Run: 2026-07-09-01KX40ZA2HDRA1QQVGEP8GEKJT

Run Details

Duration:
15.4s
Cost:
$0.014244
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain turned Soho into a sheet of black glass. Detective Harlow Quinn saw the suspect’s reflection before she saw him. A thin figure slipped between the blurred lights of a kebab shop and the green neon sign above the Raven’s Nest, one hand clamped around a narrow leather case. The sign broke across the puddles in jagged green strokes. Quinn shoved through the crowd. “Police. Move.” People swore and scattered. A cyclist rang his bell. Quinn caught the shoulder of a man in a soaked grey coat and sent him spinning against a railing, then kept going. Her leather watch slapped against her wrist as she ran. The cold rain had flattened the salt-and-pepper hair at her temples, but her eyes stayed fixed on the figure ahead. The suspect glanced back. Young. Mid-twenties. Narrow face. Black wool coat. A silver line cut from his right eyebrow to the corner of his mouth. Quinn had spent six weeks building his shape from fragments: stolen alchemical compounds, three missing couriers, a warehouse fire in Bermondsey, and a photograph taken outside the Raven’s Nest at 2.13 in the morning. The file gave him one name—Marek Voss—and six aliases that led nowhere. Tonight he had walked out of Silas’s bar carrying something worth killing for. “Marek!” Quinn shouted. He looked back again. That was enough. His boot struck the kerb. He stumbled, recovered, and plunged into a narrow lane between a shuttered bookshop and a restaurant venting steam into the rain. Quinn followed. The lane smelled of wet brick, old beer, and hot grease. Black bags bulged beside the restaurant door. A fox darted across her path. Marek vaulted a stack of crates and slammed through a fire exit. Quinn hit the door a second later. It opened onto another street, busier and brighter. Red buses crawled through the rain. Headlights smeared across the wet pavement. Marek cut between two taxis, their horns flaring as drivers braked. Quinn stepped into traffic. A taxi missed her by inches. Its wing mirror clipped her coat and tore the pocket. She reached the central island as the lights changed, then sprinted after Marek while the buses began to move. He ran well. He kept low, never wasted a glance, and chose gaps before they opened. Quinn had chased armed men through tower blocks and drug dealers across railway yards. Marek lacked their panic. He ran with a route in mind. That made him dangerous. He turned towards Camden. The city thinned by degrees. Shopfronts gave way to boarded pubs, closed laundrettes, and construction hoardings plastered with torn posters. Rain hammered the metal barriers. Quinn’s lungs burned. She ignored them. Marek crossed beneath a railway bridge, then vanished down a stairwell marked with a blue Underground roundel. Quinn stopped at the top. The station had closed years ago. The entrance stood behind a bent fence, half-hidden by ivy and a sheet of corrugated iron. Water rushed down the steps in silver threads. No lights glowed below. Quinn drew her service pistol. “Marek Voss,” she called into the darkness. “Come out with your hands where I can see them.” Only rain answered. She descended. The stairwell narrowed as it dropped. Damp plaster peeled from the walls. Old adverts showed faded faces for theatres and holidays that no longer existed. At the bottom, Quinn found a passage blocked by a steel gate. The padlock hung open. She pushed through. A smell rolled over her: paraffin, damp stone, hot metal, and something sweet that caught at the back of her throat. Voices murmured beyond the tunnel. A woman laughed. A child cried out. Somewhere underground, a bell chimed once. Quinn raised the pistol and moved forward. The tunnel opened into a platform. It stretched beneath Camden like the buried remains of a forgotten city. Broken lamps hung from the curved ceiling. Market stalls filled the tracks and spilled across the platform, each one lit by candles, lanterns, or glass globes that held their own pale light. Traders leaned over counters crowded with stoppered bottles, bone-handled knives, brass instruments, black stones, and bundles wrapped in oilskin. A man with antlers curling from his temples haggled over a suitcase. Two women in funeral veils examined a jar of blue insects. A boy with gold irises lifted a silver mask and held it against his face. Quinn stayed in the tunnel shadow. Marek moved through the market without slowing. He tucked the leather case beneath his coat and pushed between the stalls. Nobody challenged him. A trader noticed Quinn. His smile exposed square teeth filed to points. “Constable,” he called. “You’re far from your station.” Quinn kept her weapon lowered but ready. “Police. Clear the way.” The market quietened around her. Not silent. Never silent. Coins clinked. Bottles tapped against wood. A machine hissed steam. But the murmur shifted, bent towards her, and the eyes turned. Several faces looked human. Enough did not. Marek glanced over his shoulder from beside a stall selling rolled maps. Their eyes met. He smiled. Then he seized a hanging lantern and hurled it at the stall behind him. Flame burst across the oilskin canopy. People shouted. The trader screamed as fire crawled over his arms without burning his coat. The crowd surged. Quinn holstered her pistol and drove forward before the market could close around Marek. A woman in a red scarf caught her sleeve. “Bone token,” the woman snapped. Quinn tore free. “I’m not buying anything.” “You entered without one.” The woman’s fingers tightened. Her nails had been painted black, but beneath the polish they curved like claws. Quinn struck the woman’s wrist with the heel of her hand. The grip broke. She ran. Marek vaulted a table stacked with glass vials. One shattered under Quinn’s boot. A violet mist spilled across the floor. Her vision doubled. She blinked hard and kept moving. “Marek!” He ducked beneath an iron arch at the end of the platform. Quinn followed him past stalls that seemed to shift as she passed. A row of severed hands crawled inside a wire cage. A seller in a white suit offered her a red thread. “Your dead partner would want you to take it.” Quinn stopped for half a heartbeat. The man smiled. DS Morris had died three years ago in a locked room beneath a disused hospital. Quinn had found the door bolted from the inside, the walls wet with blood, and Morris’s badge pressed into the centre of the floor. No body. No weapon. No explanation that survived daylight. She fired a look at the seller. “Don’t use his name.” The man’s smile disappeared. Quinn shoved through the arch. The market narrowed into a passage between old tiled walls. Marek’s footsteps struck the stone ahead. Quinn gained on him. He slipped on the wet floor, caught himself against a pillar, and turned with a knife in his hand. Quinn stopped three paces away. The blade looked ordinary. The black vapour spilling from its edge did not. “Drop it.” Marek held the leather case tight beneath his left arm. “You don’t know what you’re chasing.” “I know you ran.” “You know how to chase people. That’s different.” Quinn moved one step closer. Rainwater dripped from her coat. Her fingers hovered near the pistol. “Put the knife down.” Marek’s mouth pulled tight around the scar. “You walked into the Veil Market without a bone token. That was stupid.” “I’ll add it to the report.” “You won’t write one.” He slashed the knife across the air. The vapour snapped towards her like a dark whip. Quinn threw herself sideways. It struck the tiled wall and left a line of frost. The old station groaned. Marek ran again. Quinn pushed off the wall and chased him through a service corridor. Pipes crossed the ceiling. Water poured from a broken joint and soaked the floor. He kicked a loose crate behind him. Quinn jumped it, hit the ground, and drove on. The corridor ended at a rusted gate. Marek dragged a bone token from his pocket and pressed it to a brass plate mounted beside the bars. The token looked like a child’s finger bone, polished smooth and threaded with red cord. The gate unlocked. Marek slipped through. Quinn reached it before it closed. Beyond lay a tunnel with no market stalls, no voices, no light except a faint amber glow far ahead. The air carried the sharp scent of burnt herbs. Somewhere in the darkness, metal scraped against stone. Marek turned at the far end. “You still have a choice, Detective.” Quinn gripped the bars. “People like you always say that when you want someone to hesitate.” He lifted the leather case. “Because people like you never understand the price of continuing.” “Put the case down.” Marek shook his head. “You came through the market without protection. You have no token, no guide, and no idea where this passage ends.” Quinn looked at the brass plate. A narrow slot sat beneath it, shaped like a tooth. Behind her, the market had begun to gather itself. Traders moved through the smoke. The woman in the red scarf watched from the archway. The man with the pointed teeth stood beside her, wiping soot from his sleeves. No one entered the tunnel. Quinn heard the reason in the silence. She drew her pistol. Marek backed away. “Last warning.” His gaze dropped to the weapon, then returned to her face. “You think this is a criminal investigation.” “It is.” “You think the city stops where your maps stop.” Quinn stepped through the gate. The bars swung shut behind her with a heavy clang. Marek turned and ran into the amber dark. Quinn followed, pistol raised, her boots striking the buried track as the gate locked itself at her back.
created_at"2026-07-09T18:06:53.533Z" 7/9/2026, 6:06:53 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1632
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1632
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
1
word"shattered"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
1"shattered"
2"footsteps"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences184
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences184
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences210
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1630
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
23.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount1462
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.53
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn37
Raven2
Nest2
Bermondsey1
Marek20
Voss1
Silas1
Camden2
Underground1
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Marek"
4"Silas"
5"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Bermondsey"
globalScore0.235
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"stalls that seemed to shift as she passed"
1"looked like a child’s finger bone, polish"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1630
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs123
mean13.25
std13.64
cv1.029
sampleLengths
09
150
25
32
461
54
621
746
813
93
104
1129
122
1336
147
1531
164
1735
1841
194
204
2131
2217
235
2434
255
2617
273
282
2937
304
313
3239
337
346
3563
3612
3711
3815
396
4020
413
4212
438
447
454
465
4725
487
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences184
matches
0"been painted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs278
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences210
ratio0.005
matches
0"The file gave him one name—Marek Voss—and six aliases that led nowhere."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1469
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.016337644656228726
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0006807351940095302
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences210
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences210
mean7.76
std5.44
cv0.701
sampleLengths
09
111
229
310
45
52
64
75
822
910
1020
114
121
131
142
153
1614
1734
1812
1913
203
214
223
235
2421
252
2611
277
286
2912
307
318
326
336
3411
354
366
3710
3819
393
4013
4114
424
437
444
454
465
4715
485
493
44.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3
totalSentences210
uniqueOpeners63
78.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences169
matches
0"Only rain answered."
1"Somewhere underground, a bell chimed"
2"Then he seized a hanging"
3"Somewhere in the darkness, metal"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences169
matches
0"Her leather watch slapped against"
1"He looked back again."
2"His boot struck the kerb."
3"He stumbled, recovered, and plunged"
4"It opened onto another street,"
5"Its wing mirror clipped her"
6"She reached the central island"
7"He ran well."
8"He kept low, never wasted"
9"He ran with a route"
10"He turned towards Camden."
11"She ignored them."
12"she called into the darkness"
13"She pushed through."
14"It stretched beneath Camden like"
15"He tucked the leather case"
16"His smile exposed square teeth"
17"Their eyes met."
18"Her nails had been painted"
19"Her vision doubled."
ratio0.183
28.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount146
totalSentences169
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn saw the"
1"A thin figure slipped between"
2"The sign broke across the"
3"Quinn shoved through the crowd."
4"People swore and scattered."
5"A cyclist rang his bell."
6"Quinn caught the shoulder of"
7"Her leather watch slapped against"
8"The cold rain had flattened"
9"The suspect glanced back."
10"A silver line cut from"
11"Quinn had spent six weeks"
12"The file gave him one"
13"Tonight he had walked out"
14"He looked back again."
15"That was enough."
16"His boot struck the kerb."
17"He stumbled, recovered, and plunged"
18"The lane smelled of wet"
19"A fox darted across her"
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences169
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The file gave him one name—Marek Voss—and six aliases that led nowhere."
1"Tonight he had walked out of Silas’s bar carrying something worth killing for."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn shouted (shout)"
1"the woman snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.133
leniency0.267
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.133
88.2081%