Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40TKA7NJ2NBZ8JCJXXEZSN

Run Details

Duration:
1m 12s
Cost:
$0.107340
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lacquered Soho black and silver. Detective Harlow Quinn shouldered through the door of the Raven’s Nest as the green neon sign spat sparks above her, painting her hands the colour of old poison. Across the road, Tomás Herrera looked back. Their eyes met through the traffic. Herrera ran. “Police. Stop.” A taxi horn swallowed the command. Herrera vaulted the bonnet of a parked Mini, coat flaring behind him, and cut between two buses grinding towards Piccadilly Circus. Quinn went after him. A cyclist clipped her elbow. His curse chased her for half a street. She ignored both, crossed against the lights and landed in a gutter deep enough to flood her right shoe. Cold water bit through her sock. Herrera had twenty yards on her. Short, dark curls glistened under the shop lights. He moved like a man accustomed to carrying weight over broken ground, arms tucked close, feet choosing clean patches between puddles and dropped rubbish. A chain flashed at his throat. Saint Christopher. Patron saint of travellers. “Useful night for him,” Quinn muttered. He hooked left into Wardour Street. Quinn touched the radio at her shoulder. “Quinn to Control. Foot pursuit. Suspect heading north on Wardour, male, twenty-nine, dark coat, black trousers.” Static scraped back at her. “Repeat location.” “Wardour Street. Tomás Herrera. Former paramedic. Flag the Camden units.” “Any visible weapon?” “No.” The rain struck harder, bouncing from awnings and drumming on taxi roofs. Herrera shoved through a knot of smokers outside a club. One man spun into Quinn’s path with a pint in hand. “Watch it—” She caught his shoulder, moved him aside and kept pace. Herrera crossed Oxford Street beneath a red light. Brakes shrieked. A delivery van missed him by the width of a hand. Quinn reached the kerb as traffic surged between them. Herrera turned on the far pavement and lifted his chin. Not a taunt. A calculation. He watched the cars, watched her, then reached under his shirt. His fist closed around the medallion. Quinn saw his lips move. Then he vanished into the mouth of Soho Street. “Control, suspect northbound towards Tottenham Court Road.” “Units are six minutes out.” “He’ll be gone in two.” “Do not lose radio contact.” Quinn stepped in front of a black cab. The driver leaned on his horn and threw both hands up. She slapped her warrant card against the windscreen, passed the bumper and sprinted through the next gap. Her worn leather watch dragged wet against her left wrist. Nine minutes past midnight. Herrera’s file sat fresh in her head. Born in Seville. NHS paramedic. Licence revoked after a run of unauthorised treatments—blood transfusions without matching records, compounds that no hospital pharmacist could identify, patients discharged under false names. Since then, cash work. No tax trail. No registered clinic. Three known assaults, all withdrawn. Connections to half a dozen missing persons and one dead informer found beneath Waterloo Bridge with his veins full of mercury. And tonight, a meeting at the Raven’s Nest. Quinn had watched from an unmarked car while Herrera entered empty-handed and left with a canvas medical bag. The bag slapped against his hip as he ran. She cleared the corner. He was fifty yards ahead, pushing north, his shape broken by umbrellas and bursts of white headlight. “Tomás.” He looked back. “That bag belongs to an investigation.” “Then investigate someone else.” His voice carried with a Spanish edge, clipped by breath. “Put it down.” “You don’t know what’s in it.” “Help me out.” “If I stop, people die.” “People keep dying around you.” His stride hitched. Only once. Enough to show the words had found meat. Quinn drove harder. Her lungs burned under her ribs. Eighteen years in the Met had taught her that pursuit stripped people down. Training fell away. Lies cracked. The body spoke. Herrera protected the bag each time someone came close. He never reached for a weapon. He checked his watch twice. He wasn’t escaping arrest. He was late. At Tottenham Court Road, he plunged into the station entrance. Quinn followed him beneath the glass canopy. Warm air rose from the Underground, carrying brake dust, wet wool and the sour breath of packed tunnels. The ticket hall had begun to empty. A cleaner dragged a yellow sign across the tiles. Herrera slapped his bank card against a gate. Red light. He struck it again. Red. Quinn closed to fifteen yards. “End of the line.” Herrera vaulted the barrier. She cleared it after him, coat catching the glass fin. Fabric tore at her hip. An Underground worker stepped from beside the gate. “Oi, you can’t—” “Police. Stay back.” She took the escalator three steps at a time. Herrera ran down the left side, forcing passengers against the rail. “Move. Please, move.” “You heard him.” Quinn kept one hand near her warrant card and the other free. “Clear the left.” A woman dropped a shopping bag. Oranges bounced down the metal steps. Herrera jumped one, crushed another and slipped on the peel. His shoulder struck the moving handrail. Quinn gained five yards. He recovered, reached the bottom and cut past signs for the Northern line. A train breathed at the platform, doors chiming. Herrera reached it as they began to close. He did not board. He turned through a staff gate marked NO PUBLIC ACCESS and kicked it shut behind him. Quinn hit the gate with her shoulder. The latch held. Through the mesh, Herrera disappeared down a white-tiled passage. She drew her baton and drove the pommel into the release housing. Plastic cracked. On the second blow, the lock spat loose. “Control, suspect has entered a restricted passage at Tottenham Court Road. Northern line level.” No answer. “Control?” A low pulse filled the radio, almost too deep to hear. Quinn pulled it from her shoulder. The display blinked, wiped itself blank and came back with a row of symbols that resembled hooked teeth. She switched channels. “Quinn to any unit.” The radio gave her a man’s voice. “Harlow?” She stopped. Water crawled down the back of her neck. The voice came through a wash of static, thin and strained. “Harlow, where are you?” Three years collapsed into that passage. A warehouse in Bermondsey. A door bolted from the inside. Blood on a concrete floor, though no body had ever surfaced. DS Morris had called her Harlow only when nobody else could hear. She squeezed the transmit button until the casing creaked. “Identify yourself.” A wet gasp answered. Then silence. Quinn shut off the radio and clipped it back into place. Herrera’s footsteps struck tile somewhere ahead. She ran. The staff passage narrowed, lost its fresh paint and became an older artery of the station. Cream tiles gave way to brick blackened by soot. Electrical cables sagged from ceramic mounts. A rusted sign pointed towards a platform closed before Quinn’s parents were born. Herrera rounded the next bend. “Stop.” He glanced over his shoulder. “You need to go back.” “You can tell me all about it in custody.” “No custody down here.” He reached a steel door set into the brickwork and dragged it open. Behind it waited a stairwell. No station light touched the steps. Herrera descended. Quinn caught the door before it shut. Her baton remained in her right hand. She pulled a torch from her coat with her left and aimed the beam down. The stairs curled into damp brick. Fresh footprints shone on each tread. The air carried incense, hot metal and something animal, like fur left beside a fire. “Control won’t hear you.” Herrera’s voice rose from below. “You tampered with my radio?” “I’m carrying bandages and three vials of anticoagulant. Where would I fit a transmitter?” “In the bag with the mercury.” A pause. “That wasn’t mine.” “You recognised it.” “Everyone in my line of work recognises grave-silver.” Quinn started down. Her shoes struck iron-edged steps slick with moisture. “Mercury has a new name now?” “Mercury stays in a thermometer. Grave-silver hunts heat.” “Save it.” “You heard someone on your radio, didn’t you?” Her foot stopped one step above the next. Herrera stood at the bottom, half caught in her torch beam. Rain had plastered his curls to his forehead. The canvas bag rested against his thigh. His right hand held a small pale disc. Bone. A hole pierced its centre. Symbols ringed the edge in burnt black strokes. “What did you do?” “Nothing.” “You knew.” “This place uses what people carry inside.” Quinn descended another step. “Hands where I can see them.” “You can arrest me upstairs. Down here, put the baton away.” “Why?” “Because some of the traders smell iron.” The stairwell opened behind him into an abandoned platform. Broken signs clung to tiled walls. Dust furred the rails, yet warm amber light poured from the tunnel to Quinn’s left. Voices moved beneath the station: bargaining, laughter, an animal snarl cut short by applause. Herrera held up the bone disc. “This gets one person through.” “You’re taking me.” “No.” “Then you’re not going.” A clock chimed somewhere in the tunnel. Not a station bell. Its note had weight; Quinn felt it in her teeth. Herrera looked towards the amber light. “I have six minutes to deliver what’s in this bag.” “To whom?” “A patient.” “Name.” “Names cost more down here than blood.” Quinn stepped onto the platform. Herrera backed away. His coat sleeve rode up, exposing the pale ridge of a knife scar along his left forearm. “Don’t follow me.” “Running from police hasn’t sharpened your authority.” “I ran because you’d confiscate the bag. Without it, a woman bleeds out before morning.” “Bring her up.” “She has gills.” Rainwater ticked from Quinn’s coat hem onto the dusty floor. Herrera watched her absorb it. His face held no grin, no sign that he had tossed out a line to crack her composure. “Show me.” “No.” “Then I take the bag.” “You take it, you kill her.” “You expect me to accept a woman with gills?” “I expect nothing from you. That’s why I ran.” The clock chimed a second time. From the tunnel came the rattle of wheels. Quinn aimed her torch past Herrera. A wooden cart rolled across the tracks without horse or driver, stacked with stoppered jars. Pale objects bumped against the glass from inside. Each had a row of tiny human teeth. The cart vanished through an arch veiled by red cloth. Quinn’s baton lowered by an inch. Herrera saw. “The Veil Market moved beneath Camden tonight. This passage shouldn’t reach it, but the Market builds its own doors when the moon is full.” “This is Tottenham Court Road.” “Not after that arch.” “You’ve been supplying this place.” “I’ve been treating people no hospital will touch.” “People?” “Most of them.” Footsteps approached from the stairwell above. Quinn spun, baton raised. A transport officer appeared at the top, one hand on the rail. “Detective? We had a report—” His gaze passed over Herrera, the dead platform and the light pouring from the tunnel. “What in God’s name is this?” Herrera’s expression tightened. “Don’t let him come down.” The officer started descending. “You all right, ma’am?” “Stay there.” Quinn held up a hand. “Do not move.” “What’s happened?” A scratching sound came from beneath the steps. The officer froze. Something pale threaded between the iron risers behind his ankles. It resembled a hand stripped of skin, but it carried too many joints. One hooked finger brushed the heel of his boot. Quinn aimed the torch into its centre. The thing recoiled with a hiss. “Back up.” Her voice cut through the stairwell. “Now. Shut the door and lock it.” The officer stared down at the moving shape. “Go.” He stumbled upwards. The steel door slammed. The lock clanged home. The pale limb folded into a crack between bricks and disappeared. Herrera let out one measured breath. “Baton away.” Quinn collapsed it and pushed it into its holster. “Happy?” “No.” He crossed to a freestanding iron turnstile at the platform’s far end. No barrier surrounded it. Beyond lay only the tunnel and its amber glow. A narrow slot opened in the mechanism. Herrera inserted the bone token. The turnstile clicked. The derelict platform changed. Canvas awnings unfurled along the tunnel walls. Lamps bloomed behind glass stained blue, gold and bruised purple. Stalls crowded the old tracks where tables displayed knives with twitching shadows, silver cages full of bottled whispers, powders that crawled across their trays against the slope. Figures moved between them in coats, robes, veils and skins Quinn could not name. Noise struck her next. Hawkers called prices in pounds, teeth, favours and years. A woman with antlers argued over a twist of saffron. A child in a funeral suit held a tray of eyes and offered samples. Herrera pushed through the turnstile. It rotated once, then locked behind him. Quinn seized the cold iron bars. “You’re under arrest.” “No one here cares.” He moved into the crowd. “Herrera.” He stopped and faced her across the barrier. “Go back to the Raven’s Nest. Ask Silas what happened to DS Morris.” Quinn’s grip tightened. “What did you say?” “You heard me.” “How do you know that name?” “Your radio knew it first.” He turned away. Quinn looked back at the stairwell. One route to the city, to armed support, station plans and a chain of evidence that remained intact. Ahead, Herrera slipped between a stall hung with finger bones and a counter where blue fire burned under copper pots. The turnstile’s token slot stood empty. Quinn drew her warrant card and pushed it in. The mechanism rejected it. Her card dropped to the floor. A vendor sat beside the barrier, wrapped in a coat sewn from railway maps. Three black eyes blinked across his narrow face. He opened one hand. On his palm rested a bone token. “What price?” Quinn kept her gaze on Herrera’s retreating coat. The vendor’s smile exposed a strip of brass in place of teeth. “A true answer.” “To what?” He leaned close enough for her torchlight to catch names engraved across the brass. “Why did you leave Morris alone in that warehouse?” Quinn stared at the token. Herrera reached the edge of the crowd. The detective switched off her torch, picked up her warrant card and slid it into her coat. Then she unfastened the worn leather watch from her left wrist and laid it across the vendor’s palm. “You asked for truth, not payment.” The vendor curled his fingers around the watch. “I did.” “I left Morris because he ordered me to cover the rear exit. I followed procedure. He was gone for forty-three seconds.” “Is that the answer you give his widow?” “No.” The vendor held her gaze. Quinn set her sharp jaw. “It’s the answer I give myself when I want sleep.” His brass smile widened. He passed her the bone token. She fed it into the slot. The turnstile clicked, and Quinn followed Herrera into the Veil Market.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences113
tagDensity0.035
leniency0.071
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2497
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2497
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count2
4
word"grave"
count2
5
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"footsteps"
4"grave"
5"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences247
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences247
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences354
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2496
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions115
wordCount1939
uniqueNames30
maxNameDensity2.06
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Harlow2
Quinn40
Raven2
Nest2
Tomás1
Herrera36
Mini1
Piccadilly1
Circus1
Christopher1
Wardour1
Street3
Oxford1
Seville1
Waterloo1
Bridge1
Spanish1
Met1
Tottenham1
Court1
Road1
Underground2
Northern1
Bermondsey1
Morris1
Veil1
Market1
One3
Three3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Christopher"
6"Morris"
7"One"
places
0"Soho"
1"Piccadilly"
2"Wardour"
3"Street"
4"Oxford"
5"Seville"
6"Waterloo"
7"Bridge"
8"Tottenham"
9"Court"
10"Road"
11"Bermondsey"
12"Veil"
globalScore0.469
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences163
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2496
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences354
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs250
mean9.98
std10.99
cv1.101
sampleLengths
034
17
26
32
42
527
64
738
846
94
106
116
127
1316
145
152
1610
173
181
1933
202
2110
2221
2335
246
255
269
277
285
295
305
318
3228
3314
3472
358
3618
379
3821
391
403
416
424
4310
443
456
463
475
485
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences247
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs351
matches
0"wasn’t escaping"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences354
ratio0.006
matches
0"Licence revoked after a run of unauthorised treatments—blood transfusions without matching records, compounds that no hospital pharmacist could identify, patients discharged under false names."
1"Its note had weight; Quinn felt it in her teeth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1943
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.0159547092125579
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002058672156459084
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences354
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences354
mean7.05
std4.78
cv0.678
sampleLengths
06
128
27
36
42
52
66
721
84
95
108
1119
126
136
148
1524
166
172
184
196
206
217
2216
235
242
2510
263
271
2812
2910
3011
312
3210
338
342
3511
369
3710
383
392
4011
416
425
439
447
455
465
475
488
4911
53.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3474576271186441
totalSentences354
uniqueOpeners123
29.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences228
matches
0"Then he vanished into the"
1"Then she unfastened the worn"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount55
totalSentences228
matches
0"Their eyes met through the"
1"His curse chased her for"
2"She ignored both, crossed against"
3"He moved like a man"
4"He hooked left into Wardour"
5"She caught his shoulder, moved"
6"He watched the cars, watched"
7"His fist closed around the"
8"She slapped her warrant card"
9"Her worn leather watch dragged"
10"She cleared the corner."
11"He was fifty yards ahead,"
12"He looked back."
13"His voice carried with a"
14"His stride hitched."
15"Her lungs burned under her"
16"He never reached for a"
17"He checked his watch twice."
18"He wasn’t escaping arrest."
19"He was late."
ratio0.241
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount192
totalSentences228
matches
0"Rain lacquered Soho black and"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn shouldered through"
2"Their eyes met through the"
3"A taxi horn swallowed the"
4"Herrera vaulted the bonnet of"
5"Quinn went after him."
6"A cyclist clipped her elbow."
7"His curse chased her for"
8"She ignored both, crossed against"
9"Herrera had twenty yards on"
10"He moved like a man"
11"A chain flashed at his"
12"Patron saint of travellers."
13"He hooked left into Wardour"
14"Quinn touched the radio at"
15"Static scraped back at her."
16"The rain struck harder, bouncing"
17"Herrera shoved through a knot"
18"She caught his shoulder, moved"
19"Herrera crossed Oxford Street beneath"
ratio0.842
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences228
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Stalls crowded the old tracks where tables displayed knives with twitching shadows, silver cages full of bottled whispers, powders that crawled across their tra…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences113
tagDensity0.009
leniency0.018
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.018
87.9057%