Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40XTP7F0EVVNNH81E0CM4B

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.098490
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain polished Soho into strips of bruised colour. Brake lights bled across the road. Shop signs shivered in gutters. Above the Raven’s Nest, green neon burned through the downpour and painted every passing face the colour of old copper. Detective Harlow Quinn stood beneath a pharmacy awning opposite the bar, rain dripping from her cropped salt-and-pepper hair and gathering along the hard line of her jaw. Her coat clung between her shoulders. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 11:43. Tomás Herrera had entered the Nest at 10:17 carrying a black medical case. At 11:41, he had come out without it. Quinn watched him turn towards Wardour Street. Short curls dark with rain. Olive skin washed green beneath the sign. One hand pressed against his chest, fingers closed around the Saint Christopher medallion at his throat. He looked straight at her. His face tightened. Then he ran. Quinn left the shelter. “Herrera!” He shouldered between two men sharing an umbrella and cut across the street. A minicab struck its horn. Tyres hissed over standing water as Tomás slapped both palms against the bonnet, vaulted the corner and vanished past its headlamps. Quinn reached the road a beat later. “Police. Stay in the car.” The driver’s abuse followed her across Wardour Street. Tomás glanced over his shoulder near the junction. His coat flew open, exposing a grey jumper and the pale line of the scar down his left forearm. He clipped a sandwich board, sent it spinning into the pavement and ducked into an alley beside a shuttered restaurant. Quinn drew her radio. “Quinn to Control. Suspect heading north on foot from Wardour Street. Male, twenty-nine, dark coat, grey jumper. Tomás Herrera. Request units towards Oxford Street.” Static cracked. “Received. What’s the offence?” “Obstruction. Possible supply of controlled substances.” That description barely touched the case. Three bodies in six weeks, each drained of blood without a wound large enough to account for the loss. Hospital-grade tubing in a skip behind the Raven’s Nest. A witness who swore Herrera had treated a man whose ribs moved beneath his skin after death. Quinn had no box on any form for that. She entered the alley. The rain struck metal bins and fire escapes, each drop snapping in the narrow space. Tomás splashed through a channel of greasy water. He shoved through a knot of kitchen staff smoking beneath an extractor fan. “Move!” Quinn drove past them, one shoulder grazing wet brick. Tomás caught a stack of empty crates with his hip. Plastic boxes toppled behind him. She hurdled the first. Her heel landed inside the second and punched through its lattice. Pain jarred her knee. She tore free without breaking stride. “Herrera, stop.” “You don’t know where you’re going.” His voice carried back through the rain. “That makes one of us.” “You follow me, people die.” “Good reason to stop, then.” Tomás cleared the alley mouth and turned east. Quinn emerged into the blaze of Oxford Street, where late buses lumbered between black cabs and umbrellas packed the pavement. He slipped into the crowd. Quinn climbed onto the kerbside barrier. Height gave her a clear line across the bobbing canopy. There. Dark curls. Grey jumper. Moving against the stream. She dropped from the rail and forced a path after him. “Police. Out of the way.” A tourist flattened himself against a shop window. A woman swung a shopping bag into Quinn’s thigh. Tomás seized the rear platform of a departing bus, rode it for three car lengths, then jumped off before it reached the lights. Quinn ran into the road. A motorcycle cut across her. The rider’s visor flashed inches from her face. She twisted aside, caught herself against a cab and kept moving. Tomás reached the mouth of Tottenham Court Road. Blue light washed over the buildings behind him. He saw it too. A marked car nosed through traffic from the west. He changed direction and charged down a side street. Quinn spoke into her radio as she followed. “He’s heading north-east. Close the roads towards Bloomsbury.” “Unit Twelve has eyes on your junction.” “Keep them street level.” “Repeat?” “Keep them street level.” Tomás had warned that people would die. He might have meant officers. He might have meant civilians. Quinn had learnt what happened when a warning sounded absurd and got treated that way. Three years earlier, DS Morris had stood outside a condemned house in Lambeth and told her something inside knew his name. She had laughed. By dawn, they had found his shoes placed side by side in an empty room. They never found the rest of him. Tomás hit a service lane behind a row of closed shops and kicked through a gate secured with a chain. The padlock hung open, prepared in advance. He squeezed through. Quinn caught the gate before it swung back and followed. “Herrera.” He skidded to a stop at the far end. A brick wall blocked the lane. Bins lined one side, loading bays the other. No doors stood open. No fire escape hung low enough to reach. Quinn slowed and drew her baton. Tomás faced her, rain coursing down his cheeks. His chest heaved. The medallion rested in his fist. “Put your hands where I can see them.” “This isn’t an arrest you want to make.” “Hands.” He raised them to shoulder height. “You went into Silas’s bar with a medical case.” “So?” “You left without it.” “People visit doctors.” “Doctors keep licences.” Something moved behind his face. Not shame. Anger. “The licensing board didn’t care what happened to patients they refused to believe existed.” “You treated someone at the Raven’s Nest tonight.” “I treated five.” “With what?” “With medicine.” “The sort that leaves anticoagulant tubing in skips?” “The sort that stops a woman drowning in her own lungs because she breathed dust sold by men you can’t arrest.” Quinn advanced two steps. Tomás gave ground until his heel touched the wall. “Who killed Nathan Cole?” “I patched him up.” “Cole was dead when we found him.” “He wasn’t dead when I left.” “And Priya Shah?” “I never saw her.” “Liam Voss?” His eyes shifted towards the loading bay. Quinn followed the movement. A delivery shutter stood closed beneath a faded sign for electrical wholesalers. No handle marked its surface. Water poured down it in silver threads. “You saw Voss.” Tomás lowered his hands. “Don’t.” “On your knees.” “Harlow, listen to me.” She went still. He had never called her Harlow in either interview. No one at the Raven’s Nest had. Her warrant card gave the name, but Tomás’s voice wrapped around it with the weight of private knowledge. “How did you know Morris?” Rain hammered the bins. Tomás looked towards the lane entrance. Blue light pulsed across the wet bricks, faint but drawing closer. “I didn’t.” “You knew him.” “I saw what took him.” Quinn crossed the distance and drove him into the wall, forearm beneath his chin. “What took him?” Tomás gripped her sleeve. His Saint Christopher medallion pressed cold against her wrist. “Not here.” “Name it.” “It wore names. That was the problem.” Sirens rose beyond the gate. Quinn shoved harder. “Where is Morris?” “He’s gone.” “Body?” “There wouldn’t be one.” The answer opened something raw beneath her ribs. She tightened her hold until Tomás’s head struck brick. “You tell me the truth now.” “I just did.” A clang sounded behind the delivery shutter. Tomás’s gaze snapped towards it. Three knocks followed. Slow. Even. Metal rang through the lane. Quinn released one hand and reached for her cuffs. Tomás caught the chain between them. He jerked forward, using her grip as leverage, and drove his shoulder into her chest. Quinn staggered. He twisted, swept her wrist against the wall and knocked the cuffs loose. They struck the ground. Tomás lunged for the shutter. Quinn seized the back of his coat. Fabric tore at the collar. He spun and caught her forearm. The sleeve of his jumper rode up, exposing the long scar along his left arm, a white seam warped by old stitches. “Let go.” “You’re under arrest.” “No. I’m under the clock.” He stamped on a loose iron cover beside the wall. A bell chimed below them. The shutter rose six inches. Warm yellow light spilled across the flooded concrete. It carried smells that did not belong beneath Camden or anywhere near London: hot iron, cinnamon, damp soil, something sweet with a rotten edge. Tomás dropped flat and rolled beneath the metal. Quinn grabbed his ankle. His wet trouser leg slid through her fist. He kicked once, striking her knuckles, and vanished under the shutter. It began to descend. Quinn jammed her baton into the gap. Metal crushed against steel with a sharp crack. The shutter stopped a hand’s width above the ground. She crouched and looked through. Stone steps led down beneath the loading bay. Yellow bulbs hung from cables overhead. Tomás reached the bottom and ran through an archway tiled in the soot-stained cream of an old Tube station. Impossible. They were miles south of Camden. Beyond the arch, a crowd filled an abandoned platform. Canvas awnings crowded beneath flaking signs. Lamps burned blue, red and colourless white. Stalls displayed stoppered bottles in racks, bundles of black flowers, silver instruments shaped for no anatomy Quinn recognised. A woman with a veil stitched to the skin beneath her eyes weighed teeth on brass scales. Beside her, a child-sized figure in a waxed coat held a glass jar containing something that tapped from inside. People turned towards the gap. Every face fixed on Quinn. Tomás stopped beneath the arch. He pulled a small yellow object from his pocket and showed it to a pair of guards. Bone, carved into the shape of a coin. One guard wore a railway porter’s cap; the other had antlers bound flat along his skull with copper wire. The porter bit the token. A dry click passed through the market. Stallholders covered their wares. Hands slipped beneath coats. Tomás looked back up the stairs. “Close it, Quinn.” Her baton bowed under the shutter. “Come back and I will.” “I can’t.” “You can explain Morris from a custody suite.” “There are no custody suites deep enough.” The sirens cut out above. Car doors slammed in the lane. “Ma’am?” an officer called beyond the gate. “Detective Quinn?” Tomás stepped backwards into the market. Quinn pressed her face closer to the gap. “Who killed Cole?” “A broker called Mother Mason.” “Where do I find her?” Tomás glanced towards the stalls. The porter’s hand moved beneath his red jacket. “You don’t. You leave.” “Did she take Morris?” “No.” “Then who did?” The tapping inside the child-sized figure’s jar stopped. Tomás stared past Quinn, towards the rain-black lane above her. Colour drained from his face. “Your officers need to go.” “Answer me.” “They need to go now.” A voice floated from behind the loading shutter, though no one stood close enough to speak. Soft. Male. Familiar. “Harlow?” Her body locked. Morris had said her name in that exact tone whenever he found sugar in his coffee after asking for none. “Harlow, open this.” One of the uniformed officers reached the shutter behind her. “We’ll get that raised, ma’am.” Quinn swung round. “Don’t touch it.” The young constable froze with both hands inches from the metal. His partner stood at the gate, rain dripping from his cap. “Suspect went under?” “Back away.” The first constable peered at the gap. “What’s down there?” The market beyond had fallen silent. Hundreds of eyes waited between the stalls. Morris’s voice came again, this time from the darkness behind the constable. “You left me in that house.” Quinn’s baton creaked. Tomás lifted both hands, palms towards her. “Detective. Listen to my voice. Not his.” The constable turned towards the empty loading bay. “Who said that?” Quinn seized him by the front of his stab vest and hurled him back. He collided with his partner. Both men cursed. “Seal this lane. Nobody enters.” “Ma’am—” “Nobody.” The baton slipped half an inch. The shutter ground lower. Tomás moved deeper beneath the tiled arch. The market began to swallow him, bodies closing across her line of sight. Quinn looked at her watch. 11:58. A full moon hung somewhere above the rain. At midnight, according to the informant who had died before finishing his statement, the Veil Market moved. No address. No trail. No second entrance without a bone token. Morris whispered from the dark. “You know it’s me.” Quinn pulled her baton free. The shutter slammed down, cutting off the voice and the yellow light. For one beat, she remained on her knees in the rain. Her reflection trembled across the wet metal: brown eyes, bloodless mouth, water running from her cropped hair. Then she ripped the baton from the ground, drove its tip beneath the shutter and forced upward. The motor groaned. Metal rose an inch, then two. One constable gripped her shoulder. “Ma’am, what are you doing?” Quinn knocked his hand away and tore the leather watch from her left wrist. She wedged it beneath the shutter as the gap widened, sacrificing the cracked face to the weight. “Calling it in.” “You ordered us back.” “I’m going below. You’re staying here.” “Below where?” She lowered herself onto the flooded concrete. “Camden.” The constable stared at the blank brick walls around them. “This is Soho.” “Write that in your notebook.” Quinn flattened her shoulders and pushed through the gap. The shutter scraped across her coat, trapped her for half a breath, then released her onto the top stair. Warm, tainted air touched her face. The steps descended towards the abandoned station. At the bottom, the porter with the red jacket stood beneath the arch. He held out one gloved hand. “Token.” Quinn rose, rainwater streaming from her clothes. “Police.” The porter exposed a mouth packed with small square teeth. “Token.” Behind him, Tomás had stopped among the closing stalls. Two figures held his arms. A third pressed a curved silver blade beneath his chin. He met Quinn’s gaze. “Don’t give them your name.” The shutter crashed shut above her. Quinn stood on the stone steps, one hand near her baton and the other empty. The porter extended his palm. “Token, traveller. Or payment in kind.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences105
tagDensity0.01
leniency0.019
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2383
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2383
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"trembled"
count1
5
word"streaming"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"weight"
2"pulsed"
3"familiar"
4"trembled"
5"streaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences238
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences238
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences342
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2383
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions114
wordCount1940
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity1.96
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven3
Nest4
Harlow2
Quinn38
Herrera2
Wardour2
Street3
Saint2
Christopher2
Tomás30
Oxford1
Tottenham1
Court1
Road1
Morris4
Lambeth1
Camden2
London1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
One4
Three3
Metal3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Tomás"
8"Morris"
9"Veil"
10"One"
11"Metal"
places
0"Soho"
1"Wardour"
2"Street"
3"Oxford"
4"Tottenham"
5"Court"
6"Road"
7"Lambeth"
8"London"
globalScore0.521
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences154
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2383
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences342
matches
0"warned that people"
1"treated that way"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs237
mean10.05
std10.97
cv1.091
sampleLengths
039
143
21
313
48
535
65
73
83
94
101
1139
127
135
148
1547
164
1724
182
194
206
2151
229
234
2436
251
269
2715
2825
292
306
317
325
335
345
3533
3616
379
3811
395
4040
415
4224
4316
444
459
469
478
488
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences238
matches
0"got treated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs342
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences342
ratio0.003
matches
0"One guard wore a railway porter’s cap; the other had antlers bound flat along his skull with copper wire."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1947
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.011299435028248588
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0005136106831022085
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences342
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences342
mean6.97
std4.99
cv0.717
sampleLengths
08
16
25
320
427
56
610
71
813
98
107
115
127
1316
145
153
163
174
181
1913
205
2121
227
235
248
258
2619
2720
284
2924
302
314
326
336
3419
359
3617
379
384
3915
408
4113
421
439
4410
455
464
4711
484
496
53.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3382352941176471
totalSentences340
uniqueOpeners115
30.17% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences221
matches
0"Then he ran."
1"Then she ripped the baton"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences221
matches
0"Her coat clung between her"
1"She checked the worn leather"
2"He looked straight at her."
3"His face tightened."
4"He shouldered between two men"
5"His coat flew open, exposing"
6"He clipped a sandwich board,"
7"She entered the alley."
8"He shoved through a knot"
9"She hurdled the first."
10"Her heel landed inside the"
11"She tore free without breaking"
12"His voice carried back through"
13"He slipped into the crowd."
14"She dropped from the rail"
15"She twisted aside, caught herself"
16"He saw it too."
17"He changed direction and charged"
18"He might have meant officers."
19"He might have meant civilians."
ratio0.24
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount182
totalSentences221
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stood beneath"
1"Her coat clung between her"
2"She checked the worn leather"
3"Tomás Herrera had entered the"
4"Quinn watched him turn towards"
5"Olive skin washed green beneath"
6"He looked straight at her."
7"His face tightened."
8"Quinn left the shelter."
9"He shouldered between two men"
10"A minicab struck its horn."
11"Tyres hissed over standing water"
12"Quinn reached the road a"
13"The driver’s abuse followed her"
14"Tomás glanced over his shoulder"
15"His coat flew open, exposing"
16"He clipped a sandwich board,"
17"Quinn drew her radio."
18"That description barely touched the"
19"Hospital-grade tubing in a skip"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences221
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It carried smells that did not belong beneath Camden or anywhere near London: hot iron, cinnamon, damp soil, something sweet with a rotten edge."
1"Beside her, a child-sized figure in a waxed coat held a glass jar containing something that tapped from inside."
2"At midnight, according to the informant who had died before finishing his statement, the Veil Market moved."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences105
tagDensity0.01
leniency0.019
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.3591%