Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40C95H5X4CP31ZZTDBED4W

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Duration:
12.8s
Cost:
$0.011983
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter caught the gate before it swung shut and crushed her fingers. The oak standing stones had appeared between two beeches where no path belonged. They rose from the ground like broken teeth, their surfaces slick with moss and carved with marks that hurt to follow. Beyond them, wildflowers crowded a clearing that should have been buried under Richmond Park’s dark, trampled grass. Rory kept one hand on the gate and touched the Heartstone with the other. The deep crimson pendant pulsed against her palm. Once. Twice. Then it grew warm enough to sting. She stepped through. The gate clicked behind her. Rory turned at once. The stones stood in a crooked ring, each one taller than she was. No gate remained between them. Only a narrow gap filled with black brambles. “Fine,” she muttered. “That’s fine.” Her voice travelled farther than it should have. It slipped through the trees and returned from somewhere ahead, thinner and slower. Fine. The pendant cooled. Rory let it fall beneath her coat. The silver chain scraped her throat. She had come because Eva’s message had offered no choice. COME ALONE. RICHMOND PARK. THE GROVE. BRING THE PENDANT. DON’T TRUST THE WOMAN IN WHITE. Eva never used full stops. She hated them. Called them aggressive. Rory had found the message folded inside her letterbox that afternoon, written in Eva’s narrow, hurried hand. No phone call. No explanation. No sign of anyone near the stairwell. Just the paper, damp at the corners, and a smear of dark soil along its edge. She had asked Silas to come with her. He had watched her lace her boots from behind the bar, jaw working as though he chewed a bad thought. “Not there,” he had said. “You know the place?” “I know enough.” “That means nothing.” “It means don’t go.” She had gone anyway. Now the clearing stretched before her, bright with colour beneath a sky the trees concealed. Bluebells shone like spilled ink. White flowers opened and closed without wind. Their stems bent towards her as she passed. Rory moved towards the centre, where a flat stone rose from the ground. Eva had described it once, years ago, after too much wine and a worse decision. The Grove, she had called it. A place that waited. Rory had laughed then. She did not laugh now. Something clicked in the undergrowth. She stopped. The sound came again, a small hard knock. Like a fingernail against glass. Rory scanned the trees. Nothing moved. Trunks leaned into one another, black and pale, their bark twisting in patterns that resembled faces only when she looked away. Her hand closed around the pendant. “Eva?” A bird answered from somewhere behind her. It made a child’s choking sob. Rory spun. The brambles shook. A dark shape slipped between them, too tall for a fox and too narrow for a person. She backed towards the stone. The shape vanished. Her boots brushed the wildflowers. They recoiled from the leather, petals folding tight. Rory reached the stone and climbed onto it. From there, she saw the clearing’s full shape. It formed an almost perfect circle, except for one section where the trees crowded inwards. A path led through them, narrow and pale, though she could not see what made it pale. Moonlight did not reach the Grove. The light came from the flowers. A whisper moved through them. Not words. Breath. Rory checked her phone. No signal. The screen showed 11:47. She had left the bar at 11:12. The walk from the park entrance had taken less than ten minutes. The clock changed. 11:47. Rory stared at it. The digits held steady while the seconds ticked beneath them. She pressed the side button. The screen went black. When it lit again, 11:48 appeared. A sound came from the path. Footsteps. Slow. Uneven. One step dragged. The next landed with a soft crunch. Rory climbed down from the stone and slipped behind it. She crouched, keeping the pendant under her coat. Its warmth spread across her ribs. The footsteps entered the clearing. A woman stood at the path’s mouth. She wore a white dress that reached the ground, though no mud marked its hem. Her hair covered her face. It hung in thick, dark ropes to her waist. Rory held her breath. The woman did not look towards the stone. She walked to the centre of the clearing and stopped. Then she raised one hand. A finger pointed at Rory’s hiding place. The Heartstone pulsed. Rory bit the inside of her cheek. Copper flooded her mouth. She stayed still. The woman tilted her head. “Laila,” she called. The name struck harder than Rory expected. Nobody in London knew it. Not Silas. Not Yu-Fei. Eva had used it when they were children, before Rory had decided Aurora sounded less like a mistake. The woman took one step closer. “Laila Carter.” Rory slid her phone from her pocket and held it ready. The emergency screen showed no service. She could still use the torch. The woman’s bare foot touched the edge of the stone. Rory switched on the light. The beam cut across the clearing. For a moment, the face beneath the hair appeared pale and narrow, with a mouth stretched far too wide. No eyes. Only two smooth hollows beneath the brow. Rory thrust the light towards it. The woman recoiled. The flowers shrieked. Rory ran. She sprinted for the standing stones, ignoring the branches that clawed at her coat. Behind her, the footsteps multiplied. Four sets. Six. A rapid shuffle crossed the clearing, keeping pace without gaining ground. The gap in the stones appeared ahead. Rory reached it and threw herself through. Her shoulder struck cold rock. She landed on hands and knees in wet leaves. The park lay beyond the ring. A bench stood twenty feet away. A bin leaned beside it. A familiar path cut through the grass. Rory scrambled upright. The gate remained gone, but the stones now formed a complete circle. She moved between them, searching for an opening. Each gap showed the same dark bramble wall. Behind her, the Grove fell silent. That frightened her more than the pursuit. Rory walked around the ring. Her breathing rasped in her throat. She checked her phone. 11:49. The seconds had stopped. A pale hand reached through the brambles. Rory stumbled back. The fingers curled over the lowest branch. They looked thin enough to break. Dirt packed beneath each nail. A second hand appeared beside it. Then a third. Rory snatched the pendant from beneath her coat. The Heartstone glowed faintly, crimson light leaking between her fingers. The hands withdrew. Something struck the other side of the brambles. Once. The stones trembled. Twice. A crack opened in the ground beneath Rory’s boots. She jumped aside as black soil split along the ring’s inner edge. Roots writhed inside it, pale and wet, twisting together like knotted veins. A voice spoke from the clearing. “Give it back.” Rory froze. Eva. The voice had Eva’s exact pitch, her clipped vowels, the small upward note she used when angry. “Rory, please.” Rory faced the Grove. The woman in white stood among the flowers. Her hair still hid her face. Behind her, the clearing seemed larger now, its trees pushed far away. Something moved between the trunks. Tall shapes. Dozens of them. “Eva?” Rory called. “Don’t listen to her.” The second voice came from the path. Rory turned. Eva stood outside the stones. She wore a red coat, torn at one shoulder, and blood darkened the cuff. Her blonde hair clung to her cheeks. One eye had swollen shut. Rory gripped the Heartstone. “Eva.” Eva pressed both hands against the nearest standing stone. “Don’t give her the pendant.” The woman in white began to walk towards the ring. “Don’t give it to Eva,” she said. Eva’s visible eye widened. “Rory, look at her feet.” Rory looked. The woman’s dress hid her ankles, but the flowers beneath her did not bend. Her feet never touched them. She floated a finger’s breadth above the ground. Eva stood on the leaves outside the stones. Her boots pressed them flat. Rory took one step towards her. The Heartstone flared. Eva screamed. Not in pain. In rage. Her face split at the mouth. The skin pulled from cheek to cheek, revealing a dark hollow packed with small white teeth. Rory staggered back. The thing wearing Eva’s coat slammed its forehead against the stone. “Open it.” The standing stone cracked. The woman in white reached the boundary. Her hair parted. Two bright blue eyes stared at Rory from the blank face. Rory’s own eyes. The pendant burned through her palm. She dropped it. It struck the ground and sank into the crack. Every flower in the Grove turned towards her. The woman smiled with Rory’s mouth. The stones began to open.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1478
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1478
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count3
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"scanned"
2"perfect"
3"whisper"
4"footsteps"
5"warmth"
6"familiar"
7"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences222
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences222
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences236
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1478
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1427
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.66
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone5
Eva13
Silas2
Grove5
Rory38
London1
Yu-Fei1
Aurora2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Eva"
3"Silas"
4"Grove"
5"Rory"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.169
windowScore0.167
61.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences113
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"appeared pale and narrow, with a mouth stretched far too wide"
1"appeared ahead"
2"appeared beside it"
3"seemed larger now, its trees pushed far away"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1478
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences236
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs155
mean9.54
std9.58
cv1.005
sampleLengths
013
151
214
38
41
51
67
73
85
930
105
1121
121
133
1423
1515
1611
1745
188
1920
205
214
223
233
244
254
2635
2728
286
294
304
315
325
332
3413
3527
366
371
387
396
4022
415
423
4313
4448
4512
465
473
4810
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences222
matches
0"been buried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs257
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences236
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1428
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"wet, twisting together like"
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.03011204481792717
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0028011204481792717
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences236
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences236
mean6.26
std4.25
cv0.679
sampleLengths
013
113
221
317
414
58
61
71
87
93
105
114
1213
135
148
153
162
178
1813
191
203
217
226
2310
242
252
262
273
286
295
303
313
3217
333
342
357
3616
378
3820
395
404
413
423
434
444
4515
465
477
488
4913
44.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.2606837606837607
totalSentences234
uniqueOpeners61
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences185
matches
0"Then it grew warm enough"
1"Only a narrow gap filled"
2"Just the paper, damp at"
3"Then she raised one hand."
4"Only two smooth hollows beneath"
5"Then a third."
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences185
matches
0"They rose from the ground"
1"She stepped through."
2"Her voice travelled farther than"
3"It slipped through the trees"
4"She had come because Eva’s"
5"She hated them."
6"She had asked Silas to"
7"He had watched her lace"
8"he had said"
9"She had gone anyway."
10"Their stems bent towards her"
11"She did not laugh now."
12"Her hand closed around the"
13"It made a child’s choking"
14"She backed towards the stone."
15"Her boots brushed the wildflowers."
16"They recoiled from the leather,"
17"It formed an almost perfect"
18"She had left the bar"
19"She pressed the side button."
ratio0.249
30.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount159
totalSentences185
matches
0"Aurora Carter caught the gate"
1"The oak standing stones had"
2"They rose from the ground"
3"Rory kept one hand on"
4"The deep crimson pendant pulsed"
5"She stepped through."
6"The gate clicked behind her."
7"Rory turned at once."
8"The stones stood in a"
9"Her voice travelled farther than"
10"It slipped through the trees"
11"The pendant cooled."
12"Rory let it fall beneath"
13"The silver chain scraped her"
14"She had come because Eva’s"
15"Eva never used full stops."
16"She hated them."
17"Rory had found the message"
18"She had asked Silas to"
19"He had watched her lace"
ratio0.859
27.03% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences185
matches
0"Now the clearing stretched before"
ratio0.005
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He had watched her lace her boots from behind the bar, jaw working as though he chewed a bad thought."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.105
87.8023%