Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40H5AG4KD049KXKQBYXQ14

Run Details

Duration:
36.2s
Cost:
$0.045997
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora drew back the third deadbolt and opened the door with the chain still on. Lucien Moreau filled the gap between the frame and the hall’s peeling wallpaper as though Brick Lane had built itself around him by mistake. Rain darkened the shoulders of his charcoal coat. His platinum hair lay slicked back from his face, untouched by the weather. One eye caught the weak yellow light from Eva’s hall lamp: amber, bright as a struck match. The other held nothing but black. He rested both hands over the ivory knob of his cane. “Hello, Rory.” Her grip tightened around the door. Ptolemy sprang from the arm of the sofa and stalked across the floorboards, tail held high. He sniffed at the crack beneath the door, then let out a low, insulted noise. Aurora kept her face flat. “You had my address.” “I had several.” “And you picked the one where I sleep.” “I picked the one with three deadbolts.” “You counted them.” “You were taking your time.” “Good. You could stand there longer.” Lucien’s mouth shifted, not quite a smile. “You looked through the spyhole twice.” “I wanted to make sure it was you before I disappointed myself.” A burst of laughter rose from the curry house below, followed by the rattle of a delivery shutter. The corridor smelt of wet coats, old cooking oil, and someone’s burnt toast. Lucien looked too clean for it, too sharply cut. Even soaked by London rain, he carried Marseille in him somehow: expensive tobacco, bitter citrus, heat trapped in stone. Aurora hated that she remembered. He lowered his gaze to the chain. “Will you open the door?” “No.” “I need to speak with you.” “Then speak.” “Not through six inches of painted pine.” “You brought the pine into this.” His jaw set. The movement ran clean beneath pale skin. She had once known every small sign that he was losing patience: the way his thumb pressed against the ivory handle, the French syllables that sharpened at the corners, the stillness that came before he did something dangerous. Now she knew them and had nowhere to put the knowledge. “You left without a word,” he said. Aurora laughed once. “You came to my flat after eight months and led with that?” “You left without a word.” “I left because your last words to me were ‘get out of my car’.” “You had a knife to my throat.” “You had lied to my face.” “I had kept you alive.” “You had decided I needed keeping. There’s a difference.” Ptolemy shoved his head against Aurora’s bare shin. She bent and scooped him up, more for something to do with her hands than because the cat wanted it. His striped body settled against her chest, warm and solid. He fixed Lucien with green eyes and blinked once. Lucien looked at the cat. “Still judging me.” “He has excellent instincts.” “I fed him smoked salmon.” “You poisoned him with luxury. He was unbearable for a week.” “I recall you being unbearable as well.” “Careful. You’re nearly sounding fond.” The hall went quiet. Lucien took one hand from his cane. A thin line of blood marked his knuckles. Rainwater had diluted it pink across the back of his hand. Aurora’s stare dropped to it before she could stop herself. “You’re hurt.” “It is nothing.” “Of course it is.” “Rory.” “What?” “Open the door.” The old nickname landed differently when he used it without silk over the top. No teasing edge. No smug curl. Just her name, worn down by the journey. She should have shut the door. She should have slid the deadbolt home, gone back to Eva’s notes, and waited for her friend to return from whatever library basement had swallowed her that afternoon. Lucien had always arrived carrying trouble in one hand and an excuse in the other. But blood had seeped through the cuff of his white shirt. Aurora unhooked the chain. Lucien did not move until she stepped back. “Wipe your shoes,” she told him. His amber eye warmed. “You let me in for the mat.” “I let you in because if you bled on Eva’s carpet, she’d make me clean it with a toothbrush.” He entered with a slight limp, cane clicking against the floorboards. Ptolemy squirmed from Aurora’s arms and followed him at a suspicious distance. The flat crowded around Lucien. Books climbed in uneven stacks from floor to windowsill. Scrolls lay open across the dining table beneath Eva’s magnifying lamp. Notes covered the walls in strips of paper, each pinned with coloured thread and tiny black maps. The sofa had vanished under blankets, journals, and a half-folded basket of laundry. Lucien stopped beside a stack of books labelled DEMONIC CONTRACT LAW. “Eva’s collection had become more cheerful.” “Don’t touch anything.” “I had no intention.” “You touched the last thing you came near.” His eyes moved to her. For one ugly second, Aurora saw the black Mercedes parked beneath the railway arches. She saw Lucien’s hand around her wrist, not hard enough to bruise, hard enough to stop her opening the car door. She saw the black leather folder on his lap. Her own name inside it. Her father’s chambers. Her mother’s school. Every address she had ever tried to call home. The kitchen tap dripped. Lucien took off his coat. Blood spread along his sleeve from elbow to cuff. Aurora pointed towards the kitchen. “Sit.” “You had not changed.” “Sit before you fall over and dent the floor.” “I was not about to fall over.” “Then you can sit with dignity.” He gave the faintest incline of his head and crossed to the small table. He moved with care now. The limp had worsened since he stepped inside. Aurora watched him lower himself onto Eva’s mismatched wooden chair, one hand gripping the table edge. The sight stripped the bite from her anger faster than she liked. She put the kettle on, then opened the cupboard beneath the sink and pulled out the first-aid box. Eva had labelled it in thick black marker: FOR BLOOD, CURSES, OR MEN. “You’ve been here before,” Lucien noted. “She wrote that after you got glass in your shoulder.” “You pulled it out.” “You bit through a leather belt.” “It was a very good belt.” “You were impossible.” “I was in pain.” “You made pain everyone else’s hobby.” His black eye flickered. “Yes.” Aurora looked up. He sat with one hand pressed against his side. His shirt had split near the ribs, a dark stain spreading beneath his waistcoat. There was no smooth answer waiting behind his teeth this time. No joke, no clever turn, no polished escape route. She set the box on the table. “Take the shirt off.” Lucien raised his brows. “Don’t start.” “I had not said a word.” “Your face did.” “My face conveyed gratitude.” “Your face has never conveyed gratitude in its life.” He slipped off his jacket first, folding it over the chair back despite the blood. His movements remained precise. That was Lucien all over. A man could be bleeding into a stranger’s kitchen and still keep the crease in his trousers. When he reached for the buttons of his waistcoat, his hand shook. Aurora caught his wrist. The contact stopped them both. His skin felt cold. Not rain-cold. The kind that lived beneath the surface, the trace of whatever realm had made half of him. Her thumb rested against his pulse. It beat hard beneath the blood and bone. Lucien looked at her hand. “You could have called,” Aurora murmured. “I did.” “You sent two blank texts at three in the morning.” “They were not blank.” “They were a black square and a knife emoji.” “In context—” “There was no context.” “The knife had been significant.” She let go of him, but the shape of his wrist stayed in her palm. “Get on with it.” He unbuttoned his waistcoat. Beneath it, his white shirt clung to his torso, dark with blood. Aurora fetched scissors from the drawer and cut through the fabric at his side. The wound started beneath his ribs and curved back towards his spine, too clean for an ordinary blade. The skin around it had turned grey at the edges. Thin black threads crawled from the cut like ink dropped in water. Aurora’s stomach tightened. “That was demon-forged.” “Yes.” “Who?” “I did not get a name.” “You always got names.” “I was occupied.” “With what?” His gaze settled on her face. “Getting here.” She pressed gauze against the wound. He inhaled through his teeth. “Hold still.” “You had a gentle touch once.” “You lost the privilege.” The words sat between them, sharp enough to draw blood of their own. Lucien leaned back, pale beneath the gold tint of the kitchen light. “I had not meant for you to find the file.” Aurora kept her attention on the wound. “That makes it better.” “I had been looking for Evan.” “You had been looking into me.” “Because Evan had disappeared.” “He left London.” “He did not merely leave London. He vanished after selling information about you to a broker in Soho.” Aurora’s hands paused. Lucien watched her closely. “You never told me that.” “You had thrown the file at me.” “You called me a liability.” “I called the situation a liability.” “You looked at me when you said it.” His mouth hardened. “I was afraid.” The gauze packet crackled in Aurora’s fingers. Lucien went on before she could cut him off. “I had known men like Evan. They did not let go because a woman packed a bag and changed cities. They waited. They bought information. They found weaknesses. I found his name in a list connected to a contract dispute. Your name sat beside it.” “And you decided you’d investigate me in secret.” “I decided I would make sure he could not reach you.” “You could have told me.” “I could not tell you without telling you what I was.” Aurora stared at him. The black threads under his skin had crept another inch. “You thought I didn’t know?” Her voice came out low. “I thought you knew enough to be frightened.” “I knew you slept with a blade under your pillow. I knew your blood turned black when you got angry. I knew you never ate anything with salt unless you’d watched it leave the packet. I knew you disappeared for days and came back with bruises you wouldn’t explain.” She pulled a fresh dressing from the box. “I knew you weren’t ordinary, Lucien.” “You did not know my father came from Avaros.” “No. You made sure I knew nothing.” His face changed then. Not much. A crack in the polish. His amber eye dropped to the table, while the black one held her reflection in its dark surface. “I had spent my life learning what people did with the truth of me,” he said. “Some wanted to use it. Some wanted to kill it. The rest wanted it far from their door.” Aurora taped the dressing into place, firm enough that he flinched. “You had a lot of doors.” “I know.” “That wasn’t an apology.” “No.” He looked up. “It was not.” The kettle clicked off. Aurora moved to pour water into two mugs because standing still near him felt worse. Eva’s kitchen contained tea bags, instant coffee, three jars of herbs that might have been seasoning or spell components, and a packet of biscuits Ptolemy had chewed open. Behind her, Lucien’s cane tapped once against the floor. “You should not have come here,” she said. “I had nowhere else secure.” “You own half the secure places in London.” “They were compromised.” “That sounds like a you problem.” “It had become yours.” She turned with the mugs in her hands. Lucien had taken a small brass disc from his pocket and set it on the table. Its surface bore a stamped symbol: a circle split by a jagged vertical line. Aurora recognised it. She had seen the same mark stamped into wax on the file he had hidden from her. Her throat tightened. “You brought that into Eva’s flat?” “I brought it because it was found in the same room as a message for you.” Aurora set the mugs down with care. “What message?” Lucien reached inside his waistcoat and drew out a folded piece of cream paper, bloodless and clean. He held it between two fingers, but did not offer it to her yet. “You had a choice, Rory. You could read it, and we spoke about what came next. Or you could tell me to leave, and I walked out that door.” Ptolemy jumped onto the table and planted himself between them, one paw resting on the edge of the paper. Aurora looked at Lucien’s wounded side, then at the rain still shining on the window behind him. Eight months of anger crowded her chest. So did the memory of his mouth against hers in the back of a taxi, his hand warm at the nape of her neck, the way he had looked at her as if she had caught him off guard. She held out her hand. “Give it to me.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences125
tagDensity0.072
leniency0.144
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2200
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2200
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"the last thing"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"the last thing"
2"flickered"
3"pulse"
4"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences145
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences261
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2200
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1392
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.8
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Eva6
London1
Marseille1
French1
Aurora25
Lucien23
Mercedes1
Ptolemy5
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
3"Lucien"
4"Mercedes"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
3"Marseille"
globalScore0.602
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2200
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences261
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs186
mean11.83
std14.05
cv1.188
sampleLengths
015
168
211
32
46
531
69
73
88
97
103
115
126
1313
1412
1559
165
1712
181
196
202
217
226
2348
2411
257
2615
275
2814
297
306
315
329
3347
345
353
364
375
3811
397
405
414
4226
4310
442
453
464
471
481
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs218
matches
0"was losing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences261
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1395
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"clean beneath pale skin."
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.02939068100358423
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002867383512544803
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences261
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences261
mean8.43
std6.95
cv0.824
sampleLengths
015
124
28
313
417
56
611
72
86
916
1015
115
124
133
148
157
163
175
186
197
206
2112
2218
2313
249
2519
265
277
285
291
306
312
327
336
343
357
3638
3711
387
393
4012
415
4214
437
446
455
469
478
4820
4910
43.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.24904214559386972
totalSentences261
uniqueOpeners65
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences138
matches
0"Even soaked by London rain,"
1"Just her name, worn down"
ratio0.014
75.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences138
matches
0"His platinum hair lay slicked"
1"He rested both hands over"
2"Her grip tightened around the"
3"He sniffed at the crack"
4"He lowered his gaze to"
5"His jaw set."
6"She had once known every"
7"She bent and scooped him"
8"His striped body settled against"
9"He fixed Lucien with green"
10"She should have shut the"
11"She should have slid the"
12"she told him"
13"His amber eye warmed."
14"He entered with a slight"
15"His eyes moved to her."
16"She saw Lucien’s hand around"
17"She saw the black leather"
18"Her own name inside it."
19"Her father’s chambers."
ratio0.362
17.97% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences138
matches
0"Aurora drew back the third"
1"Lucien Moreau filled the gap"
2"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
3"His platinum hair lay slicked"
4"The other held nothing but"
5"He rested both hands over"
6"Her grip tightened around the"
7"Ptolemy sprang from the arm"
8"He sniffed at the crack"
9"Aurora kept her face flat."
10"Lucien’s mouth shifted, not quite"
11"A burst of laughter rose"
12"The corridor smelt of wet"
13"Lucien looked too clean for"
14"Aurora hated that she remembered."
15"He lowered his gaze to"
16"His jaw set."
17"The movement ran clean beneath"
18"She had once known every"
19"Aurora laughed once."
ratio0.884
36.23% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"Now she knew them and"
ratio0.007
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Lucien Moreau filled the gap between the frame and the hall’s peeling wallpaper as though Brick Lane had built itself around him by mistake."
1"She had once known every small sign that he was losing patience: the way his thumb pressed against the ivory handle, the French syllables that sharpened at the …"
2"Eva’s kitchen contained tea bags, instant coffee, three jars of herbs that might have been seasoning or spell components, and a packet of biscuits Ptolemy had c…"
3"So did the memory of his mouth against hers in the back of a taxi, his hand warm at the nape of her neck, the way he had looked at her as if she had caught him …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Lucien noted (note)"
1"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences125
tagDensity0.048
leniency0.096
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.032
88.1339%