Run: 2026-07-09-01KX41195E0GFGKR24SQMBFW8Q

Run Details

Duration:
1m 18s
Cost:
$0.120005
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended into the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden with one hand skimming the damp tiles and the other wrapped around a bone token. The token had come sealed in an evidence bag. Human phalanx, polished smooth, a crescent moon carved into one side. At street level, it had looked like the sort of trinket a bored goth might buy between a vegan bakery and a tattoo parlour. Down here, the crescent glowed faint blue against her palm. Twenty-seven steps below the chained service door, the station changed. No warning. No threshold she could see. One moment, Quinn smelled brick dust, wet iron and the stale breath of a tunnel abandoned since the war. The next brought cardamom smoke, hot copper and something sweet rotting under perfume. Light pooled across the old platform from glass globes hanging without wires. Canvas awnings crowded the tiled walls. Stalls filled the track bed, their counters stacked with stoppered bottles, paper-wrapped bundles and cages draped in black cloth. The place should have swarmed with traders. Instead, police tape crossed the platform entrance. A uniformed constable stood behind it, pale around the mouth. His stab vest sat crooked. “You touched anything?” “No, ma’am.” He eyed the token in Quinn’s hand. “Wouldn’t know what counted as anything.” Fair answer. A silver fish swam through the air above an unattended stall, turning lazy circles beneath the vaulted roof. Each pass left a thread of water hanging behind it. Quinn ducked under the tape. Detective Sergeant Lewis Venn waited beside a tea kiosk whose sign advertised MEMORY, HOT OR ICED. Broad shoulders strained his disposable coveralls. His beard had trapped a fleck of blue powder near the chin. “You took your time.” “I came through the entrance you put in your report.” “That entrance wasn’t there when I wrote it.” Quinn glanced back. The stairwell remained between two tiled pillars, though its bottom step now showed a mosaic of a fox eating its own tail. “How many ways in?” “According to the locals? One, if you’ve got a token. None, if you haven’t. Seven on Thursdays.” “It’s Tuesday.” “One hopes.” Venn held out a hood and shoe covers. Quinn pulled them on, then checked her worn leather watch. The second hand moved. She noted the time in her pocketbook. 02:13. “Victim?” Venn turned towards the edge of the platform. A man lay on his back beside a wooden stall striped in faded crimson. He wore a plum-coloured suit with no shirt beneath the jacket. Black symbols covered his chest from collarbone to navel, each line raised like old scar tissue. His bare feet pointed towards the tunnel. Someone had arranged his hands over his stomach, palms down, fingers interlaced. A brass compass rested between them. No blood. No weapon. No obvious wound. Quinn crouched outside the numbered markers. The dead man’s skin had the dull sheen of wax. Silver coins covered his closed eyes. His lips had pulled back from teeth stained dark green. “Name?” “Silas Reed. Market broker. Sold information, introductions, forged permits. Whatever a permit means in this place.” “Who identified him?” “Three witnesses. All vanished before uniforms established the cordon.” Quinn looked across the empty stalls. “Vanished how?” “One became moths.” “Of course.” “I’ve got them in a box.” Quinn’s gaze returned to the corpse. A narrow purple band circled Reed’s throat, darker beneath the right ear. Ligature mark. Yet his tongue sat inside his mouth, and no burst vessels stippled the visible whites beneath one displaced coin. “Pathologist?” “Refused to cross the threshold. Sent Dr Hines’s assistant. She lasted four minutes before the floor asked her for her mother’s maiden name.” “What did she establish?” “Male, late thirties, dead somewhere between midnight and one. Likely strangulation. Body moved after death.” “Likely?” “Your favourite word.” “It means somebody stopped looking.” Venn folded his arms. “My interpretation? Deal went wrong. Reed sold information to someone who objected to the price. They throttled him, posed him, took whatever he’d been carrying and left that thing as a message.” He nodded at the brass compass. Verdigris mottled its casing. Protective sigils crowded the face, cut with such precision that the grooves looked printed rather than carved. Its black needle trembled against north-east. Quinn leaned closer without touching it. “Why moved?” “No pooling where he lies. Livor mortis on the back and right shoulder. He spent at least an hour somewhere else.” “His jacket?” “What about it?” “No creasing beneath the shoulders. No grime. No moisture. If he lay dead on brick, timber or tile, the cloth should tell us.” “Could’ve lain on a bed.” “Then someone transported him here without rucking the jacket, smearing the powder on his soles or disturbing the coins.” Venn rubbed at his beard, spreading the blue fleck. “What powder?” Quinn pointed towards Reed’s bare feet. Fine blue dust clung in crescents to each heel and along the outer edges, but the arches remained clean. “He walked through it.” “Before he died.” “After the time your assistant gave us, if her estimate holds.” Venn’s jaw shifted. “That’s not possible.” “This entire station isn’t possible. Yet Camden Council probably still charges it business rates.” Quinn moved around the body. The crimson stall behind Reed displayed empty velvet trays beneath a glass canopy. Dust coated every surface except one clean oval near the centre. A placard hung from a tarnished chain: MIRA VOSS, CARTOGRAPHER OF ABSENT PLACES. “Vendor?” “Missing. Market steward claims she left before midnight.” “What did the clean patch hold?” “No one knows.” Quinn studied the dead man’s hands. Grey grime sat beneath the nails except for the right index finger, where a narrow red thread had snagged at the cuticle. She followed the line of his sleeve. Plum wool, no red fibre. The stall awning hung above him, crimson canvas with a frayed lower edge. “You think he grabbed the stall?” “He’d need to be standing close.” “He was. Look at his feet.” Venn crouched beside her. Blue powder marked the soles, but a faint vertical streak of the same colour crossed the right trouser cuff. “He brushed against something.” “Something powdered. Upright. Narrow.” “Person?” “Or curtain.” Quinn rose. Military habits had survived the army longer than several of her friendships: count exits, measure sightlines, note hands, never trust an empty room. The market’s aisles formed a crooked maze below the platform. Blue powder showed in patches along the track bed, scattered between stalls like frost. “Where did that come from?” “Ward chalk. Vendors threw it down when the body was found. Supposed to preserve the scene.” “It did the opposite.” “They weren’t interested in our procedures.” “They preserved something.” She followed the blue dust with her gaze. Most patches bore overlapping shoeprints, claw marks and one impression shaped like a child’s hand with six fingers. Near the cartographer’s stall, however, the powder formed an unbroken strip beside the platform wall. Except for two bare footprints. Quinn stepped to the edge and looked down. The prints began in the middle of the strip. No approach marks. No disturbance before them. Two feet had appeared side by side in the powder, toes facing the stall. From there, a trail climbed three iron service steps to the platform and ended at Reed’s body. Venn came alongside her. “Someone carried him from the track bed.” “Where are their prints?” “They stood outside the powder.” “To place his feet in the middle of a half-metre strip?” “Long arms.” “He was six feet tall, not a bouquet.” Venn stared at the marks. The first prints sat deep at the heels, toes faint. The next showed the same. Every step. “He walked backwards,” he murmured. “No. A man walking backwards still used his forefoot to balance, especially on ballast.” Quinn descended the iron steps. Her shoe covers crackled against the metal. At the start of the prints, she crouched and held her pen over the left heel impression. The blue powder had pushed forwards, forming a tiny ridge at the front of the heel. In the right print, it had gathered the same way. “Dragged?” “Set down heel-first. Both feet together. Then again. Someone—or something—moved him in little lifts.” “Puppeteered.” Quinn looked up. Venn had intended a joke. His face had lost it. A thread glinted above Reed’s body. Quinn shifted two steps left. The glint vanished. She returned, lowering her head until one of the floating lamps caught it again: a line finer than hair, stretching from the corpse’s right wrist to the underside of the awning. “Kill the nearest lights.” A constable at the cordon hesitated. “Which ones?” “The globes.” “They don’t have switches.” Venn picked up an abandoned brass tray and clapped it over the closest globe. The silver fish darted away. Quinn blocked a second light with her notebook. The platform dimmed. Under the remaining side-light, five threads shone. One rose from each wrist. Two more ran from Reed’s trouser cuffs. The fifth disappeared into his mouth. Venn swore. Quinn approached the stall’s side, careful of the numbered markers. The threads converged above the awning and passed through a small brass ring fixed to the tiled wall. From there, they travelled behind the stall. “So he was moved after death,” Venn whispered. “Marionette strings.” “Not strings. Look.” A bead of clear liquid travelled up the thread from Reed’s wrist. It slipped through the brass ring and vanished behind the canvas. Quinn circled the stall. The rear passage measured less than a metre wide. Crates blocked one end. At the other, black cloth hung over an archway. The threads crossed the passage and ended at five glass spools mounted on a wooden frame. All five spools turned. Slow. Steady. Drawing the liquid from Reed’s body. Venn leaned round the corner. “Blood?” “Too clear.” “Lymph?” “No clouding.” The spools fed the liquid into a glass bulb. A teaspoonful had collected at its base, bright as mercury but without the weight. Quinn crouched beside the apparatus. A brass plaque had been screwed to the frame. Venn read over her shoulder. “‘Sorrow, fresh. One hundred pounds per dram.’ That’s pleasant.” “This wasn’t a display. It was harvesting him.” “So robbery becomes murder for raw materials.” “Except his hands were posed to hide the entry points. The Compass covers his sternum. Coins conceal the eyes. Someone dressed the extraction sites as ritual elements.” Venn’s eyes narrowed. “You know what the compass is?” Quinn removed her pocketbook and checked the property description supplied by the first officer. “One small brass compass, green corrosion, decorative markings.” “Helpful.” “The needle points north-east.” “Compasses tend to.” “North-east from the body leads into the wall.” “Old tunnel behind it.” “Perhaps.” Quinn returned to the corpse. She placed herself at his feet and aligned the stall edge with the tiled columns. The needle did not point along the station’s geographic north. The platform curved west here; she had checked the survey plans before descending. She drew her phone. No signal. The digital compass spun twice and froze. Venn watched the black needle. “What’s it actually pointing at?” “The nearest supernatural rift or portal, according to an informant’s statement in the Dalston warehouse file. Shade-made. Sold here under the name Veil Compass.” “You buried that in an appendix.” “You skipped the appendices.” “They depress me.” Quinn bent until her face hovered above Reed’s folded hands. The Compass needle quivered against the glass. She moved half a pace right. The needle turned. Not towards the wall. Towards the dead man’s chest. Venn moved with her. The needle followed the corpse from every angle. “The portal’s inside him?” “Or the nearest rift is.” “That’s a sentence I didn’t expect to hear from you.” “Three years ago, I didn’t expect a locked room to swallow Morris.” Venn fell silent. Quinn’s watch ticked against her wrist. The sound seemed too loud beneath the awning. She examined the purple mark around Reed’s neck again. It ended beneath each ear rather than meeting at the back. Two straight segments. No overlap. No knot impression. “Give me your torch.” Venn passed it across. Quinn angled the beam along Reed’s throat. The bruise held tiny rectangular breaks at regular intervals. “Not a ligature,” she murmured. “A collar.” “Strangulation by collar?” “No pressure damage above the line. No facial congestion. It didn’t tighten.” She shifted the torch to his mouth. Green stained the teeth, deepest at the gumline. A thin silver filament disappeared behind his lower incisors: the fifth extraction thread. “Help me turn his head. Don’t touch the neck.” They gloved up and supported Reed’s skull. Beneath the right ear, a pinprick wound sat inside the purple band. Another marked the left. Venn exhaled through his nose. “Injection.” “Extraction.” “More sorrow?” “Something passed through him.” Quinn indicated the darkened teeth. “Those stains began inside the enamel. Whatever killed him came out through the mineral.” Venn’s gaze travelled to the Veil Compass. “And left a rift in the body.” “Or used one.” A click came from behind the stall. The glass spools stopped turning. The clear liquid in the bulb shivered. Quinn stood. “Who found him first?” “Market steward. Name of Bell. Claims Reed appeared on the platform at one minute past one, already dead.” “Appeared.” “His word.” “And the ward chalk went down when?” Venn opened his notebook. “Statement says twelve forty-five.” Quinn held out her hand. He passed the book over. She read the line twice. “How did Reed leave footprints in powder scattered sixteen minutes before his body appeared, when those prints began from nowhere?” “A portal.” “The Compass proves a rift touched him. Not where.” “You’ve got another interpretation?” Quinn looked at the blue streak on Reed’s trouser cuff, then at the crimson awning. The threads had lifted him from the track bed, up the steps and onto the platform. Yet their anchor frame sat behind the stall. They could pull upwards and backwards, not forwards across open space without cutting into the awning’s edge. She touched no evidence, but traced the geometry in the air. “The threads didn’t move him here. They moved him away.” Venn glanced from the spools to the footprints. “The trail runs towards the body.” “The heel ridges do. Because whoever controlled him lowered each step while walking the corpse backwards from this stall. Then they reversed the mechanism.” “To make it look as though he’d arrived from the track.” “And posed him at the endpoint.” Venn stepped behind the cartographer’s counter. The empty velvet trays rattled beneath his sleeve. “So Reed died here.” “No.” Quinn pointed to the clean oval in the dust. “Something sat here. Something heavy enough to compress the velvet beneath the missing tray.” “The portal?” “The other end of it.” She studied the oval. A faint green ring edged the clean patch, the same verdigris crusting the Veil Compass. In its centre lay one black grain. Quinn used tweezers to lift it into a sample tube. It was not grit. Under the torch, its surface reflected a tiny grid of white lines. “Glass?” Venn peered closer. “Looks burnt.” “Not burnt. Frosted on one side.” She faced the hanging black cloth at the end of the rear passage. “What’s behind that?” “Wall, according to the search team.” “According to their eyes?” Venn pulled the cloth aside. White tiles sealed the archway. Several bore old Underground lettering, only fragments visible: WAY O—. Quinn approached. A cool draught touched the wet skin beneath her nose. The tiles showed no cracks, yet the black cloth stirred towards them. She raised the Veil Compass from Reed’s hands with gloved fingers, keeping it level. Its needle snapped towards the tiled arch. Not Reed now. The dead man’s fingers had hidden a second object beneath the Compass: a narrow paper ticket, softened with sweat. Venn eased it free and held it under the torch. No station name. No fare. Just a time stamped in violet ink. 02:17. Quinn checked her leather watch. 02:16. “That wasn’t in the first photographs,” Venn muttered. “The Compass covered it.” “No. I saw Reed’s hands when I arrived. They were clasped tight.” Quinn looked at the threads attached to his wrists. Clear liquid swelled along each filament. The glass spools behind the stall remained still, but the lines had drawn taut. Reed’s right index finger lifted. Venn stepped back. The dead hand opened around empty air, exposing a matching violet stamp in the centre of the palm. Quinn brought the torch close. The stamped time read 02:17. A bell rang beyond the tiled archway. Once. The sound rolled through the abandoned station, deep enough to tremble the glass globes. Dust sifted from the ceiling. Somewhere in the deserted market, the silver fish struck a hanging sign and scattered into droplets. Quinn’s watch reached 02:17. The protective sigils on the Veil Compass lit one by one beneath her fingers. The needle swung away from the wall, spun, then fixed on the black grain sealed in her evidence tube. “Bell lied,” Quinn spoke through clenched teeth. “Reed didn’t appear at one minute past one.” Venn held the ticket by its edges. “Then what happened at one?” Quinn watched a second violet number press itself through the paper from the blank reverse side. 1:01. “He bought a return.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences145
tagDensity0.055
leniency0.11
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2875
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2875
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"mosaic"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count3
4
word"glint"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"aligned"
count1
8
word"quivered"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"mosaic"
1"stomach"
2"trembled"
3"velvet"
4"glint"
5"measured"
6"weight"
7"aligned"
8"quivered"
9"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences237
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences237
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences374
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2873
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
47.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions107
wordCount1955
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.05
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn40
Tube1
Camden1
Fair1
Sergeant1
Lewis1
Venn31
Reed16
Compass6
Veil4
Underground1
Two3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Lewis"
4"Venn"
5"Reed"
6"Compass"
7"Underground"
8"Two"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.477
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences145
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like the sort of trinket a bored g"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2873
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences374
matches
0"precision that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs255
mean11.27
std11.92
cv1.058
sampleLengths
026
154
210
37
469
514
615
73
815
930
105
1134
124
1310
148
1525
164
1717
182
192
2029
211
221
238
2460
256
267
2732
281
2916
303
319
326
332
343
352
366
3739
381
3923
404
4115
421
433
445
454
4632
4733
486
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences237
matches
0"been screwed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs323
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences374
ratio0.005
matches
0"The platform curved west here; she had checked the survey plans before descending."
1"Several bore old Underground lettering, only fragments visible: WAY O—."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1960
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint blue against her"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.018367346938775512
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0005102040816326531
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences374
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences374
mean7.68
std5.65
cv0.735
sampleLengths
026
19
211
324
410
510
62
75
819
913
1012
116
1219
137
147
1510
165
173
189
196
202
2118
2210
235
2416
256
2612
274
2810
298
303
3122
324
3317
342
352
368
3710
384
397
401
411
428
4314
4411
4516
467
4712
486
492
53.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.34864864864864864
totalSentences370
uniqueOpeners129
46.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences213
matches
0"Instead, police tape crossed the"
1"Just a time stamped in"
2"Somewhere in the deserted market,"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences213
matches
0"His stab vest sat crooked."
1"He eyed the token in"
2"His beard had trapped a"
3"She noted the time in"
4"He wore a plum-coloured suit"
5"His bare feet pointed towards"
6"His lips had pulled back"
7"He nodded at the brass"
8"Its black needle trembled against"
9"She followed the line of"
10"She followed the blue dust"
11"Her shoe covers crackled against"
12"His face had lost it."
13"She returned, lowering her head"
14"It slipped through the brass"
15"She placed herself at his"
16"She drew her phone."
17"She moved half a pace"
18"She examined the purple mark"
19"It ended beneath each ear"
ratio0.146
72.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount165
totalSentences213
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended into"
1"The token had come sealed"
2"Human phalanx, polished smooth, a"
3"The next brought cardamom smoke,"
4"Light pooled across the old"
5"Canvas awnings crowded the tiled"
6"Stalls filled the track bed,"
7"The place should have swarmed"
8"A uniformed constable stood behind"
9"His stab vest sat crooked."
10"He eyed the token in"
11"A silver fish swam through"
12"Each pass left a thread"
13"Quinn ducked under the tape."
14"Detective Sergeant Lewis Venn waited"
15"His beard had trapped a"
16"Quinn glanced back."
17"The stairwell remained between two"
18"Venn held out a hood"
19"Quinn pulled them on, then"
ratio0.775
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences213
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences80
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Venn whispered (whisper)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"Venn muttered (mutter)"
4"Quinn spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences145
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.069
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.069
89.8079%