Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40G7R5Z681HJFG1JK3P60N

Run Details

Duration:
16.7s
Cost:
$0.015933
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened on the first deadbolt, then the second, then the third. Aurora Carter kept one hand wrapped around the handle and the other hidden behind her thigh, fingers curled around the small kitchen knife she had lifted from the draining board. Ptolemy hissed from somewhere near the umbrella stand. The curry house below sent up a thick cloud of cumin, frying onions, and burnt cardamom, which clung to the cramped hallway. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing. Rain darkened the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair remained slicked back, though one pale strand had escaped above his left eyebrow. He held his ivory-handled cane in one gloved hand. The amber eye fixed on her face. The black one watched the knife. His mouth tightened. “Still welcoming.” “Still breaking into places?” “I knocked.” “People knock before they arrive. You arrived before the knock.” “I had a punctual disagreement with the door.” Aurora kept the knife where he couldn’t reach it, though the blade felt absurdly small beside the weapon hidden in his cane. Three years ago, she had watched him draw that thin blade beneath the lights of a Soho nightclub. She had watched him put it against a man’s throat, then lower it because she had asked him to. She had not asked him to leave. That had been the problem. “Why are you here?” Lucien glanced down the narrow stairwell. The landing smelled of wet wool and curry leaves. Somewhere behind the wall, a television blared a game show audience into hysterics. “I’d prefer to discuss that inside.” “You preferred many things.” His gaze returned to hers. The amber eye warmed with something that looked too much like pain before the black one swallowed it. “Aurora.” Nobody used her full name with that particular weight. Her father used it when she had disappointed him. Evan had used it before he shut a door. Lucien had used it when he wanted her to stop pretending she could carry everything alone. She opened the door another inch, enough to see the rain dripping from the brim of his black hat. He had not worn one when they parted. He had stood outside the Golden Empress in a white shirt stained with blood, his cane planted between them, while she told him she would never trust him again. He had replied, “You have already trusted me with worse.” She had hated him for making that sound like an accusation. Ptolemy crept into the hall, his striped tail puffed, and wedged himself between her ankles. Lucien lowered his gaze. “Your guardian remains unimpressed.” “He’s not my guardian. He’s Eva’s cat.” “An important distinction.” “Go back to whichever private hell produces your post at this hour.” The corner of his mouth lifted, but the expression failed before it became a smile. “I came from Mayfair.” “Then take the train.” “I need your help.” Aurora laughed once. It came out flat. Lucien’s hand tightened around the cane. “I know how that sounds.” “It sounds familiar.” “Yes.” That single word landed harder than an argument. He had not defended himself. He had not produced a clever excuse in French or one of those polished half-truths that kept the supernatural underworld trading information through him. He had accepted the blow and stood there with rainwater running from his sleeve to his wrist. Aurora looked at the street beyond him. Headlights washed across the brick buildings. A cyclist swore at a taxi. London continued, indifferent and wet. “What kind of help?” “Not on the landing.” “Why? Afraid someone will overhear?” “I’m afraid you’ll close the door.” “You should have considered that before you came.” “I considered little else.” The knife shifted in her grip. He noticed. Of course he noticed. Lucien noticed everything: a tremor in a hand, a new lock on a door, the direction someone’s shoes pointed when they lied. “You have ten seconds,” she said. “I need the research notes Eva took from the Avaros archive.” Aurora’s fingers went still. “You mean the notes she hid in three biscuit tins, under the mattress, and inside the cistern?” “Those notes.” “Why?” “Because someone has started killing the people who worked on the translation.” Her gaze moved over him. The flawless suit. The wet gloves. The cane. No visible blood except the faint rust-coloured smear along the cuff of his left sleeve. “Are you one of them?” “If I were, you would not ask me from behind an open door.” “That wasn’t an answer.” “No. It was a practical observation.” She pushed the door wider but did not step aside. Lucien looked past her into the flat. Every surface had vanished beneath books, scrolls, loose papers, ink bottles, and mugs in various stages of decay. Eva’s research covered the sofa and spilled across the floor in layered heaps. A lamp leaned against a stack of dictionaries. Ptolemy slipped inside and sprang onto the armchair, where he began licking one paw with the solemnity of a priest. Lucien’s eyes settled on the scar at Aurora’s left wrist. The crescent was pale against her skin. His attention lingered there for half a second. She pulled her sleeve down. “Five seconds.” “I am not killing anyone.” “That’s a low standard.” “It is the standard you set when we last spoke.” The blade in her hand seemed to grow heavier. Their last conversation had taken place in an alley behind the restaurant, with rain hammering the bins and Lucien’s blood running into the gutter. She had demanded the truth. He had given her the part that protected her and withheld the part that would have let her understand him. Then he had kissed her. It had not been gentle. It had tasted of iron, whisky, and fury. She had gripped his lapels and kissed him back before shoving him away. The next morning, he had vanished. “Three seconds,” she said. “You counted down from ten.” “I changed my mind.” “You always did have a talent for moving the goalposts.” “You always did have a talent for standing on the wrong side of them.” The words cut. His face showed it, though the rest of him remained composed. For a moment, neither of them moved. Then Lucien reached into his coat. Aurora lifted the knife. His hand stopped. Slowly, he withdrew a folded sheet of paper and held it between two fingers. “I brought proof.” “Put it on the floor.” “Aurora.” “Floor.” He crouched with a stiffness that had not been there before. The cane remained in his left hand while he placed the paper on the mat. His knee nearly touched the threshold. She caught the scent of rain, leather, and the faint smoky sweetness that always clung to him, a trace of something not quite human. He rose. She picked up the paper without lowering the knife. A symbol had been drawn across it in black ink: three interlocking circles cut by a vertical line. Beneath it sat six names. She knew three. Eva knew all six. One name had been crossed out. Aurora’s pulse thudded against the scar on her wrist. “Where did you get this?” “From a man who lost his tongue before he lost his life.” “Comforting.” “I have never advertised comfort.” “You advertised discretion.” “And I practised it.” “You practised disappearing.” His gaze sharpened. “You told me to leave.” “I told you to tell me the truth.” “I told you enough.” “You told me what you thought I could survive.” “I told you what would keep you alive.” “You don’t get to make that choice for me.” “I made it because you were standing in front of a door that led to Avaros with no weapon, no allies, and no idea what waited on the other side.” “I had you.” The words came out before she could stop them. Lucien went quiet. Aurora hated the way the silence changed him. His shoulders lowered. The hard line of his mouth softened. For three years, she had carried the memory of him looking at her as if she had handed him something breakable. She had resented him for taking it so seriously. “I know,” he said. Rain ticked against the window at the end of the landing. Ptolemy yowled from inside the flat, then knocked a mug off the armchair. It struck the floor and shattered. Aurora flinched toward the sound. Lucien moved at the same instant. His hand caught her elbow before she crossed the threshold, warm even through her jumper. The contact lasted less than a breath. She looked down at his fingers. He released her. “Don’t touch me.” “I apologise.” “You don’t.” “I do.” “No, you regret that I noticed.” His jaw flexed. “There is a distinction.” “Not when you’re the one doing it.” She stepped back into the flat and pointed the knife towards the stairs. “Leave the paper. I’ll read it.” “I need the notes.” “You can’t have them.” “Then let me in.” “You have a remarkable sense of entitlement for a man standing outside my friend’s flat in the rain.” “Your friend’s flat contains information that may prevent more deaths.” “And you expect me to hand it over because you arrived with a list and a tragic expression?” “My expression is hereditary.” “Your family sounds exhausting.” His eyes flicked over her face, catching on her mouth before returning to her eyes. “My family is dead.” The anger in her chest faltered. Lucien stepped closer, not crossing the threshold. His voice dropped, stripped of its usual polish. “I did not come here to reopen what happened between us.” “That makes one of us.” His breath caught. Aurora set the knife on the narrow table beside the door. She kept her hand near it. “You disappeared after kissing me.” “I left because you were being watched.” “You could have told me.” “I believed you would follow.” “I would have.” “I know.” “Then why?” He stared at her through the open doorway. Rainwater slid from his coat onto the landing boards. A dark line spread beneath his shoes. “Because I wanted one thing in my life that did not become a weapon.” Aurora’s throat tightened. Lucien looked away first, towards the crooked shelves and the chaos of Eva’s papers. When he spoke again, his voice had regained its careful shape. “Let me inside, Rory.” The old name struck deeper than Aurora. She had not heard him use it since the night in Soho, when his hand had rested at the small of her back and his mouth had brushed her temple while he translated a demon’s threat into French. Her fingers closed around the edge of the door. “You get ten minutes.” “I need longer.” “You get ten.” “Eight would be insulting.” “Then don’t insult me.” She moved aside. Lucien crossed the threshold, bringing the rain and the cold with him. His shoulder brushed hers. Neither of them looked at the other. Ptolemy sprang from the chair and hissed at his cane. Lucien glanced down at the cat. “Your host has not forgiven me.” “He has good instincts.” “Unlike some people.” Aurora shut the door behind him and turned the first deadbolt. The second. The third. When she faced him again, Lucien stood in the centre of the cramped flat with his cane in one hand and the wet paper forgotten on the mat between them. His gaze rested on her mouth. Aurora reached for the stack of notes on the table. “Start talking.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.039
leniency0.078
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1913
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1913
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"flawless"
count1
4
word"standard"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"comforting"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"shattered"
count1
9
word"remarkable"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"weight"
2"familiar"
3"flawless"
4"standard"
5"pulse"
6"comforting"
7"silence"
8"shattered"
9"remarkable"
10"sense of"
11"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences142
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences240
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1913
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.42% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1337
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Moreau1
Soho2
Golden1
Empress1
French2
Aurora15
Lucien17
Rain2
Eva3
Ptolemy5
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
4"Rain"
5"Eva"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Soho"
1"Golden"
2"French"
globalScore0.864
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite human"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1913
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences240
matches
0"making that sound"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs174
mean10.99
std12.91
cv1.174
sampleLengths
013
160
26
346
43
52
64
72
810
98
1059
117
125
134
1428
156
164
1723
181
1943
2056
2110
2211
2319
244
257
263
2712
2815
294
304
314
327
3311
343
351
3654
3724
384
394
405
416
428
434
4434
456
4611
474
4817
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences142
matches
0"been drawn"
1"been crossed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs230
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences240
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1340
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint rust-coloured smear"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.024626865671641792
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0029850746268656717
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences240
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences240
mean7.97
std6.1
cv0.766
sampleLengths
013
130
28
322
46
58
616
79
87
96
103
112
124
132
1410
158
1622
1718
1819
197
205
214
226
239
2413
256
264
275
2818
291
309
319
329
3316
3419
358
3629
3710
3811
3915
404
414
427
433
4412
4515
464
474
484
493
43.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.25416666666666665
totalSentences240
uniqueOpeners61
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences134
matches
0"Somewhere behind the wall, a"
1"Of course he noticed."
2"Then he had kissed her."
3"Then Lucien reached into his"
4"Slowly, he withdrew a folded"
ratio0.037
64.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences134
matches
0"His platinum hair remained slicked"
1"He held his ivory-handled cane"
2"His mouth tightened."
3"She had watched him put"
4"She had not asked him"
5"His gaze returned to hers."
6"Her father used it when"
7"She opened the door another"
8"He had not worn one"
9"He had stood outside the"
10"He had replied,"
11"She had hated him for"
12"It came out flat."
13"He had not defended himself."
14"He had not produced a"
15"He had accepted the blow"
16"Her gaze moved over him."
17"She pushed the door wider"
18"His attention lingered there for"
19"She pulled her sleeve down."
ratio0.388
8.51% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences134
matches
0"The door opened on the"
1"Aurora Carter kept one hand"
2"Ptolemy hissed from somewhere near"
3"The curry house below sent"
4"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
5"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
6"His platinum hair remained slicked"
7"He held his ivory-handled cane"
8"The amber eye fixed on"
9"The black one watched the"
10"His mouth tightened."
11"Aurora kept the knife where"
12"She had watched him put"
13"She had not asked him"
14"That had been the problem."
15"Lucien glanced down the narrow"
16"The landing smelled of wet"
17"His gaze returned to hers."
18"The amber eye warmed with"
19"Nobody used her full name"
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
ratio0
55.39% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The curry house below sent up a thick cloud of cumin, frying onions, and burnt cardamom, which clung to the cramped hallway."
1"The amber eye warmed with something that looked too much like pain before the black one swallowed it."
2"He had not produced a clever excuse in French or one of those polished half-truths that kept the supernatural underworld trading information through him."
3"Their last conversation had taken place in an alley behind the restaurant, with rain hammering the bins and Lucien’s blood running into the gutter."
4"For three years, she had carried the memory of him looking at her as if she had handed him something breakable."
5"His eyes flicked over her face, catching on her mouth before returning to her eyes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He had (have)"
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.039
leniency0.078
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.02
87.1948%