Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40JY4F48QD3F828R9JV9MJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.115835
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The dead man lay beneath a destination board that promised trains to Edgware every six minutes. No train had passed through the station in forty-three years. Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the foot of the escalator and let the silence settle around her. It was not true silence. Water ticked behind the tiled walls. An electrical cable hummed somewhere in the dark, though the power had been cut before she arrived. Far down the platform, something metallic scraped once and stopped. “Detective?” The constable waiting beside the barrier looked young enough to apologize to a suspect for arresting him. His stab vest sat too high on his shoulders. In one gloved hand he held a clear evidence bag containing a chalk-white disc. Quinn descended the last step. Her worn leather watch showed 02:17. “Who found him?” “Anonymous call at one forty-six. Male voice. Wouldn’t give a name.” The constable glanced past her, toward the corpse. “Uniforms entered through a maintenance door on Kentish Town Road. Door was locked, no damage. Transport Police swear nobody’s supposed to have access.” “Yet here we all are.” “Yes, ma’am.” Quinn held out her hand. He passed her the bag. Inside lay a token no larger than a ten-pence piece, carved from yellowed bone. One side bore a crude archway. The other had been polished smooth by years of handling. “Found where?” “On the steps outside. Directly in front of the maintenance door.” “Placed or dropped?” “Couldn’t say.” Quinn could. A dropped object bounced, rolled, lodged in a crack, gathered grit. This token had rested flat in the center of the upper step as neatly as a coin set on a dead man’s eyelid. “Who touched it?” “PC Denholm bagged it.” “And before Denholm?” “No one, according to him.” According to him. Quinn returned the evidence bag. “Log every person who entered and left. Including officers. Nobody wanders.” The constable’s gaze flicked down the disused platform. “There are other ways out.” “Then find them.” She walked beneath the arch. The station should have smelled of wet brick, dust, and rat droppings. Instead, it smelled of extinguished candles, hot metal, bitter herbs, and something animal beneath all three. Stalls crowded the old ticket hall and spilled onto the platform: timber counters, folding tables, curtained booths, cages draped in black cloth. Whoever had occupied the place had fled quickly. A porcelain bowl lay smashed beside a shuttered kiosk. Green liquid leaked between the tiles and evaporated before it reached the platform edge. Evidence markers gleamed yellow under portable lamps. There were too many objects and too few people. A market, abandoned in moments. Quinn stopped beside a stall hung with strings of teeth. Human, some of them. Others too long, too curved, or too numerous to belong to any animal she recognized. Each strand carried a brown paper price tag. Most used pound signs. One asked for “three remembered summers.” She did not touch it. Ahead, two scene-of-crime officers moved around the body. Their white coveralls shone against the soot-black tunnel. Between them crouched a small woman with curly red hair, round glasses, and a worn leather satchel swollen with books. Eva Kowalski was not wearing protective clothing. Quinn felt irritation sharpen her stride. “Kowalski.” Eva looked up. Her green eyes magnified behind her lenses. Freckles stood stark against her pale face. “Detective Quinn.” “You’re inside my scene.” “I was inside before it became your scene.” “That isn’t the defense you think it is.” Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear. Quinn had interviewed her twice in the past year. The gesture meant nerves. The speed of it meant fear. One of the scene officers rose. “She claims she can identify some of the material, guv. Says she consults for the British Museum.” “She’s a research assistant.” “In the restricted archives,” Eva said. Quinn looked at her. Eva cleared her throat. “That distinction seemed relevant when the sergeant found a jar of fingers labeled in Aramaic.” “Out.” “I can help.” “You can help from behind the cordon.” “There shouldn’t be a cordon.” Quinn glanced at the striped tape stretched between two iron pillars. “And yet.” “I mean there shouldn’t be a crime scene here at all. The Market never leaves remains behind.” The scene officer pretended not to listen. Quinn studied Eva. “You know what this place is.” “Yes.” “Name it.” “The Veil Market.” “And you’ve been here before.” A beat too long. “Not at this location.” “Convenient.” “It moves every full moon.” Quinn looked up at the old station clock. Its hands had stopped at twelve minutes past midnight. Above it, damp had spread across the ceiling in the shape of a black tide. “A traveling market with fixed stalls.” “The stalls travel too.” “Of course they do.” Eva’s mouth tightened. “You asked.” Quinn stepped around her and looked at the dead man. He appeared to be in his late fifties, broad through the chest, with grey hair tied at the nape. His clothes were expensive but theatrical: black wool coat, plum waistcoat, high-collared shirt. He lay on his back with his hands folded over his sternum. No blood marked him. No bruising showed above the collar. His eyes were open, their irises clouded white. On the tile beside his right hand sat a small brass compass. Verdigris crusted the casing. Protective sigils had been etched around the face, fine as scratches from a needle. The black pointer spun steadily clockwise. “Cause?” Quinn asked. “Nothing obvious,” said the nearest scene officer. “No wounds. No petechiae. Body’s cold, but it’s freezing down here. We’ll need the postmortem.” “Pockets?” “Empty. No wallet, no phone, no keys. Tailor’s label was removed from the coat.” “Shoes?” The officer blinked. Quinn crouched. The dead man wore black boots, hand-stitched and recently polished. Pale dust coated the welts, but the soles were clean. Too clean. She looked around. The platform tiles held soot, grit, powdered plaster, wax, fragments of leaves. Every living person had tracked it. The white-suited officers wore grey smears over their blue overshoes. Eva’s sensible brown boots were filthy. The corpse had not walked here. “Lividity?” Quinn asked. “Hard to judge under the coat.” “Roll him.” They photographed the position, then turned the body with care. Quinn watched the coat pull taut across his back. When the officer lifted the hem, dark purple discoloration showed along the dead man’s left side. But he had been found flat on his back. “He died lying on his side,” Quinn said. “Or was left that way for several hours after death,” the officer replied. “And moved here later.” Eva stood. “That makes no sense.” Quinn glanced over her shoulder. “Most murders don’t at first.” “No, I mean bringing him here makes no sense. This place is protected. Violence is forbidden within Market bounds.” “The man appears dead despite the regulations.” “He wasn’t killed here.” “We’d reached that conclusion.” Eva flushed. “You don’t understand. No one would bring a murdered body inside either. The wards would reject it.” Quinn looked down at the dead man’s folded hands. “You’re saying the corpse shouldn’t have crossed the threshold.” “Yes.” “But it did.” “Yes.” “Then either your wards failed, or someone wanted us to believe this is the Veil Market.” Eva stared at her. Quinn rose and surveyed the platform again. At first glance, the place overwhelmed the eye. Bottles glimmered on shelves. Bundles of feathers turned in a breeze she could not feel. A glass case held three silver rings upon red velvet, each casting a shadow in a different direction. A headless doll whispered from beneath a table until a constable covered it with an evidence tent. Spectacle. Confusion. Too much to process. That was useful if someone wanted a room full of police to stop seeing ordinary things. Quinn walked to the nearest stall. A half-burned candle stood in a saucer, its wax soft. Beside it rested a cup of tea. She held the back of her fingers near the porcelain. Cold. She peered inside. A skin had formed across the surface, unbroken by dust. At the next stall, a string of tiny brass bells hung from a pole. Every bell trembled. None rang. “Who cleared the Market?” she asked. Eva approached but kept a cautious distance. “It clears itself when threatened.” “How?” “I don’t know.” “You come here without knowing how it works?” “I research the occult, Detective. I don’t manufacture it.” Quinn moved to the platform edge. The tunnel beyond the lamps gaped like a throat. “The call came at one forty-six. How long would evacuation take?” “Minutes. Less.” “And the vendors leave their merchandise?” “No.” Eva frowned. “They take what matters.” “Three stalls back, there’s a bowl leaking liquid that vanishes on contact with the floor.” “That matters.” “The teeth?” “They certainly matter to whoever sold them.” “The rings?” Eva’s gaze moved to the glass case. Her face changed. Quinn caught it. “What?” “They’re still here.” “I can see that.” “They shouldn’t be.” “Why those in particular?” Eva lowered her voice. “They’re oath rings. If genuine, each would be worth more than this station.” “And no one took them during the panic.” Eva tucked her hair behind her left ear again. “Perhaps they aren’t genuine.” “Or there was no panic.” The market had been arranged to look interrupted. A broken bowl. An overturned chair. A ledger left open. Yet there were no dropped coats, no footprints crossing one another, no skid marks, no blood. Disorder without movement. A stage set. Quinn returned to the body. The spinning compass caught the portable light. “What is it?” she asked. Eva crouched beside it without touching. “A Veil Compass. Shade work, I think. The sigil pattern is typical.” “What does it point to?” “The nearest supernatural rift or portal.” “It isn’t pointing. It’s spinning.” “That means—” Eva stopped. Quinn waited. “I’m not sure.” “Try the version you don’t want to say in front of the police.” Eva looked toward the tunnel. “It might mean they’re surrounded.” One of the bells gave a faint, dry click. The officers froze. Quinn heard water behind the wall, the cable’s hum, her own breathing. Nothing else followed. She crouched beside the compass. The brass casing bore a green patina everywhere except a bright crescent near the hinge. Someone had handled it recently. Its face was clean. The tile beneath it was not. She leaned closer. The dust around the compass formed an unbroken grey film. No outline. No disturbance. It had not been placed on the floor after the dust settled. Or it had arrived without touching the dust. Quinn looked at the dead man’s right hand. His fingers were folded, but the index finger bore a thin green stain along its inner edge. Verdigris. “He held it,” she said. Eva nodded. “Probably.” “No. He held it after the casing corroded. Recently enough to take the residue. Then someone removed it from his hand and set it there.” “Why?” “To make sure we noticed it.” Quinn pointed to the needle. “Does it spin evenly under normal conditions?” “No. It seeks. It jerks when there are competing sources, but this is too regular.” Quinn watched the rotation. One turn every three seconds. Exact. Mechanical. She lifted her gaze to the old clock above the platform. Stopped at twelve minutes past midnight. The compass needle passed north. The clock’s long hand seemed to shiver. Quinn narrowed her eyes. “Turn off the nearest lamp.” The scene officer hesitated, then switched off the portable unit. Darkness swallowed half the platform. The remaining lights threw long bars across the tiles. The compass kept spinning. At twelve seconds past the minute, the old clock clicked. Its hands did not move, but a vibration traveled through the destination board. Dust whispered down. The compass needle faltered as it passed east, dragged toward the wall behind the corpse, then resumed its circle. “Again,” Quinn said. They waited. Twelve seconds later, the clock clicked. The needle tugged east. Not north. Not toward the tunnel. Toward a tiled wall bearing a faded advertisement for Pears soap. Quinn stepped over the body and approached it. The tiles were cream with green borders, several cracked, all stained by decades of damp. She ran her eyes over the grout. At shoulder height, one line was cleaner than the others. A rectangle. “Was there a station door here?” she asked. The constable checked a folded plan. “Not on this side, ma’am.” “Old plans?” “This is from the closure survey.” Quinn pressed her knuckles to the tiles. Solid. She moved right, tapped again. Hollow. Eva came close enough for Quinn to feel her attention sharpen. “That advertisement,” Eva murmured. “It’s wrong.” “What about it?” “Pears used that design before the First World War, but these tiles were installed in the thirties.” Quinn looked at her. Eva adjusted her glasses. “Museum archives.” “Finally useful.” The advertisement had not survived the station. Someone had installed it here later to conceal something. Quinn traced the cleaner grout with one gloved finger. Along the lower edge, caught in a crack, was a thread of plum-colored wool. She looked back at the dead man’s waistcoat. A match in color, perhaps in weave. “He came through here,” she said. Eva shook her head. “If that’s a doorway, the compass would point directly at it.” “It does. Every twelve seconds.” “The rest of the time it spins.” “Because someone tampered with it.” Quinn returned to the corpse and studied his hands. The nails were clean except for the right thumbnail, beneath which a black residue had collected. She bent closer. Not grease. Graphite, perhaps. The same dark powder ringed the compass spindle. She addressed the scene officer. “Can you stop the needle without moving the casing?” “With tweezers, maybe.” “Photograph first.” The officer documented the compass, then pinched the needle gently. It resisted. Not with the loose pull of magnetism, but with a steady mechanical force. When he released it, it sprang forward and resumed its precise orbit. “Clockwork,” Quinn said. Eva stared. “A Veil Compass doesn’t have clockwork.” “This one does.” Quinn studied the clock again. A compass altered to spin. A hidden door that announced itself on a twelve-second cycle. A body carried through without disturbing the Market’s alleged protections. Evidence arranged to direct attention everywhere and nowhere. “This isn’t the murder site,” she said. “It’s a message.” “To whom?” Eva asked. Quinn’s watch pressed against her wrist, the old leather suddenly too tight. She remembered another impossible room three years ago. DS Morris’s torch burning on wet concrete. No footprints leading away. His voice over the radio after his radio had been found shattered. She had buried every part of that night beneath procedure. Procedure stayed where it was put. Until now. Quinn stepped to the false wall. “The killer knew police would come. Knew we’d find the token. Knew someone would identify the compass. The body is bait, but not for the Market.” The old clock clicked. Behind the tiles came a second sound. Three soft knocks. Eva seized Quinn’s sleeve. The touch lasted only an instant before Quinn pulled free. Her hand had already gone to the baton at her belt, a useless instinct she refused to examine. The compass needle dragged east and held there. For the first time, it stopped. From behind the false wall, a man spoke in a voice muffled by tile and old brick. “Harlow?” Her name entered the station as quietly as breath on glass. Every muscle in Quinn’s body locked. She knew that voice. Not approximately. Not as an echo shaped by grief. She knew the clipped South London vowels, the faint rasp earned from twenty years of bad coffee and winter surveillance. She knew the way he said her first name only when no one else was supposed to hear. Eva whispered, “Detective?” Quinn raised one hand for silence. The wall knocked again. Three beats. Their old signal at closed doors. Police. Coming in. DS Morris had been dead for three years. Quinn stared at the rectangle of clean grout while the evidence rearranged itself in her mind. The deliberately displayed token. The counterfeit abandonment. The body carried through a hidden entrance. The compass forced to circle until the clock released it. None of it had been designed to conceal. It had been designed to make her look. “Harlow,” Morris said from the other side. “Don’t open the door.” A crack appeared through the painted smile of the soap advertisement. Cold air breathed from it, smelling of river mud and burned hair. The dead man on the platform sat up.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences141
tagDensity0.142
leniency0.284
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2765
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"gently"
2"suddenly"
3"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2765
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"porcelain"
count2
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"mechanical"
count2
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"flicked"
2"porcelain"
3"stark"
4"etched"
5"velvet"
6"trembled"
7"mechanical"
8"traced"
9"shattered"
10"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences277
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences277
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences396
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2765
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
31.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions90
wordCount1980
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.37
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Edgware1
Harlow1
Quinn47
Kowalski1
Eva28
Pears1
Market1
Morris3
South1
London1
One5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Market"
5"Morris"
6"One"
places
0"Edgware"
1"South"
2"London"
globalScore0.313
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences157
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.362
wordCount2765
matches
0"Not with the loose pull of magnetism, but with a steady mechanical force"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences396
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs237
mean11.67
std12.54
cv1.075
sampleLengths
016
110
255
31
440
511
63
742
85
92
1010
1130
122
1311
143
152
1636
173
184
193
205
2119
2213
233
245
2581
267
279
285
2947
305
3136
327
336
341
3519
364
378
388
3927
4023
414
426
434
4419
451
463
477
485
4913
92.60% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount10
totalSentences277
matches
0"been polished"
1"been etched"
2"been found"
3"been arranged"
4"been placed"
5"were folded"
6"been found"
7"was supposed"
8"been designed"
9"been designed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs356
matches
0"was not wearing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences396
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1992
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"yellow under portable lamps."
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.027610441767068273
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.006526104417670682
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences396
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences396
mean6.98
std4.83
cv0.692
sampleLengths
016
110
217
35
46
517
610
71
817
99
1014
115
126
133
1419
1523
165
172
185
195
2014
216
2210
232
2411
253
262
272
2811
2923
303
314
323
335
343
355
3611
378
385
393
405
4112
4216
4322
448
459
4614
477
489
495
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.32575757575757575
totalSentences396
uniqueOpeners129
43.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences230
matches
0"Instead, it smelled of extinguished"
1"Most used pound signs."
2"Too much to process."
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences230
matches
0"It was not true silence."
1"His stab vest sat too"
2"Her worn leather watch showed"
3"He passed her the bag."
4"She walked beneath the arch."
5"She did not touch it."
6"Their white coveralls shone against"
7"Her green eyes magnified behind"
8"Its hands had stopped at"
9"He appeared to be in"
10"His clothes were expensive but"
11"He lay on his back"
12"His eyes were open, their"
13"She looked around."
14"They photographed the position, then"
15"She held the back of"
16"She peered inside."
17"Her face changed."
18"She crouched beside the compass."
19"Its face was clean."
ratio0.174
68.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount180
totalSentences230
matches
0"The dead man lay beneath"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at"
2"It was not true silence."
3"Water ticked behind the tiled"
4"An electrical cable hummed somewhere"
5"The constable waiting beside the"
6"His stab vest sat too"
7"Quinn descended the last step."
8"Her worn leather watch showed"
9"The constable glanced past her,"
10"Quinn held out her hand."
11"He passed her the bag."
12"The other had been polished"
13"A dropped object bounced, rolled,"
14"This token had rested flat"
15"Quinn returned the evidence bag."
16"The constable’s gaze flicked down"
17"She walked beneath the arch."
18"The station should have smelled"
19"Stalls crowded the old ticket"
ratio0.783
21.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences230
matches
0"Whoever had occupied the place"
ratio0.004
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences76
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The dead man lay beneath a destination board that promised trains to Edgware every six minutes."
1"A hidden door that announced itself on a twelve-second cycle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences141
tagDensity0.121
leniency0.241
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.028
88.9155%