil from the base. Her left wrist scraped against the stone. The crescent scar there prickled. A voice breathed behind her. “Laila.” Rory lurched upright. The name had belonged to her grandmother. Jennifer Carter had used it only when Rory had done something reckless or cruel. No one else in London knew it. She turned. The grove remained empty. Her pulse struck hard against her throat. She scanned the trees, forcing herself to examine each trunk, each patch of shadow, each gap between the flowers. Nothing. No person. No animal. She faced the stone again. A fresh line had appeared in the soil. Three words, written in a narrow finger. YOU BROUGHT IT. Rory stepped back. The Heartstone flared crimson. Something answered beneath the ground. The earth gave a small, wet shudder. She ran. The path changed as she moved. Trees crowded her shoulders, branches reaching across her coat. She shoved through them, ignoring the scratches along her hands. The boundary should have appeared ahead. Instead, she saw the standing stones behind her, impossibly distant, arranged in a narrowing ring. The grove stretched away from the exit. Rory stopped beside a twisted ash tree and pressed her back against the trunk. Her breath rasped in her ears. No. She had not run in a straight line. She had marked the route. Left at the split oak, right after the fallen branch, straight past the stone. The grove had shifted around her. A low crack sounded in the undergrowth. Rory held still. Another crack. Something walked through the flowers. She saw the stems bend one after another. The movement travelled in a straight line towards her, slow and deliberate. Nothing disturbed the leaves above it. Her hand slid into her coat pocket and found the note. Find the grove before they do. The paper felt damp. A shadow crossed the flowers. Rory pulled the pendant free. Its warmth had become painful. The silver chain cut into her palm as the gem throbbed, once, twice, three times. The thing in the undergrowth stopped. “Isolde?” Rory called. Her voice shook despite the calm shape of the word. A reply came from somewhere close. “Not yet.” The voice sounded like Eva. Rory’s fingers closed around the pendant. “Eva?” A soft laugh moved through the trees. Then Eva spoke again, from the opposite side of the clearing. “Don’t answer me.” Rory spun towards the sound. A figure stood between two oaks. It had Eva’s height. Eva’s red coat. Eva’s dark bob. But it held its head at the wrong angle. The figure lifted one hand and beckoned. “Come here, Rory.” The real Eva had never called her Rory when afraid. She used Carter, sharp and clipped, as though the surname could drag Rory back from trouble. Rory backed away. The figure stepped between the trees. Its face remained hidden behind the branches. “You came for Isolde.” Rory said nothing. “You came for answers.” The pendant’s glow spread across her knuckles. The figure tilted its head farther. Bone clicked beneath the skin. “You brought the door.” The flowers nearest Rory collapsed. A dark gap opened in the ground where their roots had been. No soil fell into it. No stone lined its edges. It looked less like a hole than a patch of missing world. Cold air rose from below. Rory moved sideways. The figure moved with her. “Who are you?” “Malphora.” The name struck through her. The figure stepped into the open. Eva’s face peeled back like wet paper. Underneath, a woman watched her with pale, milk-blue eyes. Her hair hung in straight black ropes to her waist, and her mouth stretched too wide for the narrow face. Rory’s stomach turned. The woman smiled. “Not the name you use here.” Rory’s wrist burned. The crescent scar had darkened, the skin around it pulling tight. The pendant tore free from her hand. It flew towards the gap in the earth. Rory caught the chain before the gem disappeared. The force dragged her to her knees. Her fingers locked around the silver links as the thing below pulled. The ground shuddered again. The standing stones answered with a deep, hollow note. The woman crossed the flowers. “Let it go.” Rory wrapped the chain around her wrist. “Come and take it.” The woman’s smile widened. The space behind Rory exhaled. She glanced back. The ash tree had split open. A narrow doorway stood inside its trunk, framed by red roots. Beyond it lay a corridor of darkness, and at its far end, a woman in a green dress pressed both hands against the unseen barrier. Isolde. Her face appeared blurred, as if Rory viewed her through deep water. She struck the barrier once. Twice. Then she mouthed a warning. Rory could not hear her. The pale-eyed woman seized Rory’s ankle. Her fingers felt like wet wire. Rory kicked, caught the woman beneath the chin, and tore free. The Heartstone yanked again, nearly dislocating her shoulder. She dug her heels into the earth and pulled against the opening. The woman lunged. Rory swung the pendant. The crimson gem struck the woman’s cheek. A sound burst from her, too deep for a human throat. Every flower in the grove snapped upright. The trees bent towards the impact. The woman recoiled, clutching her face. Smoke curled from the place where the Heartstone had touched her. Beneath the torn skin, something pale and jointed writhed. Rory scrambled towards the doorway in the ash tree. Isolde slammed her palms against the barrier. This time, sound crossed the distance. “Do not let it learn your name!” The doorway narrowed. Rory reached for the gap. The woman screamed. The earth erupted behind her. Roots lashed across the clearing, ripping through flowers and soil. One wrapped around Rory’s waist and hauled her backwards. She struck the ground hard enough to lose her breath. The pendant slipped from her grip. It landed beside the open black gap. The pale-eyed woman crawled towards it, her limbs bending at angles that made Rory’s joints ache in sympathy. Rory forced air into her lungs. The doorway flickered. Isolde stood within it, no longer blurred. Her face had gone grey. “Rory!” The woman reached the pendant. Rory saw the answer before she understood it. The boundary stones marked a ring. The carved stone in the centre formed a lock. The Heartstone acted as a key, but the grove had not brought her here to open the door. It had brought her here to offer the key to something waiting below. Rory seized a fallen branch and drove it into the carved stone. The stone cracked. The grove shrieked. The woman grabbed the pendant. The gem flared, and her fingers blackened. Rory struck the carved stone again. The crack split from top to bottom. The ground dropped. The woman vanished with the Heartstone in her hand. For one breath, the clearing held still. Then every standing stone toppled inwards. Rory threw herself through the ash-tree doorway as the grove collapsed behind her. Isolde caught her arm. The barrier shattered like ice. They hit the other side together. Rory rolled across a floor of white roots. The doorway snapped shut above her, leaving only a thin red seam in the bark. Something struck it from within. Once. Twice. On the third blow, the tree opened its eyes.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.158
leniency0.316
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1848
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1848
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"absolutely"
count1
2
word"unsettled"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"lurched"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"absolutely"
2"unsettled"
3"pulse"
4"silence"
5"pulsed"
6"lurched"
7"scanned"
8"warmth"
9"throbbed"
10"stomach"
11"flickered"
12"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences249
matches
0"e in sympathy"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences249
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences266
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1848
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions80
wordCount1784
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.41
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter3
Park1
Heartstone7
Richmond2
Eva8
Fae-touched1
Fae2
Grove1
Isolde7
Earth1
Rory43
London1
Tap3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
3"Grove"
4"Isolde"
5"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Richmond"
2"Fae-touched"
3"Fae"
4"Earth"
5"London"
globalScore0.295
windowScore0.167
99.32% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences148
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"appeared ahead"
1"appeared blurred as if Rory viewed her through deep water"
2"felt like wet wire"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1848
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences266
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs186
mean9.94
std10.59
cv1.066
sampleLengths
014
16
25
324
48
52
67
748
810
910
1056
119
1230
136
149
159
1610
1735
184
192
2010
2148
222
236
2412
2545
2614
276
2818
294
306
311
322
335
341
358
3614
371
386
394
4021
412
423
434
447
4522
4639
475
4820
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences249
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs310
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences266
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount415
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.01927710843373494
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0024096385542168677
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences266
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences266
mean6.95
std4.51
cv0.649
sampleLengths
014
16
25
312
412
58
62
77
88
96
104
1113
1217
132
142
156
1610
178
1815
1911
2013
219
229
2330
246
252
262
275
289
2910
305
3116
328
336
344
352
3610
3712
3818
398
4010
412
426
433
449
4528
463
476
484
494
40.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats26
diversityRatio0.2518796992481203
totalSentences266
uniqueOpeners67
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences225
matches
0"Only the faint tick of"
1"Instead, she saw the standing"
2"Then Eva spoke again, from"
3"Then she mouthed a warning."
4"Then every standing stone toppled"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences225
matches
0"She snatched her hand back."
1"It stretched between her fingers,"
2"Her voice fell flat among"
3"She pulled the pendant from"
4"It had led her here,"
5"She had followed it because"
6"They had no business flowering"
7"Their heads turned as she"
8"She could see the whole"
9"She had spent the past"
10"She looked over her shoulder."
11"She counted her steps."
12"It stood half-buried in the"
13"They seemed to crawl whenever"
14"Her left wrist scraped against"
15"Her pulse struck hard against"
16"She scanned the trees, forcing"
17"She faced the stone again."
18"YOU BROUGHT IT."
19"She shoved through them, ignoring"
ratio0.196
37.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount190
totalSentences225
matches
0"Aurora Carter stumbled between the"
1"The bark shifted beneath her"
2"She snatched her hand back."
3"A thin line of sap"
4"It stretched between her fingers,"
5"Rory stared at the place"
6"Her voice fell flat among"
7"That unsettled her more than"
8"The grove should have carried"
9"Richmond Park always did."
10"Traffic hissed beyond the railings,"
11"She pulled the pendant from"
12"The deep crimson gem gave"
13"It had led her here,"
14"Tonight, it had burned hot"
15"A compass made for something"
16"She had followed it because"
17"Rory had folded the note"
18"The path ahead looked wrong."
19"Wildflowers covered the ground, blue"
ratio0.844
44.44% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences225
matches
0"Now the pendant pointed towards"
1"Or, more accurately, to find"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She had followed it because the alternative involved ignoring an artefact that had appeared in her flat without explanation, beside a note written in a hand she…"
1"It stood half-buried in the earth, smaller than the boundary stones and carved with lines that twisted into themselves."
2"The pale-eyed woman crawled towards it, her limbs bending at angles that made Rory’s joints ache in sympathy."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.105
leniency0.211
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.105
89.0667%