Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40S405R5JW159Z1BR4900M

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.096987
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last oak stood where no oak ought to have grown. Its trunk split into three pillars, each broader than a doorway and bleached silver beneath strips of peeling bark. Knots puckered the wood like closed eyes. Six more oaks formed a broken ring around it, their roots sunk into soil hardened by frost, though no snow lay on the ground. Aurora stopped between two of them. The crescent scar on her left wrist prickled beneath her sleeve. “Those aren’t standing stones.” Isolde’s silver hair drifted past her waist, stirred by wind that touched nothing else. “Stone remembers the mountain. Wood remembers the seed. Which would you trust to guard a door?” “Neither, if the door leads where you live.” The corner of Isolde’s mouth curved. Behind them, Nyx detached from the shadow of a thorn thicket. They gathered height until a lean humanoid silhouette stood among the winter trees, violet eyes hovering in a face without features. “Your suspicion does you credit, Aurora Carter.” “Rory.” “A shorter name will not make the path kinder.” She glanced back towards Richmond Park. Bare branches meshed across a pearl-grey sky. Beyond them, the city sat hidden under distance and morning mist, though traffic muttered at the edge of hearing. A horn sounded. Tyres hissed on wet road. The ordinary noises helped. Then something chimed inside the ring. Not metal. Not glass. The note held the wet depth of a fingertip drawn around a wineglass, but beneath it came a second sound: leaves opening, hundreds at once. Rory pulled the Heartstone from beneath her jumper. The thumbnail-sized crimson gem rested in her palm, warm enough to flush her skin. Its inner glow swelled and ebbed in a slow rhythm. Nyx bent over it without touching. “This is no gate to Hel.” “The pendant disagrees.” “The pendant remembers Dymas. Memory may answer memory.” “That cleared everything up.” “Answers rarely clear. They tend to uncover.” Isolde passed between the oaks. She left no mark in the soft earth beyond them. Rory reached beneath her coat and closed her fingers around the Fae-forged blade. Cold moonsilver bit through its leather sheath. She followed. The air changed on her first step. Winter vanished from her lungs. Warmth slid across her cheeks, carrying scents of crushed mint, rain, and something sweet she could not name. The ground dipped under her boot, not with mud but with a thick cushion of moss. Sound stretched. The distant traffic dropped into a deep groan, slowed beyond recognition, then snapped off. Rory turned. The oak boundary remained behind her, yet Richmond Park had gone. Between the trunks hung a vertical skin of grey light, faintly rippled, like a reflection disturbed by breath. Her own shape appeared within it half a heartbeat late. Nyx crossed. The grey surface clung to their shoulders in silver threads. They shuddered into solid form, long limbs edged by smoke. “The Veil dislikes me.” “Mutual?” “I remember when it was thinner.” A seam opened in Nyx’s chest, revealing no flesh, only a violet depth scattered with dim sparks. It closed as their outline settled. Rory’s grip tightened around the dagger. Isolde had walked ahead. Wildflowers bent around her bare feet without breaking. Their petals wore colours Rory knew—blue, gold, scarlet—alongside shades her eyes struggled to hold. One bloom shifted from green to the ache of an almost-remembered name. Another opened towards her, showing rows of tiny white stamens that clicked together like teeth. “No picking,” Isolde called. “I wasn’t planning to.” “The flowers were.” Rory stepped away from the clicking bloom. Its stem followed her, nosing at the air. The grove spread far beyond any clearing Richmond Park could have contained. Hills rolled beneath a sky washed in pale lilac. There was no sun. Light collected on every leaf and blade of grass, shining outward from within. Ancient trees rose from the slopes in twisting tiers, their branches heavy with white fruit and copper-coloured blossoms. Water streamed upwards along one trunk, ran beneath the bark, then sprang from its highest fork in glittering ropes. Each drop chimed as it fell into the sky. Rory stared until the Heartstone gave a sharp pulse against her palm. “What is this place?” “My exile.” Isolde did not look back. “That wasn’t what I asked.” “Questions have roots. Pull one and you may dislike what comes from the soil.” Nyx glided past a cluster of blue ferns. Their leaves folded as the Shade’s darkness crossed them, then opened with soft sighs. “This pocket was cultivated,” they whispered. “Not born.” The path ahead resembled pale gravel, but when Rory put her weight on it, the pieces shifted beneath her boot. Hundreds of tiny shells turned their spiral faces towards her. They hummed a low chord. She stepped onto the moss instead. “Cultivated by whom?” “The Courts,” Isolde answered. “Before their gardeners quarrelled with the seasons.” “What did they quarrel about?” “Ownership.” A small creature broke from the grass. Rory drew the dagger. Moonsilver flashed, cold light washing over her fingers. The creature froze on the path. It stood no taller than a rabbit, with the narrow body of a fox and six delicate legs. Translucent skin showed a lattice of gold bones. Ferns grew along its spine in place of fur, each frond curled tight. It lifted a head without eyes and sniffed. The Heartstone warmed. The animal’s ferns unfurled. Tiny crimson fruits hung beneath them. “Oh.” The word escaped Rory before she could smother it. The creature sprang forwards and pressed its smooth brow to the pendant. Heat leapt through the chain. Images flooded the gem’s polished surface: amber skies, long tables sagging beneath silver platters, orchards whose branches bowed under impossible fruit. A horned figure raised a goblet somewhere beyond a curtain of flame. Rory jerked the pendant away. The creature shrieked. Nyx’s arm lengthened into a spear of darkness between them. The animal bounded backwards, all six feet striking the ground in a rippling sequence, and vanished inside a flower no bigger than a teacup. The petals snapped shut. A faint scrabbling travelled down the stem. Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs. “What did it show me?” Isolde crouched beside the flower. “A hunger.” “I saw Dymas.” “You saw what the stone carried through the Veil.” “The pendant’s never done that.” “The pendant has never entered soil where memories grow legs.” Nyx’s violet gaze remained on the closed flower. “That thing recognised Hel.” “No.” Isolde brushed one finger over the petals. “It recognised a door.” The pendant throbbed once more, hotter now. Rory shoved it beneath her jumper, though the heat seeped through her clothes. “Brilliant. I’m wearing a doorknob.” She slid the dagger into its sheath. The blade resisted for a fraction of a second, its cold point tugging towards the flower, then settled. They moved deeper. The ground climbed, but Rory felt no strain in her calves. With each step, the boundary behind them appeared no farther away. The silver oaks remained close enough to touch, their trunks framed between branches, yet the group had crossed a stream, rounded three hills, and passed beneath an arch made from the ribs of something vast. The bones hummed when Nyx went under them. They stopped. Symbols had been carved into every rib. Some resembled antlers, some open hands, some mouths stitched with lines. The marks crawled when Rory shifted her gaze. One symbol repeated near the base of each bone: a circle split by a jagged slash. She crouched. “That looks like the Veil.” Nyx joined her. Their fingers hovered above the carving, bending thin trails of shadow around it. “A wound through it.” “A rift?” “The shape predates the Wardens’ signs.” Their whisper roughened. “I saw it once before.” Rory looked up. “Where?” Nyx’s body blurred at the edges. “On the floor of a cellar in 1643.” The air beneath the arch grew cold. Not the clean cold of the dagger, but cellar cold—damp stone, stale ash, earth packed over graves. Isolde stood on the other side of the ribs. She watched Nyx with her pale lavender eyes. “The circle took Aldric.” “The men inside it took Aldric.” Nyx’s hands curled. “The circle merely failed to give him back.” Rory straightened. “You think whoever made this was connected to your summoning?” “Time copies old handwriting. It does not prove the same hand held the pen.” A knock sounded from inside the largest rib. Three slow taps. Rory stepped away. A second set answered from the bone opposite. Then another, farther up the arch. The knocks multiplied until something seemed to run through the skeleton above them, striking from within each hollow curve. “Move.” Isolde’s voice cut clean through the noise. They crossed. The moment Rory cleared the final rib, the knocking stopped. Silence pressed against her ears. She turned, and the arch had become a row of living trees with pale bark, none marked or bent. “Is that normal?” “Here?” Isolde plucked a copper blossom and crushed it between her fingers. It dissolved into a flock of sparks. “No.” “Useful distinction.” Ahead, a lake filled the hollow between the hills. Its surface stood upright. A sheer wall of black water rose from the ground and climbed beyond the treetops, narrow at its base and widening as it ascended. Silver fish swam through it. Their bodies passed in and out of view, flickering behind reflections of places that were not the grove: a candlelit ballroom, a battlefield under red rain, a child asleep beneath a kitchen table. Rory approached until damp cold touched her face. Her reflection appeared. The woman in the water wore Rory’s face but not her clothes. A dark gown clung to her body, threaded with amber light. A crown of bare branches circled her black hair. The Heartstone rested against her throat, swollen to the size of a fist. Rory stopped. The reflection did not. It raised its left hand. Across the wrist, the small crescent scar had split into a red mouth. “Isolde.” The seer came to stand beside her. In the lake, Isolde’s reflection wore iron chains around her neck and wrists. Her silver hair had been shorn to her jaw. Blood darkened her lips. “What does yours show?” “A lie wearing tomorrow’s coat.” “You can’t lie.” “The water can.” Nyx remained several paces back. Their shadow pooled around their feet as if anchored there. Rory glanced towards them. “What do you see?” “Nothing I will feed by naming.” The fish turned as one. Hundreds of silver heads faced Rory from within the vertical water. Their mouths opened. Human voices spilled out, layered and broken. “Laila.” The name struck her harder than the cold. Evan’s name for her. His private hook, softened at the edges so other people mistook it for affection. She stepped back. The reflection reached through the surface. Its hand emerged first, dry and warm, fingers spread towards Rory’s face. The crescent wound in its wrist gaped wider. Inside lay an amber sky. Rory drew the Fae blade and slashed. Moonsilver cut the wrist without resistance. The severed hand fell onto the grass, where it shattered into black water. The lake rippled from bottom to top. Each false reflection broke apart, faces stretching across the waves. The fish screamed. Nyx swept forwards, expanding until their darkness covered Rory and Isolde in a curved shield. Drops struck the Shade and hissed into steam. Wherever they landed on the grass, white mushrooms erupted, swelled, and burst in clouds of grey dust. “Don’t breathe,” Rory snapped. Isolde flung out both hands. Copper blossoms tore free from the nearby trees and spun around them, gathering into a bright, snapping ring. The dust touched the petals and burned blue. The wall of water folded in on itself. For one impossible instant, it became an ocean suspended above the grove, its dark underside crowded with pale shapes. Then it collapsed without a splash, pouring into a crack in the ground thinner than string. The last fish vanished tail-first. Air rushed back into the hollow. Rory bent with one hand braced on her knee, dagger held clear of her body. Black droplets crawled along the moonsilver blade, gathering at its point. They fell. Each drop struck the moss and whispered her name. She wiped the blade on her coat. “Your home has issues.” Isolde stared at the empty hollow. “My home did not make that lake.” Nyx lowered their shield. Pieces of their silhouette had turned translucent where the water struck, exposing violet fractures beneath. Rory reached towards them, then stopped short of contact. “Are you hurt?” “Hurt belongs to flesh. I am diminished.” “You’re flickering.” “A cruder description. Accurate.” The Shade drew themselves tighter. Darkness stitched across the fractures, leaving faint purple seams. Rory faced Isolde. “You brought us through a boundary you claimed to understand. We’ve met a fruit-backed door sniffer, your old bones tried Morse code, and a wall of water used my ex’s pet name. Start giving me answers that contain nouns.” Isolde’s gaze moved to the Heartstone beneath Rory’s jumper. Its crimson light showed through the fabric. “The grove had seven paths when I woke.” “And now?” “Eight.” “That was almost useful.” “There should never be eight.” A note sounded across the hollow. The same glass-deep chime they had heard at the oak boundary, but louder. The flowers closed. The upward-flowing streams froze in place. Far off, copper leaves turned their dull sides towards the sound. A path appeared where the lake had stood. Black roots knitted themselves into steps leading down through the crack. Amber light breathed below, warm and rhythmic. With every pulse, the Heartstone answered against Rory’s chest. Nyx leaned over the opening. Their shadow recoiled from it. “Hel.” “Dymas,” Rory murmured. Scents rose from the depths: baked pears, charred meat, wine rich with spice. Beneath them lurked sulphur and the sweet rot of fruit left in a sealed room. Music drifted up. Strings, drums, applause. Then a woman laughed. Rory knew that laugh. Not from London, Cardiff, or any memory she could reach. Recognition moved through the Heartstone instead, an intimate jolt that left her teeth aching. She crouched at the first root-step. Carved into its black surface lay the circle split by a jagged line. Isolde seized her shoulder. Her fingers felt colder than the moonsilver blade. “The eighth path was not grown for feet.” Rory held the pendant out. Crimson light spilled between her knuckles and painted all three of them blood-red. “What was it grown for?” The applause below stopped. A single place setting clinked in the silence: plate, knife, fork, glass. Isolde’s grip tightened. “For an invitation.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.122
leniency0.244
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2445
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2445
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"affection"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"throbbed"
4"whisper"
5"silence"
6"affection"
7"shattered"
8"rhythmic"
9"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences230
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences230
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences302
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2442
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.63% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions94
wordCount2037
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Isolde20
Nyx16
Richmond3
Park3
Heartstone7
Fae-forged1
Rory36
Shade3
Fae2
Scents1
London1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Nyx"
2"Heartstone"
3"Rory"
4"Shade"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.616
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences158
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.819
wordCount2442
matches
0"not with mud but with a thick cushion of moss"
1"Not the clean cold of the dagger, but cellar cold"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences302
matches
0"knew that laugh"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs190
mean12.85
std14.02
cv1.091
sampleLengths
011
150
217
34
430
58
66
732
87
91
109
1140
124
136
1429
1532
166
176
183
198
204
217
225
2310
2422
257
2655
272
2839
2912
3010
314
321
336
3423
356
3653
374
384
393
4015
4175
429
4312
444
452
465
475
4814
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences230
matches
0"been carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs354
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences302
ratio0.007
matches
0"Their petals wore colours Rory knew—blue, gold, scarlet—alongside shades her eyes struggled to hold."
1"Not the clean cold of the dagger, but cellar cold—damp stone, stale ash, earth packed over graves."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2050
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same glass-deep chime"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.01951219512195122
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.000975609756097561
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences302
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences302
mean8.09
std5.66
cv0.699
sampleLengths
011
119
27
324
46
511
64
714
816
98
106
1111
1221
137
141
159
166
177
1819
193
205
214
226
232
242
2525
268
2714
2810
296
306
313
328
334
347
355
3610
3713
387
392
407
415
4218
4316
442
4514
462
4711
4818
4910
54.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3543046357615894
totalSentences302
uniqueOpeners107
62.60% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences213
matches
0"Then something chimed inside the"
1"Then another, farther up the"
2"Then it collapsed without a"
3"Then a woman laughed."
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences213
matches
0"Its trunk split into three"
1"They gathered height until a"
2"She glanced back towards Richmond"
3"Its inner glow swelled and"
4"She left no mark in"
5"Her own shape appeared within"
6"They shuddered into solid form,"
7"It closed as their outline"
8"Their petals wore colours Rory"
9"Its stem followed her, nosing"
10"Their leaves folded as the"
11"They hummed a low chord."
12"She stepped onto the moss"
13"It stood no taller than"
14"It lifted a head without"
15"She slid the dagger into"
16"They moved deeper."
17"Their fingers hovered above the"
18"Their whisper roughened"
19"She watched Nyx with her"
ratio0.174
42.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount178
totalSentences213
matches
0"The last oak stood where"
1"Its trunk split into three"
2"Knots puckered the wood like"
3"Aurora stopped between two of"
4"The crescent scar on her"
5"Isolde’s silver hair drifted past"
6"The corner of Isolde’s mouth"
7"They gathered height until a"
8"She glanced back towards Richmond"
9"A horn sounded."
10"Tyres hissed on wet road."
11"The ordinary noises helped."
12"The note held the wet"
13"Rory pulled the Heartstone from"
14"The thumbnail-sized crimson gem rested"
15"Its inner glow swelled and"
16"Nyx bent over it without"
17"Isolde passed between the oaks."
18"She left no mark in"
19"Rory reached beneath her coat"
ratio0.836
23.47% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences213
matches
0"Wherever they landed on the"
ratio0.005
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences83
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Another opened towards her, showing rows of tiny white stamens that clicked together like teeth."
1"Their bodies passed in and out of view, flickering behind reflections of places that were not the grove: a candlelit ballroom, a battlefield under red rain, a c…"
2"Their shadow pooled around their feet as if anchored there."
3"Recognition moved through the Heartstone instead, an intimate jolt that left her teeth aching."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"Rory snapped (snap)"
2"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.061
leniency0.122
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.073
90.4470%