Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40PPZDGGQBVF643RTTYJV8

Run Details

Duration:
1m 14s
Cost:
$0.103740
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain glazed Wardour Street black and silver, broken by tyres, shoes and the green pulse above the Raven’s Nest. Detective Harlow Quinn stood across the road beneath a chemist’s awning, water dripping from the stone lip behind her collar. The bar’s neon raven flashed on, died, then returned with one wing missing. Through the steamed windows, drinkers shifted in amber light. Her worn leather watch showed 11:43. She had waited fifty-seven minutes. The Nest’s door opened. Tomás Herrera stepped out, head lowered against the rain. His short curls shone with water before he pulled up his hood. A canvas medical bag hung across his chest, its weight knocking against his hip. He paused beneath the green sign and swept his gaze over the street. Quinn turned towards the chemist’s dark window and lifted her phone. His reflection looked straight at hers. Herrera ran. “Police. Stop.” He cut between a cab and a delivery van. A horn cracked through the rain. Quinn left the kerb at a sprint, one hand on the bonnet as the cab slewed across her path. “Watch it!” “Met Police.” “Means you can bounce off someone else’s motor.” Herrera vanished into Old Compton Street. Quinn drove through the crowd, shoulder first. Umbrellas buckled against her. A man spilled chips down his coat and swore after her. Ahead, Herrera struck a café table, sent two metal chairs skittering, caught the medical bag before it swung loose and kept moving. “Tomás Herrera.” He glanced back. Rain striped his olive face. Recognition tightened his mouth. That cost him. His heel slid off the kerb and his left arm punched against a parked scooter. His sleeve tore at the forearm, exposing the pale rope of an old knife scar. Quinn gained ground. “You’re wanted for questioning.” “I answered your questions.” “Not the ones about Leonard Pike.” Herrera vaulted a stack of rubbish bags. One split under his boot, coughing glass into the gutter. “I never met him.” “You kept him alive for six hours.” “Then ask whoever killed him.” He plunged into a narrow passage between a betting shop and a shuttered bakery. Quinn followed, close enough to hear his breath scraping. The passage stank of wet cardboard and fryer oil. Pipes crowded one wall. Overflow from a broken gutter hammered the paving. Herrera reached a locked steel gate. Quinn slowed and drew her baton. “Nowhere left.” He seized the bars and climbed. “You always sound pleased about that?” “You’re under arrest.” “For running?” “For obstruction. Suspicion of supplying controlled substances. Practising medicine while struck off. We can build the rest somewhere dry.” Herrera swung a leg over the spikes. Quinn lunged and caught the back of his coat. Fabric stretched. He kicked once, not at her face but at her grip, heel clipping her knuckles. She released him before the spikes opened his throat. He dropped on the other side. “Sorry.” “Save it.” He hit the ground and tore through the yard beyond. Quinn stepped onto a wheelie bin, sprang for the gate and hauled herself up. Rust bit her palm. Her coat snagged on a spike. She wrenched it free and landed hard enough to jar her teeth. Herrera shoved through a fire door. Quinn entered a restaurant kitchen washed in white strip light. A cook froze with a cleaver raised over a duck carcass. Herrera swept past steaming stockpots. “Sorry, Mateo.” “You said next week.” “Plans changed.” Quinn clipped a tray with her elbow. Ladles clattered across the tiles. “Police. Which way out?” The cook pointed with the cleaver. “Same way as the idiot.” Herrera shouldered through a curtain of plastic strips. Quinn followed into the dining room, where half a dozen late customers turned in their seats. Red paper lanterns trembled overhead. A waiter blocked her with both arms. “You cannot run through here.” She displayed her warrant card without breaking stride. “Complain to the borough commander.” Herrera kicked open the front door and crossed Shaftesbury Avenue against the lights. A bus bore down on him. He slapped both hands onto its flank as it braked, using the vehicle’s momentum to twist around its nose. Quinn stopped at the kerb. The bus filled her vision, windows streaked with rain and startled faces. Herrera disappeared behind it. Quinn went low, caught sight of his boots through the gap beneath the chassis, and ran around the rear. A cyclist clipped her shoulder. His front wheel snapped sideways; both of them staggered. “Christ, look where you’re going.” “Give me the bike.” “What?” She showed the warrant card. “That doesn’t mean you can nick my—” Quinn swung onto the saddle. “Report it stolen.” She drove down the centre of the lane. Rain needled her eyes. Herrera ran north, his hood gone, medical bag clamped to his ribs. He looked back and saw her on the bicycle. “Really?” “Stop and I’ll return it.” A van turned across the cycle lane. Herrera slapped its rear doors as he passed. Quinn braked, put one foot on the kerb and launched around it, handlebars missing a bollard by a thumb’s width. He veered into an alley too narrow for the bicycle. She threw it against a wall and followed on foot. “You’re making your position worse.” “You brought a bicycle to a foot chase.” “I adapted.” “You stole it.” “Borrowed under statutory authority.” “That poor man.” The alley opened near Tottenham Court Road. Herrera grabbed the rail of a descending staircase and took the steps three at a time. Quinn saw the roundel above him. Station closed, read the sign. A chain barred the entrance. Herrera dropped beneath it. Quinn followed. A notice pasted to the tiled wall warned of engineering works, asbestos removal and no public access. Half the lights had been removed. The remaining bulbs cast yellow pools down the stairs. “Tomás.” His shoes slapped below her. “Last warning.” “Then make it a good one.” She cleared the final steps and entered a locked station concourse stripped of ticket machines. Plastic sheeting covered one passage. Dust and rainwater marked the floor, except for a chain of wet prints leading towards a staff door. Quinn pressed the transmit key clipped beneath her lapel. “Quinn to Control. Suspect entered disused station access north of Tottenham Court Road, east entrance.” Static answered. She tried again. “Control, acknowledge.” Her earpiece gave a soft pop. Then silence. Herrera stood at the staff door, breathing through his nose. He held something white between his fingers. Quinn advanced. “Hands where I can see them.” “You should leave.” “Put it down.” “It’s a token.” “Put it down.” “Your radio’s dead. Your phone will be dead too.” Quinn took it from her pocket. The screen remained black. She pressed the side button. Nothing. “You jammed them?” Herrera held up the token. A small disc of polished bone, bored through the centre and etched with a circle of hooked lines. “I couldn’t jam a toaster.” “What is that?” “Your chance to make a sensible decision.” Her baton clicked open. Herrera gave the weapon a glance. “You won’t arrest anyone beyond this door.” “You’re enough for tonight.” “You don’t know what’s down there.” “I know you’re carrying unlicensed medical supplies to people who end up dead.” “Those supplies kept them from dying.” “Leonard Pike had glass in his lungs.” “He had glass growing in his lungs.” Rainwater ran from Quinn’s cropped hair and tracked cold beneath her shirt. “The pathologist found fragments.” “The pathologist found branches. You changed the wording because branches in a man’s lungs sounded insane.” “You saw the report.” “I treated him.” “He died in a locked flat.” “He died because someone followed him home from the Market.” Herrera slid the bone disc into a narrow slot beside the staff door. The mechanism gave a deep clunk inside the wall, too heavy for the thin timber. Quinn raised the baton. “Step away.” “Detective, listen to me. If I stay here, people die. If you follow, the Market notices you. It notices everything.” “The Market.” His hand settled on the door lever. “The Veil Market.” “I’ve heard better names from Shoreditch drug dealers.” “You think I’m selling powders in a pub toilet?” “I think you lost your licence, decided rules were for other people and found clients too frightened to call an ambulance.” “My clients can’t call an ambulance.” “Everyone can.” “No. Everyone can dial. That isn’t the same thing.” Quinn closed the distance until two metres separated them. Herrera’s Saint Christopher medallion had slipped outside his shirt. He wrapped his free hand around it, not in prayer but to stop its faint tapping against the zip of his jacket. “You ran from a police officer.” “I ran from you.” “Why me?” His eyes dropped to her worn leather watch. “Because you’re wearing something that belongs to a dead man.” Quinn’s grip tightened around the baton. “Open the door and get on the floor.” “DS Morris wore that watch in the Nest three years ago.” The station seemed to contract around her. The yellow bulbs hummed. Water ticked from the hem of her coat onto the tiles. “You didn’t know him.” “I stitched his shoulder in Silas’s back room.” “Morris never went to the Raven’s Nest.” “He went six times. The last night, he left with a bone token in his pocket.” Quinn stepped closer. Herrera pulled the lever. The door opened onto darkness. Sound reached them first: many voices layered beneath the rattle of wheels and the ring of metal on metal. Then came smells that had no place in an abandoned Tube station—woodsmoke, hot sugar, damp fur, copper, crushed mint. A green glow rose from below. Herrera slipped through. Quinn caught the door before it shut and drove her shoulder into the gap. Herrera braced on the other side. “Let go.” “You don’t have a token.” “I’ve got yours.” “It was consumed at the lock.” “Then you’re coming back.” “I can’t.” She shoved. His wet shoes skidded. The gap widened enough for her to see stone stairs descending far beyond the station’s architecture. Figures moved at the bottom. Herrera stopped resisting. “That baton won’t help you.” “It helped with an armed robber in Brixton.” “Did he have two mouths?” Quinn forced the door open and stepped onto the landing. Behind her, the concourse lights flickered. Ahead, green lamps hung from hooks along a tiled shaft. Their flames burned beneath glass without smoke. The staircase descended to an old platform beneath Camden, though no tunnel could have linked the two stations in the distance they had covered. Canvas awnings crowded the platform. Stalls filled the tracks, connected by planks and iron bridges. Customers pressed through the aisles under umbrellas stitched from waxed skins. Human faces mingled with masks, veils and profiles that bent wrong beneath their hoods. A vendor held up a stoppered bottle. Something inside scratched at the glass. Across the platform, silver instruments lay on a velvet cloth beside a row of molars with roots like tiny fingers. A woman in a red coat counted coins into the palm of a child whose shadow faced the opposite direction. Further down, a butcher’s rail displayed empty cages dripping seawater. Quinn’s baton lowered by an inch. Herrera watched her face. “This wasn’t here.” “It moves every full moon.” “Camden?” “Tonight.” A tall porter approached the stair foot. He wore a railway uniform cut in an antique style, brass buttons green with age. A porcelain plate covered the upper half of his face. Two words had been painted across it in black strokes. TOKEN, PLEASE. Herrera lifted his empty hand. “Spent at the east door.” The porter tilted his head towards Quinn. “She’s with me.” The plate turned to him. “Medical emergency.” A wet clicking came from behind the porcelain. Herrera unzipped his canvas bag enough to show bandages, vials and the gleam of surgical steel. “I was called for the boy at Candle Row.” The porter extended one gloved hand towards Quinn. She opened her warrant card. “Detective Harlow Quinn, Metropolitan Police.” Conversation thinned at the nearest stalls. A seller with a cage of blue moths lowered a cloth over it. Someone pulled an awning shut. On the tracks below, a bell rang once. Herrera’s jaw set. “I told you it notices.” Quinn kept her warrant card raised. “I’m pursuing a suspect.” The porter’s painted plate remained fixed upon her. Its gloved hand moved from her identification to the worn watch on her left wrist. The ticking had grown loud. Quinn heard each beat over the Market. The porter touched the cracked leather strap with one finger. A dark stain spread through the glove, blooming from the fingertip. “Morris,” came a voice behind the porcelain. Quinn seized the porter’s wrist. “Where did you hear that name?” Herrera caught her arm. “Don’t touch him.” The porter’s sleeve shifted beneath Quinn’s fingers. No solid wrist filled it. Something granular rolled inside the cloth, hard pieces slipping over one another. She released him. The porcelain plate turned towards the market. Stallholders looked away in sequence, a ripple of lowered eyes and closing shutters. Herrera moved between Quinn and the stairs. “You have your choice. Go back through that door, write down my description and spend the morning explaining why your clothes smell of smoke in a sealed station.” “And the other choice?” “You put the baton away. You don’t show that badge again. You don’t eat, drink, buy, sell, promise, thank or apologise.” “That’s a long list.” “It’s the short one.” A cry cut through the market. High, raw, human. Herrera snapped towards it. A lantern swung above an aisle marked by rows of guttering candles. A woman in a grey veil waved both arms from a stall at the far end. “Tomás. Now.” He started down the stairs. Quinn caught the door behind her as it began to close. Cold air breathed from the abandoned concourse. On one side waited wet tiles, dead radio static and a report no superintendent would sign. On the other, Herrera threaded into the crowd with his medical bag, heading towards the scream and the only living witness who had spoken Morris’s name in three years. The porter held out his blackened glove. Quinn looked at the closing door, then at the Market. She folded her baton and put it inside her coat. “No promises. No thanks. No apologies.” Herrera stopped three steps below. “And no names.” “You used mine.” “That was before they heard it.” Quinn removed her warrant card from view. The porter’s hand remained open between them. “What does he want?” Herrera glanced at her watch. “Payment for entry.” “He can have cash.” “No.” “The badge?” “Don’t insult him.” The cry came again from Candle Row. Herrera shifted his weight towards it, every muscle drawn taut. Quinn unfastened the worn leather strap. Herrera turned back. “Not that.” “It’s what he asked for.” “If the watch belonged to Morris, it’s worth more here than you understand.” Quinn held the watch in her palm. Its hands showed 11:49, though six minutes had carried them across miles of buried London. The porter extended one finger and tapped the scarred leather. Below, the veiled woman shouted Herrera’s name. He looked from Quinn to Candle Row. “Decide.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
98.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2538
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2538
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"porcelain"
count4
highlights
0"pulse"
1"weight"
2"trembled"
3"silence"
4"etched"
5"flickered"
6"velvet"
7"porcelain"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences215
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences215
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences343
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2537
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
36.12% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions109
wordCount1844
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity2.28
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Wardour1
Street2
Raven1
Nest2
Harlow1
Quinn42
Herrera38
Old1
Compton1
Shaftesbury1
Avenue1
Tottenham1
Court1
Road1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube1
Camden1
Market2
Morris1
Candle2
Row2
London1
Rain3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Morris"
8"Rain"
places
0"Wardour"
1"Street"
2"Old"
3"Compton"
4"Shaftesbury"
5"Avenue"
6"Tottenham"
7"Court"
8"Road"
9"Market"
10"Candle"
11"Row"
12"London"
globalScore0.361
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences150
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.788
wordCount2537
matches
0"not at her face but at her grip, heel clipping her knuckles"
1"not in prayer but to stop its faint tapping against the zip of his jacket"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences343
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs253
mean10.03
std11.3
cv1.127
sampleLengths
019
142
26
35
44
548
611
76
82
92
1034
112
122
138
146
1544
162
1712
1833
193
204
214
226
2317
244
257
265
2744
286
296
302
316
326
333
342
3519
367
3735
386
391
402
4146
426
4321
445
452
464
472
4812
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences215
matches
0"been removed"
1"been painted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs324
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences343
ratio0.006
matches
0"His front wheel snapped sideways; both of them staggered."
1"Then came smells that had no place in an abandoned Tube station—woodsmoke, hot sugar, damp fur, copper, crushed mint."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1846
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"tracked cold beneath her"
1"bent wrong beneath their"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.013001083423618635
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0005417118093174431
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences343
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences343
mean7.4
std5.01
cv0.678
sampleLengths
019
120
213
39
46
55
64
79
812
914
1013
1111
126
132
142
159
166
1719
182
192
208
216
227
234
2411
2522
262
273
285
294
303
3115
3215
333
344
354
366
377
3810
394
407
415
4214
439
449
454
468
476
486
492
47.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3032069970845481
totalSentences343
uniqueOpeners104
32.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences206
matches
0"Then came smells that had"
1"Further down, a butcher’s rail"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences206
matches
0"Her worn leather watch showed"
1"She had waited fifty-seven minutes."
2"His short curls shone with"
3"He paused beneath the green"
4"His reflection looked straight at"
5"He cut between a cab"
6"He glanced back."
7"His heel slid off the"
8"His sleeve tore at the"
9"He plunged into a narrow"
10"He seized the bars and"
11"He kicked once, not at"
12"She released him before the"
13"He dropped on the other"
14"He hit the ground and"
15"Her coat snagged on a"
16"She wrenched it free and"
17"She displayed her warrant card"
18"He slapped both hands onto"
19"His front wheel snapped sideways;"
ratio0.218
8.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount186
totalSentences206
matches
0"Rain glazed Wardour Street black"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood across"
2"The bar’s neon raven flashed"
3"Her worn leather watch showed"
4"She had waited fifty-seven minutes."
5"The Nest’s door opened."
6"Tomás Herrera stepped out, head"
7"His short curls shone with"
8"A canvas medical bag hung"
9"He paused beneath the green"
10"Quinn turned towards the chemist’s"
11"His reflection looked straight at"
12"He cut between a cab"
13"A horn cracked through the"
14"Quinn left the kerb at"
15"Herrera vanished into Old Compton"
16"Quinn drove through the crowd,"
17"Umbrellas buckled against her."
18"A man spilled chips down"
19"He glanced back."
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences206
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences73
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Then came smells that had no place in an abandoned Tube station—woodsmoke, hot sugar, damp fur, copper, crushed mint."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
86.2150%