| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 110 | | tagDensity | 0.082 | | leniency | 0.164 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2637 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 65.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2637 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "comforting" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "grave" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "velvet" | | 7 | "trembled" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "throbbed" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "crystal" | | 12 | "porcelain" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 267 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 267 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 368 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2635 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 116 | | wordCount | 2057 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 2.48 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Fae | 3 | | Isolde | 17 | | Aurora | 51 | | Nyx | 22 | | London | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Laila | 1 | | Aldric | 3 | | One | 4 | | Cold | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Laila" | | 5 | "Cold" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 0.26 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 161 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared drowned in grey predawn" | | 1 | "felt like any other stone" | | 2 | "sounded like a spoon striking crystal" |
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| 48.20% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 1.518 | | wordCount | 2635 | | matches | | 0 | "Not emptiness, but a surface filled with tiny, shifting colours, as if midnight" | | 1 | "not the room, not her parents, not the cut, but the blue mug" | | 2 | "not her parents, not the cut, but the blue mug" | | 3 | "not the cut, but the blue mug" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 368 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 244 | | mean | 10.8 | | std | 12.07 | | cv | 1.118 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 41 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 267 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 373 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 368 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment held silver light; the next revealed a path beneath a sky crowded with green stars." | | 1 | "Isolde brought up the rear, though each time Aurora glanced back, the Seer appeared a different distance away—three paces, twenty, close enough for silver hair to brush Aurora’s shoulder." | | 2 | "The kitchen vanished from her memory—not the room, not her parents, not the cut, but the blue mug." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2071 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.021728633510381457 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0004828585224529213 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 368 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 368 | | mean | 7.16 | | std | 4.98 | | cv | 0.696 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 52.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.33695652173913043 | | totalSentences | 368 | | uniqueOpeners | 124 | |
| 42.37% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 236 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the sounds folded into" | | 1 | "More lights woke in the" | | 2 | "Then its shade." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 236 | | matches | | 0 | "They resembled trees until she" | | 1 | "Their roots ended in carved" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes opened last." | | 3 | "Her silver hair moved in" | | 4 | "It might have been amusement." | | 5 | "It sank into bark, moss" | | 6 | "Their solid fingers held no" | | 7 | "Their hand lost shape and" | | 8 | "Her foot passed from damp" | | 9 | "Her teeth rang." | | 10 | "Her boot landed in the" | | 11 | "She stepped towards the gate." | | 12 | "They formed a crooked line" | | 13 | "Its warmth had faded until" | | 14 | "They came from the copper" | | 15 | "She took one step left." | | 16 | "They dropped to a murmur." | | 17 | "She saw a kitchen floor" | | 18 | "Her mother’s fingers wrapped in" | | 19 | "Her father’s voice from the" |
| | ratio | 0.174 | |
| 40.51% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 198 | | totalSentences | 236 | | matches | | 0 | "The last oak stood split" | | 1 | "Aurora ran her fingers above" | | 2 | "They resembled trees until she" | | 3 | "Their roots ended in carved" | | 4 | "Knots tightened into faces." | | 5 | "Branches crossed overhead without touching," | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against" | | 7 | "Heat spread beneath her jumper." | | 8 | "Nyx gathered at her left" | | 9 | "Their violet eyes opened last." | | 10 | "Aurora took out the Fae" | | 11 | "The leaf-shaped dagger sat cold" | | 12 | "Moonlight caught in its moonsilver" | | 13 | "Her silver hair moved in" | | 14 | "Aurora glanced at the dagger." | | 15 | "Nyx’s shoulders rippled." | | 16 | "It might have been amusement." | | 17 | "Isolde’s pale lavender gaze settled" | | 18 | "The darkness around Nyx sharpened." | | 19 | "Aurora planted herself between them" |
| | ratio | 0.839 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 236 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Each frond struck its neighbour as it swayed, making a chiming melody that changed whenever Aurora shifted her weight." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 86.36% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 3 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" | | 4 | "it announced (announce)" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 6 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 110 | | tagDensity | 0.064 | | leniency | 0.127 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.127 | |