Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40E5EHH637F3QPT0BXSN59

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.108320
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain pasted takeaway menus to the Soho pavement and turned the green neon raven above the door into a trembling smear. Aurora shouldered into the Nest backwards, balancing the empty thermal box against one hip. The bell gave its cracked complaint. Silas glanced up from polishing a tumbler. “You’re dripping on my floor.” “You’ve got a roof. Use it.” “I have. That’s why the rain’s on you.” Rory set the box beside the coat stand and peeled off her cycling gloves with her teeth. Her black hair clung to her cheeks. A stripe of road grit crossed one sleeve of her jacket, and cold water had worked through both socks. “Yu-Fei sent noodles.” “Yu-Fei sent noodles yesterday.” “She believes starvation begins twelve hours after your last chow mein.” “Put them in the kitchen.” Silas’s silver signet ring clicked against the glass as he placed it on the shelf. Behind him, bottles glowed in amber rows. Old maps sagged between framed photographs of vanished streets, dead politicians and men who had known how to wear hats without looking as though they had borrowed them for a wedding. Thursday rain had thinned the room. Two actors argued over a crossword in the corner. A woman in a red coat slept upright beneath a map of Vienna. At the far end of the bar, someone sat with a straight back and a glass of untouched whisky. Rory stopped with one glove hanging from her hand. The woman had cut her hair short. Not fashionable-short, not soft around the ears, but close enough to show the white seam that ran from her left temple into her scalp. Her old copper curls were gone. So were the hoops, the chipped nail varnish and the jumble of silver chains she had worn even in school photographs. A charcoal suit held her body in clean, hard lines. The woman turned. Her face tightened around Rory’s name before she spoke it. “Rory.” Four years collapsed into that single breath, then sprang back into place: Cardiff Central beneath the departure board, Eva crying without making a sound, Rory gripping a ticket to Paddington in one hand and covering the bruise on her throat with the other. Rory put the glove in her pocket. “Eva.” Silas looked between them. No question reached his face, but his hand moved the whisky bottle away from the edge of the bar. Eva slipped off the stool. She had once been half an inch shorter than Rory and furious about it. Now flat black shoes kept them level. “You work here?” “I live upstairs.” “In the bar?” “Above it. Even London landlords draw a line somewhere.” Eva’s gaze travelled over the delivery jacket, the damp jeans, the crescent scar showing where Rory’s sleeve had ridden up. “I went to the address in Camden.” “That was three addresses ago.” “I rang.” “I changed my number.” “I noticed.” Silas placed a folded towel beside Rory. “You’ll catch cold standing there.” “Grand medical insight.” “The whisky improves it.” “The whisky improves your till.” His mouth moved beneath his beard, not quite a smile. “Your friend?” Rory rubbed rain from her face with the towel. It smelled of lemons and old wood. “Eva Morgan. We grew up together.” Eva held out a hand. Silas took it, his ring flashing beneath the hanging lamps. “Silas Blackwood.” “I know.” His grip remained around hers for one beat. “That saves time.” “I recognised the sign.” “Most people do. It’s illuminated.” Eva withdrew her hand and returned to her stool. Rory watched Silas’s left leg stiffen as he crossed to the till. He had heard whatever hid inside Eva’s answer. He heard loose floorboards sigh under locked doors. Rory sat one stool away. “What happened to your hair?” Eva touched the scar at her temple. “What happened to your degree?” “Noodles first, then personal failure. House policy.” “You always wanted to argue.” “No. My father wanted me to argue for money. I did it for free.” Eva looked into the whisky. Its surface had stayed unbroken. “You left Cardiff University.” “You checked.” “I asked your mother.” Rory folded the towel into a square, then another square. “When?” “Last Christmas.” “And she told you where I was?” “She told me you were alive.” A bottle knocked against the shelf when Silas set it down. Across the room, one of the actors pencilled a word into the crossword and received a hissed insult for his trouble. Rory pressed her thumb into the towel’s folded edge. “Mam has a gift for withholding the noun you need.” “She thought I already knew.” “You did. Once.” Eva picked up the whisky, studied it against the light, then put it down without drinking. “I gave you the money for that train.” “You gave me seventy pounds.” “It was all I had.” “I remember.” “No, you remember the station. You remember Evan calling every three minutes and me switching off your phone. You remember getting on the train. The rest seems to have gone missing.” Rory’s jaw set at the name. Even after four years, those two syllables entered a room before the man did, shoving furniture aside. “You told me to leave. I left.” “I told you to ring when you got to London.” “I did.” “You left a message at two in the morning. ‘I’m here, don’t worry.’ That was it.” “It was enough.” “For you.” Silas approached with a mug. Steam carried the sharp scent of ginger. “I didn’t order that.” “No. Your fingers are blue.” Rory wrapped both hands around it. Heat stung her knuckles. Eva watched the exchange. “You drink tea now.” “I always drank tea.” “You drank instant coffee with six sugars.” “We were seventeen. Our blood could take a joke.” “You hated ginger.” “I hated most things you liked.” “You followed me everywhere.” “You had a car.” “An orange Fiat with moss in the boot.” “It moved.” “Downhill.” A laugh escaped Eva, thin and startled. It altered her face more than the missing hair. For a moment Rory saw the girl who had climbed the locked gates of their comprehensive at midnight because she had left her art portfolio under a desk. Eva had torn her tights on the spikes. Rory had split her wrist on broken glass forcing a window. They had told both families that a fox had attacked them. The laugh vanished. Eva traced the rim of her glass. “They took part of my skull out.” Rory’s hands tightened around the mug. Silas moved to the other end of the bar. He carried his limp without disguising it, each uneven step a firm claim on the floor. Eva tipped her head, offering the scar to the light. “Only for a few hours. Put it back after the swelling went down.” “What happened?” “Car. Tree. Wet road.” “You weren’t driving.” Eva looked at her. The ginger caught in Rory’s throat. “You were.” “I wasn’t drunk.” “I didn’t ask.” “You looked at the whisky.” “I looked at you not drinking it.” Eva pushed the glass away. Silas caught it at the bar’s edge and replaced it with water. “February three years ago. Outside Brecon. I’d been awake for thirty hours. Mum had fallen in the kitchen, and the hospital kept losing her scans. I thought I could make it home.” “You didn’t tell me.” “I couldn’t remember your number.” “You could’ve asked Mam.” “I couldn’t remember your surname.” Rory stared at her. Eva tapped two fingers against her temple. “Traumatic brain injury. Memory, speech, balance. They gave me cards with pictures on them. Spoon. Cat. House. I called the cat a spoon for six weeks.” The woman in the red coat woke, blinked at the map of Vienna, then lowered her head again. Rory searched Eva’s face for the quick grin that used to follow a monstrous lie. Eva had never managed to keep one corner of her mouth still. Nothing moved. “And now?” “Now I sell insurance.” “That sounds worse.” “It has dental.” Rory swallowed. The ginger burned a path into her chest. “You could have found me.” “I did find you. Tonight.” “You know what I mean.” Eva opened her water and drank. The bottle crackled beneath her grip. “After the accident, I found your old message on a cloud backup. Eleven seconds. Your voice sounded…” She stopped and pressed her tongue against the inside of her cheek. “You sounded relieved. I listened until the file corrupted.” “You kept one message for three years?” “It was the last proof I had that I’d done one useful thing.” Rory shoved the folded towel across the bar. It struck a bowl of peanuts and sent one spinning into Silas’s workspace. “You don’t get to make yourself the tragic hero because I didn’t call.” “I didn’t.” “You walked in here wearing a funeral suit and ordered whisky you won’t touch.” “I came from a funeral.” The actors fell silent. One folded the crossword along its crease. Rory’s anger lost its shape but not its force. “Who?” “My mother.” The rain tapped the front windows with a thousand blunt nails. Eva turned the water bottle between her palms. No ring marked her fingers. A faint burn crossed the back of her right hand, pale and glossy. Rory lowered her voice. “When?” “Tuesday.” “Mam didn’t tell me.” “I asked her not to.” “Why?” “I didn’t want you there because someone felt obliged to summon you. Mum loved you. You vanished, and she kept buying that apricot jam you liked until the jars filled half a cupboard.” “I wrote to her.” “One card. No return address.” “I wrote.” “I know.” Rory pushed the mug away, then pulled it back. Her body could not settle on a direction. “I didn’t vanish to punish you.” “I know that now.” “You knew it then.” “No.” Eva rubbed the burn on her hand. “Then I thought London had swallowed you and you preferred its stomach.” “Evan found me twice.” Eva’s fingers stopped. Rory watched steam thread from the mug and break against her chin. “He found the Camden place. Left flowers outside for a week. Then he waited by the Tube. I moved south. He found that one too.” “Did he hurt you?” “Not the second time.” “What does that mean?” “It means I learnt to make a fist.” Eva’s stool scraped back. “Where is he?” “Sit down.” “Where?” “I don’t know. Manchester, according to the last person who cared.” “You should’ve called me.” “You had the orange death trap and thirty-seven pounds after the train ticket. What were you going to do, reverse over him?” “Yes.” The answer came clean. Rory looked at her, and the years between them acquired edges: hospital corridors, rented rooms, unanswered numbers, funeral flowers, a jar of apricot jam going dark at the back of a cupboard. Silas set a fresh glass in front of Eva and poured tonic over ice. “This one won’t argue with your medication.” Eva glanced at him. “I didn’t mention medication.” “You didn’t drink the whisky.” “That could mean discipline.” “Not with the way you looked at it.” She took the tonic. “Do you interrogate everyone who comes in?” “Only those who recognise the sign.” Rory turned on her stool. “What did you mean by that?” Eva examined the bubbles climbing through her drink. “I’ve seen it in photographs.” “What photographs?” “Work.” “You sell insurance.” “I assess corporate risk.” “That’s insurance with cufflinks.” “Mostly.” Silas leaned one hip against the counter, taking the weight off his injured knee. “Which photograph?” Eva met his hazel eyes. “Prague. Nineteen ninety-eight. A café window reflected a green raven across the street. Different premises, same design.” The room seemed to draw itself closer around the bar. Rory looked from Eva to Silas. His face had gone still, though his thumb moved once across the silver signet ring. “You’ve changed jobs since the orange Fiat,” Rory murmured. “So have you.” “I deliver noodles.” Eva glanced at the old maps, the black-and-white photographs, then at the bookshelf set too deep into the rear wall. “Mostly.” Rory followed her gaze and caught the fraction of an inch by which the shelf stood open. Silas picked up Eva’s abandoned whisky. “Who sent you here?” “No one.” “Poor answer.” “It was the only honest one I had.” Rory slid off her stool and planted herself between them. “Her mother died on Tuesday.” “I heard.” “She came for a drink.” “She didn’t drink it.” Eva reached inside her jacket. Rory caught her wrist. The movement happened before thought. Eva froze. Beneath Rory’s fingers, her pulse struck hard and fast. “Don’t.” Eva opened her hand. A creased envelope rested in her palm, soft at the corners from being carried. “It’s yours.” Rory released her. Her name crossed the front in blue ink: Aurora Carter, each letter tilted forwards in the hand of Eva’s mother. No address. No stamp. Eva placed the envelope beside the ginger tea. “She wrote it before the operation. Her first one, not mine. She made me promise to give it to you in person.” “How long have you had it?” “Five years.” Rory stared at the envelope. “You saw my mother at Christmas.” “I asked how to find you. She told me about the green sign and the flat upstairs.” “And you waited until now?” “I stood outside three times.” Rory touched the first letter of her name. The paper had absorbed a faint scent of lavender and cigarette smoke, a kitchen in Cardiff with yellow cupboards and a radio that never held its station. “What stopped you?” Eva’s close-cropped head lowered. “The first time, I forgot why I’d come. The second, I remembered.” “And the third?” “You walked out with your delivery box. You looked past me.” “I didn’t see you.” “I know.” Rory drew the envelope towards her but did not open it. Eva held the tonic between both hands. “I came in tonight because I had nowhere else left to take it.” Silas set a second mug beside Eva. Ginger steam rose between them. Eva looked at it, then at Rory. “Still hate this stuff?” Rory curled her fingers around the old envelope. “More than most things you like.” Eva pulled the mug closer. “Good.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences177
tagDensity0.017
leniency0.034
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2373
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2373
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"stomach"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences140
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences314
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2373
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Four years collapsed into that single breath, then sprang back into place: Cardiff Central beneath the departure board, …"
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions109
wordCount1348
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity3.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Nest1
Vienna2
Rory41
Cardiff2
Central1
Eva41
Paddington1
Silas16
Aurora2
Carter1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Aurora"
4"Carter"
places
0"Soho"
1"Nest"
2"Vienna"
3"Cardiff"
4"Paddington"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.843
wordCount2373
matches
0"Not fashionable-short, not soft around the ears, but close enough to show the white seam"
1"not soft around the ears, but close enough to show the white seam"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences314
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs261
mean9.09
std10.54
cv1.159
sampleLengths
041
17
25
36
48
543
63
74
811
95
1053
1147
129
1368
143
1510
161
1743
187
191
2023
2126
223
233
243
259
2620
277
285
292
304
312
327
335
343
354
365
3710
382
3916
406
4115
422
432
448
453
464
475
489
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences140
matches
0"were gone"
1"being carried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs219
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences314
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1352
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.020710059171597635
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences314
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences314
mean7.56
std6.43
cv0.851
sampleLengths
021
114
26
37
45
56
68
717
87
919
103
114
1211
135
1415
157
1631
176
189
1913
2019
219
227
2324
246
2521
2610
273
2810
291
3043
317
321
334
3419
355
3614
377
383
393
403
419
4220
437
445
452
464
472
487
495
43.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.25477707006369427
totalSentences314
uniqueOpeners80
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences134
matches
0"Her black hair clung to"
1"Her old copper curls were"
2"Her face tightened around Rory’s"
3"She had once been half"
4"His mouth moved beneath his"
5"It smelled of lemons and"
6"His grip remained around hers"
7"He had heard whatever hid"
8"He heard loose floorboards sigh"
9"Its surface had stayed unbroken."
10"It altered her face more"
11"They had told both families"
12"He carried his limp without"
13"She stopped and pressed her"
14"It struck a bowl of"
15"Her body could not settle"
16"She took the tonic."
17"His face had gone still,"
18"Her name crossed the front"
ratio0.142
19.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences134
matches
0"Aurora shouldered into the Nest"
1"The bell gave its cracked"
2"Silas glanced up from polishing"
3"Rory set the box beside"
4"Her black hair clung to"
5"A stripe of road grit"
6"Silas’s silver signet ring clicked"
7"Thursday rain had thinned the"
8"A woman in a red"
9"Rory stopped with one glove"
10"The woman had cut her"
11"Her old copper curls were"
12"A charcoal suit held her"
13"The woman turned."
14"Her face tightened around Rory’s"
15"Rory put the glove in"
16"Silas looked between them."
17"Eva slipped off the stool."
18"She had once been half"
19"Eva’s gaze travelled over the"
ratio0.881
74.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences134
matches
0"Now flat black shoes kept"
1"Even after four years, those"
ratio0.015
99.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Old maps sagged between framed photographs of vanished streets, dead politicians and men who had known how to wear hats without looking as though they had borro…"
1"Not fashionable-short, not soft around the ears, but close enough to show the white seam that ran from her left temple into her scalp."
2"For a moment Rory saw the girl who had climbed the locked gates of their comprehensive at midnight because she had left her art portfolio under a desk."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences177
tagDensity0.006
leniency0.011
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.011
87.6219%