Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40RVZB8SFHAQRK09R2RJGH

Run Details

Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.107705
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended into the abandoned station beneath Camden with one hand on the rail and the other near the baton under her coat. The stairwell swallowed the noise of the street within twelve steps. By thirty, her phone had lost its signal. By fifty, the tiled walls had changed from municipal cream to a blue so dark it drank the torchlight. Someone had painted over the old station name. Not with paint, Quinn realised. Tar, perhaps, mixed with ground glass. The black letters gleamed beneath her beam. MORNINGTON CRESCENT. The entrance should not have existed. Transport for London’s plans showed a sealed ventilation shaft where the stairwell stood. Yet two uniformed constables waited at the bottom beside an iron gate, their faces washed grey by portable work lamps. One of them held out an evidence log. “Detective Quinn. DI Bell’s already inside.” Quinn checked her worn leather watch. 02:17. “Who opened the gate?” “Open when we arrived.” “That wasn’t my question.” The constable’s mouth tightened. “Security contractor found it. Name’s Hale. He heard screaming through a maintenance wall and knocked some plaster loose. Found the stairs.” “Where is he?” “Ambulance took him to the Royal Free.” “Injured?” The second constable rubbed his palms against his vest. “Wouldn’t stop screaming.” Quinn looked through the gate. Beyond it, a passage curved out of sight. Hundreds of objects hung from the tiled ceiling: strips of coloured silk, copper bells, finger bones threaded on wire. None moved. The air carried burnt sugar, damp stone and the sweet rot of lilies left too long in a vase. “Body’s on the eastbound platform,” the first constable added. “Though there aren’t any tracks.” Quinn signed the log. “No one touches the hanging objects. No one takes souvenirs. If either of you bought a lucky rabbit’s foot on the way in, put it back.” Neither laughed. She passed beneath the gate. Stalls crowded the curving corridor, their counters fashioned from theatre trunks, church pews and coffin lids. Dark awnings sagged over shelves of bottled powders. A glass cabinet held silver teeth arranged by size. Inside a birdcage, a small storm cloud pressed itself into the corners and flashed soundlessly when Quinn approached. Handwritten price cards covered every surface. ONE CHILDHOOD MEMORY. SEVEN YEARS OF GOOD HEALTH. YOUR TRUE NAME, SPOKEN ONCE. The police lamps exposed every tawdry join and water stain, but the market resisted becoming ordinary. Shadows collected under tables in dense, ink-black pools. The bells overhead remained still as Quinn’s coat disturbed the air beneath them. DI Martin Bell stood at the mouth of the platform with his white scene suit unzipped to the chest. His sandy hair clung to his forehead. A paper cup bent beneath his grip. “You took your time.” “The entrance wasn’t on the map.” “That’s Camden for you.” Quinn stopped beside him. “Tell me you didn’t drink anything sold down here.” “It came from the van.” “Did you watch them make it?” Bell lowered the cup. On the platform, crime-scene officers worked inside a square of harsh light. Beyond them, where tracks should have run, a smooth trench descended into darkness. Old advertisements lined the opposite wall, but the products were wrong. A tonic promised relief from prophetic dreams. A pawnbroker offered cash for unwanted reflections. The dates printed beneath them ranged from 1891 to 2034. The dead man sat upright on a wooden bench. His chin rested against his chest, and his arms hung at his sides. He wore a charcoal suit, polished shoes and a black tie fixed with a pearl pin. No blood marked him. No bruising showed on his hands or face. A ring of white powder surrounded the bench. “Victim?” Quinn asked. “No identification. Male, late thirties. Dr Sanjay Patel’s calling sudden cardiac death until the post-mortem tells him otherwise.” “And the powder?” “Salt.” “Lab confirmed that?” Bell took a breath through his nose. “Looks like salt.” “So does arsenic trioxide.” “That’s why the lab exists.” Quinn crouched at the edge of the ring. The powder formed an almost perfect circle, broken only where the dead man’s left shoe projected through it. Several dark red fibres lay on the pale grains near his heel. “What’s your interpretation?” Bell nodded towards the stalls. “Illegal market. Victim came to buy something, deal soured, seller poisoned him. The costumes and witch-shop rubbish are theatre. Keeps punters frightened and discourages them from going to police.” “A hidden market beneath a wall, selling bottled fog.” “Dry ice and sealed glass.” “In a bottle without a stopper.” “Then clever dry ice.” Quinn glanced at him. Bell met her gaze for half a second, then drank from the paper cup despite her warning. “What did he buy?” “Nothing on him except this.” A clear evidence bag lay on a folding table. Inside sat a small brass compass, its casing eaten green around the hinge. Protective sigils covered the face in concentric circles. The black needle pressed towards the platform wall rather than north. Quinn stepped to the table. “Bagged by whom?” “SOCO. It was in his right trouser pocket.” “Chain of custody?” “Clean.” She lifted the bag without touching the instrument. The needle swung towards her chest. It held there, trembling. Bell leaned across. “Magnet in your coat?” “Keys, handcuffs, baton. No magnet.” She moved the bag to her left. The needle tracked it. When she lowered it, the needle angled down, pointing past her hip towards the tiled floor. She gave the compass to Bell. The needle snapped back towards the platform wall. He frowned. “It’s reacting to the watch.” Quinn held up her left wrist. The leather strap had cracked around the buckle, and the watch’s scratched face showed 02:23. “The watch is steel. The handcuffs carry more iron.” “Cheap mechanism, then.” “Perhaps.” A photographer’s flash scoured the platform. The bells in the corridor answered with a single faint chime. Every officer stopped. Bell turned towards the gate. “Air current.” “No.” “What?” Quinn looked up. Dust furred the rafters. Not one scrap of silk moved. “There’s no current.” The photographer adjusted his camera with stiff fingers. “Get the body shots finished,” Bell called. “We’re not being spooked by plumbing.” Quinn approached the dead man. Dr Patel knelt beside the bench, his gloved fingers poised at the victim’s collar. He had removed nothing. “What have you got?” Patel pointed to the dead man’s throat. “Petechiae around the eyes. No ligature mark, no obvious obstruction. Lips aren’t cyanosed. Body temperature suggests death between midnight and one, but the station’s colder than street level, so widen that by an hour each side.” “Position natural?” “Not remotely. He didn’t die sitting like a commuter waiting for the Northern line. Someone arranged him.” Quinn studied the suit. Fine wool, bespoke cut. Damp stains darkened both knees, but the trouser cuffs remained dry. Grey grit clung to the right sleeve. One shirt cuff protruded farther than the other. “Can we lift his chin?” “After the photographer.” She moved around the powder ring. Its width varied. Near the dead man’s right foot, the grains formed a band no wider than a pencil. Behind the bench, the circle thickened to the breadth of a hand. Two parallel grooves crossed that section. “Martin.” Bell joined her. “The bench moved.” He examined the grooves. “Dragged into place.” “After the powder went down.” “Or before, and someone shifted it.” “Why?” “To position the body.” Quinn pointed at the dead man’s left shoe, which broke the circle. “If the circle meant anything to the killer, they wouldn’t leave his foot outside it. If it meant nothing, they wouldn’t bother making it almost perfect.” Bell crouched. His scene suit crackled. “So the foot moved.” “The legs show no collapse. Look at the creases. His trousers were pressed before he was seated. The left knee has opened farther than the right, but his hips sit square. Someone pulled that foot after rigor began.” “To break the ring?” “Or make us think it was broken.” Bell stared at the powder. “You’re treating the ritual as functional.” “I’m treating it as deliberate.” “That’s not the same thing.” “No. It’s what you skipped when you called it theatre.” Dr Patel lifted a hand. “Photographer’s done.” Quinn entered the ring where the scene officer had laid stepping plates. Up close, the dead man smelled of starch, expensive cedar cologne and something metallic. Patel supported the head while Quinn raised the chin. The victim’s eyes stood open. Tiny haemorrhages freckled the whites. A narrow red indentation crossed the underside of his jaw, hidden until his head tilted back. Bell’s jaw flexed. “Ligature.” “Not around the throat,” Patel murmured. “Under the mandible. Odd angle.” Quinn looked above the bench. A copper bell hung from the rafters on black cord. Unlike the others, its lip had a dark smear along one edge. “Photograph that bell before anyone reaches for it.” The photographer moved into place. Bell followed Quinn’s gaze. “Suspended strangulation?” “His weight would mark the neck more deeply.” “Garrotte hauled upwards?” “Possible. But look at his collar.” The top shirt button remained fastened. The black tie sat neat against it, its knot smooth and centred. Quinn eased a penlight between collar and skin. “No bunching. No transferred fibre. Whoever dressed him did so after the ligature came off.” Patel shifted the victim’s jaw. Something clicked between his teeth. “Hold him.” Quinn braced the dead man’s shoulder while Patel opened the mouth with a gloved thumb. A small ivory disc rested beneath the tongue. Not ivory. Bone. A hole pierced its centre. Three shallow cuts marked one side. Bell’s paper cup crumpled in his hand. “One of those things from the ceiling?” “No.” Quinn scanned the market passage. “A token.” “You’ve seen one before?” “I’ve seen admission tokens. Casino plaques, club chits, smugglers’ counters. Objects that turn trespass into invitation.” Patel retrieved the disc with forceps and lowered it into a specimen pot. The moment it left the victim’s mouth, every copper bell above the platform rang. The sound struck in one hard wave. Officers ducked. One constable swore and backed into a stall, sending glass bottles clinking across a shelf. Quinn stayed beside the body, shoulders set, while the noise rushed along the corridor and ended at the gate. Silence returned with pressure behind it. Bell’s face had lost its colour. “Still plumbing?” He looked at the specimen pot. “Movement. Some sort of wire system.” “Find the wires.” “I’ll have the search team—” “No.” Quinn tapped the edge of the pot. “First, seal this inside a second container. Then nobody carries it past the gate until we understand why it was in his mouth.” Bell wiped coffee from his knuckles. “You think the token triggered the bells?” “I think removing it did.” “That isn’t an explanation.” “It’s an observation.” A scene officer called from the far end of the platform. “Detective? You need to see this.” A canvas screen concealed a recess beside an old route map. Behind it stood a narrow door painted the same dark blue as the walls. The officer trained his torch on the threshold. “There’s blood.” A single black-red droplet clung to the tile. More spots led from the door to the back of the bench, but each had been dabbed with something absorbent. Pale smears remained in the grout. Bell bent close. “Our victim doesn’t have an external wound.” “Then someone else bled.” Quinn examined the door without touching it. No handle, lock or hinges broke its surface. At eye level, someone had carved a circle around a vertical slash. The mark matched one of the sigils on the brass compass. “Bring the Compass.” Bell fetched the evidence bag. As he approached, the needle began to twitch. At three paces it spun once. At two, it hammered against the glass, aimed at the painted door. The scene officer took a step back. “That’s not a magnet.” Bell held the bag beside the wall, then above his head. The needle kept its line towards the door. Quinn studied the blood trail. The drops grew smaller as they reached the bench, not larger. A wounded person had travelled from the door towards the body. One partial shoe print marked the damp grit beneath the canvas screen: narrow heel, ridged sole, size five or six. Red fibres snagged on the rough tile matched those scattered across the powder ring. She returned to the dead man and crouched by his left foot. The same fibres clung to the welt of his shoe. “Someone wore red,” Bell offered. “Dragged him from the door.” “No drag marks on his suit. No scuffs on the heels.” “Carried him, then.” “One person with a foot that size wouldn’t carry a man of his build without setting him down. The wet knees tell us he knelt somewhere. The dry cuffs tell us he didn’t kneel on this platform; the floor here is wet enough to soak the hems. Grey grit on his sleeve, but black grit under his shoes. He died somewhere else.” “Beyond the door?” “Or arrived through it.” Bell eyed the painted surface. “It’s a cupboard.” “Open it.” “No handle.” “Then find another way.” A constable approached from the corridor, clutching a tablet. “Sir, ma’am. We ran facial recognition.” Bell straightened. “And?” “No match on PNC or missing persons. But there’s something strange. The camera kept rejecting the image because it detected two faces.” The constable held out the screen. The photograph showed the dead man on the bench, head bowed, his features half in shadow. A red square framed his face. A second square hovered over the empty space beside him. Quinn enlarged the image. At first she saw only blue tiles and the pale dusting of salt. Then the screen caught the portable lamp’s glare, and a shape surfaced beneath the reflection: the suggestion of a woman crouched close to the victim, one arm hooked around his shoulders. Curly hair. Round spectacles. A freckled cheek turned towards the camera. The figure did not appear in the next photograph. “Is that an artefact?” Bell’s voice came out flat. “Ask the photographer for the raw file.” Quinn pinched the image wider. The woman’s left hand rested against the dead man’s chest. A worn leather satchel hung at her hip, swollen with books. Her right hand pointed past the bench. Not at the door. At the salt ring. Quinn lowered the tablet and returned to the narrow break beside the victim’s shoe. The powder there carried a faint impression everyone had mistaken for an irregularity: the curved edge of a small boot, placed inside the circle and then withdrawn. The dark red fibres stopped at that print. “She didn’t break it from outside.” Bell came beside her. “Who?” “The woman in the image. She stood within the circle.” “There’s no woman here.” “There was when the photograph was taken.” Quinn traced the evidence with her gaze. Bench dragged across the rear arc. Body dressed and positioned. Left foot pulled through the powder after rigor. Blood cleaned from the route. A token hidden beneath the tongue. Each action drew attention towards a ritual interrupted by violence. Yet the smallest mark contradicted it. “She completed the circle,” Quinn murmured. Bell looked from the boot print to the body. “There’s a gap.” “Manufactured after the fact. Someone wanted us to think a boundary failed.” “A boundary against what?” Quinn held out her hand for the bagged compass. Its needle strained towards the blue door, jittering against its stop. “Not against something entering.” She turned the Compass, watching the needle refuse every direction but one. “Against something leaving.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences131
tagDensity0.069
leniency0.137
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2603
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2603
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"silk"
count2
1
word"perfect"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"perfect"
2"weight"
3"scanned"
4"silence"
5"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences211
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences211
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences333
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2603
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions77
wordCount1751
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.94
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn34
Camden1
London1
Martin1
Bell26
Patel8
Compass1
One4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Martin"
3"Bell"
4"Patel"
5"Compass"
places
0"London"
1"One"
globalScore0.529
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences140
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2603
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences333
matches
0"crossed that section"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs218
mean11.94
std13.63
cv1.142
sampleLengths
063
126
22
339
48
56
67
74
84
94
104
1121
123
137
141
159
163
1753
1814
194
2026
212
225
2351
246
253
265
275
2837
2933
304
316
324
3313
345
356
364
3760
3850
398
403
4118
423
431
443
4510
464
475
4838
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences211
matches
0"been dabbed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs284
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences333
ratio0.003
matches
0"“One person with a foot that size wouldn’t carry a man of his build without setting him down. The wet knees tell us he knelt somewhere. The dry cuffs tell us he didn’t kneel on this platform; the floor here is wet enough to soak the hems. Grey grit on his sleeve, but black grit under his shoes. He died somewhere else.”"
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1754
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"dense, ink-black pools."
1"single black-red droplet"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.013112884834663626
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002280501710376283
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences333
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences333
mean7.82
std6.42
cv0.822
sampleLengths
025
111
28
319
48
55
66
77
82
96
1013
1120
128
136
146
151
164
174
184
194
2021
213
227
231
249
253
265
278
2819
292
3019
319
325
334
3426
352
365
3716
388
399
4018
416
423
435
445
4516
468
4713
4819
497
63.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.4036144578313253
totalSentences332
uniqueOpeners134
17.18% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences194
matches
0"Then the screen caught the"
ratio0.005
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences194
matches
0"She passed beneath the gate."
1"YOUR TRUE NAME, SPOKEN ONCE."
2"His sandy hair clung to"
3"His chin rested against his"
4"He wore a charcoal suit,"
5"She lifted the bag without"
6"It held there, trembling."
7"She moved the bag to"
8"She gave the compass to"
9"He had removed nothing."
10"She moved around the powder"
11"Its width varied."
12"He examined the grooves."
13"His scene suit crackled."
14"He looked at the specimen"
15"She returned to the dead"
16"Her right hand pointed past"
17"Its needle strained towards the"
18"She turned the Compass, watching"
ratio0.098
88.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount144
totalSentences194
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended into"
1"The stairwell swallowed the noise"
2"Someone had painted over the"
3"Tar, perhaps, mixed with ground"
4"The black letters gleamed beneath"
5"The entrance should not have"
6"Quinn checked her worn leather"
7"The constable’s mouth tightened."
8"The second constable rubbed his"
9"Quinn looked through the gate."
10"Hundreds of objects hung from"
11"The air carried burnt sugar,"
12"the first constable added"
13"Quinn signed the log."
14"She passed beneath the gate."
15"Stalls crowded the curving corridor,"
16"A glass cabinet held silver"
17"YOUR TRUE NAME, SPOKEN ONCE."
18"The police lamps exposed every"
19"Shadows collected under tables in"
ratio0.742
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences194
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences67
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"the first constable added (add)"
1"Patel murmured (murmur)"
2"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences131
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.076
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.046
89.0779%