Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40KZPGR57FHW55C7GF9PK1

Run Details

Duration:
1m 31s
Cost:
$0.138035
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn held the bone token between thumb and forefinger while the iron gate judged her. It had no lock. No handle, either. Rust furred its bars and sealed it across the mouth of a tiled passage beneath Camden, forty metres past the barrier where Transport for London had painted DANGER—NO ACCESS in white block letters. A dead signal lamp watched from the wall. Water ticked through the dark. Quinn pressed the token into a shallow notch shaped like a molar. The gate inhaled. Rust drew back from the bars in branching veins. Iron folded into the tiled walls without a scrape, exposing a station platform that had vanished from public maps before Quinn had joined the Met. Her colleague peered over her shoulder. “Tell me that’s a hydraulic mechanism.” Detective Sergeant Malik Sayeed had put plastic covers over his shoes, though the floor ahead appeared to be dry. He stood short and broad in a navy scene suit, his hood hanging down his back. The blue fabric made him look less like a homicide detective and more like a disappointed plumber. “No.” “You could’ve lied.” “You’d have checked.” “That’s why we worked so well.” Quinn returned the token to an evidence envelope and stepped through. The gate knitted itself shut behind them. The Veil Market occupied both sides of the abandoned platform. Stalls crouched beneath patched awnings: black silk, stitched hide, newspaper folded into rigid peaks. Glass jars crowded one counter, each holding a tooth in cloudy fluid. A butcher’s hooks displayed shadows with no bodies attached. Bundles of dried plants rustled despite the still air. Every stall stood deserted. “Where are the owners?” Malik kept his voice low. “Evacuated.” “By whom?” “The market wardens. They sealed both tunnels once they found the body.” “And they all obeyed?” Quinn studied the empty counters. “Not a chance.” A line of salt ran along the platform edge. Someone had broken it in three places, leaving narrow channels towards the tracks. At the centre of the platform, portable lamps threw hard white light across a dead man. He lay inside a chalk circle near an old wooden kiosk, his arms spread and his bare feet pointed towards the northern tunnel. His coat and shirt had been opened. A narrow wound marked the centre of his chest, too neat for the amount of blood around him. There was plenty of blood. It coated his ribs, filled the mortar lines between the tiles and pooled beneath his shoulders. Another dark ribbon had run across the chalk boundary, then climbed six inches up the side of the kiosk. Quinn stopped outside the circle. Malik took in the scene and blew air through his teeth. “Ritual killing.” “Is that your interpretation or your appetite for the obvious?” “Body in magic market. Chalk circle. Chest wound. North-facing feet. I’m not pulling it from a hat.” “You missed the candles.” “There aren’t any.” “Exactly.” A forensic photographer lowered her camera. Her eyes darted towards the northern tunnel. “Detectives, we’ve done the wide shots. I’d like to move him before the next train.” Malik glanced at the dead tracks. “There hasn’t been a train here since 1934.” “Something passed through ten minutes ago.” “What?” The photographer pinched the camera strap. “We heard it.” Quinn looked along the rails. Rust filmed their top surfaces except for two bright, parallel scratches that disappeared beneath the curve. “What did you hear?” “Carriages. Brakes. A woman announcing a destination, only the words came out backwards.” “Anyone see it?” “No one volunteered.” “Stay off the tracks.” The photographer gave a tight nod. Quinn crouched at the chalk line. Her worn leather watch pressed against her left wrist as she rested one hand on her knee. The circle had been drawn in white carpenter’s chalk. A pale pebble sat near the victim’s right hand. She slipped on gloves and picked it up with forceps. “Not chalk.” She turned the object beneath the light. Fine pores stippled its surface. “Bone.” Malik crouched beside her. “Another token?” “Wrong shape. Cut from something flat. Shoulder blade, perhaps.” “Human?” “The lab can ruin our morning with that answer.” The victim looked close to sixty. His silver hair had been tied at the nape with green thread. Blue symbols stained his fingertips, while the backs of his hands bore old chemical burns. No defensive wounds showed on his palms. No bruises marked his wrists. A paper evidence number sat beside a small brass compass near his left hip. Verdigris clouded its casing. Protective sigils ringed the face, their cuts packed with black wax. The needle quivered between east and north-east. Quinn held her palm above it. The needle swung towards her. Malik leaned away. “Do I want to know why it likes you?” “It doesn’t.” She shifted left. The needle followed. The photographer stepped closer to collect another angle. The needle snapped towards her instead. Quinn straightened. “Who touched this?” “Nobody,” the photographer replied. “I placed the marker beside it and photographed it in situ.” “Was the needle moving when you arrived?” “Pointing down the platform. I assumed north.” Quinn moved around the body. The needle tracked her until Malik crossed between them, then swung towards him. “It points towards the nearest person,” Malik murmured. “Useful if you’re lonely.” “It’s a Veil Compass. It should point towards a rift or portal.” “You’ve got a product manual?” “I have a witness who does.” She looked towards the kiosk. Blood had climbed its side against gravity, but the droplets lacked the feathered edges of blood thrown by impact. The streak stopped at a brass serving hatch. Quinn approached without crossing the circle. The hatch stood shut. Its latch bore a smear of red at shoulder height, while dust covered the counter below. “Blood transfer,” Malik offered. “Killer closed it after reaching through.” “From which side?” He examined the hatch. “Inside, based on the hinge.” “Then how did they get into the kiosk?” A padlock secured the door. Rust had filled its keyway. Dust along the threshold lay unbroken. Quinn bent towards the blood on the kiosk. The red line had divided around a grease spot before joining again. Something had poured it from below and forced it upward. Malik saw her expression. “You’re about to tell me blood doesn’t behave like blood.” “This doesn’t.” “Paint?” “It smells of iron.” “Pig blood. Butcher’s stall is twenty yards away.” Quinn faced the nearest counter. A faded sign advertised memory cuts by weight. Hooks hung above a chopping block, but the jars beneath had left clean circles in the dust. Their owner had taken stock before evacuation. “Pig blood clots.” “Anticoagulant.” “Then it wouldn’t cling like that.” Malik pushed his hands into his scene-suit pockets. “You’ve spent three years telling me the supernatural still follows rules. Now you want the rules flexible because the picture feels wrong.” The words struck where he intended. Quinn’s jaw tightened. Three years earlier, DS Morris had vanished from a locked basement with blood on the ceiling and no exit beyond a bricked wall. She had called it contamination, then hysteria, then grief. The report still sat in her drawer beneath eighteen years of commendations that had done nothing to make its conclusion true. She pointed at the corpse. “That picture was assembled.” “Why?” “To tell us ritual killing before we ask anything useful.” Malik studied the wound. “A blade went into his heart. That part’s persuasive.” “Did it?” Quinn crossed the chalk line. The photographer caught her breath. Malik grimaced. “If a demon bites your leg, paperwork’s on you.” The air inside the circle felt colder, though no breeze touched her face. She knelt beside the victim and examined the wound without moving his clothing. It formed a narrow vertical slit between the fourth and fifth ribs. Its edges looked bloodless. “Light.” Malik brought a torch close. Quinn used forceps to part the fabric. The shirt carried a matching cut, but the coat lining beneath its opened lapel did not. She checked the buttons. One had been put through the wrong hole, skewing the hem. “He was undressed after death.” “To search him?” “To dress the wound.” She bent closer. A translucent film crossed the slit. Beneath it, intact skin showed through. Malik swore under his breath. “Prosthetic?” “Wax. Dyed at the edges.” He angled the torch towards the dead man’s face. “Then cause of death’s somewhere else.” Quinn inspected the mouth. Blue stained the gaps between his teeth, darker than the marks on his fingers. His tongue had swollen against his lower incisors. A crescent-shaped burn marked the gum above his right canine. “Poison.” “Alchemist’s hands, residue in his mouth. Could’ve swallowed his own stock.” “Not through the chest.” “That’s why the killer faked the wound.” “No. The wound directs us to murder. The circle directs us to ritual. The orientation directs us to the northern tunnel. Three instructions stacked on one body.” “Instructions towards what?” “A suspect, if we cooperate.” Quinn lifted the dead man’s right hand. Blue pigment filled his fingerprints but stopped at the first knuckles. A thin clean band encircled his index finger. “He wore a ring.” “Robbery?” “Only if the killer ignored his purse.” A leather pouch protruded from the victim’s coat. Malik opened it with forceps. Gold coins, two folded banknotes and a sliver of smoked glass rested inside. “Selective robbery,” he conceded. “Ring mattered.” “So did something else.” Quinn turned her attention to the platform. The body’s bare feet were pale except for soot on the heels. His toes remained clean. If someone had dragged him by the arms, the soles would have taken grime from heel to toe. If he had walked, the balls of his feet would carry most of it. She lifted the left trouser cuff. A fine grey powder clung to the fabric above the ankle, forming a straight horizontal line. “His legs were submerged.” “In what?” “Something dry enough to leave powder and level enough to mark both cuffs.” “A storage bin?” “Or ash.” Malik pointed towards a brazier outside a stall farther down the platform. It brimmed with pale residue. Quinn left the circle and crossed to it. The salt boundary beneath her shoe crunched once. She froze. Three breaks already marked the line. Her new footprint made a fourth. She crouched by the nearest original gap. Salt grains had scattered away from the tracks, not towards them. “Someone stepped up from track level,” Malik observed. “Or wanted us to think they had.” The salt at the second break had compacted into a smooth trough. No sole pattern. At the third, several grains had fused into glass. Quinn held her hand over them. Heat no longer lingered. “Different methods,” Malik noted. “A boot, something dragged, something hot.” “One person staging three entrances.” “Three people escaping.” “The market has one gate and two tunnels. Wardens sealed the tunnels. A killer staging a ritual would benefit from accomplices, but each additional person multiplies risk.” “People still form committees.” Quinn examined the brazier. Its ash lay level, except for a shallow rectangular hollow at the centre. The missing object had been the size of a hardback book. A few green fibres snagged on the rim. She looked back at the victim’s hair tie. Same colour. “Get the photographer over here.” The woman approached but stopped short of the salt. “Photograph the brazier, the green fibres and that indentation. Then sample the ash.” Quinn turned to Malik. “He stood in it.” “Both feet?” “See the hollow? Something rested there after. Whoever moved him used the ash to obscure residue on his skin, then put an object into the brazier.” “Burned evidence.” “No scorch pattern. They hid it.” Malik’s gaze travelled to the body. “His feet pointed north because the killer needed us looking towards the tunnel, while whatever mattered stayed in the market.” “Now you’re useful.” “Put it in my review.” Quinn returned to the Veil Compass. The needle had settled towards the northern tunnel once everyone moved to the same side of it. “Malik, stand by the kiosk.” He walked there. The needle shifted three degrees, then stopped. “Photographer, move beside the brazier.” It swung farther. Malik folded his arms. “It tracks living bodies. We established that.” “No. It tracks something they’re carrying.” He checked his pockets. “Phone, keys, warrant card, mints.” The photographer looked stricken. “I’ve got only my equipment.” “Step outside the market gate.” “I’m not going alone.” “Then give your camera to Malik.” She handed it over. The compass needle followed the camera, not her. Malik stared at the black body of the Nikon in his hands. “That’s inconvenient.” “Set it down.” The needle returned towards Quinn. She took off her watch and placed it on the floor. No change. Next came her phone, keys and warrant card. The needle held. Her fingertips found the evidence envelope in her pocket. The bone token. She set the envelope near the compass. The needle snapped towards it and trembled against the glass. “Portal key,” Malik murmured. “It points to the nearest one.” “A bone token opens the market gate. The compass has been altered to seek entry objects instead of rifts.” “Why leave it beside the body?” Quinn looked at the pale bone fragment bagged near the victim’s hand. Not chalk. Not part of the circle. “A second token.” She raised the evidence bag and moved it around the compass. The needle followed with clean precision. Malik’s mouth hardened. “The dead man had access.” “Someone cut or broke his token into a shape we’d mistake for ritual debris.” “After taking his ring and poisoning him.” Quinn studied the fragment. One edge showed tiny parallel grooves, far too regular for a knife. A machine had bitten through it. She glanced along the market stalls until she found a narrow counter screened with chains. Behind it stood a compact cutting wheel fitted with a toothed black disc. Bone dust powdered its base. “Photograph that tool.” Malik followed her gaze. “Killer used market equipment. Could mean opportunity, not familiarity.” “They knew which wheel cut bone. They knew the token would still draw the compass after damage. They knew how to redirect our attention.” “To the north tunnel.” “No. To anyone who entered with a token.” Malik’s expression shifted. The market gate had admitted Quinn. Wardens had brought in forensic staff. Each arrival would pull the compass needle towards the entrance, confirming a false story that the rift—or killer—lay beyond it. “Someone wanted the compass to react during the investigation,” he said. “Why?” “To contaminate the sequence. Every officer who crossed that gate carried the same object the victim held. Trace evidence from the tokens becomes worthless, and movement of the needle looks like a persistent portal.” Malik rubbed his lower lip. “You’re giving the staging a lot of sophistication.” “The killer altered a Shade-made compass, fabricated a chest wound and moved blood uphill. Sophistication isn’t in dispute.” “Still leaves the real cause of death.” Quinn stared at the blue staining in the victim’s mouth. The compass needle twitched each time she shifted the fragment. The residue on his fingertips had seemed part of his trade. Yet it lay in the whorls, not beneath his nails, as though transferred by touch. She lifted his right hand again and brought it close to the compass face. The blue matched the wax packed into its protective sigils where black had flaked away. Under the forensic lamp, a violet sheen moved through both. “He handled the compass after it was altered.” “Could’ve altered it himself.” “Then why fake his murder?” “Someone caught him mid-job.” Quinn checked the brass casing. Verdigris coated most of it, but one clean crescent marked the winding knob. A narrow greasy print crossed the polished patch. She looked at the dead man’s fingers. All ten carried blue dye. None carried green corrosion. “He didn’t open it.” Malik crouched opposite her. “Someone made him touch the face.” “Or he seized it. The blue compound entered through his mouth afterwards.” “How?” Quinn inspected the dead man’s nails. A torn green fibre clung beneath his left thumbnail, darker than the hair tie. She eased it free. Wax glistened at one end. “Thread.” “From his hair?” “Too coarse.” The victim’s canine gum bore that crescent burn. Quinn measured it against the rim of the compass’s winding knob. Too small. Against the bone token’s pointed edge. Too broad. Her gaze moved to the stalls. Chains. Hooks. Bottles. Cloth. Then the kiosk hatch with blood climbing towards its latch. She approached it again. “Malik, what’s on the other side?” “Locked kiosk.” “What did it sell?” He read the tarnished lettering painted above the shutter. “Tongues. Honest, borrowed and dead.” “Useful inventory.” “You reckon the poison came from there?” “I reckon the body didn’t.” Quinn traced the upward blood line without touching it. The liquid had divided around grease. At its end, just beneath the latch, a red bubble held a strand of green thread. The same coarse fibre. She looked through the gap below the hatch. Darkness pressed against it. Malik shone his torch over her shoulder, but the beam struck a surface inches beyond the wood. Not a wall. Cloth. “Door’s padlocked,” he said. “From the outside.” “The dust at the threshold is clean.” “So nobody used the door.” Quinn placed the compass on the kiosk counter. Its needle spun once, then pointed through the shutter. Malik’s face emptied of humour. “The nearest token isn’t the one in your pocket,” Quinn said. He drew the bone token from his scene suit and held it beside the compass. The needle refused to move. The photographer backed away. Quinn examined the padlock. Rust filled the keyway, but the shackle had no rust where it disappeared into the body. She gripped it through a folded evidence cloth and pulled. The shackle slid free. Someone had cut it, fitted it back into place, then painted the seam with powdered rust and oil. Malik moved to the door. “Wait.” Quinn pointed at the dust along the threshold. Its smoothness had seemed untouched. Now, under light from the lower angle, faint parallel ridges appeared across it. “Brushed,” he said. “After the door opened.” “You want armed response?” “In this corridor? They’d shoot three jars and arrest a shadow.” He drew his baton instead. Quinn unlatched the door. A draught pushed out, thick with metal, old perfume and the hot mineral smell of a struck match. Green thread ran from the inside handle into the dark. Malik cut it with evidence scissors before Quinn eased the door wider. The torchlight revealed a cramped kiosk much deeper than its exterior allowed. Shelves receded past the limits of the station wall, packed with stoppered bottles. Labels crowded their glass: LAST WORD OF A KING. A LIAR’S CONFESSION. SEVEN MINUTES OF SILENCE. A chair stood just inside. Green cord bound a second man to it. He wore the dead man’s missing ring on a swollen finger. Blue froth crusted his lips. A brass token rested between his teeth. His eyes moved towards them. Malik stepped across the threshold. “Alive.” “Don’t touch the token.” Quinn caught his sleeve. The bound man made a wet sound in his throat. The compass needle pointed straight at his mouth. Quinn scanned the floor. A copper wire stretched from the chair leg to a bottle on the lowest shelf. Its stopper bulged under pressure. Green cord wound around the man’s chest and disappeared beneath his coat. “Can you understand me?” She kept her voice level. One blink. “Did you kill the man outside?” Two blinks. “No,” Malik translated. The captive’s eyes widened. He blinked twice again, then jerked his gaze towards the ceiling. Quinn raised her torch. Above the door, secured between two shelves, hung a third body. Blood collected along its back and travelled upward through braided green wicks towards a glass reservoir. A pump no larger than Quinn’s hand ticked inside the knot of tubing, each contraction drawing another dark measure against gravity. Malik looked from the hidden corpse to the staged one on the platform. “There’s our blood.” Quinn’s torch settled on the hanging body’s left wrist. A worn leather watch encircled it, its cracked face stopped at 2:17. The same model Morris had worn when he disappeared. She stepped beneath it, sharp jaw locked, and read the initials scratched into the buckle. D.S.M.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences172
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.186
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3401
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3401
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"quivered"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"quivered"
2"weight"
3"trembled"
4"measured"
5"traced"
6"silence"
7"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences296
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences296
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences452
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3398
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.58% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions111
wordCount2383
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn45
Camden1
Transport1
London1
Met1
Sergeant1
Malik36
Sayeed1
Veil2
Market1
Fine1
Morris2
Compass1
Nikon1
One3
Rust5
Blue4
Green3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Malik"
4"Sayeed"
5"Market"
6"Fine"
7"Morris"
8"Rust"
9"Blue"
places
0"London"
1"Veil"
2"Compass"
globalScore0.556
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences177
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount3398
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences452
matches
0"bore that crescent"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs278
mean12.22
std11.78
cv0.964
sampleLengths
017
153
212
33
434
56
66
752
81
93
103
116
1218
1354
144
159
161
172
1812
194
208
2122
2216
2348
245
2535
265
2713
2810
2917
304
313
321
3313
3415
3514
366
371
389
3921
404
4113
423
433
444
456
4641
4710
4815
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences296
matches
0"been opened"
1"been drawn"
2"been tied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs405
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences452
ratio0.004
matches
0"Rust furred its bars and sealed it across the mouth of a tiled passage beneath Camden, forty metres past the barrier where Transport for London had painted DANGER—NO ACCESS in white block letters."
1"Each arrival would pull the compass needle towards the entrance, confirming a false story that the rift—or killer—lay beyond it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2389
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.018417748011720386
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences452
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences452
mean7.52
std5.27
cv0.701
sampleLengths
017
14
23
333
48
55
612
73
89
925
106
116
1219
1316
1417
151
163
173
186
1911
207
2110
2214
2312
249
259
264
279
281
292
3012
314
325
333
349
3513
3616
3723
387
3918
405
4116
4219
435
4411
452
4610
4717
484
493
49.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.31194690265486724
totalSentences452
uniqueOpeners141
12.39% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences269
matches
0"Then the kiosk hatch with"
ratio0.004
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences269
matches
0"It had no lock."
1"Her colleague peered over her"
2"He stood short and broad"
3"He lay inside a chalk"
4"His coat and shirt had"
5"It coated his ribs, filled"
6"Her eyes darted towards the"
7"Her worn leather watch pressed"
8"She slipped on gloves and"
9"She turned the object beneath"
10"His silver hair had been"
11"She shifted left."
12"She looked towards the kiosk."
13"Its latch bore a smear"
14"He examined the hatch."
15"Their owner had taken stock"
16"She had called it contamination,"
17"She pointed at the corpse."
18"She knelt beside the victim"
19"It formed a narrow vertical"
ratio0.219
38.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount227
totalSentences269
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn held the"
1"It had no lock."
2"Rust furred its bars and"
3"A dead signal lamp watched"
4"Water ticked through the dark."
5"Quinn pressed the token into"
6"The gate inhaled."
7"Iron folded into the tiled"
8"Her colleague peered over her"
9"Detective Sergeant Malik Sayeed had"
10"He stood short and broad"
11"The blue fabric made him"
12"Quinn returned the token to"
13"The gate knitted itself shut"
14"The Veil Market occupied both"
15"Stalls crouched beneath patched awnings:"
16"Glass jars crowded one counter,"
17"A butcher’s hooks displayed shadows"
18"Every stall stood deserted."
19"Malik kept his voice low"
ratio0.844
55.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences269
matches
0"If someone had dragged him"
1"If he had walked, the"
2"Now, under light from the"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences95
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The report still sat in her drawer beneath eighteen years of commendations that had done nothing to make its conclusion true."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Malik murmured (murmur)"
1"he conceded (concede)"
2"Malik observed (observe)"
3"Malik noted (note)"
4"Malik murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences172
tagDensity0.058
leniency0.116
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.058
89.9792%