Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40C9R8XASAD2V3V9XX5VJ5

Run Details

Duration:
14.0s
Cost:
$0.015254
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones rose from the grass like the ribs of something buried beneath Richmond Park. Aurora stopped between them, one hand closed around the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone pressed against her palm, warm as a living thing. Its crimson centre pulsed once. Then the air split. No thunder came. No flash. The world simply drew a dark line through itself. Beyond it lay amber light, deep and molten, spilling across the roots of the oaks. Vines curled through the opening, heavy with black grapes. Somewhere on the far side, water ran over stone. Nyx leaned closer. Their tall silhouette thinned at the edges, smoke lifting from their shoulders. “Not Earth,” their wind-borne voice murmured. Isolde touched one of the standing stones with two fingers. Her silver hair drifted around her though the night air stood still. “A door without hinges opens wide,” she murmured. “A feast without guests still sets its table.” Aurora glanced at her. “That means we’re walking into a trap.” “It means the table is set.” “Helpful.” Isolde’s pale lavender eyes rested on the rift. “The truth has never promised comfort.” Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade from its sheath. Moonlight gathered along the slender, leaf-shaped edge. Cold climbed through her fingers, sharp enough to ache. She held it out and touched the point to the shimmering boundary. The Veil shuddered. A thin crack of silver light ran from the dagger’s tip to the ground. The rift opened another foot. Behind her, Eva sucked in a breath. Aurora looked back. “Stay close. Don’t touch anything unless I tell you.” Eva folded her arms, though her knuckles had gone white. “You say that as if I make a habit of touching cursed objects.” “You touched the brass door in the church crypt.” “It had a handprint on it.” “It was a handprint made of teeth.” “You didn’t know that until it bit you.” Nyx turned their faintly glowing violet eyes towards the gap. “Something listens.” Aurora’s grip tightened around the dagger. “What?” The shadow beneath the nearest oak shifted against the direction of the moon. “Everything.” They crossed together. Cold vanished first. Then the smell of wet grass. Aurora stepped onto soil that gave beneath her boot with a slow, damp sigh. Amber light washed over her face. She looked back once. The standing stones still stood on the other side, pale beneath the moon, but Richmond Park had become a narrow picture framed by the rift. Eva’s red coat appeared grey. The night beyond her looked impossibly distant. Aurora stepped farther in. The opening sealed without a sound. For several seconds none of them moved. The sky stretched above them in a vast sheet of warm amber, darker near the horizon and bright overhead, as if the heavens held a sun beneath their surface. Long clouds drifted across it, but they moved against the wind. Each one glowed at the edges with a thin, red fire. A vineyard climbed the hills ahead. The vines did not grow from poles. They twisted around ivory arches, rising from the earth in graceful loops. Black grapes hung in clustered masses, each fruit the size of a plum. Their skins reflected faces that vanished when Aurora blinked. Eva saw them too. “Those grapes have eyes.” “Don’t look at them for long,” Isolde said. Eva tore her gaze away. “Why?” “They become lonely.” Aurora glanced at Isolde. The seer had already begun walking. No footprints marked the dark soil beneath her boots. Aurora followed, the dagger held low. The ground felt warm through her soles. It flexed in places, as if something beneath it shifted when they passed. Tiny blue flowers opened along the path. Their petals unfolded one by one, revealing black centres lined with pale teeth. Nyx moved beside the vines, half-solid and half-lost in the amber air. Their shoulder passed through a hanging branch. The grapes trembled. A whisper travelled through the vineyard. Aurora heard her own name. Rory. She stopped. Eva caught her sleeve. “You heard it.” The voice came again, softer. Rory. Aurora raised the dagger. “Who’s there?” The vines rustled. A figure appeared between the rows. It had a man’s shape, but its skin looked stretched from translucent wax. A white apron covered its chest. Its mouth opened too wide, and a silver fork protruded from its tongue. Nyx stepped in front of Aurora. Shadow gathered around their arms. The figure bowed. “Guests,” it croaked. “At last.” “Keep walking,” Nyx whispered. The creature’s head tilted. “The prince dislikes empty chairs.” Aurora held the dagger steady. “Which prince?” The creature smiled. Its teeth were small, square, and polished. “Belphegor.” It vanished between one breath and the next. The vineyard carried on around them, rows climbing towards the amber horizon. Eva stared at the space it had occupied. “That wasn’t a person.” “No,” Isolde replied. “What was it?” “A servant who had forgotten the shape of hunger.” Eva looked at Aurora. “You understood that?” “I understood enough.” A hill rose ahead, crowned by a garden enclosed in walls of red glass. Beyond it, towers pierced the glowing sky. Their roofs curved like folded wings. Bridges joined them in impossible angles, crossing not only the space between buildings but the air above and below. Lanterns floated beneath the bridges, each flame burning inside a small golden cage. Music drifted across the fields. Strings, perhaps. A flute. Beneath them all, a slow pulse like a heartbeat. The path narrowed as they climbed. Orchards replaced the vines. The trees bore unfamiliar fruit: pale spheres dusted with frost, long red pods that twitched when the wind touched them, and clusters of translucent berries filled with drifting sparks. One burst as Aurora passed. A sharp scent filled the air—pepper, rain, and hot metal. Her mouth watered before she could stop it. Eva noticed. “Don’t eat.” “I wasn’t going to.” “You were staring.” “I was assessing.” “You licked your lips.” Aurora wiped her mouth with the back of her hand. “Fine. Don’t let me eat anything.” Nyx’s head turned towards the trees. “The fruit remembers every mouth.” “Wonderful,” Eva muttered. At the top of the hill, the garden wall opened into a gate. No guards stood there. Instead, two enormous stone hounds crouched on either side. Their bodies had been carved from dark red rock veined with gold. Their eyes held tiny flames. The left hound lifted its head. “Name your appetite.” Eva took a step back. Aurora looked at Isolde. The seer stood before the gate, silver hair bright beneath the amber sky. “A name is a key,” she murmured. “A key is a promise. A promise is a chain.” The right hound bared its stone teeth. “Name your appetite.” Aurora’s hand closed around the Heartstone. Warmth pulsed against her skin. “To leave,” she said. The hounds went still. The left one sniffed the air. Its nostrils opened like cracks in a furnace. “False.” Aurora’s heartbeat thudded in her ears. “No. That’s what I want.” “Want is not appetite.” The Heartstone flared. Crimson light seeped between her fingers. The right hound turned its head towards the pendant. “Dymas remembers its blood.” Aurora drew the chain over her head and held the pendant out. The deep crimson stone glowed faintly, its inner light moving like something alive beneath ice. The hounds lowered themselves to the ground. “Enter,” one growled. “Why?” Eva asked. The stone jaws opened together. “Because the feast has already begun.” The gate swung inward. Heat rolled over them, carrying scents so rich Aurora’s stomach clenched: roasted herbs, caramelised onions, citrus peel, smoke, wine, and something sweet that reminded her of childhood kitchens. Beneath it ran a sour note, like meat left too long in the sun. Inside, the garden spread across a shallow valley. Trees with silver trunks bent over streams of red water. Flowers as tall as houses opened and closed in slow breaths. Their petals shone with liquid colour. Small winged creatures darted among them, each no larger than a hand, with glassy bodies and mouths full of needles. Farther down, a white road curved through the garden. People walked along it in bright clothing. Some wore masks shaped like animals. Others carried platters. A woman with antlers laughed beside a man whose head had been replaced by a porcelain bowl. At the road’s end stood a palace of black stone. Its walls gleamed as though polished with oil. Golden windows burned in rows, too many for the number of floors. The highest tower disappeared into the amber sky. Eva’s fingers tightened around Aurora’s arm. “We should go back.” “The door’s gone,” Aurora said. Eva looked behind them. The gate remained open, but beyond it lay only a wall of red glass. Through the glass, something huge moved beneath the soil. Isolde watched the shape pass. “Some roads close behind the traveller,” she said. “Some travellers close behind the road.” “I’m beginning to miss London,” Eva muttered. A bell rang from the palace. The sound rolled over the garden. Every flower closed. The winged creatures dropped from the air and hid beneath the leaves. Conversation died along the white road. At the bottom of the hill, dozens of heads turned towards them. The guests wore masks now. Foxes. Swans. Boars. A woman with a crown of grapes lifted her glass. A man in a red coat slowly removed a strip of meat from between his teeth. Nyx’s shadow stretched across the ground. “Stay behind me.” Aurora raised the Fae blade. Its edge gleamed beneath the amber sky. “No,” she said. “We walk together.” Isolde smiled without warmth. “Three enter beneath a hungry sun,” she murmured. “One carries a heart, one carries a shadow, and one carries a door.” Eva looked at her. “Which one am I?” Isolde’s pale eyes shifted towards the palace. “The door that has not yet opened.” The palace doors parted. A wave of music spilled into the garden, followed by the clatter of hundreds of plates. At the top of the steps, a tall figure waited in a coat the colour of dried blood. His face remained hidden beneath a mask of gilded bone. In one hand he held a wineglass. In the other, a silver bell. He lifted the glass towards Aurora. “Come,” he called. “Your place has been waiting.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1720
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1720
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"porcelain"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"trembled"
2"whisper"
3"pulse"
4"warmth"
5"stomach"
6"porcelain"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences192
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences192
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences243
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1719
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount1432
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone3
Isolde9
Aurora26
Fae-forged1
Veil1
Eva16
Nyx7
Fae2
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Isolde"
2"Aurora"
3"Veil"
4"Eva"
5"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.592
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences116
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.582
wordCount1719
matches
0"not only the space between buildings but the air above"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences243
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs140
mean12.28
std12.48
cv1.016
sampleLengths
016
130
24
347
415
56
622
716
811
96
101
1114
1236
133
1419
157
1612
1723
189
196
207
218
2210
232
247
2513
261
273
2833
2937
304
316
327
3351
3447
354
364
378
386
393
404
416
429
4346
4422
456
465
471
482
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences192
matches
0"been carved"
1"been replaced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs238
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences243
ratio0.004
matches
0"A sharp scent filled the air—pepper, rain, and hot metal."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1438
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"slender, leaf-shaped edge."
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.027816411682892908
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.004867872044506259
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences243
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences243
mean7.07
std4.69
cv0.663
sampleLengths
016
114
211
35
44
53
62
79
815
99
109
113
1212
136
1410
1512
168
178
184
197
206
211
228
236
248
257
269
2712
283
2914
305
317
323
339
3410
3513
369
376
387
398
4010
412
426
431
4413
451
463
473
486
4914
55.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.36213991769547327
totalSentences243
uniqueOpeners88
80.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences166
matches
0"Then the air split."
1"Somewhere on the far side,"
2"Then the smell of wet"
3"Instead, two enormous stone hounds"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences166
matches
0"Its crimson centre pulsed once."
1"Their tall silhouette thinned at"
2"their wind-borne voice murmured"
3"Her silver hair drifted around"
4"She held it out and"
5"They crossed together."
6"She looked back once."
7"They twisted around ivory arches,"
8"Their skins reflected faces that"
9"It flexed in places, as"
10"Their petals unfolded one by"
11"Their shoulder passed through a"
12"It had a man’s shape,"
13"Its mouth opened too wide,"
14"Its teeth were small, square,"
15"It vanished between one breath"
16"Their roofs curved like folded"
17"Her mouth watered before she"
18"Their bodies had been carved"
19"Their eyes held tiny flames."
ratio0.157
50.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount136
totalSentences166
matches
0"The standing stones rose from"
1"Aurora stopped between them, one"
2"The Heartstone pressed against her"
3"Its crimson centre pulsed once."
4"The world simply drew a"
5"Vines curled through the opening,"
6"Nyx leaned closer."
7"Their tall silhouette thinned at"
8"their wind-borne voice murmured"
9"Isolde touched one of the"
10"Her silver hair drifted around"
11"Aurora glanced at her."
12"Isolde’s pale lavender eyes rested"
13"Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade"
14"Moonlight gathered along the slender,"
15"She held it out and"
16"The Veil shuddered."
17"A thin crack of silver"
18"The rift opened another foot."
19"Aurora looked back."
ratio0.819
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The sky stretched above them in a vast sheet of warm amber, darker near the horizon and bright overhead, as if the heavens held a sun beneath their surface."
1"The trees bore unfamiliar fruit: pale spheres dusted with frost, long red pods that twitched when the wind touched them, and clusters of translucent berries fil…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"their wind-borne voice murmured (murmur)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"it croaked (croak)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Eva muttered (mutter)"
5"she murmured (murmur)"
6"Eva muttered (mutter)"
7"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.235
leniency0.471
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.235
87.7658%