Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40P4MAD83S5HK72SS7G8AV

Run Details

Duration:
24.2s
Cost:
$0.013928
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened on Lucien Moreau’s cane pressing against Aurora’s throat. His ivory handle rested beneath her jaw, cool and hard. One amber eye watched her; the other, black as a sealed well, gave nothing away. “Move the blade,” she said. “It is not the blade.” “Your definition of reassuring remains eccentric.” His gaze dropped to the crescent scar on her left wrist, visible beneath the sleeve of her delivery jacket. Something tightened across his mouth. Aurora kept one hand on the door and the other curled around the strap of her insulated food bag. Behind her, the flat above the Golden Empress smelled of ink, dust and Ptolemy’s spite. Three deadbolts stood retracted, each one a small failure she had not yet explained. Lucien eased the cane away. “You opened the door without checking the ward.” “You knocked like a bailiff.” “Bailiffs announce themselves.” “You arrived unannounced.” “Yet here I am.” “That tends to happen when people arrive.” His gaze flicked past her shoulder. Books crowded every shelf in Eva’s cramped one-bedroom flat. Scrolls lay unrolled across the sofa, weighted at the corners with teacups and a chipped brass skull. Research notes covered the walls in slanting handwriting. Ptolemy sat on the windowsill, his striped tail thumping against the glass as if he had appointed himself judge. Lucien stepped over the threshold. Aurora blocked him with her body. For three years, she had imagined this moment in at least six different ways. In four, she slapped him. In one, she laughed. In the last, she kissed him before either of them could speak. She had not accounted for being hungry, late for a delivery and holding a carton of prawn noodles against her hip. “Out.” “Your hospitality has deteriorated.” “It improved after you left.” The corner of his mouth moved. Not quite a smile. Lucien had always treated amusement like a currency he spent with care. He wore a tailored charcoal suit, sharp enough to cut paper. His platinum hair remained slicked back, not a strand out of place despite the crowded stairwell and the rainwater darkening the toes of his polished shoes. He looked exactly as he had the last time she saw him. That was the first lie her memory told her. The man in front of her carried a faint bruise beneath his collar. A thin red line crossed the knuckles of his right hand. His gloved left hand gripped the cane too tightly. Aurora noticed everything. It had kept her alive. “Someone followed me,” he said. “Try a police station.” “They are less discreet.” “Try a church.” “Even less discreet.” She should have shut the door. Instead, she glanced along the landing. The curry house below sent up the thick scent of cardamom, frying onions and hot oil. A television muttered through the wall. Somewhere downstairs, a woman shouted an order in Bengali, and a delivery scooter rattled away from the kerb. No footsteps. No shadow beneath the stairwell light. Lucien watched her calculate. “You still count exits before you let people in,” he said. “You still mistake observation for permission.” “Then we have both retained our unpleasant habits.” Aurora’s fingers tightened around the food bag. The plastic lid inside clicked against the carton. “What do you want?” “Five minutes.” “You had three years.” “I spent them searching.” “For what?” His eyes shifted to her face. The amber one caught the light, warm as old whisky. The black one swallowed it. “For you.” The words landed softly. That made them worse. Aurora stepped back before her knees could betray her. Lucien entered and closed the door with the heel of his shoe. He turned the locks, one after another. Click. Click. Click. The sound dragged an old night into the room. She remembered a different door, a different lock, Lucien’s hand braced beside her head while he murmured in French against her throat. She remembered believing his silence meant restraint. Later, she learned it meant calculation. Ptolemy leapt from the sill and stalked towards Lucien. The cat sniffed his trouser leg, then hissed. “Your welcome has not improved either,” Lucien murmured. “He has standards.” “He once ate a poisoned pigeon.” “Standards fluctuate.” Lucien removed his gloves finger by finger and placed them on the nearest stack of notes. Aurora snatched them up before they could stain the page with whatever he had brought in from the street. His gaze followed her hands. “You have blood on your cuff.” “It is not mine.” “Comforting.” “Your concern sounds almost sincere.” “It has been a difficult evening.” “That is not an answer.” “No. It is an invitation to ask a better question.” She dropped the gloves onto the counter. “Who is after you?” “People who believe you possess something.” “I don’t.” “You do.” “Then they are poorly informed.” “They know your name.” Her spine locked. Lucien did not move. He knew precisely what he had done. He always had. He could place one word into a room and let it poison the air. “Which name?” she asked. “Laila.” The flat seemed to contract around them. Ptolemy rubbed against her ankle. Aurora ignored him. Only Eva had used that name in London. Eva, and the man standing three feet away from her with a blade hidden inside an ivory cane. “No one calls me that.” “Someone did tonight.” “Who?” “A man with a silver tooth and a talent for removing fingers.” “Charming.” “He was not speaking about you with affection.” “I’m wounded.” “Not yet.” His voice lacked its usual velvet. A harsh edge showed beneath it, something close to anger. Aurora moved past him towards the kitchen. The narrow room held a kettle, two unwashed mugs and a cracked bowl full of takeaway menus. She set the food bag on the counter, but Lucien’s hand closed around her wrist. His touch stopped the breath in her lungs. The scar beneath his thumb went hot. For one suspended second, neither of them looked down. His fingers had once traced that crescent with reverence. He had kissed it after she told him how she earned it, a childhood accident involving a garden gate and an overconfident six-year-old. He had called it a moon, then spent the rest of the night drawing moons on her skin with his mouth. Now his grip felt like a question. Aurora looked up. “Let go.” He did. Not quickly. Not with reluctance. He released her as if obedience cost him something and refused to show the price. “Apologies.” “No, you don’t.” “I do.” “You apologise when you want someone to stop asking questions.” “Then ask one worth answering.” She rubbed her wrist, though the skin there showed no mark. “What did you tell them?” “Nothing.” “About me.” “Nothing.” “You expect me to believe you?” “No.” Lucien’s eyes lowered to her mouth. “I expect you to remember that I never lied to you.” A laugh escaped her, thin and sharp. “You told me you were leaving London for one week.” “I intended to return.” “You vanished for four months.” “I had to.” “You could have sent a message.” “I could not.” “You could have found a phone.” “Phones can be traced.” “You could have written a letter.” “Letters can be intercepted.” “You could have trusted me.” That one struck. His expression changed so slightly another person might have missed it. Aurora saw the muscle jump in his cheek. “I trusted you,” he said. “Then why did you leave me with a dead demon in my kitchen and half the underworld hunting my name?” “Because the alternative was leaving you with me.” She stared at him. Lucien drew a breath through his nose. The cane stood between them, its polished shaft catching the room’s weak light. “The thing in your kitchen was not dead when I arrived.” Aurora’s pulse beat against her throat. “You said it was.” “I said it had stopped moving.” “It had no head.” “I noticed.” “You said I had nothing to fear.” “I was wrong.” That answer, plain and unadorned, unsettled her more than any elegant excuse could have done. She reached for the carton of noodles and tore open the lid. Steam rose between them, carrying chilli, garlic and the faint sweetness of prawns. She had worked a six-hour shift and eaten half a packet of crisps in the back of a delivery van. Her stomach cramped. Lucien glanced at the food. “You are going to eat?” “You are going to stand there?” “I can do both.” “Of course you can. You are gifted.” She found a fork and dug into the noodles. Lucien watched her take the first bite. “You still chew when you are angry,” he said. “You still observe people when you should be speaking.” “I am speaking.” “You are narrating.” “Perhaps I missed you.” The fork stopped halfway to her mouth. Lucien’s gaze held hers. No smile. No teasing retreat. Three years ago, she had loved the way he could turn a confession into a threat. She had hated that the threat never belonged to her. “Do not say that.” “Why?” “Because I am not in the mood to forgive you.” “I did not ask you to forgive me.” “Then what are you asking?” He reached inside his jacket. Aurora set the fork down and grabbed the nearest weapon, a heavy brass candlestick shaped like a serpent. Lucien stopped with two fingers inside the breast pocket. “If I intended to harm you, you would not have time to select an object.” “I like to make an effort.” His hand emerged holding a folded piece of paper. Not a letter. A photograph. He placed it on the counter. Aurora did not touch it. Lucien tapped the image with one gloved finger. “This was taken outside the Golden Empress forty-seven minutes ago.” She looked down. The photograph showed her leaving the restaurant with two deliveries hooked over one arm. The image had caught her in profile, black hair tucked behind one ear, blue eyes turned towards a passing bus. On the reverse, someone had written a single word. Malphora. Her hand went cold. Lucien’s cane struck the floor. A sound came from the hallway beyond the flat. A soft scrape. Ptolemy bolted under the sofa. Aurora reached for the brass candlestick again. Lucien stepped between her and the door, drawing the thin blade from inside his cane with a whisper of metal. The three deadbolts turned. Not from inside. From the other side. Lucien’s black eye fixed on hers. “Now,” he said, “you may ask the better question.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences105
tagDensity0.086
leniency0.171
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1757
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"precisely"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"softly"
2"precisely"
3"quickly"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1757
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"calculate"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"affection"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"traced"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"unsettled"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"footsteps"
2"calculate"
3"silence"
4"comforting"
5"affection"
6"velvet"
7"traced"
8"pulse"
9"unsettled"
10"stomach"
11"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences148
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences244
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1757
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"In one, she laughed."
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1243
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien22
Moreau1
Aurora15
Golden1
Empress1
Ptolemy5
Eva3
Bengali1
French1
London1
Click3
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Empress"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Eva"
places
0"Bengali"
1"French"
2"London"
globalScore0.615
windowScore0.5
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something close to anger"
1"felt like a question"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1757
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences244
matches
0"used that name"
1"traced that crescent"
2"hated that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs185
mean9.5
std10.72
cv1.129
sampleLengths
011
125
25
35
46
524
648
75
88
95
103
113
124
137
1459
155
166
1735
1821
191
204
215
2222
2349
249
2533
268
275
284
294
303
313
3212
3340
342
356
364
3711
386
398
4015
414
422
434
444
452
4621
472
488
4928
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs206
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences244
ratio0.004
matches
0"One amber eye watched her; the other, black as a sealed well, gave nothing away."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1247
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.02967121090617482
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0056134723336006415
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences244
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences244
mean7.2
std5
cv0.695
sampleLengths
011
110
215
35
45
56
619
75
819
915
1014
115
128
135
143
153
164
177
186
199
2017
218
2219
235
246
2514
265
274
2812
2921
301
314
325
336
344
3512
3611
3726
3812
399
4013
4111
429
433
445
455
464
474
483
493
41.80% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.27459016393442626
totalSentences244
uniqueOpeners67
76.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences131
matches
0"Instead, she glanced along the"
1"Somewhere downstairs, a woman shouted"
2"Only Eva had used that"
ratio0.023
97.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences131
matches
0"His ivory handle rested beneath"
1"His gaze dropped to the"
2"His gaze flicked past her"
3"She had not accounted for"
4"He wore a tailored charcoal"
5"His platinum hair remained slicked"
6"He looked exactly as he"
7"His gloved left hand gripped"
8"It had kept her alive."
9"She should have shut the"
10"His eyes shifted to her"
11"He turned the locks, one"
12"She remembered a different door,"
13"She remembered believing his silence"
14"His gaze followed her hands."
15"She dropped the gloves onto"
16"Her spine locked."
17"He knew precisely what he"
18"He always had."
19"He could place one word"
ratio0.305
47.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount108
totalSentences131
matches
0"The door opened on Lucien"
1"His ivory handle rested beneath"
2"His gaze dropped to the"
3"Something tightened across his mouth."
4"Aurora kept one hand on"
5"Lucien eased the cane away."
6"His gaze flicked past her"
7"Books crowded every shelf in"
8"Scrolls lay unrolled across the"
9"Ptolemy sat on the windowsill,"
10"Lucien stepped over the threshold."
11"Aurora blocked him with her"
12"She had not accounted for"
13"The corner of his mouth"
14"Lucien had always treated amusement"
15"He wore a tailored charcoal"
16"His platinum hair remained slicked"
17"He looked exactly as he"
18"That was the first lie"
19"The man in front of"
ratio0.824
38.17% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences131
matches
0"Now his grip felt like"
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Ptolemy sat on the windowsill, his striped tail thumping against the glass as if he had appointed himself judge."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences105
tagDensity0.076
leniency0.152
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.019
89.9180%