| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.148 | | leniency | 0.296 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1627 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.12% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1627 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "trembled" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "crystal" | | 7 | "eyebrow" | | 8 | "porcelain" | | 9 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "s in relief" | | 1 | "d with delight" | | 2 | "e with delight" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 175 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 221 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1626 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 48.55% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1380 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.03 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 28 | | Isolde | 11 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 11 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Four | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.486 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 114 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "note that seemed to come from under the earth" | | 1 | "felt like plunging her arm into deep wa" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1626 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 221 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 128 | | mean | 12.7 | | std | 13.64 | | cv | 1.074 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 60 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "were gone" | | 1 | "were covered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 234 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 221 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "A whole landscape shifted, folding over itself in slow layers—dark vines, ochre hills, a river the colour of old wine." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1386 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.020202020202020204 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0007215007215007215 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 221 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 221 | | mean | 7.36 | | std | 4.6 | | cv | 0.625 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 56.11% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3665158371040724 | | totalSentences | 221 | | uniqueOpeners | 81 | |
| 83.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere beyond the trees, an" | | 1 | "Then Isolde crossed the threshold" | | 2 | "Then a third." | | 3 | "Even the amber clouds seemed" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "They had formed a wound." | | 1 | "Her toes hovered above the" | | 2 | "She had heard the name" | | 3 | "She stepped towards the ring." | | 4 | "She offered it to Aurora." | | 5 | "She drew one breath, then" | | 6 | "Her boots landed on a" | | 7 | "It came from the clouds" | | 8 | "Their touch felt like plunging" | | 9 | "Her feet touched the stone," | | 10 | "Their skins throbbed with a" | | 11 | "It curved between rows of" | | 12 | "She caught a figure’s face" | | 13 | "Its mouth stretched open." | | 14 | "It carried music." | | 15 | "They passed beneath an arch" | | 16 | "Their branches bent under the" | | 17 | "Their wings flashed words in" | | 18 | "Its towers resembled crystal goblets" | | 19 | "Its domes shone like polished" |
| | ratio | 0.17 | |
| 60.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 127 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones had not" | | 1 | "They had formed a wound." | | 2 | "Amber light seeped between the" | | 3 | "The air inside the ring" | | 4 | "Frost silvered the grass outside" | | 5 | "Aurora touched the Heartstone beneath" | | 6 | "The crimson gem pulsed against" | | 7 | "Nyx stood at the edge" | | 8 | "Violet eyes glimmered inside the" | | 9 | "Aurora looked at them." | | 10 | "Isolde lifted one bare foot" | | 11 | "Her toes hovered above the" | | 12 | "Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade" | | 13 | "The moonsilver dagger gave off" | | 14 | "Isolde’s pale lavender eyes settled" | | 15 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, warmer" | | 16 | "Something moved on the other" | | 17 | "A whole landscape shifted, folding" | | 18 | "The air carried the scent" | | 19 | "Nyx leaned closer to the" |
| | ratio | 0.799 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx stood at the edge of the ring, their silhouette spilling across the grass without obeying the moonlight." | | 1 | "The sound stretched thin, then deepened into a low, rolling note that seemed to come from under the earth." | | 2 | "Steam rose from hundreds of chimneys, carrying scents that collided in the air: cinnamon, charred meat, honey, seawater, fresh bread, something sweet enough to …" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.111 | | leniency | 0.222 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |