| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 130 | | tagDensity | 0.146 | | leniency | 0.292 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.98% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2057 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "completely" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "quickly" | | 4 | "suddenly" | | 5 | "very" | | 6 | "sharply" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 73.26% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2057 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sense of" | | 1 | "unsettled" | | 2 | "treacherous" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "chilled" | | 5 | "unreadable" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "could feel" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "charged" | | 10 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 273 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2054 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 38 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1418 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 2 | | Lucien | 19 | | Moreau | 1 | | London | 2 | | Eva | 3 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Bengali | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Soho | 1 | | French | 1 | | Ptolemy | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Moreau" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" | | 3 | "Bengali" | | 4 | "Soho" | | 5 | "French" |
| | globalScore | 0.83 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if objecting to the sudden seriousness" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2054 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 273 | | matches | | 0 | "hated that her" | | 1 | "known that much" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 189 | | mean | 10.87 | | std | 12.49 | | cv | 1.149 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 58 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 47 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 54 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 54 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 42 |
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| 98.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | | 0 | "been invited" | | 1 | "being filed" | | 2 | "been buried" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 267 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 273 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt the old pull of him immediately: the low, treacherous gravity of his voice; the scent of rain and cedar and something darker beneath it; the memory of his hand at the back of her neck while he kissed her as if the world were ending." | | 1 | "Lucien had always been infuriatingly good at that—accepting the blade of an insult as though it were a fact being filed away." | | 2 | "She remembered it against hers—careful at first, then ruthless." | | 3 | "Then his cane struck the floor as he released it, and both his hands found her—one at her waist, the other at the back of her neck." |
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| 90.08% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1422 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 73 | | adverbRatio | 0.051336146272855133 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011954992967651195 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 273 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 273 | | mean | 7.52 | | std | 6.2 | | cv | 0.824 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 47 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 44.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.21978021978021978 | | totalSentences | 273 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere below, a delivery scooter" | | 1 | "Then the black one." | | 2 | "Instead, she looked at him." | | 3 | "Then he had vanished." | | 4 | "Then he had told her" | | 5 | "Instead, she reached for his" | | 6 | "Then his cane struck the" |
| | ratio | 0.05 | |
| 55.97% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "He wore a charcoal suit" | | 1 | "She kept one hand on" | | 2 | "She should have shut the" | | 3 | "It stood in her mind" | | 4 | "She had last seen Lucien" | | 5 | "He had told her to" | | 6 | "She had asked whether that" | | 7 | "He had said it was" | | 8 | "His mouth moved, almost a" | | 9 | "She hated that her body" | | 10 | "He had once traced it" | | 11 | "She had told him about" | | 12 | "He had kissed the scar" | | 13 | "His eyebrows lifted." | | 14 | "She hated him for knowing" | | 15 | "She stepped back." | | 16 | "His sleeve grazed her arm." | | 17 | "She moved away at once" | | 18 | "His jaw tightened." | | 19 | "He absorbed that without flinching." |
| | ratio | 0.41 | |
| 42.73% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 116 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "The door opened on the" | | 1 | "He wore a charcoal suit" | | 2 | "The other rested against the" | | 3 | "Ptolemy wound around Rory’s ankles," | | 4 | "Lucien’s amber eye met hers" | | 5 | "She kept one hand on" | | 6 | "She should have shut the" | | 7 | "The thought arrived cleanly." | | 8 | "It stood in her mind" | | 9 | "She had last seen Lucien" | | 10 | "He had told her to" | | 11 | "She had asked whether that" | | 12 | "He had said it was" | | 13 | "Rory’s fingers tightened on the" | | 14 | "The answer unsettled her more" | | 15 | "Ptolemy pushed past her and" | | 16 | "Lucien bent with surprising grace," | | 17 | "Ptolemy sniffed them, then turned" | | 18 | "His mouth moved, almost a" | | 19 | "The corridor seemed to contract" |
| | ratio | 0.835 | |
| 71.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | 0 | "Now he stood in the" | | 1 | "Now he looked away." |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 44.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The other rested against the doorframe, long fingers relaxed, as though he had not just crossed half the city to appear at Eva’s flat unannounced." | | 1 | "Now he stood in the narrow hallway, rain stippling the shoulders of his suit, looking precisely as composed as he had the night he broke her heart." | | 2 | "Rory felt the old pull of him immediately: the low, treacherous gravity of his voice; the scent of rain and cedar and something darker beneath it; the memory of…" | | 3 | "Lucien had always been infuriatingly good at that—accepting the blade of an insult as though it were a fact being filed away." | | 4 | "Streetlight caught in his eyes, turning the amber one molten and leaving the black one unreadable." | | 5 | "Ptolemy yowled from somewhere near the kitchen, as if objecting to the sudden seriousness." | | 6 | "She remembered the first time he had said her name in French, as if it belonged to him." |
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| 98.68% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien agreed, his forehead nearly touching hers" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Lucien agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 130 | | tagDensity | 0.123 | | leniency | 0.246 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.046 | |